读后续写讲解

截图发朋友圈sharethepictures1.张博（3）班2.黄心悦（6）班3.曹旭辉（4）班4.陈琳（3）班5.冯圣杰（4）班6.郭子瑕（3）班7.邱新特（4）班8.金宸如（3）班9.朱澄镕（6）班10.林子心（6）班读后续写1.读懂全文who,when,where,what,how,why2.从文中获得重要的隐藏的线索3.分析给你的两段的开头句第一段给你的第一句要与第二句有衔接第一段最后一句与第二段第一句有衔接三步走1.vacationingv度假2.theFoggyFigure[ˈfɒgi][ˈfɪgə(r)]

雾影

3.haunt[hɔ:nt]

时常出现在4.ghostly[ˈgəʊstli]

可怕的5.creature[ˈkri:tʃə(r)]

生物6.sniff[snɪf]

嗅，深深吸入7.thefaintscent[feɪnt][sent]微弱的气味8.strike[straɪk]struck侵袭9.dock[dɒk]

码头，船停靠码头10.scary[ˈskeəri]

胆小的，可怕的11.shrug[ʃrʌg]

耸肩12.barely[ˈbeəli]

几乎不13.lower[ˈləʊə(r)]

降低14.hug[hʌg]

拥抱who:when:where:weather:

What:JustinandMaryUncleThomasonedayduringthevacationat5:00amfirstattheiruncle'slakehousethenattheboatdockFoggyThefoghadsettledoverthelake,makingitimpossibletoseeanythingUncleThomastoldJustinandMaryabouttheFoggyFigurethathauntsthelake.TheydeterminedtoseetheFoggyFigure.1.读懂全文ghostlyfrighteningscaryWhetherdidtheyseetheFoggyFigure?Thinking？？？

IstheretheFoggyFigure?DoyouthinkUncleThomaswasjusttryingtofrightenuswiththatstory?2.隐藏的线索thehiddencluesabouttheFoggyFigureJustincarefullyloweredhimselfintotheboatandthenreachedforMary’shand.JustinandMaryhuggedeachotherinfear,butthen.....3.分析两句开头句thingshappenedontheboat.theirfrightenedfeelings.TheFoggyFigureappeared.whatistheFoggyFigure.___________________atmospherenervousandfrightening存在问题：

1.没有下划线

2.对话太多

3.第一段最后一句与第二段第一句没有衔接

张淑雯郑慧琳夏晨辉蔡佳佳钟淇，张博，罗慧杰王佳慧程卓瑶朱芮莹五个档次：

第五档：21-25第四档：16-20第三档：11-15第二档：6-10第一档：1-5

JustincarefullyloweredhimselfintotheboatandthenreachedforMary’shand.Maryclimbedintotheboatandsatbesidehim.Shewasgettingnervousnowthattheywereonthewater.“Seeanything?”Theylookedaround,andgradually,thefogbegantolift.Maryturnedaroundandscreamed.“TheFoggyFigure!”Itwasintheboatwiththem!

JustinandMaryhuggedeachotherinfear,butthentheyheardalaugh.JustinmovedtowardtheFoggyFigure.“Uncle

Thomas?”“Iknewthatstorywouldgetyoutwooutofbedearlyenoughtotakeaboatridewithme.”Marysighed,happytherewasnoFoggyFigureafterall.Justinlookedrelieved,too.UncleThomaslaughed.“Whatdoyousay?Ipackedabreakfastforus.”Marysmiled.Shehadsmelledthescentofcoffee.AndUncleThomashadpackedsweetcakesforthem,too.“Let’sdoit,”MaryandJustinsaid.JustincarefullyloweredhimselfintotheboatandthenreachedforMary’shand.Maryclimbedintotheboatandsatbesidehim.Shewasgettingnervousnowthattheywereonthewater.“Seeanything?”Theylookedaround,andgradually,thefogbegantolift.Maryturnedaroundandscreamed.“TheFoggyFigure!”Itwasintheboatwiththem!JustinandMaryhuggedeachotherinfear,butthentheyheardalaugh.JustinmovedtowardtheFoggyFigure.“UncleThomas?”“Iknewthatstorywouldgetyoutwooutofbedearlyenoughtotakeaboatridewithme.”Marysighed,happytherewasnoFoggyFigureafterall.Justinlookedrelieved,too.UncleThomaslaughed.“Whatdoyousay?Ipackedabreakfastforus.”Marysmiled.Shehadsmelledthescentofcoffee.AndUncleThomashadpackedsweetcakesforthem,too.“Let’