Unit2HealthyLifestylePeriod5ReadingforWriting建议信课件高中英语人教版选择性

Unit2HealthyLifestylePeriod5ReadingforWritingWriteALetterToTheEditorAboutYourLifestyleWhatisthebasicstructureofaletter?DearEditor,

Yourstruly,/Sincerely,signature___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________bodyComplimentaryclose信尾敬语Salutation称呼TowhomwhoReadingforstructuresDivideeachletterintofourpartsandtrytomatchthemainideasbelowtoeachpart.identifyproblemsconsiderwhattodo describewhathe/shehasdonetochangegivetheresults ProblemDecisionAction(s)Result(s)Problem-solutionpatternProblemProblemDecisionDecisionAction(s)Action(s)Result(s)Result(s)ReadingforstructuresPart2-Writing:建议信letterofproposal概念：根据对方有关问题，委婉礼貌提出针对性建议，并让对方接受的信件。注意：用语礼貌，条理清晰，建议具可操作性。要点:1.明确写信目的。(purpose)2.针对性提出建议。(proposals)三条为宜

3.希望对方采纳建议并盼回复。(hope)开头：.Iamgladtoreceiveyourletteranditismypleasuretogiveyousomeadviceon...2.Havingknownthatyouhavesometroublein...Iamwritingtosharesomeadvicewithyou.3.ThanksforyourtrustingandnowIamhonoredtoofferyousomesuggestionson...here.

主体：建议一Firstofall,whatyouneedtodosthis...建议二

Additionally,ifIwereyou,IwoulddoB.

建议三

What’smore,IsuggestyoushoulddoC..Ithinkyouaresupposedto...2.Itisintelligentofyou/agreatideato...3.You’dbetter/Youmayaswell...4.IfIwereyou,Iwould...5.Itwouldbebeneficialif...

结尾：

希望对方采纳：Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful/useful/beneficial.2.Iwouldappreciateitifyoutakemysuggestionsintoconsideration/account.3.Iwouldbemorethanpleasedtosee...建议信模板

DearXX，

I’msorrytohearthatyouhavetroublewith...NowIamwritingtogiveyousomeadviceonhowto....

Mysuggestionsareasfollows.

Tobeginwith,itisagreatideato...(建议一)Inaddition,itwouldbebeneficialforyouif...(建议二)Lastbutnotleast,IfIwereyou,Iwould...(建议三).

Ihopeyouwillfindmysuggestionsuseful.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Sincerelyyours,XX

Practice假如你是李华，在一家报社工作，收到一封读者来信说他朋友陈雷沉迷电脑游戏，希望你能给他一些意见去帮助他戒掉游戏。请根据提示写一封建议信。1.告诉你朋友玩游戏的危害2.培养其他健康爱好3.多参加户外活动注意：字数80左右可适当增加细节，使文章连贯。DearWorriedFriend,I’msorrytohearthatyourfriendChenLeiisaddictedtocomputergames.NowI’dliketogiveyousomeadviceonhowtodealwithit.

Tostartwith,itisimportanttotellhimthatspendingtoomuchtimeonlineisunhealthyandmakesitverydifficulttofocusonhisstudies.Inaddition,

youmayaswellencourageyourfriendtotrynewhobbieslikeplayingtheguitarorplayingbasketball.Lastbutnoleast,whynottakepartinsomeoutdooractivitiestogether?Iamsurehewilllistentoyou,sinceyouarehisgoodfriend.

Ihopeyouwillfindmysuggestionsuseful.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

LiHuaproblemactionresult短语lead/liveahealthylifereplace……with/

insteadofkeepsb.inshapegetridofthehabitofdoingsth.breakthehabitofdoingsth.dosomeoutdooractivitiesphysicalexercisebegoodfor/behelpfulincontroltemperremainoptimisticaboutrefreshoneselfmakeachange过健康的生活代替保持某人身材戒除……的坏习惯做户外运动身体锻炼有利于控制脾气乐观面对精神重振做出改变Recently,Ilearnthatyouhaveaunhealthylifestyle.So,I’mwritingtosharemyideasonhowyoucanliveahealthylife.开头最近，我听说你的生活方式不健康。所以，我写信来分享对你如何过上健康生活的想法。Unhealthylifestyle,leadahealthylife正文你需要做的是多吃水果，而不是小吃，以保持你的体型。insteadof,

keep

you

in

shape,主语从句Whatyouneedtodoistoeatmorefruitsinsteadofsnakesinordertokeepyouinshape.我建议你应该和你的朋友做一些户外活动，因为体育锻炼有助于控制你的脾气。suggest,dosomeoutdooractivities,physicalexercise,asIsuggestyoushoulddosomeoutdooractivitieswithyourfriendsasphysicalexerciseisgoodforcontrollingyourtemper.你也可以对生活保持乐观，保持好心情，这有助于你恢复精神。remainoptimisticabout,keepagoodmood,refreshoneself,定语从句Youmightaswellremainoptimisticaboutlifeandkeepagoodmood,whichhelpyourefreshyourself.【句型】Youmightaswelldosth.…你不妨做某事正文结尾我希望我的建议对你有帮助。advice;helpfulIhopethat…Ihopethatmyadvicecouldbehelpfultoyou.【升级】我真心希望你觉得我的建议有用，并且你能从现在开始做出改变。Isincerelyhopethatyouwillfindmysuggestionsusefulandmakeachangefromnowon.DearAlice,Recently,Ilearnedthatyouhaveaunhealthylifestyle.So,I’mwritingtosharemyideasonhowyoucanliveahealthylife.Firstofall,whatyouneedtodoistoeatmorefruitsinsteadofsnakesinordertokeepyouinshape.Additionally,Isuggestyoushoulddosomeoutdooractivitieswithyourfriendsasphysicalexerciseisgoodforcontrollingyourtemper.Youmightaswellremainoptimisticaboutlifeandkeepagoodmood,whichhelpyourefreshyourself.Allinall,Isincerelyhopethatyouwillfindmysuggestionsusefulandmakeachangefromnowon.写作指导本单元的写作任务是给编辑写一封关于健康生活方式的信。此类作文主要围绕以下几个方面写作：1.健康生活的必要性、重要性。2.指出目前存在的不利于健康的问题。3.健康生活方式：加强锻炼、注意饮食、均衡营养、养成良好的生活习惯等。4.如何从自我做起，如何制定计划改变不良的生活习惯等。DearEditor,IwaswalkingpastashopwindowtheotherdaywhenIsawmyreflection.Atfirst,Ididn'trealiseitwasme.WhenIsawitwasme,IfeltsadasIwasoverweight.Ididn'trealisehowIlooked,andnowIreallywanttochange.Ireallylikeeating,butIrealiseIeattoomuch,andIdon'teatgoodthings.I