高中英语考试读后续写公式

第一部分

语言描写

一、正确使用标点符号(1)说话人+说话内容“说”后用逗号，引号内第一个字母大写，句尾标点符号放在引号内。Hesaid,“Youaremybestfriend!”(2)

说话内容+说话人陈述句引号内用逗号，

引号外第一个字母小写：疑问句或感叹句引号内用问号或感叹号，

引号外第一个字母小写。且“某人说”可以写作“sb.said”也可以写作“saidsb.”。①"Yes,"hesaid.②"Youmaybothgo,"saidAndy.③"Don'tmove,"shesaidtoMikeinasoftvoice.(3)说话内容+说话人+说话内容“某人说”可以写作“sb.said”也可以写作“saidsb.”:“某人说”前面引号内用逗号，引号外第一个字母小写。“某人说”后面如果用句号，则后面引号内第一个字母大写；“某人说”后面如果用逗号，则后面引号内第一个字母小写。①“That'scool,”hesaid.“CanIhaveatry?”②“You'dbetterletmego,”teasedhertwinbrother,William.“Therearedangersalloverthisplace.”③“Youcangoanyplaceyouwant,”Amysaid,“butIthinkyou'llfindwhatyouneed.”二、避免重复使用

say在进行语言描写时很多同学全部都只用“said”这一个单词，这样使得句子重复呆板，因此要学会灵活多变的各种“说”。explain

解释state

陈述protest

抗议sob哭诉insist

坚持comfort安慰repeat

重复agree同意order命令scream

尖叫promise承诺whisper

耳语yell/shout

大叫declare

声称add

补充assure

保证complain

抱怨apologise

道歉announce

宣告argue

争论interrupt

打断beg

请求demand

要求mock

嘲讽claim

声称cry/exclaim

喊叫suggest/advise

建议stammer/stutter/stumble

结巴ask/inquire

询问reply/answer/respond回答1.“Christine!照顾好你弟弟!”母亲高声喊道。“Christine!Takecareofyouryoungbrother!”Mothershoutedatthetopofhervoice.2.“Hannah，你知道她在哪儿吗?她怎么样?请告诉我。”他恳求道。"Hannah,doyouknowwheresheis?Howisshe?Pleasetellme."Hebegged.3.“报纸上有一个圣诞愿望竞赛。”Amy的妈妈宣布，“给圣诞老人写封信可能会得奖。”“There'saChristmaswishcontestonthenewspaper,”Amy'smomannounced.“WritealettertoSanta,andyoumightwinaprize.”

三、如何让对话更生动

第一类“……,”sbsaidina…voice/tone.某人以…的声音、语气说到inapleasanttone/voice

以一种愉悦的声音/语气inafirmtone/voice以一种坚定的声音/语气inarudetone/voice以一种粗鲁的声音/语气inasadtone/voice

以一种悲伤的声音/语气也可以用

inavoice/toneof+名词的搭配inatone/voiceofsurprise

用一种惊讶的语气inatone/voiceofcuriosity

用一种好奇的语气inatone/voiceofimpatience

用一种不耐烦的语气inatone/voiceofcommand用一种命令的语气1.“你一定是安妮吧?”他用友好的语气说。“YoumustbeAnnie,”hesaidinafriendlytone.2.“我很乐意。”艾米莉用愉快的语气说。“Iwouldloveto.”saidEmilyinapleasanttone.3.“我不想和你一起去。”艾米丽用不耐烦的语气说。“Idon'twanttogowithyou.”saidEmilyinatoneofimpatience.4.“不，我没有告诉他这个秘密。”他用低沉的语调说.“No,Ididn’ttellhimthesecret.”hesaidinalowtone.

