2023年杭州一模应用文分析讲义-高考英语作文复习专项

杭州一模应用文分析46.假定你是李华。为迎接爱尔兰姐妹学校来访，你校英语俱乐部将举行学生活动图片展，现正向全校学生征集照片。你打算参与，请你写一封邮件，说明相关信息，内容包括：1.描述照片内容；2.选择该照片的理由；3.表达入选期望。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearEnglishClub,I’mLiHuafromClassI,Senior3._________________________________________________________________________________________________Attachedisthephoto.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua审题：体裁：推荐信推荐活动照片时态：一般现在时为主段落分布：第一段：背景+目的第二段：描述照片内容+选择该照片的理由（就是推荐该照片的理由）第三段：表达入选期望具体内容：第一段：背景+目的为迎接爱尔兰姐妹学校来访，你校英语俱乐部将举行学生活动图片展，现正向全校学生征集照片本段落所需短语及词汇：为了：inordertodo;indentedtodo;aimingtodo...来访：visit/payavisittotheschool访问学校conductaschoolvisit进行学校访问makeaschooltour进行学校参观举行图片展：holdaphotoexhibition;organizeaphotographyshow征集照片：collectphotos；gatherpictures姐妹学校：sisterschool提交照片 submitaphoto(fortheexihibiton)本段落所需句型：得知.....我写信推荐Learning/Knowingthat...,Iamwritingtoremend...Asaphotographylover,I'mexcitedtoparticipatein...第二段：描述照片内容+选择该照片的理由（就是推荐该照片的理由）照片内容既可以是展现学校风貌的、也可以是展现中爱文化交流的展现学校风貌：展现中爱文化交流中国中国爱尔兰文化节（ChinaIrelandCulturalFestival）savor（尽情享受）/enjoyIrishfoodattendalecturesthemedonIrishcustomalivelyIrishdanceperformancegetdressedintraditionalcostumecheerforwinningthechampionship学校年度运动会学校年度运动会（school’sannualsportsmeeting）agroupofathletespeteintheracearelayrace接力赛athletesinthetrackandfieldgroundcheerforwinningthechampionship描述时可用到的相关表达：词汇：展现(v.):show,present,showcase,display,demonstrate,exhibit捕捉(v.):capture,seize,shoot描绘(v.):describe,illustrate,depict,portray象征(v.):represent,symbolize以...为主题:isthemedon/iscentredon以...为主要内容/特色:AfeaturesB=AischaracterizedbyB高级句式：Thephoto(Iselected)wasphotographedby...whichcaptures________.Featuring________,thephotoIselectedpresents_______________.Themedon_______,thephotowasphotographedin______where______.Itcapturesa_____scene/momentin______,where_________________.推荐理由：展示充满活力的校园生活presentvibrantcampuslife为...之间的文化交流奠定基础layafoundationfortheculturalexchangebetweenthetwoschools表现出了我们的决心,团队精神和纯粹的快乐demonstrateourdetermination,teamwork,andthesheerjoy象征着我们两所学校之间牢固友谊representthestrongfriendshipbetweenourtwoschools使某人感到宾至如归makesb.feelathome让某人窥见offersb.aglimpseinto...让某人了解allowsb.togetacquaintedwith写理由时可以使用的高级句式：1.ThereasonwhyIchosethisphotoisthatitnotonly......butalso.......2.Thisparticularphotoisagreatchoicebecauseitnotonly......butalso......第三段：表达入选期望I’mconfident/convincedthatitwillmeetyourrequirements.Ihopemyphotowillbeselectedtobeapartoftheexhibition.Thankyouforyourconsideration.Idohopethatyouwouldtakemyremendationintoaccount.Ihopemyphotocansay“hello”toourIrishfriendsformeintheexhibition.Thankyouforconsideringmyparticipation.范文1：DearEnglishClub,I'mLiHuafromClass1,Senior3.IwouldliketosubmitfortheExhibitionanamazingphotographItooklastweek.Itcapturesaheartwarming(暖心的)sceneinanursinghome（养老院）,wheresomeofmyclassmatesareseendishingout（分发）hotmealsandothersareengagedinlivelyconversationswiththeseniors.Alltheirfacesarebrightwithsmilesandglowingwithhappiness（洋溢着幸福）,creatingawarmandlovingambiance（=atmosphere）.Thisphotocanbeshowntoourinternationalfriendsasanexampleoftheintegration（融合）ofourschoolandmunity.Also,itperfectlyexemplifies（exemplify举例说明;是…的典范）thebeliefsourschoolvalues:passion（同情）,empathy,andunity（团结）.Ihopeyouwillconsidermycontributionandthankyouforyoureffortsinmakingtheexchangeprogramamemorable（值得纪念的；难忘的=unforgettable）one.Attachedisthephoto.Bestwishes! Yours, LiHua范文2：DearEnglishClub,I'mLiHuafromClass1,Senior3.Asaphotographylover,I'mexcitedtoparticipateinthephotoexhibitionthatourEnglishCluborganizedtowelethevisitingIrishsisterschool.ThephotoIhaveselectedfortheexhibitioncapturesaheartwarmingmomentfromourschool'sChinaIrelandCultureFestivallastyear,inwhichourstudentsandtheIrishfriendswerebusydecoratingthe“culturetree”withthehandwritingwishingcards.Thisparticularphotoisagreatchoicebecauseitnotonlydisplaysthevibrantaspectsofourschoollifebutalsosymbolizesthestrongspiritual（精神的；心灵的）connectionbetweenourtwoschools.Ihopemyphotocansay“