Unit6AtonewithnatureDevelopingideas课件高中英语

B1U6

SummaryWriting李子柒 Watertricklespastorallyoffofthetipsofcutbamboostalks.AgentlebreezesswaysthebranchesofagroveoftreesasaChinesefluteplayssoftlyinthebackground.It’sjustadayinthelifeofLiZiqi,whomaybethemostfamousYouTuberyouhaven’theardof. ThephenomenallypopularChinesefoodblogger,withalmost10millionYouTubesubscribersand24millionfollowersonSinaWeibo,postsalmostfairy-tale-likevideosofherlifeinruralSichuan－chattingwithhergrandmother,foraging,cookingrustic,positivelyperfect-lookingfood,andalsomaybewearingagiantredcapeandridingthroughtheforestonhorseback.Q1:What'sthenewsmainlyabout?Q2:Whichsentencegivesthecoreinformation？Q3:Whataretheothersentencesintendedfor?alongtext

asummary

loseweightdelete

50-70words350words60wordsWhatisasummary?Asummaryisa

briefstatementthatgivesonlythemainpoints

ofsth,notthedetails《牛津高阶英汉双解词典》Readandpickoutthetopicsentenceofeachparagraph.Workoutthelogicbetweenthetopicsentenceanditssupportingsentences.？topicsentencereasonfacttheirpopularityHerbalteahasvarioushealthbenefits.Manypeopleenjoyherbalteabecauseitcanhaveapositiveeffectonenergylevels.

Ifyouneedagoodnight'ssleep,chooseateathathelpsyourelax.Ifyouhaven'tbeenfeelingverywell,drinksomegingerteatogiveyourimmunesystemahelpinghand.

Minttea,meanwhile,isgoodfordigestion.topicsentenceexample1example2example3healthbenefitsreasonfacttopicsentenceexample1example2unusualflavorsThinkanddecidewhatinformationissupposedtobeputinthesummary.Fruit&HerbalTeastheirpopularityunusualflavorshealthbenefitstopicsentencereasonfactfacttopicsentenceexample1example2topicsentencereasonexample1example2example3

topicsentencereasonfacttheirpopularityfacttopicsentenceexample1example2unusualflavorsHerbalteahasvarioushealthbenefits.Manypeopleenjoyherbalteabecauseitcanhaveapositiveeffectonenergylevels.

Ifyouneedagoodnight'ssleep,chooseateathathelpsyourelax.Ifyouhaven'tbeenfeelingverywell,drinksomegingerteatogiveyourimmunesystemahelpinghand.

Minttea,meanwhile,isgoodfordigestion.topicsentenceexample1example2example3healthbenefitsreasonchangewordsandphrases（替换字词）changethepartofspeech（改变词性）changesentencepatterns（改变句式）…Waystoparaphrase概括要点同义表达Howtowriteasummary3Summarizeeachparagraphwithonesentenceandmakesure①thesubjectofthesentencematchesthetopicofthewholepassage;②thewholesentencefocusesonthemainideaoftheparagraph.连接成文Fruitandherbalteas,withpleasantflavors,scentsandcolors,_____________________________________________.①

gaingreatpopularityamongBritishpeople②arepopularwithBritishpeopletheirpopularity替换字词改变词性Moreunusualflavors_________________________________________.unusualflavors替换字词改变语态Herbalteahasvarioushealthbenefits.Manypeopleenjoyherbalteabecauseitcanhaveapositiveeffectonenergylevels.

Herbalteacanbringpeoplemanyhealthbenefits,①for_________________________________②______________one'senergylevelscanbepositivelyadjusted.healthbenefitsitcanpositivelyaffectone'senergylevels.withwhich改变句式改变语态Inrecentyearsinparticular阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：1.对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；2.应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；3.上下文的连贯性；4.对各要点表达的独立性情况。概要写作的四项基本原则1.一定要使用第三人称。2.一定不可加入自己的观点。3.一定不可对原文内容加以评论。4.一定不要引入与原文内容无关的信息。说明现象/问题:introducethephenomenon/problem+reason+solution(causeandeffect)说明物品:howitismade,howitisused,howitmaychange,whatmakesitneworsignificantWhoWhyWhatWhenWhereHowTheresultTheopinionofthewriterArgument1/supportingdetaillArgument2/supportingdetail2ConclusionNarrationArgumentationExpositionTheRenaissance(15thto16thcentury)

DuringtheRenaissance,newideasandvaluesgraduallyreplacedthoseheldintheMiddleAges.Peoplebegantoconcentratelessonreligiousthemesand

adopt

amore

humanistic

attitudetolife.AtthesametimepaintersreturnedtoclassicalRomanandGreekideasaboutart.Theytriedtopaintpeopleandnatureastheyreallywere.Richpeoplewantedto

possess

theirownpaintings,sotheycoulddecoratetheir

superb

palacesandgreathouses.Theypaidfamousartiststopaintpicturesofthemselves,theirhousesand

possessions

aswellastheiractivitiesandachievements.