第二类“xxx,”sbsaidin/with+心情类名词.某人以…的心情说道……1.“Youaresafe,”Tomcriedwithexcitement.“你安全啦！”Tom

激动地说道。2.“Ihateyou!”shescreamedinanger.“我讨厌你！”她生气地大喊道。3.“Whatalovelyrabbit,”Isaidinastonishment.“好可爱的兔子啊！”我诧异地说到。4.“Nicetomeetyou,”hesaidwithenthusiasm.“很高兴认识你。”他热情地说。第三类

“xxx,”sbsaid+adv..+doing.(添加非谓语动词表达后续动作)1.“我去给我们拿点咖啡。”她温柔地说道，朝厨房走去。“I'llgetussomecoffee,”shesaidgently,headingforthekitchen.2.“我再也不相信你了。”他生气地大喊道，砰的一声关上门。“Idon'tbelieveyouanymore.”Heyelledangrily,slammingthedoor.3.“我被狼袭击了，我以为再也见不到你了。”麦克激动地说，紧紧抱住他们。“IwasattackedbyawolfandIthoughtIwouldneverseeyouagain.”Mikesaidexcitedly.huggingthemtightly.第四类sbdidsth.didsthandsaid“xxx.”(添加动作链)1.他拦下出租车，提着行李箱跳上车，对司机说："请去警察局。"Hestoppedthetaxi,jumpedinwiththesuitcaseandtoldthedriver.“Gotothepolicestation,please.”2.她冲上前去，跪在地上，喃喃地说：“对不起，我的宝贝。”Shedashedforward.kneltdownandmurmured,"I'msorry,mybaby.”3.我匆忙穿上衣服，拿起包说：“请等一下我！”Iputonmyclotheshurriedly,grabbedmybagandsaid."Pleasewaitforme!"Translation1.“没人能理解我！”安迪哽咽着，双手掩面。“Nobodycouldunderstandme!”Andysobbed,buryinghisfaceinhishands.2.农夫抱起狗，跪下来，轻声说：“现在是你的了。”Thefarmerpickedupthedog,kneltdownandsaidinasoftvoice,“It'syoursnow.”3.她眼里噙着泪水说：“对不起。”Withtearsinhereves,shesaid,“Sorry.”4.“嗨，兰迪。我对意大利面条的事感到抱歉。”凯瑟琳低声道歉，脸涨红了。“Hi,Landy.I'msorryaboutthespaghettithing.”Catherinemurmuredanapology,herfacereddening.5.“看！”罗斯指着窗户，激动地喊道。“Look!”Rosepointedoutthewindowandcriedingreatexcitement.6.“想试一下吗?”我抚摸着玛丽娜的手说。“Wanttotryoneon?”Isaid,touchingMarina'shand.7.我打开窗户对着对面喊道。“我知道我们以前见过面，但我不记得在哪里了。”。Iopenedmywindowandshoutedacross,“Iknowwe'vemetbefore,butIcan'trememberwhere.”8.“想试一下吗?”我抚摸着玛丽娜的手说。“Wanttotryoneon?”Isaid,touchingMarina'shand.

第二部分结尾升华

一、分类1、氛围结尾:floatedintheair/filled+地点/…wasbathedin“飘在空中/充满/沉浸在”(1)Thegoldensunlightstreamingin,laughterlingeredaroundtheyardandhappinessfloatedintheair.(2)Withthecoolbreeze,thewholefamilywasbathedinhappinessandlove.2、拥抱哭泣对话法AhuggedBtightlywithtearsflowingdownone'scheeks,whispering...母亲给了我们每个人一个大大的拥抱，眼泪顺着脸颊流下来，在我们耳边低语：“谢谢你们的好意。是你的爱温暖了我们。Themotherhuggedustightlywithtearsflowingdownhercheeks,whisperinginourears,“Thankyouforyourkindness.It'syourlovethathaswarmedusup.”3.强调句:Itis+名词+that+谓语(count/matter/bring...)“正是…”正是爱和关怀使世界运转。Itisloveandcarethatmaketheworldgoaround.4.Fromthenon,“从那时起,……”从那时起，我总是尽可能地帮助别人。Fromthenon,Ialwaysgiveothersahelpinghandifpossible.从那时起，友谊在我们两人的心中绽放。Fromthenonfriendshipbloomedinbothofourhearts.5.Onlythendidsb.realizethat…“直到那时某人才意识到…”直到那时我才意识到，我们不应该把爱视为理所当然。OnlythendidIrealizedthatweshouldnevertakeloveforgranted.6.Itoccurredtosb.that…“某人突然想到…”他突然想到，有了家人的爱，过生日就不再是烦恼了。Itoccurredtohimthatwithfamily'slove,itwasnolongerdisturbingtohavebirthday.7.Manyyearshavepassed,butIwillneverforget...“许多年过去了，但我永远不会忘记…”许多年过去了，但我永远不会忘记那份特别的礼物。Manyyearshave

