Unit2单元写作指导典题例析跟踪训练(探索太空的故事)(译林版2020)(选择性)

Unit2Outofthisworld(译林版2020选择性必修第三册)单元写作指导&典题例析&跟踪训练(探索太空的故事)I.单元写作指导1.话题分析讲述探索太空的经历属于想象类作文,主要记述太空探索，遇到外星人的背景,整个事件的过程并简单发表一下对该事件的感想。体裁以记叙文为主。2.话题词汇(1)事件及过程①alienn.外星人②creaturen.生物③planetn.行星，地球④mysteriousadj.神秘的⑤intelligentadj.聪明的，智商高的⑥existvi.存在⑦witnessv.&n.目击，见证;目击者⑧landvi.&vt.(使)着陆⑨catchsightof看见(2)感受①unforgettableadj.令人难忘的②fantasticadj.奇妙的，极好的3.句式整理(1)段首句①IwashavingsupperwhenIcaughtsightofashiningUFOflyinginthesky.我正在吃晚饭,突然看见一个发光的不明飞行物在天空中飞行。②OutoftheUFOcameastrangecreaturewithabigheadandeyes.从不明飞行物里出来一个长着大脑袋和大眼睛的奇怪生物。(2)主体段落句①Frightenedbythestrangecreature,IranawayasfastasIcould.我被那个奇怪的生物吓坏了,尽可能快地跑开了。②Hardlyhadheseenmewhenhesmiledandwalkedtowardme.他一看见我就微笑着向我走来。③ItflewsofastthatIwasalmostscaredtodeath.它飞得那么快,差点把我吓死了。④SofascinatedwasIbythebeautifulsceneofspacethatIforgottoreturntotheearth.我被太空美丽的景色迷住了,以至于我忘记了回到地球。(3)段尾句①Whatawonderfulandunforgettableexperienceitwas!这是一次多么美好和难忘的经历啊!②I’llneverforgetthisfantasticexperience.我永远不会忘记这次奇妙的经历。II.典题例析假定你是李华,请根据下面的提示用英语写一篇周记,记述你在太空探索时候遇到外星人的一次经历。内容如下:1.周四晚上遇到一个外星人(个子矮、头和眼睛很大、棕色皮肤);2.乘坐UFO,遨游太空,欣赏夜景;3.你的感受。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________审核体裁/话题关于太空探索文章(记叙文)时态/人称一般过去时/第一人称文章结构第一段：引入话题：简述太空探索遇到外星人的话题第二段：详细叙述这个想象的过程。第三段：说明自己的感悟核心要点简述太空探索遇到外星人的过程二.造句1.我正在做作业的时候,突然我看到一个闪闪发光的UFO在天空中越来越近,最终降落在地面上。(bedoing...when...)____________________ashiningUFOintheskyingnearerandnearerandeventuallylandedontheground.

2.然后一个长着大脑袋和大眼睛,棕色皮肤的很矮的外星人从里面出来了。(with)Thenaveryshortalien____________________.3.(一句多译)他一看见我,就向我挥手,邀请我乘UFO去旅行。(1)____________________,hewavedtomeandinvitedmetogotravellingintheUFO.(assoonas/themoment)

(2)____________________,hewavedtomeandinvitedmetogotravellingintheUFO.(on/upondoingsth.)

4.它飞得如此快,以至于我们很快就进入了太空。(so...that...倒装句)____________________wewereinspaceinashorttime.

5.从UFO向外看,我看到了我们生活的美丽的蓝色地球和其他闪亮的星星在黑暗的空间里转动。(分词作状语;定语从句)____________________,Isawthebeautifulblueearthonwhichweliveandothershiningstarscirclingindarkspace.

6.大概过了一个小时,我请求外星人把我送到地球上去。(what)____________________,Iaskedthealientosendmetotheearth.

7.这是一次多么精彩和难忘的经历啊!(感叹句)____________________experienceitwas!

