探索火星 热点06 -中考英语高分作文（全国通用版）

备战2023年中考英语高分作文热点06探索火星一、材料作文1．由于地球愈来愈拥挤，将来我们有可能移居火星。请根据要点提示以“LifeonMarsinthefuture”为题，写一篇短文来描述将来在火星上的生活情况。要点：1.因为火星重力只有地球重力的八分之三，所以人们出去不得不穿特制的靴子以免他们飘浮进入太空；2.人们将有更多空间，他们将住在大而舒服的房间里；3.人们能有更多的时间放松，因为机器人做了大部分工作；4.火星上的食物将是药片的形式，没有地球上的食物可口；5.火星上没有学校，每个学生将有一台和星际网络相连的电脑，他们将在网络学校和电子老师一起学习；6.航天飞机速度很快，但不是很舒服。要求：1.语意连贯，层次清晰，书写清楚；2.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；3.词数：90左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。LifeonMarsinthefutureInthefuture,peoplewouldmovetootherplanetsincludingMarsbecausetheEarthisbecomingmoreandmorecrowdedandpolluted.WhatwouldlifeonMarsbelike?Let’sgoandhavealook.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】LifeonMarsinthefutureInthefuture,peoplewouldmovetootherplanetsincludingMarsbecausetheEarthisbecomingmoreandmorecrowdedandpolluted.WhatwouldlifeonMarsbelike?Let’sgoandhavealook.ThegravityonMarsisonlyaboutthree-eighthsofthatontheEarth,sopeoplewouldhavetowearspecialbootstokeepthemselvesfromfloatingoffintospacewhentheygoout.Peoplewouldhavemorespaceandtheywouldliveinbig,comfortablerooms.What’smore,peoplecouldhavemoretimetorelaxbecauserobotswoulddomostofthework.ThefoodonMarswouldbeintheformofpills.ItwouldnotbeastastyasthatontheEarth.TherewouldbenoschoolsonMars.Everystudentwouldhaveacomputerathomeconnectedtoaninterplanetarynetwork.Theywouldstudyatonlineschoolwithe-teachers.Thespacecraftwouldtravelveryfast,butitisnotverycomfortable.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文为说明文，是一篇材料作文。②时态：本文要用一般现在时。③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当增加细节，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]①第一步，开头已给出，交代了写作背景和写作目的：介绍未来火星上的生活。②第二步，介绍火星上的生活，根据所给要点，适当发挥想象，增加细节。[亮点词汇]①gravity重力②keep…fromdoingsth.阻止……做某事③what’smore另外④intheformof…以……的形式⑤as…as和……一样[高分句型]①peoplewouldhavetowearspecialbootstokeepthemselvesfromfloatingoffintospacewhentheygoout.(when引导时间状语从句)②peoplecouldhavemoretimetorelaxbecauserobotswoulddomostofthework.(because引导原因状语从句)2．书面表达目前，地球正面临着前所未有的危机，人口增多，能源减少，到太空生活成了热门话题。Daniel和他的同学讨论了在火星上生活的利弊，请根据讨论结果并加上自己的观点写一篇报道。AdvantagesDisadvantagesinterestinggotoonlineschoolsmuchmorespacerobot(doworkforus)thingsarecheapgetillfromlivingtherefarfromEarthnofood,wateroroxygensomedangerousalienseasilyfloatawayLifeonMarsLifeonMarsisdifferentfromthatonEarth.SomestudentsthinkitisbettertoliveonMarsthanonearthbecause______________________________________________________________【参考范文】LifeonMarsLifeonMarsisdifferentfromthatonEarth.SomestudentsthinkitisbettertoliveonMarsthanonearthbecauselivingonMarshassomeadvantages.It’sreallywonderfultoliveonMars.LifeonMarsismoreinterestingandmorecomfortablethanthatonearth.Wecangotoonlineschoolsinsteadofrealones.Wecanalsohavemorespace.Wehaverobotsathomeandtheydoworkforus.ThethingsonMarsarecheap.Buttherearealsosomedisadvantages.Wewillnotbeusedtolivingtheresowemaygetillfromlivingthere.Andit’sveryfarfromtheEarth.Thereisnofood,wateroroxygenonMars.Wewillmeetsomedangerousaliensandit’seasytofloatawayonMars.WhatdoyouthinkoflivingonMars?【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，同学们讨论在火星上生活的利弊。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：LifeonMarsis…….，Somestudentsthink…….，It’sreallywonderfulto…….，Marsis…….，Butthereare……,Whatdoyouthinkofsth?等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了有些同学认为在火星上生活比在地球上更好，接下来介绍有些同学认为在火星上生活有一些弊端，最后引发思考在火星上生活怎么样。此处bedifferentfrom,insteadof,athome,beusedtodoingsth,getill,farfrom,floataway,thinkof等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。3．请你用英语写一个火星生活指南，具体介绍一下火星上的情况。环

境没有水，也没有氧气，需要戴特制头盔出

行宇宙飞船，步行时需穿特制靴子货

币电子货币，存储在火星银行娱

乐低重力篮球赛其

他……注意事项：1.火星生活指南须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2.须展开充分想象，作适当发挥，不要逐字翻译；3.词数90左右，火星生活指南的开关和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。HereisaguidetolivingonMars.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WelcometoMars!【参考范文】：HereisaguidetolivingonMars.OnMars,thereisnowateroroxygen.Sowehavetowearspecialhelmets.Wehavebothwaterandfoodintheformofpills.Isn’tthatinteresting?ButtheyarestrangeandnotastastyasthefoodontheEarth.Weuseelectronicdollarsandthey’restoredintheMarsBank.Wecanshoponline.Wetravelbyspacecraftoronfoot.Butwemustwearspecialbootsbecauseofthelowgravity.Wehavemorespaceandtimetorelax.Low-gravitybasketballgamesarereallyamazing.WelcometoMars!【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点写一个火星生活指南，要包括环境、出行、货币、娱乐等方面，要展开充分想象，作适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要承接已给出的首尾，时态采用一般现在时，人称以一、三人称为主。要在指南中写清楚在火星生活的各方面信息，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。4．假设《21世纪报》向中学生征稿，主题是关于未来生活。请你以“LifeonMars”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下你想象中的火星生活。内容要点：1.交通工具是航天飞机，其速度达到光速2.随着科学的发展，在火星上植物能生产食物、氧气和水；3.火星重力只有地球的3/8，人们通过穿特制的靴子来解决火星上重力的问题；4.人们有更多的空间和休闲时间；5.生活的许多方面很美好，但也有一些不利条件，如……注意事项：1.短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2.第5要点须用2—3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；3.词数90左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。LifeonMarsInthefuture,ourplanetwillbemoreandmorecrowdedandpolluted.MaybewecanliveonMars.HereisaguidetolivingonMars.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】LifeonMarsInthefuture,ourplanetwillbemoreandmorecrowdedand