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英语写作要和语言三个角度下功夫。章要有英语写作要和语言三个角度下功夫。章要有完整的结构,深刻的立意和出彩的语言英语写作水平的提高主要通过平时的积累模仿而提高。所以家要在平时的学习中多借鉴多第一节框架意。1.标题(题目+不定式或句子MyViewonOpportunityPositiveAttitude—theKeytoOnPublicAwarenessofEnvironmentalConservationOnCooperationTheInterpretationofCausesforHowtoaddresstheissueofShouldPeopleAlwaysTellthe2.常用的开头手法:3.正文:通常先写段落中心句,然后进行解释中心;说理论证、列Severalrootreasons/causescanbefiguredoutbehindtendency.Initially,ourincomeoffamilyhasbeengreatlytoprovideapossibleeconomicfoundationforoverseastudy1reaching/touching20/.Additionally,theforeignadvancedfascinates)amultitudeofChinesestudentsreaching/touching20/.Additionally,theforeignadvancedfascinates)amultitudeofChinesestudentsinuniversities.Inend,theincreasinglyfavorablevisapolicyforChinesestudentsplaysenormousroleintheCohesionGreatimportancehasbeenattachedtopersistence,whichenablesustocarveoutawaytosuccess.Althoughthewaytosuccessisbumpyandfilledwithinevitablesetbacks,itispersistencethatleadsustothedestinationweareeagertoreach.Tofurtherdemonstratetheimportanceofbeingpersistent,IwouldliketotakeThomasEdisonasacasetothepoint:Howcouldhe,oneofthegreatestinventorsthroughoutthehistoryofmankindwhoexperiencednumerousunsuccessfulattempts,inventthefirstelectriclampwithout(implemented/taken)soastoalleviate/eradicatethesevereInitially,thepowerfulsupervisionhastobeenforcedbyalllevelsofdevelopmentofthescienceandtechnologytoreplaceconventionalones.Ofcourse,asetofadequateandcomprehensivelawsandrulesconcerningenvironmentalconservationhavetobeworkedoutbythe campaigns/activitiesinthe4结尾(总结全文+对事件进行评价或对事件未来做出预测Inaword,fromtheabovediscussion,wehavesufficient2toarriveataconclusionthatthecausesofthetrendembracefactorsofeconomy,foreigneducationconceptandfavorablevisapolicy.Itistheaboveaspectsthatuniversalizethetrendinoursociety.Thetendencywilldefinitelyprevailforaquitelongterm.Allinall/intoarriveataconclusionthatthecausesofthetrendembracefactorsofeconomy,foreigneducationconceptandfavorablevisapolicy.Itistheaboveaspectsthatuniversalizethetrendinoursociety.Thetendencywilldefinitelyprevailforaquitelongterm.Allinall/inbrief/inconclusion,theissueoftrafficcongestioncitiescanbealleviatedthroughthemeasuresmentionedabove:reasonableplanoftheinfrastructureandtheenhancementofpublictransitservice.Weareconvincedthattheconvenienttrafficincitieswillbeavailableforcitizensinthenearprospect.第二节内容意考生除了要注意文章的框架意识外,更要注意文章立意的经济的角度(a foundationfor…/increasingaveragefamilyincome/fine/financialincentive/favorablepolicyineconomy)例:Theincomeofaveragefamilieshasgreatlyincreasedapossibleeconomicfoundationforoversea例:Apartfromthetransformationofconsumers’purchasingmode,anotherindispensableimpetustotheboomofE-commerceisthefavorabletrendineconomy.例:Theseverityofpollutioncanbealleviatedtosomeextentthroughsufficientlyfiningthefactorieswhoseemissionexceededthelegal(government/alllevelsofgovernments政府职能government/localgovernment/restrict/curb/regulate/execute/manage/supervise/rectify例:Alllevelsofgovernmentsarerequiredtosupervisestrictlyfoodindustrysoastorectifytheunhealthyfoodmarket.Authoritiesarerequiredtoworkoutspecificrestrictingtheemissionofdiverse法律法规(3)例: challengesinpreservingthe例:Severepenaltyisrequiredtobeenforcedontopeoplewhopollutedtheenvironmentwithoutanyawarenessofenvironment科学技术)例: challengesinpreservingthe例:Severepenaltyisrequiredtobeenforcedontopeoplewhopollutedtheenvironmentwithoutanyawarenessofenvironment科学技术(scienceandtechnology/scientificand/advance/contributeto例:Thegreatadvanceofscienceandtechnologyincomputerandinternetcontributesalottotheprosperityofe-commerce.例:Onlythroughthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnologycanweresolvetheproblemswemeetintheprocessofprogress.