2025届新高考英语复习读后续写语篇好友借鞋

2025届新高考英语精品复习读后续写语篇1——好友借鞋Part1题目呈现2续写原文①GraceandEllen,bothpromisingintheirschool'sdancecompetition,werefiercecompetitors.Theybothhadgreatpassionfordancinganddreamtforbiggerstages.Theywerebothfriendsandcompetitors.Theyhadsimilartasteinmusic,andhadsimilardressingstyles.Eventheyworeshoesofthesamesize.Theyhadbothcommittedthemselvestopreparingfortheupcomingcontest.②Grace'sjourneytothecompetitionwasmarkedbycountlesshoursofpracticeanddetermination.Shewouldrisebeforethesun,andthestudiolightswereheronlycompany.Everymovementwasperfectedwithunwaveringcommitment.Sheknewthatthiscompetitionwasn'tjustaboutpersonalsuccess;itwasalsoaboutupholdingherschool'shonor.“Grace,you'reincredible!”Grace'sdanceinstructor,Mrs.Anderson,oftenpraisedher.Yourhardworkwillpayoff.③Ellenhadbeenpracticinghardforthiscompetition,aswell.Herlovefordancewasherdrivingforce.Afterschool,shewouldheadstraighttothedancestudio,tirelesslyperfectingeverystepandtwirl.Herdanceshoeshadbecomeanextensionofherfeet,andherheartburnedwithastrongdesireforvictory."Ellen,you'reanatural,"herfellowdancerswouldoftensay.You'vegotthis!3续写原文④Thedayofthecompetitionfinallyarrived,andtherewerefivecompetitorsfightingforthechampionshiptitle.EllenwasscheduledtoperformbeforeGrace.⑤AsEllenstoodbackstage,thebutterfliesinherstomachseemedtohaveturnedintoawhirlwind(漩涡).Shecheckedherdanceshoesonelasttimeandrealizedahugemistake.Theshoesthemselveswereasizetoosmall.Itturnedoutshetookherlittlesister'sshoesbymistake.Panicsetinashermindracedforasolution.⑥“Ellen,you’reupnext!”thestagemanagerannounced.⑦Inthedimlylit（灰暗的）backstagearea,GraceoverheardEllen'swhisperstoherfriend,Sarah.⑧“Ibroughtthewrongshoes,Sarah,"Ellen'svoicetrembled（颤抖）.Theyaretoosmall.WhatamIgoingtodo?”⑨Grace'sheartsankassheoverheardtheconversation.4续写段首语Paragraph1：GraceknewthathershoeswouldfitEllenperfectly,butshewashesitanttolendahelpinghand.

Paragraph2：TearsofgratitudewelledupinEllen'seyesassheslippedintoGrace'sshoes.5Part1读懂大意，理清脉络61.Readforinformation要素关键信息（1）Whoarethemaincharacters?

（2）Whendidthestoryhappens?

（3）Wheredidthestoryhappens?

（4）Whathappened?Grace,EllenThedayofschool’sdancecompetitionbackstageEllenfoundthatshetookawrongdanceshoesbeforeperformance.7ParagraphHowPara.1&3

Para.4

Para.5&9GraceandEllenwereperfectdancersandtheybothjoinedtheschool’sdancecompetition.Theywerealsofriendsandcompetitor.ThedayofthecompetitinarrivedandEllenwasscheduledtoperformbeforeGrace.EllenfoundthatshetookawrongdanceshoesbeforeperformancebutGrace’sshoeswerefitEllen.

891.ReadforplotsA.GracelentherdanceshoestoEllen.B.GraceandEllenwerebothfriendsandcpmpetitorsofschool’sdancecompetition.C.EllenslippedintoGrace’sshoes.D.EllenfoundthatshetookawrongdanceshoesbeforeperformancebutGrace’sshoeswerefitEllen.

E.ThedayofthecompetitinarrivedandEllenwasscheduledtoperformbeforeGrace.BEDAC点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点1011

GraceknewthathershoeswouldfitEllenperfectly,butshewashesitanttolendahelpinghand.

TearsofgratitudewelledupinEllen'seyesassheslippedintoGrace'sshoes.

Q1____________________________（与首句衔接）Q2_____________________________(情节推动1)Q3_______________________________(情节推动2)Q4_______________________________(与第二段首句衔接)Q1____________________________（与首句衔接）Q2_____________________________(情节推动1)Q3_______________________________(情节推动2)Q4_______________________________(与原文首句回应/主题升华)4句确定框架。Part2写作思路12²4步定框架Step1确定第二段结局情节提示:Ellen穿上了Grace的鞋子，说明舞蹈比赛顺利进行，但结果具有开放性，可以是Grace赢，也可以是共享一等奖。Step2确定第一段结尾情节提示:第二段首句的TearsofgratitudewelledupinEllen’seyes，说明第一段结尾处Grace最终还是把鞋借给了Ellen。Step3构思第一段中间情节提示:由第一段首句可知，Grace犹豫要不要帮助Ellen，之后到第二段首句的EllenslippedintoGrace’sshoes,中间发生了什么?可尝试用思维导图法构思。Step4构思第二段中间情节提示:Grace借了舞蹈鞋给Ellen之后发生了什么？比赛情况怎么样？最终谁赢？他们的感受是怎么样的？升华主题是什么？可些试用思维导图法构思。GracehesitatedIfshelenthershoesIfsherefusedGracemadeadecisionEllenrushedontostageTheysharedthefirst-placeEllenthanksGracethemeanigofcompetitionandfriendships续写建议Grace知道她的鞋子非常适合Ellen，但她犹豫要不要伸出一只皮套。Grace犹豫了一下，她的内心挣扎在脸上很明显。如果她把鞋子借给Ellen，她就是在给她最大的对手力量。另一方面，如果Grace拒绝，她可以获得冠军，并代表学校参加下一级别的比赛。这个选择对她影响很大。经过长时间的停顿，Grace做出了决定。她带着温暖的微笑把鞋子递给Ellen。“走出去，全力以赴。”。13续写建议当Ellen穿上Grace的鞋时，感激之情溢于言表。带着新的决心，她穿着Grace的鞋子冲上舞台，进行了精彩的表演。比赛很激烈，但Grace的表现同样出色。最后，Grace和Ellen并列第一。在裁判宣布结果并解释了发生的事情后，观众爆发出掌声，庆祝他们非凡的友谊和体育精神。然后Ellen向Grace说：“谢谢你，Grace。你今天教会了我竞争和友谊的真谛。”Grace笑着回答：“Ellen，我们互相提升，这就是我们成为冠军的原因。”。14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现GraceknewthathershoeswouldfitEllenperfectly,butshewashesitanttolendahelpinghand.Gracehesitated,herinternalstruggleevidentonherface.IfshelenthershoestoEllen,shewouldbelendingstrengthtoherbiggestrival.Ontheotherhand,ifsherefused,Gracecouldsecurethechampionshipandrepresenttheschoolinthenextlevelofcompetition.Thechoiceweighedheavilyonher.Afteralongpause,Gracemadeherdecision.ShehandedhershoestoEllenwithawarmsmile.Gooutthereandgiveityourbest.16TearsofgratitudewelledupinEllen'seyesassheslippedintoGrace'sshoes.Withnewfounddeter