初中八年级英语课件My Favourite Cartoon-Writing

Module5CartoonsMyFavouriteCartoon----Writing123456Warming-up:ListenandguessPre-writing1.Watchamicrolessonandlearntheuseofhamburgerwriting(汉堡包信息写作结构).BeginningEndingDetail1Detail2Detail3Hamburgerwriting:Tousethemodelofa_________toorganize___________forwritingapassage.hamburgerinformationMyfavouriteteacherisMissChen.AppearancePersonalityHobbiesWelikeher.1.Brainstorming:Whatcanyouwriteaboutfavouritecartoon?2.Making:Writedownwordsorsentencestocompletethe“hamburger”.3.Writing:Writethepassageaccordingtoyournotes.While-writing

Beginning:Whatisit?Detail1:Whoisinit?Detail2:Whatisitabout?Detail3:Whydoyoulikeit?Ending:...1.Self-perfection:Readthepassageandcheckitsspelling,tense,grammar,linkingwords,punctuation(标点).2.Peer-evaluation:Shareyourpassagewithyourpartner,useredpentounderlinethegoodpointsandmarkdownthemistakes.Post-writing

互评通用修改字符有：拼写错误：S语法错误：G

时态错误：T漏词错误:

大小写错误：L删词：用词错误：词序调换：优美句子：评价内容得分扣分原因及修改建议整体情况书面整洁及分段（1分）

有开头、结尾（1分）

人称（1分）

时态（2分）

要点是否齐全介绍内容（3分）

说明原因（2分）

是否连贯连词的使用（1分）

加分点好词好句（1分）

内容拓展（1分）

得分满分（15分）

学生作文互评量化表Post-writing3.Classappreciation:

Choosethebestworkofyourgroupandsharewithclassmates.

Takenotesofusefulwords,pharesandsentencesonthenotesheetwhileyourlistening.SummaryQ1:Whatthingshaveyoulearnt?Q2:Whatthingsareyouinterestedin?Q3:Whatquestionsdoyoustillhave?1.SendyourwritingtotheWechatgroupandsharewithotherstudents.2.Writedownusefu