【答案】1.IwasdoingmyhomeworkwhensuddenlyIcaughtsightof

2.withabigheadandeyesandbrownskincameoutofit3.(1)Assoonas/Themomenthesawme(2)On/Uponseeingme4.Sofastdiditflythat5.LookingoutoftheUFO6.Afterwhatseemedanhour

7.Whatawonderfulandunforgettable三.句式升级1.用倒装句改写句2________________________________________________________________________________2.用hardly...when...改写句3________________________________________________________________________________【答案】1.Thenoutofitcameaveryshortalienwithabigheadandeyesandbrownskin.2.HardlyhadheseenmewhenhewavedtomeandinvitedmetogotravellingintheUFO.【参考范文】OnThursdayevening,IwasdoingmyhomeworkwhensuddenlyIcaughtsightofashiningUFOintheskyingnearerandnearerandeventuallylandedontheground.Thenoutofitcameaveryshortalienwithabigheadandeyesandbrownskin.HardlyhadheseenmewhenhewavedtomeandinvitedmetogotravellingintheUFOandIagreed.Sofastdiditflythatwewereinspaceinashorttime.LookingoutoftheUFO,Isawthebeautifulblueearthonwhichweliveandothershiningstarscirclingindarkspace.Whatafantasticscene!Afterwhatseemedanhour,Iaskedthealientosendmetotheearth.Whatawonderfulandunforgettableexperienceitwas!III.跟踪训练应用文写作A(2023上·江苏宿迁·高二泗阳县实验高级中学校考阶段练习)假定你是李华，昨天晚上你做梦梦见了外星人，请你给你的朋友Tom写一封信，讲这个有趣的梦。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。【答案】DearTom,I’mwritingtotellyoumyinterestingdream,inwhichIcameacrossanalien.Afterfinishingmyhomework,IwassotiredthatIfellasleepimmediately.Suddenly,IsawaUFOlandintheyard.Outcameanalien,wholookedtallandstrongwithtwoheadsandthreeeyes.WhenIsawthealienwalkingtowardsme,Iwastooastonishedtomove.ThealienseemedtobesayingsomethingtogreetmebutIcouldn'tunderstandit.Justatthattime,aloudnoisewokemeup.Itwasmyalarmclock.Doyouthinkmydreamisinteresting?Writetomeaboutyourdream.Yours，LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，昨天晚上你做梦梦见了外星人，请你给你的朋友Tom写一封信，讲这个有趣的梦。【详解】1.词汇积累遇到：meet→eacross疲惫的：exhausted→tired惊讶的：surprised→astonished突然：allofsudden→suddenly2.句式拓展并列句变复合句原句：ThealienseemedtobesayingsomethingtogreetmebutIcouldn'tunderstandit.拓展句：Althoughthealienseemedtobesayingsomethingtogreetme,Icouldn'tunderstandit.【点睛】[高分句型1]I’mwritingtotellyoumyinterestingdream,inwhichIcameacrossanalien.(运用了“介词+关系代词”结构非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Afterfinishingmyhomework,IwassotiredthatIfellasleepimmediately.(运用了结果状语从句)B假如现在是2050年，你刚参加过学校组织的一次火星旅游，请根据提示写一篇80词左右的短文。要点如下：1.出行方式及路线(乘航天飞机到达太空站再到达火星)；2.所见所闻，如外星人(alien)；3.你的感受。【答案】Itis2050.

