低年级写作训练

EnglishWriting

低年级写作训练

I’mKitty.

Hello,everyone!Nicetomeetyou!WhereisKitty?_____theboxin_____theboxon_________theboxnextto_________theboxabove_________thebedunderWhat’sinthebedroom?Thereis….What’s+介词短语…?Thereis/are….MyBedroomMyBedroom要求：

1、仔细观察图片，以“MyBedroom”为题目，写出一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑、结构完整的短文。

2、字数不得少于50词。MyBedroom

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MyBedroomThisismybedroom.Thereisabedinthebedroom.Thereisasofainthebedroom.Thereisalsoatableinthebedroom.Thereisachairnexttothetable.ThereisaTVonthetable.TherearetwopicturesabovetheTV.Ilikemybedroomverymuch.MyBedroomThisismybedroom.Thereisabedinthebedroom.Thereisasofainthebedroom.Thereisalsoatableinthebedroom.Thereisachairnexttothetable.ThereisaTVonthetable.TherearetwopicturesabovetheTV.Ilikemybedroomverymuch.Youridea:语言啰嗦Thereisabed,asofaandatableinthebedroom.MyBedroomThisismybedroom.Thereisabed,asofaandatableinthebedroom.Thereisachairnexttothetable.ThereisaTVonthetable.TherearetwopicturesabovetheTV.Ilikemybedroomverymuch.Youridea:句式单一MyBedroomThisismybedroom.Thereisabed,asofaandatableinthebedroom.Thereisachairnexttothetable.ThereisaTVonthetable.TherearetwopicturesabovetheTV.Ilikemybedroomverymuch.Youridea:MyBedroomThisismybedroom.Thereisabed,asofaandatableinthebedroom.

Thereisachairnexttothetable.ThereisaTVonthetable.TherearetwopicturesabovetheTV.Ilikemybedroomverymuch.Youridea:What’snexttothetable?Thereisachair.MyBedroomThisismybedroom.Thereisabed,asofaandatableinthebedroom.

Thereisachairnexttothetable.

ThereisaTVonthetable.TherearetwopicturesabovetheTV.Ilikemybedroomverymuch.Youridea:WhereistheTV?It’sonthetable.What’snexttothetable?Thereisachair.MyBedroomThisismybedroom.Thereisabed,asofaandatableinthebedroom.

Thereisachairnexttothetable.

ThereisaTVonthetable.TherearetwopicturesabovetheTV.Ilikemybedroomverymuch.Youridea:WhereistheTV?It’sonthetable.What’snexttothetable?Thereisachair.MyBedroomThisismybedroom.Thereisabed,asofaandatableinthebedroom.

Thereisachairnexttothetable.

ThereisaTVonthetable.TherearetwopicturesabovetheTV.Ilikemybedroomverymuch.Youridea:WhereistheTV?It’sonthetable.What’snexttothetable?Thereisachair.seethepictures?Yes,theyareabovetheTV.

CanyouMyBedroomThisismybedroom.Thereisabed,asofaandatableinthebedroom.

What’snexttothetable?Thereisachair.WhereistheTV?It’sonthetable.Canyouseethepictures?Yes,theyareabovetheTV.Ilikemybedroomverymuch.Youridea:Wecandivide(分成)thepassageintothreeparts.

Howcanwemakethepassagebetterandbetter?

(我们如何能使文章更好?)BeginningBodyEndingThestructureofagoodpassage

(好文章的结构)MyBedroomThisismybedroom.

Thereisabed,asofaandatableinthebedroom.

What’snexttothetable?Thereisachair.WhereistheTV?It’sonthetable.Canyouseethepictures?Yes,theyareabovetheTV.

Ilikemybedroomverymuch.Youridea:MyBedroomThisismybedroom.

Thereisabed,asofaandatableinthebedroom.

What’snexttothetable?Thereisachair.WhereistheTV?It’sonthetable.Canyouseethepictures?Yes,theyareabovetheTV.

Ilikemybedroomverymuch.Youridea:Beginning

BodyEndingBeginningBodyEnding总领全文——引出话题分层描述——诠释主题总结全文——深化主题Whatfunctiondoeseachparthave?

(文章各段的作用）2.Wecanwriteabetterbeginning.

Howcanwemakethepassagebetterandbetter?

(我们如何能使文章更好?)Wecandivide(分成)thepassageintothreeparts.

MyBedroomThisismybedroom.

Thereisabed,asofaandatableinthebedroom.

What’snexttothetable?Thereisachair.WhereistheTV?It’sonthetable.Canyouseethepictures?Yes,theyareabovetheTV.

Ilikemybedroomverymuch.1、TopicSentence——主题句法Twocommonkindsofbeginning2、Askaquestion——提问式MyBedroomDoyoulikeyourbedroom?Doyouwanttolookatmybedroom?Pleasecometoseeitwithme!Twocommonkindsofbeginning2、Askaquestion——提问式Twocommonkindsofbeginning1、TopicSentence——主题句法3.Wecanwriteabetterending.

Howcanwemakethepassagebetterandbetter?

(我们如何能使文章更好?)Wecandivide(分成)thepassageintothreeparts.

2.Wecanwriteabetterbeginning.

MyBedroomThisismybedroom.

Thereisabed,asofaandatableinthebedroom.

What’snexttothetable?Thereisachair.WhereistheTV?It’sonthetable.Canyouseethepictures?Yes,theyareabovetheTV.

Ilikemybedroomverymuch.1、TopicSentence----总结主题Twocommonkindsofending2、Askaquestion——提问式MyBedroom….….

Doyoulikemybedroom?Canyouintroduceyourstome?TwocommonkindsofendingTwocommonkindsofending1、TopicSentence----总结主题2、Askaquestion——提问式MyBedroomDoyoulikeyourbedroom?Doyouwanttolookatmybedroom?Pleasecometoseeitwithme!

Thereisabed,asofaandatableinthebedroom.

What’snexttothetable?Thereisachair.WhereistheTV?It’sonthetable.Canyouseethepictures?Yes,theyareabovetheTV.

Doyoulikemybedroom?Canyouintroduceyourstome?MyBedroomThisismybedroom.Thereisabedinthebedroom.Thereisasofainthebedroom.Thereisalsoatableinthebedroom.Thereisachairnexttothetable.ThereisaTVonthetable.TherearetwopicturesabovetheTV.Ilikemybedroomverymuch.MyBedroomDoyoulikeyourbedroom?Doyouwanttolookatmybedroom?Pleasecometoseeitwithme!

Thereisabed,asofaandatableinthebedroom.

What’snexttothetable?Thereisachair.WhereistheTV?It’sonthetable.Canyouseethepictures?Yes,theyareabovetheTV.

Doyoulikemybedroom?Canyouintroduceyourstome?Whichisbetter?Why?What’syourideaabout

thebestpassage?Haveadiscussioningroupsoffour(四人一小组进行讨论）Thestandardsofthebestpassage

CorrectExpression语言准确RightMindLogic逻辑合理SmoothFlow条理清晰4.DiverseSentencePatterns句式多样5.CompleteStructure结构完整Accordingtothestandardsontheblackboard,rewriteyourpassage.

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You’regreat！Askquestionsaboutyourclassmates.Finishtheform(表格).NameAgeHometownHobbyFavoritefoodFavoritesportsNameAgeHometownHobbyFavoritefoodFavoritesportsAskquestionsabouttheteachersinthisroom.Finishtheform(表格).Let’sreviewwhatwehavelearnt!BeginningBodyEndingThestructureofagoodpassage

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