中考英语课件 话题写作指导（三）

话题写作指导(三)地点介绍★介绍家乡的地理位置及环境1．Theweatherhereisneither(either)toohotnortoocold.[冀教八(下)Unit1P8]2．TheGreatWallisthelongest(long)wallintheworld.[人教八(下)Unit7P50]3．Thebest(good)supermarketisonCenterStreetinourtown.[人教八(上)Unit4P26]neitherlongestbest4．Theairisalwayscleanandfresh.Theplantsalsomakeeverythinglook(look)beautiful.[冀教八(下)Unit2P20]5．Myhometownlies(lie)inthenorthwestofChina.6．我的村庄就像一个花园，到处都可以看到许多树木和鲜花。Myvillageislikeagarden.Youcanseemanytreesandflowerseverywhere.looklieslikegardeneverywhere★介绍生活环境的变化1．如今，越来越多的家乡正在变得更好。Nowadays，moreandmorehometownare

changing

forthebetter.2．我的家乡发生了很大的变化。Greatchangeshave

taken

placeinmyhometown.arechangingforhavetakenplace3．一切似乎也变得越来越快。Everythingseemstobegetting

，too.[冀教八(上)Unit6P86]4．我们有一个漂亮、干净的校园。Wehaveanice，cleanschoolyard.[冀教八(下)Unit8P117]gettingfasterniceclean5．过去镇上的污染很严重，但现在空气新鲜多了，天空更蓝了。Thereused

to

be

much

pollutioninthetown，butnowtheairisfresherandtheskyisbluer.6．随着科学技术的发展，我的家乡有了很大的改变。With

the

developmentofscienceandtechnology，myhometownhasgreatlychanged.7．我为家乡的变化感到骄傲。I'm

proud

ofthechangesinmyhometown.usedtobemuchpollutionWiththedevelopmentI'mproudof【句子升格】1．Ourcommunityislikeagarden.(用动词短语“looklike”升格)__Our_community__looks_like_a_garden.__2．Youcanseetreesandflowersinmyhometowneverywhere.(用“被动语态”升格)__Trees_and_flowers_can_be_seen_in_my_hometown_everywhere._Ourcommunitylookslikeagarden.Treesandflowerscanbeseeninmyhometowneverywhere.【俗语谚语】1．Eastorwest,homeisbest.金窝银窝，不如自己的狗窝。2．Homeiswheretheheartis.家乃心之所系。Step1审题立意(2019·甘肃省卷)我们生活学习在美丽的甘肃，假设你所在的学校正在组织一个“让世界了解甘肃、让甘肃走向世界”的活动，请根据以下思维导图的提示，以“TheIntroductionofGansuProvince”为题，写篇介绍甘肃的英语短文。要求：1.文中需包含提示中的主要内容；2．句子及篇章结构准确、连贯，书写规范；3．可做适量拓展；4．80词左右。提示：Location：inthenorthwestofChinaArea：anareaof425，900km2CapitalCity：LanzhouPopulation：26millionWeather：differentfromplacetoplace；thetemperatureisquitedifferentfromdaytonight…MaytoOctoberisthebesttimefortravelling…Must­seeplacesofinterest：MogaoGrottoes：theworldfamousartpalace；JiayuguanPass：thewesternendoftheGreatWall…体裁：说明文人称：第三人称时态：一般现在时要点：提示中的6个要点。1．开篇：概况甘肃省位于中国的西北部。它占地425，900平方千米。有2，600万人居住在那里，兰州是甘肃省的省会城市。(liein，coveranareaof，thecapitalof)GansuProvinceliesinthenorthwestofChina.Itcoversanareaof425，900km2.Thereare26millionpeoplelivingthere，LanzhouisthecapitalcityofGansuProvince.GansuProvinceliesinthenorthwestofChina.Itcoversanareaof425，900km2.Thereare26millionpeoplelivingthere，LanzhouisthecapitalcityofGansuProvince.主体内容：天气和景点(1)天气：TheweatherinGansuisdifferentfromplacetoplaceandthetemperatureisusuallyquitedifferentfromdaytonight.IfyouwanttogotravellinginGansu，MaytoOctoberisthebesttime.(differentfromplacetoplace，fromdaytonight，gotravelling，thebesttime)TheweatherinGansuisdifferentfromplacetoplaceandthetemperatureisusuallyquitedifferentfromdaytonight.IfyouwanttogotravellinginGansu，MaytoOctoberisthebesttime.(2)景点：MogaoGrottoeswhichistheworldfamousartpalaceandJiayuguanPass，thewesternendoftheGreatWall，aretwoofthemust­seeplacesofinterestinGansu.(which，thewesternendof，must­seeplacesofinterest)MogaoGrottoeswhichistheworldfamousartpalaceandJiayuguanPass，thewesternendoftheGreatWall，aretwoofthemust­seeplacesofinterestinGansu.3．总结收尾：骄傲和希望我为家乡的变化感到自豪，我希望它会变得越来越美丽。Iamproudofthechangesinmyhometown，Ihopeitwillbecomemoreandmorebeautif(beproud，moreandmorebeautiful)Iamproudofthechangesinmyhometown，Ihopeitwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.Step3组句成篇TheIntroductionofGansuProvince