OurschoolorganizedatripfromtheEarthtoMars.Firstly,wereachedaspacestationbyspacecraftafteraonedayjourneyfromEarth.Afterashortbreakandthentwohourslater,welandedonMars.ThealiensonMarsareverykindandfriendly,andwhatsurprisedusisthattheyspeakEnglishmuchbetterthanus.Therearelotsofotheramazingthings.Weevencameacrossatalkingstone.Thelivingenvironmentofaliensisreallyfortable.Thisismuchbetterthanwethought.Whatawonderfuljourney!【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。要求考生写一篇短文，记述一下在2050年，你刚去参加过的学校组织的一次火星旅游。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：记叙文。时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.出行方式及路线(乘航天飞机到达太空站再到达火星)；2.所见所闻，如外星人(alien)；3.你的感受。第二步：列提纲(重点词组)reachaspacestation,byspacecraft,landonMars,ThealiensonMars,amazingthings,awonderfuljourney.第三步：连词成句Firstly,wereachedaspacestationbyspacecraftafteraonedayjourneyfromEarth.WelandedonMars.ThealiensonMarsareverykindandfriendly,andwhatsurprisedusisthattheyspeakEnglishmuchbetterthanus.Therearelotsofotheramazingthings.Weevencameacrossatalkingstone.Thelivingenvironmentofaliensisreallyfortable.Whatawonderfuljourney!根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)1.表文章结构顺序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast(供参考)2.表并列补充关系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Inaddition(供参考)3.表转折对比关系：However,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…(供参考)4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,(供参考)连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】[高分句型1]…andwhatsurprisedusisthattheyspeakEnglishmuchbetterthanus.(what引导了主语从句，that引导的表语从句)[高分句型2]Weevencameacrossatalkingstone.(高级词汇eacross)[高分句型3]Whatawonderfuljourney!(感叹句)C(2021上·广东汕头·高二校考期中)神舟13号的顺利升空，顺利进入中国空间站，一直牵动着中国每一位中华儿女的心弦。作为其中唯一的女航天员，王亚平更是受到了大家极为热情的追捧和关注。请根据以下提示，写一篇介绍女航天员王亚平的文章。姓名王亚平职业宇航员出生地山东烟台的一个小山村出生日期1980年1月毕业院校长春飞行学院(2001)性格品质勇敢，坚韧主要经历2013年6月11日和另外两名宇航员乘神舟十号进入太空，王还进行了首次太空授课。2021年10月16日，搭乘神舟十三号飞船进入太空站，并驻留6个月的时间，成为中国空间站的首位女性航天员。长春飞行学院：ChangchunAirForceAviationCollege宇航员:astronaut注意：1.词数：100个词左右;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】WangYaping,anexcellentfemaleastronaut,wasborninJanuary1980,inaremotevillageofYanshan,ShandongProvince.Attheageof21,WangwasassignedasapilotaftergraduationfromChangchunAirForceAviationCollege.Wanghascarriesoutspacemissionstwice.InJune20,2013,shespent15daysinorbitwiththeShenzhou10missionalongwithothertwoastronauts.It’sthefirsttimethatWanghadgivenasciencelectureto60millionstudentsacrossChinainspace,whichnotonlyarousedhotconcernanddiscussion,butalsostimulatedyouthpeople’sloveofscienceandknowledgeofworship.InOctober16th,2021,thethreecrewteamincludingWangflewwiththeShenzhouXIIItothemoduletostaythereforsixmonthsthelongesteverstayinspacebyChineseastronauts.WanghasbecamethefirstfemaletaikonauttoworkinChina’sTiangongspacestation.Toachievethedreamofbeinganastronaut,shenevergivesupandworksextremelyhard.Sheismyspaceheroine,fromwhomIcanseetheperseveranceandbraveryoffemales.【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇记叙文。要求考生写一篇文章，介绍女航天员王亚平的经历。【详解】1.词汇积累执行：carryout→putintoeffect\实现：achieve→etrue激发：arouse→motivate极其：extremely→exceedingly2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Toachievethedreamofbeinganastronaut,shenevergivesupandworksextremelyhard.拓展句：Inorderthatshecanachievethedreamofbeinganastronaut,shenevergivesupandworksextremelyhard.【点睛】[高分句型1]It’sthefirsttimethatWanghadgivenasciencelectureto60millionstudentsacrossChinainspace,whichnotonlyarousedhotconcernanddiscussion,butalsostimulatedyouthpeople’sloveofscienceandknowledgeofworship.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Sheismyspaceheroine,fromwhomIcanseetheperseveranceandbraveryoffemales.(运用了“介词+关系代词”引导非限制性定语从句)D(2023下·河南信阳·高二统考期末)假定你是李华，为激励学生更深入地探索宇宙的奥秘，激发同学们对探索太空和科学的热爱，学校决定于本周五下午4点，在学校会议厅组织包括交流学生内的全体在校生观看神舟十五号载人飞船返回地球的录像回放，请以校学生会的名义写一则英语通知，内容包括：1.观看视频的时间与地点；2.观看视频过程中的注意事项；3.要求写一篇观后感。