读后续写+非同寻常的流浪狗Rufus+讲义 高三英语二轮复习

试题呈现：Thereoncewasastraydog(流浪狗)namedRufuswhowasthemostamazingdogonKumquat

Street.Hecouldhearaladybugblowingitsnose.

Hecouldseeapillbugeatingablacklicoricecandyat

midnight.

Rufuscouldevensmellacaterpillarthathadn’twasheditsfeet.YouwouldthinkthatRufus,beingsoamazing,wasalsohappy,Buthewasn’t,Yousee,therewasone

thingthatkeptRufusfrombeingadoptedbyhisfavoritehuman.Andthatwas...Rufusbarkedbackward.

Here'swhathesoundedlike:“Wob-

wow!Wob-wow!Fra-fra-fra!Krab-krab!”Rufuscouldstandbeinglaughedatbyeverysquirrelandcatintheneighborhood.Whathecouldn’t

standwasthathisbarkkepthimfromlivingwithJanieJohnson.JanieneverlaughedatRufuswhenhebarked.Morethananythingelse,Rufuswantedtobeherpet.

Hewantedtoplaycatchinheryardeverydayandsleepatthefootofherbedeachnight.ButJanie'sfather,Mr.Johnson,wouldn'thearofit,“What?Adogthatbarksbackward?We'dbethe

laughing

stocksofKumquatStreet!WeJohnsonsdidn'tgetwherewearetodaybyadoptingdogsthatbark

backward.No.Janie.It'soutofthequestion.”“I’msorry,”

JanietoldRufusonemorningastheysatonherfrontporch.“I

keeptellingDaddyhow

greatyouare.Hejustwon'tlisten.”“Krab-krab!”

saidRufus.“Yes,sometimesheisbad-tempered,"saidJanie“I’llkeeptrying,though.Don'tworry.”

ButRufusdidworry.ThateveninghetalkeditoverwithhisfriendBillBulldog.“Idon'tthinkMr.

Johnsonwilleverlikeme,”

Rufussaid,“AslongasIbarkbackward,he'llneverletmeliveinhishome.”

“Haveyoutriedtreatment?”

askedBill.Rufussaid,“I'vetriedeverything.Nothinghelps,

It'sjustthewayIbark.”“You'reagreatdogRoof,Anyonecanseethat,"saidBill.“Itjusttakessomehumanslongertofigure

itout,that'sall,Hey,wanttogowithmetoSuccotashStreet?I'veheardthattheirgarbageisfantastic.”

Rufusyawned,“No,thanks,"hesaid,“I'lltakeanap.”WhenRufuswokeup,itwaslateafternoon.Ashewaslyingthere,hissharpearsheardMr.Johnson

saying,“It'salmostsuppertime.

IsJaniestillroller-skating?WeJohnsonsdidn'tgetwherewearetodayby

beinglateforsupper.”注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右:

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答RufusrandownKumquatStreettolookforJanie.

Atthesightof

JanieandRufus,Mr.

Johnsonranup.文本分析：故事大意：曾经有一只流浪狗叫鲁弗斯，它是金橘街上最神奇的狗。它能听到一只瓢虫擤鼻子的声音，它能看到一只球潮虫在午夜吃一根黑色的甘草糖，它甚至能嗅到一只毛毛虫没有洗脚。但是，纵使鲁弗斯有如此天赋，它也有烦恼：鲁弗斯的叫声永远是反的——相当于我们正常说“小狗”，用它的方式就成了“狗小”。所以，鲁弗斯一叫，经常惹得周围的松鼠、猫咪和黑羽椋鸟嘲笑。只有小女孩珍妮不同，她从不嘲笑它，还想让它做她的宠物。鲁弗斯也非常喜欢珍妮，可珍妮的父亲约翰逊先生却不同意。鲁弗斯很沮丧，但也没有办法，直到一天，珍妮出去滑旱冰，都快到吃晚饭的时间她还没有回家，发生什么意外了吗？鲁弗斯能帮上忙吗？主要矛盾：本文的流浪狗Rufus有一个美好的愿望----有一个家，和Janie住在一起，一起玩游戏，睡在她床边；流浪狗Rufus的困难与阻碍：Janie的父亲不同意；考生要充分利用这个伏笔，进行逆向创作。即：父亲最终会同意的。本文有两个高光点：①流浪狗Rufus

有一个特别提到的点：Hebarkedbackward.

