高级英语写作教案示范

高级英语写作教案示范高级英语写作教案示范SectionOneChoiceofwords措辞Thechoiceofwordsfromone’svocabularycanaffecthiswritingstyle.Let’slookattwogroupsofwordsandcomparethem:PretentiousWording(fml.)CommonWording(standard)inregardstoconcerning,aboututilizeuseelucidateexplainpriortobeforebecauseofthefactbecauseoftheopinionbelieveascertainfindoutcommencebeginWhenselectingwordstouseinanessayitisimportanttorememberthefourlevelsofdiction:1)Formal—Highlyeducatedaudience:ceremonial,scholarlyortechnicalpurpose.2)Standard—Educatedaudience:collegepapers,masspublications,businesscommunications,andmanyotherwritingpurposes.3)Informal—Generalaudience:spokenratherthanwrittensituations,personalletters,conversationalandentertainingpurposes.4)Slang—Specificaudience:usedtoenhancethewritingthroughdialogueessentialtothecharacter,suchasinnovels;ortobuildconnectionsbetweenmembersofaspecificgrouporgeneration.Exercises:1.Ineachsentencebelow,choosethemorepreciseofthetwowordsinbracketsandfillintheblankwithyourchoice:1).Ajudgemustbe______inthecaseshetries.(uninterested,disinterested)Afewlistenerswere_____anddozedoff.disinterested,uninterested2).Yournieceimpressedmeassweetand_____.(childish,childlike)Thoughshehasgrownup,herbehaviorisoften_____.childlike,childish3).ThePresidentspokenontheradiotothe____.(land,nation)nation4).Whywereyouso____aboutyourachievements?(humble,modest)modest5).Shehasbecomevery_____sincemarryinghim.(respectable,respectful)Peopleareseriousand_____atreligiousservices.respectable,respectfulSectionTwoConfusionofwords用词混淆1.ThereareonlythreepairsofwordsinEnglishwhichseemedtobeastheantonyms,yettheyarenot.Pickthemout:a.flammable/inflammableb.hinge/unhingec.valuable/invaluabled.integrate/disintegratee.furl/unfurlf.ravel/unravel2.Choosethecorrectwordstofillintheblanks:1)Thenursestakegoodcareofthe_____.(diseased,deceased)diseased2)Heisunderthe____thatheoftenhearsvoicesurginghimtokill.(illusion,delusion)delusion3)Laziness_____tohisfailure.(contribute,attribute)contributed4)Theguests_____thehostessonhercooking.(complement,compliment)complimented5)Theyoungladydespisedthegood____hehadgiven.(counsel,council)counsel6)Heis_____enoughtobelieveanythingyoutellhim.(credible,credulous)credulous7)It’s_____toerr.(human,humane)human,8)The____oftheenemytroopswassinking.(moral,morale)morale9)Let’s____tothenextitemontheagenda.(precede,proceed)proceed10)Wemustadheretothefourcardinal______.(principal,principle)principlesSectionThreeProblemsofcollocation搭配问题Collocationmainlyinvolveswithverbandprepositionsoradverbs,whicharecalledphrasalverbs.1.Fillintheblankswithappropriateprepositionsoradverbs:1)Theplanwaswellconceived,butitbroke___becausepeoplewereunwillingtocooperate.down2)Arashbroke____onherhands,soshewenttoseeadoctor.out3)Asthefamousmoviestarappeared,thewaitingcrowdsbroke____loudcheers.into4)Dr.Salkfailedmanytimes,buthefinallybroke____tofindasuccessfulpoliovaccine.through5)Sentencescanbebroken_____clauses,andclauses_____phrases.upinto2.Chooseoneofthefouranswerstocompletethesentence:1)WhenIwasyoung,Iwasterriblyfrightenedofschool,butIsoon__it.A.gotoffB.gotacrossC.gotawayD.gotover2)Obviously,thelazygirlwouldnever____herparent’sexpectation.A.comeuptoB.faceuptoC.liveuptoD.standupto3)Youngchildrensoon___wordstheyheartheireldersuse.A.putforwardB.turnupC.pickupD.useup4)Themanagerneedsanassistantthathecan_____totakecareofproblemsinhisabsence.A.countonB.countinC.countupD.countout]5)Thenthespeaker____thevariousfactorsleadingtothepresenteconomiccrises.A.wentafterB.wentforC.wentintoD.wentonSectionFourWordiness累赘Inwriting,weshouldtryeverymeanstomakeasentenceconciseandavoidrepetition.Forexample,weshoulduse“Wemustkeepstudying./Wemuststudypersistently.”insteadof“Wemuststudy,study,andstudy.”1.Crossouttheunnecessarywordsinthesentence:1)RachelCarsonwasawomanwhopioneeredinecologicalstudies.2)Inthebookittellsaboutaspringwhennobirdssang.3)Robinseatmanyearthwormsaday,andtheyeatasmanyasearthwormsaminute.Keys:1)RachelCarsonpioneeredinecologicalstudies.2)Thebooktellsaboutaspringwhennobirdssang.3)Robinseatmanyearthwormsaday.2.Improvethefollowingsentencesandtrytoshortenthem:1)Speechissilver,andsilenceisgold.2)Sincehecouldnotmeethisbrotherattheairport,hesenthissecretarytoreplacehim.3)Afterhehasgraduated,Tomwillworkinhisfather’scompany.Keys:1)Speechissilverandsilencegold.2)Unabletomeethisbrotherattheairport,hesenthissecretaryinstead.3)Aftergraduation,Tomwillworkinhisfather’scompany.3.InEnglish,therearemanywordswhichhavethesimilarmeaninginsteadoftherepetitionofasameword.Forexample:deadandgone,fairandsquare,nullandvoid,highandmighty,witandwisdom,valorandvigor.Andtherearewordswhichhavetheoppositemeaningtobecombinedasaphrase:fireandwater,thickandthin,wealandwoe,etc.allmakethelanguageconciseandemphatic.SectionFiveOmissionofwords漏词Ifyouomitaprepositionoranadverbinasentence,thenyoumaymakeitchangeintoafaultyone:1.Pleasefindouttheomittedpartsofeachsentenceandcompletethem:1)Sheisrememberednotonlyforherwarningaboutthedangersofinsecticidepoisoningbutforhercharmingstudiesofthesea.2)Clearlyamalfunctionofanuclearreactorismoreseriousthanasteamengine.3)BarryCommonerdoesnotcallforahalttoscientificprogressbutratherevaluationoftherisksinvolvedinascientificdevelopmentbeforeactionistaken.Keys:1)butalso…2)thanthatof…3)ratherfor…2.Pleasetrytomodifytheparagraphandfillinthewordsattheappropriateplaces:Itissaidthataperson’schildhoodarethemostimportantyearsinaperson’slife.Idaresaymostpeopleagreetheabovestatement.Theymaygivereasonslike“Childrenaremostreceptive”,“Childrenarecuriousabouteverything”andsoon.Inmyopinion,however,mostimportantyearsinaperson’slifeareearlyadulthood.Inthisperiod,apersonexperiencesthemostimportantstagesinhislife:highereducation,love,marriage.Keys:childhoodyears,agreewith,themostimportant,arethoseofearlychildhood,andmarriageVIII.Assignment:Pleasetrytomodifytheparagraphandfillinthewordsattheappropriateplac