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当为加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：神舟十五号载人飞船返回地球的录像回放thereplayoftheShenzhouXVmannedspaceshipreturningtoEarthonvideoNotice_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TheStudents’Union【答案】NoticeInordertoinspirethepassionforspaceandscience,ourschoolintendstoorganizeallthestudentstowatchthereplayoftheShenzhouXVmannedspaceshipreturningtotheEarthonvideo.Thevideoreplaystartsat16:00p.m.thisFriday,sothestudentsaresupposedtogatherattheSchoolMeetingHallatleasttenminutesearlier.Whilewatchingthereplay,everyoneshouldkeepquiet.Afterwatchingit,areplayreviewisrequired.Allincludingexchangestudentsarehighlyweledtojoinit.Moreover,don’tforgettowearmasks.Pleasedoarriveontime.TheStudents’Union【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一则英语通知，通知学生本周五下午4点，在学校会议厅将组织包括交流学生内的全体在校生观看神舟十五号载人飞船返回地球的录像回放的事情。【详解】1.词汇积累激发：inspire→stimulate要求：require→demand参加：join→takepartin此外：moreover→furthermore2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Inordertoinspirethepassionforspaceandscience,ourschoolintendstoorganizeallthestudentstowatchthereplayoftheShenzhouXVmannedspaceshipreturningtotheEarthonvideo.拓展句：OurschoolintendstoorganizeallthestudentstowatchthereplayoftheShenzhouXVmannedspaceshipreturningtotheEarthonvideo,thepurposeofwhichistoinspirethepassionforspaceandscience.【点睛】[高分句型1]Inordertoinspirethepassionforspaceandscience,ourschoolintendstoorganizeallthestudentstowatchthereplayoftheShenzhouXVmannedspaceshipreturningtotheEarthonvideo.(运用了动名词复合结构作宾语)[高分句型2]Whilewatchingthereplay,everyoneshouldkeepquiet.(运用了while引导的时间状语从句和省略)E(2023上·山西·高二山西实验中学校考期中)假定你是李华，你校上周五邀请航天英雄王亚平做了关于航空航天的讲座。请你根据以下内容写一篇英文短文，给你校英文报投稿，内容包括：1.讲座的时间与地点；2.讲座内容与感想。注意：写作词数应为80左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】LastFriday,ourschoolhadthehonorofhostingaremarkablelectureonaerospacebyrenownedastronautWangYapingintheschoolauditorium.Duringthelecture,WangYapingbeganbydiscussingthesignificantmilestonesachievedbyChinaandthensharedherexperiences.Hervividstorytellingandengagingpresentationcaptivatedtheaudiencefromtheverybeginning.Additionally,sheencouragedstudentstopursuetheirdreamsandnevergiveup,remindingusthatanythingispossiblewithpassionanddetermination.Inconclusion,thelecturewasahugesuccess,leavingalastingimpressiononeveryonewhoattended.WearetrulygratefulfortheopportunitytolearnfromanationalherolikeWangYaping,andwehopetohavemoresuchenrichingexperiencesinthefuture..【导语】这是一篇应用文。学校上周五邀请航天英雄王亚平做了关于航空航天的讲座，要求考生写一篇与讲座有关的作文。【详解】1.词汇积累著名的：renowned→distinguished实现：achieve→acplish此外：additionally→furthermore2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Inconclusion,thelecturebyWangYapingwasahugesuccess,leavingalastingimpressiononeveryonewhoattended.拓展句：Inconclusion,thelecturebyWangYapingwasahugesuccess,whichleftalastingimpressiononeveryonewhoattended.【点睛】【高分句型1】Duringthelecture,WangYapingbeganbydiscussingthesignificantmilestonesachievedbyChinaandthensharedherexperiences.(运用了过去分词作定语)【高分句型2】Additionally,sheencouragedstudentstopursuetheirdreamsandnevergiveup,remindingusthatanythingispossiblewithpassionanddetermination.(运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句)读后续写ATheAlienItwasacolddayinJune.Ihurriedhomeaftermyshopping.JustasIwalkedupthestepsthatledtothedoorway,asuddendazzlehitmyeye.AtorrentoflighthadcapsizeduponthehouseandIfelttheglowofathousandsunscascadinguponme.Theglaringwhiteblindedmyeyes.Idroppedmyshoppingbagsandshieldedmyeyes.Istoodstillpanicstricken.LookingupIsawafascinatingsight.ItwasaUFO!Itwasanexactmodeloftheonesinmyicbooksandfictionmovies,soIcouldn’tpossiblyhavemistakenitforanythingelse.AtthesameinstantIfeltadragatmyclothes.Ifeltshockedatthesightofanalien,humanlikeinappearance.Andofcoursehewasseagreen,ashestoodtherewithhisstrangeenormouseyesstaringatme.Hiseyeswerewaterywithrainbowshadesfloatinginthem.Heworeaglowingsilvermetalhelmetwhichwasactuallyhishead.Theinevitableantennaglowedandshonegreenandredasthoughitweretrafficlights.Igatheredupcourageandsaid,“Hi!”Thealiennoddedasthoughinacknowledgement,butitwasnottobe.HenoddedallthetimeevenwhenIhadn’tspokentohim.Sinceheseemedtobeofafriendlynature,Igrewbraverandextendedmyhospitalitybyaskinghimifheneededfood.Hegrinnedandnodded,andIdoubtedthatheunderstoodme.ThistimeIsoftlytouchedhimstomachandwassurprisedtofinditsoundedverymetallicthoughitdidn’tlookit.BynowIwasenjoyingthisstrangeencounter,consideringhewasn’tharmful,andIreallywishedtomunicatewithhim.