15 征稿作文 中考英语满分作文赏析

15征稿作文NO.1（2022·广东广州·中考真题）你校将兴建新图书馆，学校英文报以“MyGreenSchoolLibrary”为题向学生征稿。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿，介绍你所设计（design）的绿色图书馆。注意：1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；2.词数80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）；3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。MyGreenSchoolLibraryIwanttodesignagreenschoollibrary._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分作文赏析】MyGreenSchoolLibraryIwanttodesignagreenschoollibrary.Itisgreen.Itisbuiltentirelyfromrenewableresources.Itisround.Whenyousitinside,youwillfeelverywarm.Itiscomposedofwastepaperandsolarpanels.Allitsenergycomesfromthesun.Youcanreadallkindsofbooksinit.Youcanalsolistentomusicinit.Ifyouaretired,youcanalsorestinside.【解析】1.题干解读：本文主要以“MyGreenSchoolLibrary”为题，并根据题干中的思维导图介绍你所设计的绿色图书馆，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第二人称和第三人称为主。主要是根据思维导图中的提示描述自己设计的绿色图书馆，写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。NO.2（2022·湖北宜昌·中考真题）假如你学校的校园广播《英语之声》栏目以“Ilove________”为主题征稿，请你投稿。稿件内容：◆热爱的主题◆热爱的理由◆适当的感悟稿件要求：（1）请补全标题；（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；（3）词数80词左右。Ilove___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分作文赏析】IlovereadingIlovereadingverymuch.IrememberitwasfiveyearsagothatIbecameinterestedinreading.Atthattime,Ijoinedareadingclubonline.Iwasgladtofindthereweresomanybooksformetoread.Myteacherencouragedmetoreaddifferentkindsofbooks,andthensharemyfeelingswithotherreaders.Ifoundgreatfunsharingideas.Eversincethen,readinghasbeenmyfavoritehobby.Fromreadingbooks,Icannotonlylearnalotfromthem,butalsoopenanewworldforme.Itmakesmerelaxedandbringsmealotoffun.Ithinkmoreandmorepeoplewilllovereadinginthefuture.【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我喜欢阅读”为题写一篇短文。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段先引出自己喜爱的事情，接着描述自己喜爱它的原因和经历；第二段描述自己从中得到的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。NO.3（2022·江苏苏州·中考真题）《苏州日报》英文专刊以“Practicemakesperfect”为题向中学生开展征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.你对该谚语的理解；2.你生活中的一个事例（例如：运动、乐器、家务、学习等方面）；3.你的感悟，注意：1.词数100，短文开头已给出，不计人总词数；2.内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。PracticemakesperfectHaveyouheardofthesaying“practicemakesperfect”?Imean___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分作文赏析】PracticemakesperfectHaveyouheardofthesaying“practicemakesperfect”?Imeanthatweshouldpracticeunfamiliarthingsagainandagain.We’llbeabletoperformitperfectly.ThepracticeoflearningEnglishisagoodexample.WearenotlivinginanEnglishspeakingcountry.So,inordertolearnitwell,weneedextrapractice,suchasreadingEnglishbooks,goingtoEnglishcorners,orcommunicatingwithforeigners.Youcan’tmasterEnglishjustbysittingatyourdesk.Asanotherexample,ifwewanttobeskilledinusingthecomputer,wealsoneedtopracticeusingit.Somechildrenbecomelittleexpertsincomputer,justbecausetheyplaywithiteveryday.Onthecontrary,ifwejuststicktobooks,wewillstillfeelconfusedwhenusingcomputers.Judgingfromtheevidenceoffered,wemightsafelydrawtheconclusionthatpracticemakesperfect.【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“熟能生巧”这句谚语展开描述。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段引出主题，介绍自己对这句谚语的理解；第二段从学习英语以及学习使用电脑这两个方面，解读这句谚语。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。NO.4（2022·浙江温州·中考真题）假如你是陈华，你的英国朋友Tracy在她学校成立了中国音乐社，她在为社团成员安排下学期的活动，写邮件征求你的意见。请根据她设计的活动（见下表）回复邮件，提出你对这些活动的看法和理由，并为她补充至少一项活动。ActivitiesfortheChinesemusicclub•ListentotraditionalandmodernChinesemusic.•SharestoriesofChinesesingers.注意：(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；(2)词数：110词左右；开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearTracy,Gladtohearfromyou.It’sgreattoknowyou’vegotaChinesemusicclubinyourschool._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopeyou’llenjoyChinesemusicandhavefun.Yours,ChenHua【满分作文赏析】DearTracy,Gladtohearfromyou.It’sgreattoknowyou’vegotaChinesemusicclubinyourschool.ListeningtotraditionalandmodernChinesemusicisagoodwayfortheclubmemberstoknowmoreaboutChinesemusic,becausetheyc