人们的意(awareness/sense/raisethepublicawarenessofconversation/thrift/arouse)例:Thekeyreasonwhymanycitizenswastethefreshwateristheweakpublicawarenessinthefactthatthefreshwateravailableforhumanisexceedinglylimited.Onlythroughraisingtheeliminatethepublicawarenessinthriftcanphenomenaofwastein文化传统及习俗角度(4/experience/fascinate/captivate例:Thestunningforeignlandscapeanddistinctcustomsagrowingnumberof例:Experiencingdifferentculturesandcustoms/experience/fascinate/captivate例:Thestunningforeignlandscapeanddistinctcustomsagrowingnumberof例:Experiencingdifferentculturesandcustomsthroughtravelingenablesustowidenourscope.(value/individualprofunditybroadenwidenourscope/horizon/enrichourexperiences)Ourvalueinlifecanbeenhancedbypursuingofformaleducationincolleges.Thehabitofreadingextensivelyisanindispensablewaytoenrichourknowledgeindiversespheres.语言角度例: contributiontothetrend例:OneofreasonswhyanumberofstudentsapplyforprestigiousuniversitiesabroadliesinthefactthatanincreasingnumberofChinesecanspeakEnglishproficiently.沟通交流例:Thecellphonesaremostefficienttoolforustoeach althoughsmartphonealsobringsus格(例: consideratenessandcooperativenesscanbedevelopedparticipatingingroupactivities.健康(sound/health/well/physicalOver-relianceoncybercommunicationwilldenyface-to-facecommunication,whichjeopardizestheirgrowth.Themoretheyareimmersedintheunrealworld,themoreindifferentandirresponsivetheywillbecome,whichexertsterribleimpactontheirmentalhealth.利他主义(altruism例:Withthematerialismexpandingdrastically,itseemsthatourmainstreamofvalueisnotsomuchaltruisticbutself-centered.例:Theconsideratenessisneededforbuildingtheharmonious5经验(experienceThefascinatingjobsareavailableforthecandidates经验(experienceThefascinatingjobsareavailableforthecandidateswithrichrelevantexperience.例:Takingpart-timejobsisabetterwaytoaccumulateexperienceforhuntingjobsaftergraduation.安全例:Thesubwayisthebestoptionforcommutingnotmerelyforitsspeedbutforitssafety.环保(environmentallysound/environmentallyPlasticshoppingbagsareabsolutely/definitelynotenvironmentallyfriendlythoughtheybringconsumersbulkyconvenience.方便Thecyberdefinitelybringsusbulkyconveniencethoughtheinternetcrimesexistinthevirtualworld.例TheperfectartandthehighqualityoftheIPhonesfascinatemultitudeofusersalloverthe效率(efficiency、例:Oneoftheadvantagesoftheinternetcommunicationisefficientand解构主与物相作文的主6文章除了要认真审题题,努力做到立意深刻外,更要文章除了要认真审题题,努力做到立意深刻外,更要形式表现出考生灵活的语言使用能力。以下要点有助于考生提高的表现力例:IfIwereyou,Iwouldacceptthisproposal.YouhadbetterworkhardonyourItishightimethatweshatteredtheillusionthatwecansucceedwithouthardworking. surroundingswouldbebetter. surroundingswouldbebetternow.Mysuggestionforyouisthatyoushouldpersistinyourgoal,nomatterwhatsituationyouarein.Itisessential/important/necessary/urgent/desirablethatweshouldcollaborateactively.被动语态的使用:书面英语尽量避免用人做主Thefeasiblemeasurescanbefiguredouttoaddresstheissueofoverpressureundertakenbytheyouth.ThefollowingcausescanbemappedoutbehindtheThetrafficcongestioncanbealleviatedthroughthefollowingfeasible经典句型的穿插使Itistheapplicationofhuman’singenuitythatbooststheadvanceofscienceandtechnology.ThereiscausalitybetweendeforestationandItisuniversallyacknowledgedthattheimportanceshouldbeattachedtoEnglish.Thereisnodenyingthatwaterisindispensabletohumanbeings.Noonecanoverlookthefactthatourlifehasbeenchangedthroughtheadvanceofscienceandtechnology.Fewthingsareassecureasinsurance,whichiswidelyheldbymostcountriesintheworld.AnynationignoringthewarningwouldinescapablypayaheavyItistimethatweputanimmediateendtothedeplorablesituation.Thereisnobettertimetostartthanrightnow,foryouwillneverbeofferedagreaterchancethanyouareatthismoment.Schopenhauerisrightinsaying/asserting/remarkingthat“amancandowhathewants,butcan’twantwhathewants”anditisareal7inspirationtomesincemyyouth:ithasbeenacontinualconsolationinthefaceoflife’shardships,myownandothers,andanunfailingwellspringoftolerance.Thelatestdatainspirationtomesincemyyouth:ithasbeenacontinualconsolationinthefaceoflife’shardships,myownandothers,andanunfailingwellspringoftolerance.Thelatestdataconductedbytheresearchersin2012demonstratethatthesystemhasreducedteenagerdrivercrashes.Anexampleofmyfriend,perhaps,willmakethispointThereisabeliefthatreadingtheclassicsenablestheyouthtodwellonthebeautyandcomplexityoflife,whichisbothbeneficialandessentialtotheirdevelopmentandpersonalgrowth.Weareconvincedthattheissuewillbedefinitelyeradicatedthroughthemeasuresgivenabove.ItisnocoincidencethattheaccidentsoccurafterItisdesirablethatthestudentsinthecollegesshouldtakesomepart-timejobs.Environmentalistsdeemitcriticalthattheelectronictrash(should)bereclaimedandrecycledintheenvironmentallyfriendlymanner. ThereisaprobabilitythattheabilitytouseEnglishiselevatedthroughpersistentpractice.词性的选择---书面英语应尽可能的将重点动词和形容词为名词使Iexperienced/sufferedafailureinthecompletionofthe/Ididn’tcompletethetask./Ifailedtocompletethetask.(对Thereisapossibilitythattheissueofenvironmentwillberesolvedthroughjointefforts.措词---选择单词时尽量使用具体而又准确的单词,越准确越Lowerinterestratescanboosttheeconomybyreducingborrowingcostsforconsumersandbusinesses.Thenewairportwillfacilitatethedevelopmentoftourism.Thereisatalkofraisingtheadmissionrequirementstorestrictthenumberofstudentsoncampus.Shewasunabletorestrainherdesperateanger.Hecalledformuchstrictercurbsonimmigration.Thereiscertainlymuchworkwhichisexceedinglyirksome,andanexcessofworkisalwaysverypainful.Thesemarketshavemuchincommon,buteachisremarkablyCybercommunicationjeopardizesthegrowthofchildrentosomeextent.8unceasingUnyieldingeffortsUnremittingBuildourarmyintoworld-classHeneverceasestounceasingUnyieldingeffortsUnremittingBuildourarmyintoworld-classHeneverceasestoamazeHehadlivedillegallyintheUnitedStatesforfiveyearsafterhisvisitor'svisaexpired.Whenthedecisionwasmadetoabortthemission,therewasgreatconfusion.注意否定句的表达---书面英语表达尽量避免出现否定词NOTFewpeoplebelievethatgreatobjectcanbeachievedwithoutunyieldingefforts.ImissedthefirstPeopleintheearlyerahavelittleIsufferedafailureinimprovingmymanagementability.Theyabhorallformsofracialdiscrimination.Peopleresenttheunfairnessinthesociety.Heisabsentfromtheconference.强调可以通过双重否定来实ItisnotuncommonthatthedeficiencyofironinourbodiesInternetcrimesareneverrareNoonecandenythefactthatfairplayisindispensabletoany当状语从句的主语与主句的主语一致时,用省略句分词做Beingsobusytonight,tomwasabsentfromtheclass.Heissittingatthetable,readingamagazineaimlessly.Heisseatedintheclub,sippingthewine.Thedeficiencyofresourcesisthemostchallengingissue,chokingthegrowthineconomy.当状语从句的主语与主句主语不一致时,可尝试独立主格Weatherpermitting,wewillhaveaWiththesocietyandeconomygrowing,standardlivingisrising.Whatoursocietywouldbelikeiftherebeingnomorality/virtue?Therebeingnobus,Ihavetowalkhome.倒装句的使Somanyarethehomelessthatthelocalgovernmentcan’t9Notonlyshouldthegovernmentfocusontheissue;Notonlyshouldthegovernmentfocusontheissue;butalsoeachindividualisboundto/obligedtomakecontributiontoit.NotuntiltheMondaydidIrealizethatIcommitaOnlythroughthepainstakingeffortscanwelearnEnglish学习使用非谓语动词作定YoungpeoplechangingtheirjobscangetmassiveThisisabookwrittenbyLuThenumberofstudentsdecidingtofurthertheirstudyincreasedaNothavingagoodcommandofEnglishisaseriouspreventingyoufromhuntingagood多用主语从句和同位WhatweshoulddofirstistomemorizethenewWecanreachaconclusionthatthetrafficcongestioncanresolvedeffectivelybythemeasuresgivenabove.恰当地运用关联And/aswellas/togetherwithInitially/additionally/besides/ofcourse/then,Foronething,foranotherOnonehand,ontheotherhandForexample,forinstanceAcaseinthepointisthat……Take…asanexample/cite避免大篇幅的说理议论,多使用数据、例子、名言支撑观三大意识框架意识:四个部内容意识:8个角度2大范语言亮点意识英语一大作文写作思路剖析第一段分为三部分Asisvividly/clearlyshown/described/depictedinthe第一段分为三部分Asisvividly/clearlyshown/described/depictedinthepicturegivenabove,wecanthat IamshockedbywhatIhaveseenfromthepicture(2-3句)具体的细节描 1-2细节注意介词结构和分词作定语、状语的使aboatisdrifting/movingonalakewithtravelerssittingonit,litteringtheirgarbageintothelake.