  Oneofthemostimportantdiscoveriesduringthisperiodwashowtodrawthingsin

perspective.This

technique

wasfirstusedby

Masaccio

in1428.Whenpeoplefirstsawhispaintings,theywereconvincedthattheywerelookingthroughaholeinawallatarealscene.Iftherulesofperspectivehadnotbeendiscovered,noonewouldhavebeenabletopaintsuchrealisticpictures.

Bycoincidence,oilpaintswerealsodevelopedatthistime,whichmadethecoloursusedinpaintingslookricheranddeeper.Withoutthenewpaintsandthenewtechnique,wewouldnotbeabletoseethemanygreat

masterpieces

forwhichthisperiodisfamous.【分析】Step1:Determinethetypeofwritingandidentifythetopicaswellastheauthor’spurpose确定体裁，明确主题体裁：_______________________主题：_______________________Step2:Dividethepassage&summarizethemainideaofeachpart.明确文章结构Step3:Highlightthekeyinformationofeachpart.划出主题句和关键信息Para1：

DuringtheRenaissance,newideasandvaluesgraduallyreplacedthoseheldintheMiddleAges.

Peoplebegantoconcentratelessonreligiousthemesand

adopt

amore

humanistic

attitudetolife.AtthesametimepaintersreturnedtoclassicalRomanandGreekideasaboutart.Theytriedtopaintpeopleandnatureastheyreallywere.Richpeoplewantedto

possess

theirownpaintings,sotheycoulddecoratetheir

superb

palacesandgreathouses.Theypaidfamousartiststopaintpicturesofthemselves,theirhousesand

possessions

aswellastheiractivitiesandachievements.Para2：

Oneofthemostimportantdiscoveriesduringthisperiodwashowtodrawthingsin

perspective.This

technique

wasfirstusedby

Masaccio

in1428.Whenpeoplefirstsawhispaintings,theywereconvincedthattheywerelookingthroughaholeinawallatarealscene.Iftherulesofperspectivehadnotbeendiscovered,noonewouldhavebeenabletopaintsuchrealisticpictures.

Bycoincidence,oilpaintswerealsodevelopedatthistime,whichmadethecoloursusedinpaintingslookricheranddeeper.Withoutthenewpaintsandthenewtechnique,wewouldnotbeabletoseethemanygreat

masterpieces

forwhichthisperiodisfamous.Informationaboutperspective:Putforward:

Masaccio;1428Content:…lookingthroughaholeinawallatarealscene.Assistance:Bycoincidence,oilpaintswerealsodeveloped…【分析】Step1:Determinethetypeofwritingandidentifythetopicaswellastheauthor’spurpose确定体裁，明确主题体裁：_______________________主题：_______________________Step2:Dividethepassage&summarizethemainideaofeachpart.明确文章结构Step3:Highlightthekeyinformationofeachpart.划出主题句和关键信息Step4:MakeanoutlineofthepassageStep5:WritethefirstdraftDuringtheRenaissance,newideasandvaluesgraduallyreplacedthoseheldintheMiddleAges.IntheRenaissance,newviewpointswereinplaceofthosehundredsyearsago.Peoplebegantoconcentratelessonreligiousthemesandadoptamorehumanisticattitudetolife.Firstly,peoplefocusedmoreonhumanisticthemes【ratherthan】

