2024年2月江西省重点中学协作体高三第一次联考试卷读后续写灯船祈福讲义高三英语二轮复习

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Themomentthebellrang,Lekgrabbedhisschoolbagandracedtowardshisdestination.Whenatlasthepushedopenthedoorofhisparents'restaurant,hecouldhardlycatchhisbreath.Heranintothekitchenandreachedforapileofbananaleavesonthecounter.Ifhehurried,hemighthavetimetomakehiskrathong(水灯)beforethecelebrationstarted.TonightwasLoyKrathong(水灯节),theFestivaloftheFloatingLanterns.Inhistown,peoplewouldsendoutlightedcandlesintinyboatsalongriversandcanalssothatthepastyear'sproblemscouldsailawaywiththemandbereplacedwithwishesforthenewyear.Ashewrappedthebananaleavesaroundabamboobasetoformhisboat,Lekthoughtabouthissister,Katia.Shewastoosicktofloatakrathongontherivertonight.PerhapsawishonLoyKrathongwouldtakeawayherillness.Maybethenshewouldbeabletolaughthewaysheusedto.Hetucked(塞)fourredflowersinsidethebananaleavesandpokedthreesticksofincensebetweentheirblossoms.Inthemiddle,heplacedatall,whitecandle.Thisweek,Lekhadpracticedlaunchingakrathongthewayhisbrother,Freddid.Fredwasexperiencedinlaunchingkrathongsandoftenlaunchedkrathongsintotheriverforeachoftheircustomers.Lekhadbalancedstonesontheflatpieceofmetalatthebottomofalongpoleandloweredthemintotheriveruntiltheirparentshadscoldedhimforstandingtooclosetothewater'sedge.Whennightfell,LekandFredmadetheirwayoutsidethroughthecrowdstandingunderthefullmoon.Fredstoodonthejetty(突堤),loweringakrathongintothewaterwithhispole.Thecandlelightdancedontheblackriverastheboatslowlyfollowedthecurrent.AlonglineofpeoplewaitedbehindFred.ItwouldtakeforeverbeforehecouldhelpLek!Lektookmatchesandlitthecandleonhistinyboat.Heloweredhiskrathongtowardthewater.stretchingtoreachitssurface.注意:1，续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Suddenly,hefelthisbodyshakingontheedgeandthekrathongdroppedfromhishandintothedarkwater.Paragraph2:FredwalkedtowardsweepingLekwithakrathonginhishand.读后续写是小男孩在水灯节为自己妹妹放水灯祝福，结果失手灯掉下去了，后来兄弟一起放水灯为妹妹祝福。参考范文一有点理解错误，第一段直接弟弟掉河里了然后被救了起来，但是大冬天没有换衣服逻辑不太通。官方范文和参考范文二符合审题思路，第一段写弟弟把灯船掉到河里后茫然失措，难受的心理。其中穿插对妹妹的担心，环境描写可以写蜡烛熄灭，周围人的热闹衬托弟弟无助的心情。第二段写哥哥安慰弟弟，然后一起放灯船。一些可借鉴语言点：表示弟弟的伤心1.Desperate/hopeless/helpless/sad/depressed

失望，伤心2.One’sheartsank

心猛的一沉3.

Disappointmentwashedoverhim,minglingwithworryforhissister'shealth.

失望笼罩他，夹杂着对妹妹身体的担心4.

Hestoodfrozenforamoment,feelingaknotoffrustrationtighteninginhischest.

他僵直的站着，感觉心中沮丧越来越紧5.

Lek'sthroatstiffened,tearsfloodinghiseyes.

他的喉咙变得僵硬，眼泪流下来哥哥的安慰1.Listeningcarefully,FredgentlyplacedhisownkrathongonthegroundandwrappedLekinhisarms.

认真的听着，哥哥把灯船放下，把弟弟抱在怀里。2.WhatFredsaidwasagreatforttoLek,whonowsmiledfromeartoear.哥哥说的话对弟弟来说是很大的安慰，弟弟现在笑的像花一样。Abalm,

药膏，

WhatFredsaidwasagreatfort/relief/balmtoLek,whonowstoppedcryingandbegantosmile.

里面有主语从句和定语从句，看起来很舒服。环境描写1.Thefullmoonshonebrightlyinthesky,whilelights,laughter,andprayersfilledtheair.Numerousdotsoflightdriftedaway,dancingalongthewaves,ashopesforthefulfillmentofallwishesandthehappinessandhealthofeveryoneechoedaround.

