读后续写寻熊遇险记课件-高三英语一轮复习

高考英语读后续写语篇练习1——熊口脱险Part1题目呈现2续写原文①Onefall,mywifeElliandIhadasinglegoal:tophotographpolarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcampoutside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”—thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada.②Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears—likeallwildanimalsshouldbephotographedfromasafedistance.WhenI'mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithatelephotolens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.③AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourgarlicbread.④Thehungrybeerfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahigh,wirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.⑤Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough—hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws(爪子).3续写原文⑥Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter(相遇),Itooksomepicturesofthebear.⑦ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn'tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebear'spunishment.ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepperspray.Thesprayburnsthebearseyes,butdoesn'thurtthem.SoIapproachedouruninvitedguestslowlyand,throughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar(吼叫),thebearrantothelaketowashhiseyes.4续写段首语Paragraph1：Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.

Paragraph2：Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.5Part1读懂大意，理清脉络61.Readforinformation要素关键信息（1）Whoarethemaincharacters?

（2）Whendidthestoryhappens?

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（4）Whathappened?I，mywifeElli,thehungrymalepolarbearandcampmanageronefallonefallAresearchcampoutside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”Weencounteredahungryyoungmalepolarbearandhadaconflictwithit.7ParagraphHowPara.1&2

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Para.6&7ElliandIwantedtotakepicturesofpolarbear,butitwasdangerous.Wetryourbesttorepelthebearattrachedbyfood,butinvain.Weturnedtothecampmanager,whoinstrucedustousepepperspraytorepelthebearuntilhelparrived.81.ReadforplotsA.Thebearcamebackangrilyandtheyhadtotrynewideas.B.ThecouplewenttoatowninCanadatotakephotosofpolarbears.C.Thehelicopterarrivedtotheirrescue.D.Frightened,thecoupletriedallthemeansofdefensetheyknewbutnoneofthemworked.E.Abearcameunexpectedlywhilethecouplewascookingdinner.BEDACPart1读懂大意，理清脉络9²情节分析amazingbutadventurousfrightenedpanickedterriifiedrelievednervousandterrifiedrelieved点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10Part2写作思路11²4步定框架Step1确定第二段结局情节提示:作者是事后回忆，写下这篇文章,因此他和妻子应该是脱险生还。Step2确定第一段结尾情节提示:第二段首句的Atthatverymoment“在这关键的时刻”，说明第一段结尾处，作者和妻子遇到的情况是危急的。Step3构思第一段中间情节提示:由第段首句可知，熊又回来了，可见情况比较危险，之后到第二段首句的Atthatverymoment,中间发生了什么可尝试用思维导图法构思。Step4构思第二段中间情节提示:作者和妻子看到直升机后是什么反应得救后又是怎样的心情怎样使结局圆满？可些试用思维导图法构思。Thebear’sattackWefoughtbackThebear’sreactionAdangeroussituationThepilothelpedusThebearwasstoppedWewererescuedOurfeeling续写建议几分钟后，熊回到了我们的营地。它发出震耳欲聋的吼声，向我们冲来。由于喷雾用完了，我们陷入了绝望之中。由于营地里没有什么武器可以用来保护自己，Elli和我非常紧张和害怕。熊继续用爪子拍打着篱笆。最后熊打破了篱笆，我们害怕到尖叫、痛哭，以为我们会被熊吃掉。12续写建议就在这时，直升机到了。飞行员向熊射了一枪，里面装有特殊药物，使熊入睡。我们高兴极了，赶紧上了直升机，松了一口气。我们感到很幸运，没有被熊杀死。从高处俯瞰，我们发现这只野兽仍躺在地上。我把手伸进背包，拿出相机，给熊拍了一张照。这真是一次难忘的经历。13Part3范文呈现14范文呈现Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Itletoutadeafeningroar,chargingatus.Asthesprayhadbeenusedup,wewereinadesperatemood.Withlittleweapontoprotectourselvesinthecamp,ElliandIwereverynervousandterrified.Thebearcontinuedhittingthefencewithitspaws.Finally,thebearbrokethefenceandweweresofearfulthatwescreamedandcried,thinkingwewouldbeeatenbythebear.15范文呈现Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.Thepilotshotthebearwithspecialmedicinetosenditsleep.Weweresodelightedandquicklywentaboardthehelicopter,breathingasighofrelief.WefeltSOluckythatwewerenotkilledby