2024届高三下学期英语作文复习专项：2024年苏锡常镇二模读后续写课件

2024届苏锡常镇二模读后续写-小狗救人YOURLOGO20XX.XX.XXStep1：划出记叙文的基本要素Step2:看首句，预测名词Step3:划出原文语料Step4:十句定位法衔接1：我的反应：动作+心理衔接1：Margie腿部抽筋的表现衔接3：他们到岸的表现衔接3：我的反应：动作+心理衔接2：Onyx奋力把Margie推往岸边衔接2：我的反应：动作+心理十句定位法SuddenlyIheardMargiecallingout,"Ihaveacrampintheleg!"（动作/心理）MyheartleapedintomythroatasIsawMargie'sarmsstrugglinginthewater,herbodybeginningtosink.(语言)“Help!”Inearlycriedout,realizingmydaughterwasinrealdanger.(关键情节)Onyx,ourdog,gottoMargiethefastest.SheswamovertoMargie,andthenhelpedMargiebackupwithhernose.(动作)Sheswamreallyhard,kickingherlegsandmovingherpawsthroughthewater.（衔接）TheblackfurofOnyxshoneinthesunlightassheeffortlesslypushedMargietowardsthebank.Paragraph2:Seeingthepairapproachingtheriverbank,Ibreathedasighofrelief.(衔接)OnceMargiewassafelyontheshore,shegazedatOnyx,tearswellingupinhereyes.(关键)"Thankyou,Onyx,"shewhispered,hervoicefilledwithgratitude.WeembracedOnyx,holdingherclosetoexpressthedepthofourappreciation.（结局）OnyxOnyxjustwaggedhertailwithprideandjoy,asiftosay,"Iwasjustbeingagoodfriend."（主题）Thatscraryexperiencehadtaughtusavaluablelesson:eventhesmallestheroescanmakeaworldofdifference.Onyx'sswiftresponsehadstoppedapotentialdisaster,remindingusoftheincrediblebondandloyaltythatourpetsbringtoourlives.ThenIrememberedsomethingthatgavemethehopeIneeded.SoImadeupmymindtolivelikethosetwoseals.1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“然后我想起了一件给了我希望的事。”可知，第一段可描写作者想到了三年前见到的那两只失明的海豹，回忆起它们接受命运给与的苦难，适应黑暗并开心地生活玩耍。②由第二段首句内容“所以我下定决心要像那两只海豹一样生活。”可知，第二段可描写作者决定积极生活，融入社会，强身健体，实现自我价值。2.续写线索：想到失明的海豹——反思自己——决定向海豹学习——调整心态——积极生活——感悟【高分词汇】行为类①习惯于：getusedto/getaccustomedto/adaptto②想起：thinkof/remember/recall③返回：getbackto/returnto情绪类①.感谢：thanksto/owingto/showingmyappreciationto/showmygratitudeto/begratefulto②.积极：becomeconfident/actpositively【高分句型1】Theygotusedtotheirnewlifeinthepoolregardlessofthegreatchangeswhentheywereunabletogobacktotheseawheretheyweresupposedtobe.（由连接词when引导的时间状语从句及where引导的定语从句）【高分句型2】ThoughIwaskeptfromtheoutsideworld,Ididfindpleasureinmysmallworld,enjoyingchattingwithfriends,singingwithmyfamily,listeningtomusic,andeatingdeliciousfood.（由though引导的让步状语从句及分词作状语）【高分句型3】Thankstomytwoinspiringfriends,Ilearnedhowtoenjoylifewhengoingthroughadifficulttime.（when引导的时间状语从句的省略）【范文模板】ThenIrememberedsomethingthatgavemethehopeIneeded.Yes,Ithoughtofthetwoseals.Theygotusedtotheirnewlifeinthepoolregardlessofthegreatchangeswhentheywereunabletogobacktotheseawheretheyweresupposedtobe.What’smore,theymanagedtoenjoyahappylifethoughtheylivedindarknessasaresultoftheirblindness.NowIwasfacedwiththesamesituation.Luckily,thetwosealshadsetagoodexampleforme.SoImadeupmymindtolivelikethosetwoseals.ThoughIwaskeptfromtheoutsideworld,Ididfindpleasureinmysmallworld,enjoyingchattingwithfriends,singingwithmyfamily,listeningtomusic,andeatingdeliciousfood.Theseals’divingandswimmingaroundtheirpoolremindedmeofexercise.SoIclimbedupanddownthestairs