满月明亮地挂在天空中，而灯光、笑声和祈祷声充斥着空气。无数点点光芒飘荡在波浪中，带着所有愿望的实现和每个人的幸福与健康的祝福。参考范文一，Suddenly,hefelthisbodyshakingontheedge,andthekrathongslippedfromhishandintothedarkwater.

"No!"Hecriedoutloudly;hecouldn'tbeartoseetheboattipoverandsink.Withouthesitation,hereachedforthekrathong,tryingtograbit.Unfortunately,heslipped,losthisbalance,andplungeddirectlyintotheriver."Splash!"Theicywaterimmediatelyengulfedhim,andcrieseruptedfromthecrowd,"Help!Achildhasfallenintotheriver!"Despitefeelingcoldandscared,Lekflappedhisarmsandsearchedforhiskrathong.ItwashiswishforKatie,whoneededtheblessing.Fortunately,itwasnearby,andhesooncaughtitagaininhishands.Shortlyafter,alifeboatarrived,rescuedhim,andreturnedhimtosafety.Applauseresounded,andpeoplecheered.FredwalkedtowardtheweepingLek,holdingakrathonginhishand.Uponseeingit,Fredshoutedangrilyandloudly,"Whatwereyouthinking?Younearlygotyourselfkilled!"LekliftedhisheadandtearfullyexplainedhowhewantedtoblessKatie.FredfellsilentandthenembracedLek,saying,"Let'ssetthekrathongafloat."Thistime,Lekstoodcarefullyonthejetty,withFred'sassistance,andgentlylowereditintothewater.Thekrathongdriftedawayintothedistance.LekandFredwatchedtheboatdisappear,offeringtheirbestwishesfortheirsisters.Thefullmoonshonebrightlyinthesky,whilelights,laughter,andprayersfilledtheair.Numerousdotsoflightdriftedaway,dancingalongthewaves,ashopesforthefulfillmentofallwishesandthehappinessandhealthofeveryoneechoedaround.突然间，他感觉自己的身体在边缘摇晃，灯船从他手中滑落到黑暗的水中。“不！”他大声喊道，他不能忍受船翻倒和沉没。毫不犹豫地，他伸手去抓灯船，试图捞起它。不幸的是，他滑倒了，失去了平衡，直接跌入河中。“扑通！”冰冷的水立即将他淹没，人群中响起了呼救声，“救命！有个孩子掉进河里了！”尽管感到寒冷和恐惧，莱克挥动着双臂，寻找着他的灯船。那是他为凯蒂许下的愿望，她需要这份祝福。幸运的是，它就在附近，他很快又抓住了它。不久之后，一艘救生艇赶来，将他救起，安全地放回了原处。掌声响起，人们欢呼。弗雷德手持一只灯船走向哭泣的莱克。看到这一幕，弗雷德愤怒而大声地喊道，“你在想什么？你差点丧命！”莱克抬起头，泪流满面地解释了他想给凯蒂祝福的想法。弗雷德沉默了一会儿，然后拥抱了莱克，说：“让我们让灯船漂流吧。”这一次，莱克小心翼翼地站在码头上，在弗雷德的帮助下，将它轻轻放入水中。灯船飘向远方。莱克和弗雷德注视着船渐行渐远，为自己的姐妹送上最美好的祝福。满月明亮地挂在天空中，而灯光、笑声和祈祷声充斥着空气。无数点点光芒飘荡在波浪中，带着所有愿望的实现和每个人的幸福与健康的祝福。参考范文二，Suddenly,hefelthisbodyshakingontheedge,andthekrathongslippedfromhishandintothedarkwater.

Lek'sheartsankashewatchedhiscarefullycraftedkrathongswirlingandbeingswallowedbythewater,itscandleflickeringandthendyingout.Disappointmentwashedoverhim,minglingwithworryforhissister'shealth.Hestoodfrozenforamoment,feelingaknotoffrustrationtighteninginhischest.Glancingaround,hefelthelplessasthecrowdlaughedheartily,theirhopefulfacesilluminatedbytheglowofcountlesslanterns.Hestaredatwherethekrathonghaddisappeareduntilthesoftsoundoffootstepsapproachedfrombehind.Turning,hesawhisbrotherFred,concernetchedonhisfaceashetookinLek'screstfallenexpression.FredwalkedtowardtheweepingLekwithakrathonginhishand.

Seeinghim,Lekcouldn’tconcealhissadnessandpouredoutthestoryoftheboatslippingandsinking.Listeningcarefully,FredgentlyplacedhisownkrathongonthegroundandwrappedLekinhisarms."It'sokay.Accidentshappen.Let’slaunchthiskrathong.”WhatFredsaidwasagreatforttoLek,whonowsmiledfromeartoear.Thistime,withFred’sguidance,Lekcarefullylowered