急救方法与技巧 热点06-中考英语高分作文（浙江专用版）VIP

备战2023年中考英语高分作文热点06急救方法与技巧一、材料作文1．你班要举办题为“Myhero(英雄)”的英文手抄报比赛，你打算写你的朋友李华勇救落水儿童的感人事迹。上周六你们在去博物馆的路上，他不顾个人安危，勇敢地跳入河里救落出了一名落水儿童，同行的你目击了这一切，深受感动。请根据提示写一篇短文，为手抄报比赛做准备。提示：1.介绍事情发生的大致经过；2.描述李华的英勇行为；3.就此事写出你的感受。要求：1.使用一般过去时和过去进行时；2.内容应包括所有提示要点，可适当发挥；词数不少于80。参考词汇：勇敢的braveMyHero____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】MyHeroAt3o’clocklastSaturday,myfriendLiHuaandIweremakingourwaytothemuseum.Whilewewerewalkingpastapark,wesawthreeboysplayingfootball.Theywereplayinghappilywhenaboyplayedtheballsohardthattheballflewintotheriver.Heranquicklyafteritandfellintothewater,too.WhileIwascallingforhelp,LiHuajumpedintothewaterwithoutthinkingtosavetheboy.Althoughitwasalittledifficult,LiHuatriedhisbesttogettheboyoutofthewater.Hetoldthoseboysnottoplaybytheriveranymore.LiHuawasbraveenoughtohelpothersoutofdanger.Hesetagoodexampletous.HeismyheroandI’mproudofhim.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“过去进行时”；③提示：题干已给出故事背景，应根据提示内容，紧扣主题展开写作，可适当添加细节，突出重点内容。[写作步骤]第一步：介绍事情发生的大致经过；第二步：描述李华勇于救人的英勇行为；第三步：表达作者的内心感受。[亮点词汇]①makeone’swayto向……进发、前往某处②so...that...如此……以致……③withoutthinking不假思索④setagoodexampletosb.给某人树立好榜样[高分句型]①Whilewewerewalkingpastapark,wesawthreeboysplayingfootball.（含有while引导的时间状语从句）②Theywereplayinghappilywhenaboyplayedtheballsohardthattheballflewintotheriver.（含有when引导的时间状语从句）③Althoughitwasalittledifficult,LiHuatriedhisbesttogettheboyoutofthewater.（含有although引导的让步状语从句）2．近些年在我国高层建筑火灾时有发生。如果遇到了类似的灾情，知道怎样逃生就显得尤为重要。请结合上面的文章和以下的提示，写一篇短文向大家介绍高层火灾的逃生方法。高层火灾逃生要诀：1.保持冷静，尽力自救；2.简易防护，蒙鼻匍匐；3.不入险地，勿贪财物；4.善用通道，莫入电梯。要求：1.不照抄原文；2.语句连贯，80词左右（文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。Theseyearshigh-risebuildingfirestakeplaceattimes.Ifyouliveinahigh-risebuildingandhappentomeetsuchafiredisaster,whatshouldyoudotosaveyourself?_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】：Theseyearshigh-risebuildingfirestakeplaceattimes.Ifyouliveinahigh-risebuildingandhappentomeetsuchafiredisaster,whatshouldyoudotosaveyourself?Nooneknowsforsurewhenafirewillhappen,soit’sextremelynecessarytomakepreparationsbeforeafirestarts.Checkthefireescapeinadvanceandmakesurethatyoucanfinditinthedarkwhenlightshavefailed.Findoutwherethenearestfireextinguisherisandreadtheinstructionstolearnhowtouseit.What’smore,don’tloseyourheadifunfortunatelyafirebreaksout.First,telephonethefiredepartmentimmediatelywhenthefirejustgetsstarted.Takecarenottobeovercomebysmoke,whichcontainingmonoxidegas,cankillyouquickly.Coveryourmouthwithawettowelorawetcloth,andavoidinggettingintothesmoke.Don’tgetinanelevator,asyoumaygettrappediftheelectricityfails.Ifyoucan’tgetawaybyyourself,itisofgreatimportancetohangsomethingoutofthewindowtoattractattentionasassignofaskingforhelp.Inshort,ifyoumakepreparationsbeforeandtakeprecautionsduringthefire,chancesarethatyouwillsurviveincaseofafireifitreallybreaksoutsomeday.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求根据材料中提示的要点写一篇关于“高层火灾逃生方法”的文章。写作时注意分段叙述，第一段开门见山，点明文章主题；中间段落介绍火灾发生时的自救方法；最后一段总结概括，升华主题。2.写作指导：本文主题为“高层火灾逃生方法”；写作时应以提建议、说方法的口吻叙述，故应以第二人称、一般现在时进行介绍；写作时可以使用祈使句、状语从句等句式结构，使文章更加丰富，同时还要注意条理通顺，使读者一目了然。3．如果家里突发火灾时，我们正好在室内，这时我们应该做什么，不应该做什么？请你根据下面的提示，以HowtoProtectOurselvesintheFire为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。HowtoProtectOurselvesintheFireIfafirehappenswhenweareintheroom,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】HowtoProtectOurselvesintheFireIfafirehappenswhenweareintheroom,first,weshouldkeepcalm.Don’tbeafraid.Call119oropenthewindowstocryforhelp.Second,weshouldfindwatertomakeourclotheswet.Coverourmouthandnosewiththem.Weshouldn’tletfireburnourclothes.Third,ifthelightgoesout,weshouldtrytofeelthedoorandopenit.Takethestairsinsteadoftheliftandrundownstairs.Finally,weshouldn’tjumpdownfromthehighwindows.Luckwillbealwayswithus.【详解】1.题干解读：该题属于思维导图写作。写作时要注意图片上的信息，写全信息火灾发生时应该做什么，不应该做什么。2.点评：采用一段式，主要说明了：第一，要冷静；第二，找水把衣服弄湿；第三，走楼梯逃生，不应该跳窗或者乘电梯。结构清晰，段落分明。用第一人称来进行论点分析；时态采用一般现在时为主。3.高分亮点：短语：beafraid，goout，jumpdown，Coverwith，trytodosth.，insteadof。句型：if引导的条件状语从句，祈使句。二、看图作文4．假设你是李明，今天红十字会到你们学校开展心肺复苏（CPR）急救知识的普及教育。请根据下列图示写一封e-mail，把你所学到的CPR急救知识与意义和好友Michael分享。词数80左右。注意事项：1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计人总词数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。参考词汇：firstaid急救