Gansu_Province_lies_in_the_northwest_of_China.It_covers_an_area_of_425，900_km2.There_are_26_million_people_living_there，Lanzhou_is_the_capital_city_of_Gansu_Province.The_weather_in__Gansu_is_different_from_place_to_place_and_the_temperature_is_usually_quite_different_from_day_to_night.If_you_want_to_go_travelling_in_GansuMay_to_October_is_the_best_time425，900km2.Thereare26millionpeoplelivingthere，LanzhouistheGansuProvinceliesinthenorthwestofChina.ItcoversanareaofcapitalcityofGansuProvince.TheweatherinGansuisdifferentfromplacetoplaceandthetemperatureisusuallyquitedifferentfromdaytonight.IfyouwanttogotravellinginGansuMaytoOctoberisthebest_time.Mogao_Grottoes_which_is_the_world_famous_art_palace_and_Jiayuguan_Pass，the_western_end_of_the_Great_Wall，are_two_of_the_must­see_places_of_interest_in_Gansu.I_am_proud_of_the_changes_in_my_hometown，I_hope_it_will_become_more_and_more_beautiful.time.MogaoGrottoeswhichistheworldfamousartpalaceandJiayuguanPass，thewesternendoftheGreatWall，aretwoofthemust­seeplacesofinterestinGansu.Iamproudofthechangesinmyhometown，Ihopeitwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.人际交往★感恩身边人1．Let'sgeteachofthemacardandgifttosay(say)thankyou.[人教九(全)Unit14P106]2．Neverfailtobethankful(thank)tothepeoplearoundyou.[人教九(全)Unit14P110]tosaythankful3．Iwishtosaythankyouforloving(love)meandcaringforme.[冀教八(上)Unit3P41]4.Thanks(thank)tomyteachersandmyparents，I'vemadesomuchprogress.lovingThanks★人际关系中遇到的问题1．有时候一个朋友真的会在你没有意识到的情况下伤害你。Sometimesafriendreallyhurtsyouwithout

realizingit.[冀教九(全)Unit9P130]2．我最好的朋友不喜欢我去见其他朋友。Mybestfrienddoesn't

like

me

to

seemyotherfriends.withoutrealizingdoesn'tlikemetosee3．我的问题是我不能和家人和睦相处。MyproblemisthatIcan'tget

on

withmyfamily.[人教八(下)Unit4P27]4．昨天我发现我妹妹在翻我的东西。Ifoundmysisterlooking

throughmythingsyesterday.[人教八(下)Unit4P26]getonwithlookingthrough5．我哥哥总是不让我看我最喜欢的电视节目。Myelder

brotheralwaysrefusestoletmetowatchmyfavoriteTVshow.[人教八(下)Unit4P27]elderbrother★如何与人沟通的建议1．最重要的是找到一个你们都感兴趣的话题。Themainthingistofindatopicyouareboth

interested

in.[冀教九(全)Unit9P132]2．你为什么不坐下来和你哥哥谈谈呢？Whydon'tyousitdowntocommunicate

withyourbrother？[人教八(下)Unit4P27]bothinterestedincommunicatewith3．告诉人们真相。没有人愿意浪费时间和一个不诚实的人说话。Tellpeoplethe

truth.Noonewantstowastetimetalkingtosomeonewhoisnothonest.[冀教九(全)Unit9P132]4.一个显示你是一个好的倾听者的简单方法就是眼神交流。Onesimplewayto

showyouareagoodlisteneristomakeeyecontact.[冀教九(全)Unit9P132]thetruthwhohonesttoshowlistener5．所以只要和别人谈谈，你就解决了问题的一半。Soyouarehalfwaytosolving

a

problemjustbytalkingtosomeoneaboutit.[人教八(上)Unit10P77]6.微笑是良好沟通的通行证。Smilingcanbeapassportto

good

communication.[冀教九(全)Unit9P132]solvingaproblemtogoodcommunication【句子升格】1．Youhavetroubleinstudyorinlife.Youcangethelpfromthem.(用“if引导的条件状语从句”和“asksb.forhelp”升格)__If_you_have_trouble_in_study_or_in_life，you_can_ask_them_for_help.__