“Food?”ImadeachewingsoundasifIwaseating.Grin,nod.Grin,nod.“Drink?”AndImadeadrinkingsound.Hestaredbewildered,therainbowswirlingwildlyinhiseyes.Itriedanapple,anorange,apacketofcumminseeds.Wordslike‘fridge’,lunch,ricemadeabsolutelynosensetohim.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好。Paragraph1：Igesturedformyfriendtoeintothehouse.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：Hepattedmystomachwithhisfingersafewtimesandletoffmorestaticsounds.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Igesturedformyfriendtoeintothehouse.Hestoppedmovingoncewewerebeforethedoor.Heturnedhimselftofacehisspacecraftandstartedafewofhisbeepsandstaticsounds.Iheardasoftcracklefromthecraftinanswer.Hepattedmystomachwithhisfingersafewtimesandletoffmorestaticsounds.Hethenturnedtowardsthespacecraftanddisappearedintothespacecraft.NowIwasleftthere,alonewithmythoughts.Iwanderedintomyhouselikeasleepwalker,andlookedoutofthewindowtoseeatinyspottwirlandvanishlikeitalwaysdidinmybooks.Ifellinafaint.Iwokeupinahospitalbed.Mynursegavememybreakfast,butnohunger.Iaskedaboutmyalienandtheygavemeapilltomakemedozeoff.WhenIwokeupIstillfeltnohungerandrefusedallfood.Everyonewasworried,sayingthatIhadn’teatenforthreedays.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者某天回家遇到了外星人，外星人向作者进行了简单的接触和交流。两人正要进屋，外星人却飞走了。作者也在病床上醒来。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“我打手势叫我的朋友进屋。”可知，第一段可描写外星人和作者进屋时的经过。②由第二段首句内容“他用手指拍了几下我的肚子，发出更多的静电声。”可知，第二段可描写外星人搭乘飞船走了，作者在医院的病床醒来，并且感觉不到饿。2.续写线索：进屋——停下——拍肚子——飞走——晕倒——醒来——不知饥饿3.词汇激活行为类进入：einto/enter消失：disappear/vanish晕倒：fallinafaint/passout情绪类小的：tiny/small担心：worried/concerned【点睛】[高分句型1]Hestoppedmovingoncewewerebeforethedoor.(运用了once引导时间状语从句)[高分句型2]WhenIwokeupIstillfeltnohungerandrefusedallfood.(运用了when引导时间状语从句)BSomeresearchersthinktheremightbeaconnectionbetweenUFOsandangelsightings.Theysaytheangelsandheavenlyfiguresmightactuallyhavebeenextraterrestrials(外星人)。Afterhisexperienceinthe1980swith"themostbeautifulthing"heeversaw,Lewismightagreewiththatassessment.ItwasaSaturdaymorninginMariposa,California,andLewishadtoworkthatday.Theairwasfreshfromacoolrainthenightbefore,andthemorningskywasbrightwithafewscatteredclouds."IwasheadingouttomycarinthebackparkinglotoftheapartmentplexwhereIlivedwhenInoticedsomeonekneelingnexttomycar,"Lewissays."Thispersonsawmeandquicklystoodupholdingacrowbar(撬棍),"TheyoungmanwasquiteobviouslyastonishedbyLewis'sinterruption,andalthoughLewissensedtheboywasuptonogood,ithadn'tyethithimwhathewasdoing.ThenLewislookedthroughthepassengerwindowofhiscarandsawthatthesteeringwheelcolumnhadbeenstripped(脱去)ofitscover.Herealizedthattheyoungmanwastryingtostealhiscar."Iaskedhimwhathewasdoing,"Lewisrecalls,"Hegavemealamestoryabouthisfriend'scarbeingstolenlastnightandthatmycarlookedlikehisfriend'sandsoon.Ididn'twanttohearit.ItoldhimIwasgoingtocallthepolice,whichIdidonmycellphone."Lewisdialed911andgavethedispatcher(调度员)theaddress.Hetoldthewouldbethiefthatthepolicewereontheirwayandwarnedhimnottoleave."Ifhedid,Iwasn'tgoingtotrytostophimbecausehehadthatcrowbar,"Lewissays.AsLewiswasquestioningtheyoungman,tryingtodetain(扣留)him,hebegantonoticethreeratherlargecloudsinasinglefileformationthatwerealmostoverhead."ThenIsawit,"hesays."Ashinyobjectexitedfromthefirstcloudandenteredthenextandthencameoutofthatone.Itwasshiny,likebrightlypolishedobjects,movingatagoodspeed.Icouldn'tmakeouttheshape."注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。Bythistime,LewiswassodistractedbytheUFO._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________"Asitsailedoverhead,someofthearmsandlegswouldmoveupand