religiousones.AtthesametimepaintersreturnedtoclassicalRomanandGreekideasaboutart.Theytriedtopaintpeopleandnatureastheyreallywere.Secondly,paintersreturnedtoclassicalideas,whichattachedgreatimportancetorealpeopleandnature.PeoplehaddifferentviewpointsduringtheRenaissance.Peoplefocusedmoreonhumanisticthemesratherthanreligiousones.Meanwhile,paintersreturnedtoclassicalideaswhichfocusedonrealpeopleandnature.(29words)Para1. PeoplehaddifferentviewpointsduringtheRenaissance.Peoplefocusedmoreonhumanisticthemesratherthanreligiousones.Meanwhile,paintersreturnedtoclassicalideaswhichfocusedonrealpeopleandnature. TheperspectiveproposedbyMasaccioin1428becamethetypicalpaintingcharacteristicinthatperiod.Withthedevelopmentofoilpaints,peoplefeltlikeseeingrealitythroughahole.(59words)Whentalkingaboutthetwosexes,peopleoftensaythatmenarefromMarsandwomenarefromVenus.Withoutdoubt,menandwomenhavegreatdifferencesinmanyways.Thesecontrastsincharactercouldallbedowntosupposeddifferencesbetweenthemaleandfemalebrains.Forexample,astudyledbyBritishpsychologistStuartRitchiein2012foundthatmen'sbrainsareonaverage10percentbiggerthanwomen's.AndanotherstudyledbyIsraelipsychologistDaphnaJoelatTelAvivUniversityin2015furtherclaimedthatdifferencesexistinmaleandfemalebrains,althougheachindividual'sbrainhasa"mixoffeatures",asNewScientistwrote.ButLiseEliot,aprofessorofneuroscience(神经学)attheChicagoMedicalSchool,begstodiffer.Sherecentlysaidthatthebrainisaunisex(不分性别的)organ.Throughanalyzingbraindataofseveraldifferentmenandwomen,Eliotfoundthatthestatisticsaboutbraindifferencesmeannothing.Accordingtoherfindings,maleandfemalebrainsarenotmuchmoredifferentfromeachotherthanmaleorfemaleheartsorkidneys.Andmoreimportantly,thesedifferencesdon'tshowthatmaleandfemalebrainsworkdifferently.

So,ifit'snotinthebrain,whatmakesmalesandfemalesbehavedifferently?Theanswermaylieinsocialization,accordingtoTheAtlantic.Inthepast,manygenderstudiesignoredtheeffectsofaperson'ssocialbackgroundandupbringing,relyingonotherdatainstead.TakeformerHarvardUniversitypresidentLawrenceSummersforexample.Heuseda1970studythatshowedmenoutperformedwomen13-to-oneonthemathpartoftheSATtoarguethatmalesaremoresuitedtosciencesubjects.However,anotherstudyfoundthatiffemalesweregivenbetteropportunitiestostudysciencesubjects,theratewoulddroptothree-to-one.ExpositionUndeniably,menandwomendifferwidelyinmanyaspects.Previousstudiesattributethedistinctionsincharactertothedifferencesbetweenmaleandfemalebrains.However,ProfessorEliotarguesthattheyhavenothingtodowithbrainsbasedonthedataanalysis.Itissocialization,suchasbackgroundandparenting,thatcanaccountforthecontrasts,whichwasneglectedinthepast,though.Exposition范文Narration

①AftergraduationfromuniversitytheauthorwasatalossabouthowtofulfillhisambitionuntilhedecidedtolandajobwiththeLighthouseProject.(要点1)②Adequatepreparationandfamilysupportfinallywonhimthejobasavolunteerteacherinaremotevillage.(要点2)③Theexperiencetaughthimtoseelifeinanewlightandembraceabetterself.(要点3)(61words)Narration范文ArgumentationExerciseisdefinedasanymovementthatmakesyourmusclesworkandrequiresyourbodytoburncalories.Therearemanytypesofphysicalactivity.Beingactivehasbeenshowntohavemanyhealthbenefits,bothphysicallyandmentally.

Exerciseplaysakeyroleinbuildingstrongmusclesandbones.Thisisbecauseithelpsreleasehormonesthatpromoteyourmuscles'abilitytoabsorbaminoacids（氨基酸）.Thishelpsthemgrowandreducestheirbreakdown.Aspeopleage,theytendtolosemusclemassandfunction,whichcanleadtoanincreasedriskofinjury.Practicingregularphysicalactivityisessentialtoreducingmusclelossandmaintainingstrengthasyouage.Exercisenotonlyhelpsbuildbonedensitywhenyou'reyounger,butalsohelpspreventosteoporosis（骨质疏松症）laterinlife.

Exerciseplaysakeyroleinbuildingstrongmusclesandbones.Thisisbecauseithelpsreleasehormonesthatpromoteyourmuscles'abilitytoabsorbaminoacids（氨基酸）.Thishelpsthemgrowandreducestheirbreakdown.Aspeopleage,theytendtolosemusclemassandfunction,whichcanleadtoanincreasedriskofinjury.Practicingregularphysicalactivityisessentialtoreducingmusclelossandmaintainingstrengthasyouage.Exercisenotonlyhelpsbuildbonedensitywhenyou'reyounger,butalsohelpspreventosteoporosis（骨质疏松症）laterinlife.