Ifyouhavetroubleinstudyorinlifeyoucanaskthemforhelp.2．Theyhavethesamehobbiesasyou.Youcanmakefriendswiththem.(用“who引导的定语从句”升格)__You_can_make_friends_with_people_who_have_the_same_hobbies_as_you.Youcanmakefriendswithpeoplewhohavethesamehobbiesasyou.1．Hethatconversesnotknowsnothing.不和人交谈的人一无所知。2．Keepgoodmencompanyandyoushallbeofthenumber.近朱者赤，近墨者黑。3．“Afteryou”isgoodmanners.“您先请”是礼貌。Step1审题立意(2020·甘肃省卷)父母是我们最亲的人，但我们有时会在与父母沟通时遇到困难。请根据所给思维导图的提示，以“HowtoCommunicatewithOurParents”为题用英语写一篇短文，谈谈与父母沟通的技巧和做法。要求：1.文中需包含思维导图中的主要内容；2．句子及篇章结构准确、连贯，书写规范；3．需做适量拓展；4．80词左右。文章标题和第一段已给出，不计入总词数。HowtoCommunicatewithOurParentsCommunicatingwithparentsisoneofthefirstthingswehavedonesincewewereborn.Aswegrowolder，we'llfindit'snoteasytocommunicatewithourparentsopenlyandeffectively.Sowhatshouldwedowhencommunicatingwiththem？Herearesomeofmyideas.体裁：说明文人称：第一人称复数时态：一般现在时要点：1.思维导图中的4个要点2.可适当发挥(导图中的省略部分)。1.开篇点题：…Sowhatshouldwedowhencommunicatingwiththem？Herearesomeofmyideas.2．主体内容：具体的技巧和做法。(1)分歧：Firstly，wecanmakealistofthingsourparentsandwedisagreeaboutmost.Tryto findoutthereasonswhywedisagreewitheachother.Accepteachother'sideaslittlebylittle.Ifwestillhavedisagreements，we'dbetternotgettooangry.(makealistof，findoutthereasons，accept，littlebylittle，hadbetternot…)Firstly，wecanmakealistofthingsourparentsandwedisagreeaboutmost.Tryto findoutthereasonswhywedisagreewitheachother.Accepteachother'sideaslittlebylittle.Ifwestillhavedisagreements，we'dbetternotgettooangry.(2)沟通:：Secondly，weshouldtalkwiththemmore！Sharingideascanmakeuscloser.(talkwith，shareideas，makeuscloser)(3)倾听：Weshouldalsolearnhowtoreallylisten.Listeningisaskillthatmustbelearnedand.(howtoreallylisten，askillthatmustbelearnedandpracticed)(4)有礼貌：Finally，besuretobepolite.Weareafamilyinwhicheveryoneislovedandcaredfor.(besure，belovedandcaredfor)Secondly，weshouldtalkwiththemmore！Sharingideascanmakeuscloser.Weshouldalsolearnhowtoreallylisten.Listeningisaskillthatmustbelearnedandpracticed.Finally，besuretobepolite.Weareafamilyinwhicheveryoneislovedandcaredfor.3．总结收尾：呼应主题。总之，我们应该和父母好好相处，这很重要。(allinall，getalongwellwith)Allinall，weshouldgetalongwellwithourparents.It'sveryimportant.Allinall，weshouldgetalongwellwithourparents.It'sveryimportant.Step3组句成篇HowtoCommunicatewithOurParentsCommunicatingwithparentsisoneofthefirstthingswehavedonesincewewereborn.Aswegrowolder，we'llfindit'snoteasytocommunicatewithourparentsopenlyandeffectively.Sowhatshouldwedowhencommunicatingwiththem？Herearesomeofmyideas.

Firstly，we_can_