passed,butIwillneverforgetthespecialgift.8.Manyyearshavepassed,buttheexperienceisstilldeeplyengravedinone'smind.许多年过去了，但这段经历仍深深地铭刻在一个人的脑海里。9.Neverhadsb.donesth.“某人从来没有…”她从来没有这么骄傲过！Neverhadshebeensoproud!

二、精彩结尾赏析

亲情类1.TheMotherhuggedthetwinstightly,whispering,“Thisisthebestsurpriseintheworld!”2.OnlythendidIrealizedthathowmuchmymomlovedme.3.Itoccurredtomethatfamilyloveisthegreatestgiftinlife.4.ItwasatthatmomentthatIhadafullunderstandingofthesignificanceoffamily.5.Itwasatthisverymomentthatthefrozenicebetweentwogenerations——melteddownintoawarmstreamflowingintotheirhearts.6.Theearlysunlightstreamingin,laughterlingeredaroundtheroomandhappinessfloatedintheair/thewholefamilywasbathedinhappinessandlove.7.Aftersomanyyears,thetasteofthecake,thelaughteroffriendsandtheembraceofmyparentsstilllingeredinmymind.=thetasteofthecake,thelaughteroffriendsandtheembraceofmyparentswerestilldeeplyengravedinmymind.8.Thisbirthdayisboundtobekeptinmymemoryforever,lighteningmyfuturepath.助人类1.有时候，我们小小的行动可以给别人带来很大的不同。Sometimesoursmallactioncanmakeagreatdifferencetoothers.2.许多年过去了，但我永远不会忘记玛格丽特的圣诞礼物和她的善举。Manyyearshavepassed,butIwillneverforgetMargret's

Christmasgiftsandheractofkindness.2.母亲给了我们每个人一个大大的拥抱，在我们的眼中低语：“谢谢你们的好意。是你的爱温暖了我们。”Themothergaveeachofusabighug,whisperinginoureyes,“Thankyouforyourkindness.It'syourlovethathaswarmedusup.”3.我突然想到，一个简单的举动可以让世界变得更美好。Itoccurredtomethatasimpleactcouldmaketheworldsomuchbetter.5.虽然外面的风还在呼啸，但一股暖流涌上心头。Althoughthewindstillscreamedoutside,awarmcurrentroseinmyheart.个人成长类(逆境、积极向上)1.在你身上发生了什么并不重要，重要的是你如何应对。It'snotwhathappenstoyou,buthowyoureacttoitthatmatters.2.直面困难，努力。你终将制造奇迹。Bebrave,risetosetbacks,andmakeefforts.Youwillendupcreatingmiracles.3.恐惧缔造不了未来，但希望可以。Fearneverbuildsthefuture,buthopedoes.4.每个人都像一朵花，有的有香味，有的没有。只要你开花，就会有蜜蜂和蝴蝶。Everyoneislikeaflower,somehavingfragrance,butsomenot.Aslongasyoubloom,therewillbebeesandbutterflies.5.要把最坏的情况变成最好的情况，一个人应该采取行动。Tochangetheworstsituationintobest,oneshouldtakeactions.6.正如谚语所说，永远不会失败。我要么赢，要么学习。Justasasayinggoes,“Neverlose.Ieitherwinorlearn.”7.成功之路并不平坦。它充满了挑战和困难。Thejourneytosuccessisnotsmooth.Itisfullofchallengesanddifficulties.个人成长类(梦想)1.这是真的：如果梦想足够大，事实并不重要。It'strue:Ifthedreamisbigenough,thefactsdon'tcount.2.任何一个有梦想，有勇气和毅力的人都会成功。Anyonewithadream,co