而且因为这个特点被MrJohnson

拒绝收养。②Mr.Johnson有一句口头禅，可以反向进行创作，再次利用这个口头禅，让收养流浪狗Rufus变得十分地自然。同时文风也可以保持一定的一致性。根据两个段首句，可以进行各自段落内容的设计；第一段应该是重在描写流浪狗Rufus

凭一己之力与智慧找到了女孩Janie

，而且用的他独有的法器：令人难忘的朝后一叫。第二段则是父亲被Rufus

与

Janie

之间的深情厚谊感动，最终答应女儿的请求。不要忘记父亲有一句口头禅说了一遍又一遍。下水作文：画面定格结尾RufusrandownKumquatStreettolookforJanie.

Withhissharpeyes,helookedeverywherealongthestreet,butnotevenasinglesignofJanieandherroller-skatingshoes.Withhissharpnose,hesniffedforanysmellofJanie,butwhatgreetedhimwasnothingbuttheunpleasantsmellofthecaterpillar’sunwashedfeet.Withhissharpears,hecouldonlysensetheladybugblowingitsnose.Withtheeffortsofallthesensesgoinginvain,Rufusdecidedtoturntohisuniqueweapon-barkbackward.Thoughitmeantthathewouldbelaughedatbyhisneighbours,hehopedthatinthiswayhecouldattractJanie’sattentionandfindher.Allhiscouragesummonedup,RufusbarkedbackwardallthewaydownKumquatStreet.ThistimeluckwentwithhimanditwasjustawhilebeforeJanieheardhisbarkandroller-skatedallthewaytohim.Atthesightof

JanieandRufus,Mr.

Johnsonranup.

Thistime,insteadofsaying

“WeJohnsonsdidn'tgetwherewearetodayby...”,heaskedJaniewhathadhappened,concernandaffectionwrittenalloverhisface.Swellingwithpride,JanieexplainedhowshegotlostandhowRufus’suniquebarkledherback.

“Iwouldn’tgetwhereIamnowwithoutRufus’

bark.Dad,please!”

Janiebegged,onehandshakingDad’sandtheotherstrokingRufus’

silkyfur.Touchedbyhislovelydaughter’swords,Dadfelthisheartsoftenedandnoddedinapproval.Andthedog,seemingtounderstandeverything,barkedbackwardmerrily,asifannouncinghisbeingadopted.Together,thethreeheadedbackhome,onestridingforward,oneroller-skatingonward,andonewagginghistailandbarkingbackward-“Wob-wow!Wob-wow!Fra-fra-fra!Krab-krab!”（画面定格结尾）参考范文：100+133RufusrandownKumquatStreettolookforJanie.

Helistenedfortheclickety-clickofJanie'sskates.Hesniffedforherspecialbubble-gum-and-peachesscent.Helookedforhersky-bluehelmet.Buthedidn’thear,smell,orseeheranywhere.Rufusstartedbakingasloudashecould.“Wob-wow!Wob-wow!Fra-fra-fra!Krab-krab!”Asquirrelgiggledinatree,“I’veneverheardanythingsosillyinmylife!”“Youdon'tevensoundlikeadog!”,yowledacat.Rusfusignoredthemallandkeptonbarking.Soonallyouheardintheneighborhoodwashisbark.Suddenly,JanieskateduptoRufus.“Oh,Rufus,IknewIheardyou!”criedJanie.AtthesightofJanieandRufus,Mr:Johnsonranup.

“Janie,”hesaid.“Whereonearthhaveyoubeen?”Janieexplained,“Itookw