初中八年级英语课件A plan for the summer camp

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--WritingAplanforthesummercampChunhanSchoolbyEmmaEmma’shope★Takesomesomeusefulnotestohelpwithyourwriting.★Beactivetotakepartingroupwork.

★Bewillingtohelpandsharewitheachother.EmmaisgoingtowelcomeagroupofAmericanteenagersattheendofJuly.Emma'splanDearEmma,

Longtimenosee!Imissyousomuch!Agroupof12studentsfromourschoolwillcometoYiwuforsummercampattheendofJuly.Theywillstayinyourschoolfortwoweeks.TheywanttolearnChineseandexperiencelifeinYiwu.ThisistheirfirsttimetoYiwusotheywanttoknowabouttheweatherandwhattotake.Pleasemakeasummercampplanforthemandgivethemsomeadvice.Manythanks!Ihopetohearfromyousoon.Yours,Joanne2018年05月17日19:33(星期四)~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Emma'semailHowmany?Whatfor?Howlong?Whattodo?Problem?aplanWho?

Howlong?Wheretostay?Whattodo?Whattotake?…Whatothertips?Aplanshouldinclude(包含)：When?

tolearnChinesetoexperiencelifehomestaytoexperiencelifelivewithahostfamilytakepartintheirdailylifetrysometraditionalfoodmakedumplingstaketrips…

Tip1:Usethelinkingwordstomakethesentencesintoapassage.

Firstofall,youwilllivewithahomestayfamilybecauseit'sthebestwaytoexperiencelifeinChina.Youcantakepartintheirdailylifeaswellasdosomeacticitieswiththem.Forexample,it'sagoodideatotrysometradtionalfoodandwatchBeijingopera.What'smore,youcantakesometripsattheweekend.It'sinterestingtogoaroundFutianMarketwhichhasallkindsofthings,andHengdianFilm&TelevisionCtiyisalsoagoodchoice.and,because,aswellas,suchas,firstofall,what'smore,besides,bytheway,…Wheretostayandhowtoexperiencelife?Whattodo?summercamptolearnChinesetoexperiencelifeTip2:Usetransitionalsentencestolinktwopartsandmakethepassagemorenatural.(学会使用过渡句承上启下)

aswellas…notonly…butalso…

…ChineselessonsotheractivitiesWhattime?Who?How?Howlong?…Chinesekungfu…afootballmatchYou'dbetter/It'sagoodideatotakesome…because…Level1Summerhereisveryhot,sotokeepcool,you'dbetter…Summerhereissohotthatyou'dbetterkeepcoolwith…Level2Level3Whattotake?Tip3:Polish(润色)yoursentencetomakeitmoreadvenced(高级).BeginningMainpartEnding

We'resogladthatyou'recomingforthesummercamp.You'lllovecomingtoChinatolearnaboutChinesecultureandimproveyourChineseatthesametime.Here'stheplan.

YouarecertaintogetthebestpossibleexperienceofChineselearningandlifeinChina.We'resoexcitingthatwecan'twaittomeetyou!Aplanforthesummercampadvice/tipswhattodotolearnChinesetoexperiencelifethingstotakeothertips承上启下过渡

承上启下过渡

Tip4:It'snecessarytowriteanoutlinebeforewritingacomposition.(写作前要先写提纲)

Writing--replytheemailAssessment

AssessmentStandard(评价标准)Self-assessment（自我评价）Group-assessment（小组评价）Finalmarks(最终得分)Doesyourcompositionincludeallthekeypoints?○1○2○3○4○5○1○2○3○4○5满分20分你的得分是____________Doyouuseanylinkingwordsortransitionalsentences?(连接词或者过渡句)○1○2○3○4○5○1○2○3○4○5Doyouusedifferentsentencepatternsoranygoodsentences?○1○2○3○4○5○1○2○3○4○5Doyouhaveanymistakes?○1○2○3○4○5○1○2○3○4○5Underlinethegoodsentencesandcorrectsomemistakes.Tip1:Usethelinkingwordstomakethesentencesintoapassage.Tip2:Usetransitionalsentencestolinktwopartsandmakethepassagemorenatural.(使用过渡句)Tip4:It'snecessarytowriteanoutlinebeforewritingacomposition.(写作前要先写提纲)Whatdowelearntoday?StrategyTip3:Polish(润色)yoursentencetomakeitmoreadvenced(高级).PackyourbagGetthingsreadyJustgoout

Ifyoudon’tgooutofyourcircle,youwillthinkthatthisisthewholeworld.Ifyoudon’tgooutofyourowncountry,youwon’tknowhowwonderfultheothersare.Let’sshareHomework:Individualwork:A.Correctthemistakesinyourwritingandthenrewriteit.Groupwork:Judgeothers'writingsa