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AED除颤仪DearMichael,ItookpartintheCPRtraininginourschooltoday.Ican'twaittosharesomefirstaidknowledgewithyou.First,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiMing【参考范文】DearMichael,ItookpartintheCPRtraininginourschooltoday.Ican'twaittosharesomefirstaidknowledgewithyou.First,askthepersonifheisOK.Second,ifhe'stopsbreathing,youshouldcall120forhelpatonceandtakeoutAED.Third,pressthepatient'schestforthirtytimes.Thenopenhismouthtocheckifthereissomethinginhismouthornose.Afterthat,usemouth-to-mouthwaytostarthisbreathingfortwice.Finally,useAEDtogivefirstaid.Remembertotelltheotherpeopletokeepawayfromthepatient.IfweknowabouttheCPR,wecansavepeople'slives.It'snecessaryforustomasterit.Yours,LiMing【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于看图作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，介绍你所学到的心肺复苏急救知识与意义。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍心肺复苏的步骤以及掌握心肺复苏急救知识的意义；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。三、小作文5．小明在实践课上不小心割伤了自己，请你依据所学给他列举3条或以上建议，帮他处理伤口。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】：First,runitunderwater.Next,putsomemedicineonthecut.Thenputabandageonit.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：按照要求写出处理伤口的三点建议。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍第一点建议即在水下冲洗；第二步，介绍第二点建议即在伤口上擦药；第三步，介绍第三点建议即绑上绷带。[亮点词汇]①Next接下来②Then然后[高分句型]①Next,putsomemedicineonthecut.（祈使句）②Thenputabandageonit.（祈使句）四、讲稿6．假如你是阳光中学八年级学生王华，几天前你目睹了一场火灾。请你以“AwayFromFire”为题做一次演讲。你草拟了演讲思维导图，请根据下图写一份80词左右的英文演讲稿。注意事项：1.演讲稿须根据思维导图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；2.思维导图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；3.词数在80个左右，演讲稿的首尾已给出，不计入总词数；4.演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；5.演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】：Goodafternoon,everyone.I’mWangHua.It’sagreathonorformetospeakhere.Afewdaysago,Iwitnessedabigfire.Abuildingcaughtabigfire.Therewasheavysmokefromthewindows.Peoplescreamedinfearandraninalldirections.Ifweareinabigfire,weshouldcoverourmouthandnosewithawettowelandstaylowtotheground.Thentrytogetoutassoonaspossible.Asstudents,weshouldlearntopreventfireinourdailylife.Don’tputanythinghotintotherubbishbin.Moreover,neverplaywithfire.That’sallformyspeech.Thankyou.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿，根据几天前目睹了一场火灾。以“AwayFromFire”为题做一次演讲，描述火灾的场景，并介绍关于如何远离火灾及火中如何保护自己，根据下表中的记录，结合你自己对此事的看法。要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充。2.

写作指导：本文用到的一般现在时态和一般过去时态，人称用第一人称。写作中注意一些连词的用法等。内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。7．假如你是李华，是天津益中学校九年级的学生。十一月是你校的安全教育月，学校将在''全国消防日''举办消防疏散演练。请你在''国旗下的讲话''中进行演讲，介绍拨打火警电话''119''的注意事项并倡议同学们要认真对待消防演习，积极参与，听从指挥。要点：拨打火警电话''119''注意事项：1要记清火警电话''119''。2电话接通以后，要准确报出失火的地址，在说不清楚具体地址时，要说出地理位置，周围明显建筑物或道路标志。3将自己的姓名、电话告诉对方，以便联系。4打完电话后，立即派人到路口等候消防车，引导消防车迅速赶到火灾地点。倡议：请同学们要认真对待消防演习，积极参与，听从指挥。参考词汇：地理位置：locationn.明显的：distinctadj.道路标志：landmarkn.消防车:fireenginen.消防演习：firedrills指挥，指令：instructions

n.消防安全：firecontrol要求：（1）词数：80-120个。（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。Dearfellowschoolmates,I'msohonoredtobeheretogiveaspeech.Asweknow,firecontrolplaysanimportantpartoncampus.Howdowecall119ifthereisafire?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________