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高考英语续写短文故事英语作文续写练习BalletwasawayoflifeinKelly'sfamily.HereldersisterSerenawasnowdancingatatopcollege.ThoughKelly'smomalwayswantedhertofollowinhersistersfootstepsandKellyherselfwasgoodatballet,herloveforballethadfadedyearsbefore/andshewaseagerforanewchallengeOnedayatschool,asKellyleftthedancestudioshewalkedpastthegym,fascinatedbyboxers(暴)traininginsidetheboxingring.Shewasdeeplyimpressedbyhowhardtheyhitandhowfasttheymoved.Infactshedlongbeenattractedtoboxing.Shepulledapieceofpaperfromherbackpack.OnthefamiliarOakwoodHighSchoolClubSign-upSheetwasthephrase:BOXINGCLUBTRYOUT(选拔).ThatwaswhatKellyreallywantedtodo.Sheknewhermomhadhighexpectationsforherwhenitcametoballet.Tiredoftryingtokeepupwithhersister,Kellywasreadytocarveherownpath.Thenextday,shegatheredhercourageandtoldSerenaabouthernewpassion.AtfirstSerenadidn'tunderstandandthoughtshewasjustjoking.ButwhenshesawKellywasserious.Shereplied,“YouknowMomwantsyouto.beaballetdancer,right?Besides,boxingisonlyforboys,andyou'resogoodatballet.Leanintoyourstrength,Kelly."“ButthisiswhereIwanttoputmystrength,"Kellyinsisted"andwhatexactlydoesonlyforboysmean,anyway?Boxingisasportforeveryone!”Gradually,touchedbyherdeterminationandpassionSerenabegantounderstandandsupportherKellycouldfeelit.Hersisterwasgoingtorespectherdecisionnomatterwhat,Butthatwasnothingcomparedtothepreparationsforthetryout,whereshewasrequiredtoshowherfootworkandpunching(击打)abilitieswithothercandidates.Boxingdidn'tcomenaturaltoKelly,butshehadmadeuphermindtostickwithherchoice.Paragraph1:ThenKelly)beganhertrainingforthetryout,keepingitasecretfromhermom.Paragraph2:ThefollowingMonday,resultsoftheboxingtryoutwereposted.范文一ThenKellybeganhertrainingforthetryout,keepingitasecretfromhermom.
Realizingtherewasnotsufficienttime,Kellypracticeddiligentlyandtreatedeverytrainingsessionasifitwerethecompetitionitself.Asdaysprogressed,hereffortsintrainingbecameevident,andshemaderemarkableprogressinboxing.Timeflewby,andfinally,thedayforthetryoutarrived.Steppingontothestage,shetookadeepbreath,gatheredhercomposure,andgaveherbestuntilthetryoutconcluded.ThefollowingMonday,theresultsoftheboxingtryoutwereposted.
Shehadneverimaginedinherwildestdreamspassingthetryout,letalonesecuringthefirstposition.Uponreturninghome,shesharedthejubilantnewswithhermomandsister.Mom'sinitialangertransformedintoamazementwhenshelearnedofKelly'sachievementsinboxing.Fromthatmomenton,Kellyembarkedonherboxingclubactivitiesandpersistentlypracticed.Itdawnedonherthatwithunwaveringbeliefanddetermination,anygoalbecomesattainable.范文二ThenKellybeganhertrainingforthetryout,keepingitasecretfromhermom.
Acknowledging
thescarcityoftime,she
trainedrelentlessly,approachingeachsessionwith
theintensityof
anactualcompetition.Asthedaysprogressed,herdedication
becameincreasinglyapparent,
culminating
insignificantprogressinherboxingabilities.Beforelong,thefatefuldayofthetryoutarrived.
Nervouslysteppingontothestage,shetookadeepbreath,steeledhernerves,andgaveitheralluntilthefinalbellrang.ThefollowingMonday,theresultsoftheboxingtryoutwereposted.
Kellycouldscarcelybelievehereyeswhenshesawthatshehadnotonlypassedthetryoutbuthadalsosecuredthecovetedfirstposition.
Overwhelmedwithjoy,sheeagerlysharedthenewswithherfamily
uponreturninghome.Hermother'sinitialiremeltedawayintoprideandamazementasshelearnedofKelly's
remarkableachievements
inthering.Fromthatdayforward,Kelly
wholeheartedlyembraced
hernewfoundpassionforboxing,throwingherselfintoclubactivitiesandhoningherskillswithunwaveringdedication.Shecametorealizethat
withunyieldingfaithanddetermination,nodreamwasevertooloftytopursue.凯莉开始为即将到来的拳击选拔赛进行秘密训练,小心翼翼地瞒着她的母亲。意识到时间的紧迫,她不知疲倦地训练,每次训练都如同实际比赛一般全力以赴。随着时间的推移,她的投入越来越明显,拳击技能也取得了显著的进步。不久,选拔赛的关键日子到来了。她紧张地走上舞台,深吸一口气,鼓足勇气,在终场铃声响起之前竭尽全力。令人期待的结果在接下来的周一公布了。当凯莉看到自己不仅通过了选拔赛,还获得了梦寐以求的第一名时,她简直不敢相信自己的眼睛。她欣喜若狂地回到家,与家人分享了这个好消息。当母亲得知凯莉在拳击方面取得的非凡成就时,最初的愤怒化为了骄傲和惊讶。从那一天起,凯莉全心全意地投入了她新发现的拳击激情中,积极参与俱乐部活动,坚定不移地磨练自己的技能。她渐渐意识到,只要拥有坚定的信念和决心,就没有追求不到的梦想。范文一与范文二优化改写理由供参考1.“coverttrainingregimen”替换“secrettraining”这里
“covert”一词比“secret”更具有隐秘和计划性的意味,更贴切地描述了Kelly的训练是秘密且有规划的。2.“Acknowledgingthescarcityoftime,shetrainedrelentlessly,approachingeachsessionwiththeintensityofanactualcompetition.”替换“Realizingtherewasnotsufficienttime,Kellypracticeddiligentlyandtreatedeverytrainingsessionasifitwerethecompetitionitself.”
改写后的句子使用了更高级的词汇和更流畅的结构,如“Acknowledgingthescarcityoftime”和“approachingeachsessionwiththeintensityofanactualcompetition”,增加了句子的表达力和深度。3.“thefatefuldayofthetryout”替换“thedayforthetryout”
“fateful”一词增加了选拔赛的重要性和决定性,使描述更具戏剧性和紧张感。4.“Hermother'sinitialiremeltedawayintoprideandamazementasshelearnedofKelly'sremarkableachievementsinthering.”替换“Mom'sinitialangertransformedintoamazementwhenshelearnedofKelly'sachievementsinboxing.”
改写后的句子使用了更生动的词汇和更丰富的情感描述,如“irem
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