//thesetravelers,alongwiththeirsightseeing,littertheirgarbageintothelake.Floatingonthesurfaceofthelakeareusedlunchboxes,disposableplasticbags,bananaskins.4Thereisanin-depthimplicationinthepicturethatItindicatesthatthesurroundingshavebeencontaminatedseverelybythosewithoutawarenessofenvironmentalconservation.Theobvious/apparentcontrastconveysanin-depthimplication/lesson/truththatoptimismisquitesignificanttoeachindividual.第二论据---举例数据简单说理(optimismenablesustoconfrontthechallenges红色----1-3Thepollutionbringsamultitudeofharmstoourlifeandhealth/ourhumans.Foronething,/initially,itwilldefinitelyhamperthesustainabledevelopmentmode,disturbingournormallife.Additionally,/foranother,ourhealthwillbeaffectedsternlybythepollutedwater,airandfood.建议1条Severalmeasurescanbeimplementedsoastoalleviatetheseveritybecauseoftheterribleharmsmentionedabove.Ononehand,oursocietyshould/isaboundtoarousethepublicsenseofenvironmentalconservation.Ontheotherhand,unyieldingeffortshavetobemadetohandle/tackle/address/copewithpollutedenvironment.Ifso,aheadofuslieclean Inthedrawing/picture/graph/cartoonpresentedtoitsaudience/us,twohandicapped/disabledmensupportingeachother,withoneoftheirlegsboundInthedrawing/picture/graph/cartoonpresentedtoitsaudience/us,twohandicapped/disabledmensupportingeachother,withoneoftheirlegsboundtogether,areheading/walkingahead/forwardcooperatively,leavingtheircrutchesbehind.Behindit/picture/drawinglies/existsadeepimplicationthat/:“unitedwestand,dividedwefall”.Inanincreasinglyinter-dependentsociety,personalcompetencyaloneisnotsufficient.Asinglepersonororganizationcanseldomaccomplishataskwithoutthehelpofothers.Itisthecooperationbasedonthecomplementaryadvantagesthatwillcontributetotheultimatesuccessofapersonoranorganization.Todaythespiritofcooperationisalsoveryimportantforacountry.Theworldismovingfurthertowardpoliticalmulti-polarizationandeconomicglobalization.Toachievethegoalofwin-winandthecommondevelopment,Chinahasbeenactivelyparticipatinginthecooperationwithotherdevelopingcountriesinvariousfields.Inconclusion,cooperationisessentialelementofsuccess.peopleshoulddotheirbesttoimprovetheabilitytocommunicatewithothersandlearnfromthem.OnlyinthiswaycanwebelievethatallofuscandowellwithourworkandlifeAscanbeconspicuouslyseenfromthedrawingabove,astheyare,twoyoungadultshelpeachothertostepforwardbravely,andtheircrutchesareleftbehind.Obviously,thetwocourageousmenwillnotneedtheircrutchesanymoreandwillkeepwalking.Itgoeswithoutsayingthattheyoungadultsintheabovedrawingchoosethewaytocooperatewitheachotherwhentheyarefacedwithdifficulties.Therearemanyreasonsaccountingforit.Firstly,withtheacceleratingprogressofthefinanceandsociety,moreandmorepeoplefinditdifficulttoachievetheirgoalintheirworkanddailylifeonlybythemselves.Instead,theyfindtheycancooperatewithothermemberssharingthesamegoaltocopewithmosttasks.Secondly,ifeveryonecanoffersomehelptothoseindifficulty,hecangainhappiness.Asaresult,peoplecangetpleasureandcomfortfromhelpingothers.Inmyopinion,peopleshoulddotheirbesttoimprovetheabilitytocommunicatewithothersandlearnfromthem.Onlyinthiswaycanwebelievethatallofuscandowellwithourworkandlife开头:固定下来有用的句型//描绘(深刻/是什么写什么)///寓意/语篇衔接beof)--解释/议论(15开头:固定下来有用的句型//描绘(深刻/是什么写什么)///寓意/语篇衔接beof)--解释/议论(15)---举例子、对比总结+评价/预测/简明写一条措施---预AsshownintheleftpartoftheAsisinthethirtyyearsadelicateholdingthetinyhandoflovelyOnthecontrary,therightpartoftheillustratesthatwithtimeflyingquickly,thelittlegir

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