Exercisecanhelpwithsleepquality.Theenergylossthatoccursduringexerciseencouragesrestorative（康复的）processesduringsleep.Moreover,theincreaseinbodytemperaturethatoccursduringexerciseisthoughttoimprovesleepqualitybyhelpingbodytemperaturedropduringsleep.Manystudiesontheeffectsofexerciseonsleephavereachedsimilarconclusions.Onereviewofsixstudiesfoundthatparticipatinginanexercisetrainingprogramhelpedimproveself-reportedsleepquality.Exerciseworksyourmusclesandburnsextracalories.（定义没写不扣分）Beingactiveinitbenefitsyourphysicalandmentalhealth.（要点1）Ithelpsstrengthenyourmusclesandbonesnomatterhowoldyouare.（要点2）Apartfromthat,ithelpstokeepyourmindsharpandpreventmemoryloss,（要点3）letaloneitspositiveeffectsontheimprovementofyoursleepquality.（要点4）(63words)Argumentation范文Ifyouhaven’tseenalpacameat(羊驼肉)onthemenuyet,chancesareyousoonwill.Itisrisinginpopularity;about70restaurantsacrossAustraliafeaturethemeatintheirdishes.AmongthemisMelbournerestaurantPastuso,whoseheadchefappearedinavideobytheAustralianAlpacaAssociationtodiscusshowpeoplehavelikedthedish.AlejandroSaravia,aPeruviancookatPastuso,describedthetasteassimilartobeef."AlpacameathasbeenverywellenjoyedbytheAustralianpublic,"hesaidinthevideo.FamouscookMattMoran,whoownssomeofSydney’sleadingrestaurants,wroteanarticleforTheDailyTelegraphtodiscusshisexperienceofcookingalpacameat.Moransaidhehadnevertriedthemeatuntilhevisitedanalpacafarm,anddescribedtheflavouras"verytasty",especiallythemeatfromtheneck.AlpacameathasalsostarredindishesattheMelbourneFoodandWineFestival,withTheAgereportingin2013about20Australianrestaurantsservedthemeat,anumberwhichhasgrownquicklysince.MelbournerestaurantSanTelmo’sheadcookMikePatrickresearchedanalpacadish,andsaidtheresponsewasmixed."Itwas50/50:somepeoplesaid‘ohwow—whatareyoucookingthatfor?Nothankyou’andothersthought‘thisisreallycoolandsomethingdifferentandIwanttohaveatry’.Thepeoplewhotrieditlovedit.It’sapointofdifferenceandpeoplelikethat."InAustraliaalpacasarefarmedmainlyfortheirfur,buttheAustralianAlpacaAssociationwebsitesaidfarmingalpacasformeatisagrowingindustry.Alpacameatisagoodsourceofproteinwithlittlesaturatedfatandcholesterol(胆固醇);itisalsoenvironmentallyfriendlywhenpeoplefeedthem.Alpacasareabletostanddryconditionsforlongerthanmostotheranimals,andtheirsoftfeetcauselittledamagetothesoilandecosystem.Anewstudyhasbeenpublishedthatputswaterqualityandtheskinofbabiesunderthemicroscope.Dr.CarstenFlohrandhisteamatKing’sCollegeLondonpresentedtheresultsoftheirpopulation-basedstudyinTheJournalofAllergyandClinicalImmunology.Researchersinvolvedabout1,300three-month-oldbabiesfromacrosstheUKinthisstudy.Theylookedspecificallyatthelevelofcalciumcarbonate(碳酸钙)inthewater,whichisameasureofwaterhardness.Thelevelofchlorine(氯)inthefamily’swatersupplywasalsotakenintoconsideration,aswastheuseofbathingproducts,andhowregularlythebabieswerebathed.Thebabieswerethenexaminedforthepresenceofchildhoodeczema(湿疹).Thenaturalbarrieroftheirskinwasalsoexamined;babieswerescreenedfortheFLGgenewhichisassociatedwithanaffectedskinbarrier.Thestudyfoundthathardwaterislinkedtoan87percentincreasedriskofeczemaforbabiesofthreemonthsofage."Ourstudybuildsongrowingevidenceofalinkbetweenexposuretohardwaterandtheriskofdevelopingeczemainchildhood.It’snotyetclearwhethercalciumcarbonatehasadirectbadeffectontheskinbarrier,orwhetherotherenvironmentalfactorsdirectlyrelatedtowaterhardness,suchasthewater’spH,mayberesponsible,"Dr.CarstenFlohrsaid.Andthestudy,thankfully,doesn’tendthere.Dr.Flohrwillbeexaminingtheseresultsfurther,withanewstudyintheworks.Thislatestudyisduetobeginlaterthisyearandthequestiontheywillbeseekingtoansweriswhetheradevicetolowerwaterhardne