应用文写作练习讲义-高三英语一轮复习

应用文写作报告考生作弊题目假定你是李华，在外教课期末考试中发现有人作弊，你认为这会影响考试公平。请你给外教John写一封邮件，内容包括：1.情况描述；2.你的看法；3.你的请求。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。写作解析这是一篇具有相当难度的应用文写作任务，紧扣人与自我的话题语境，突出诚信做人和公平处事的价值观。如果要比较全面准确地把握出题者的意图和要求（含词数），考生在写作这篇文章时，既要考虑到记叙文的特点（描述学生舞弊的情况，不能只简单提及“有人”舞弊而没有更细的介绍，不足以让外教信服），又要考虑往议论文方向靠拢（对舞弊一事的看法不能只简单地说它造成对考生的不公平，还可以拓展一点，如舞弊导致其它学生学习积极性受挫，同时对老师也是一种不尊重等），还要考虑第三点：提出你的请求，并注意语气使用（此请求不完全等同于向对方写建议，考生可以做到点到即止，具体该怎么处理，外教应该自有分寸）。常见问题通过评分考场作文，大多数学生不能合理处理该信件提出的内容三提示要点。有的考生受思维定式束缚忽视了第一个提示要点（情况描述），而把重点落在表达看法或发表议论。还有的考生连建议的点也抓得不准，例如有的考生提到"建议外教加强纪律教育，考场应安装监视器等、监考老师需要加强监考之类“。此篇文章在遣词造句时要注意语言对象是自己的外教，在完成写作要点二时，考生要尝试高度概括自己的观点。不提倡用过多篇幅去表达对舞弊的看法，毕竟外教也明白其中的危害。还有一点，就是写信给外教时，要注意书信的基本礼仪，如开头的问候，简要介绍自己身份，还有期待回复等等。参考答案DearJohn,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.I'mLiHua,oneofyourstudents,andIamwritingtoreportanincidentofcheatingthatIwitnessedduringthefinalexam.Regrettably,Inoticedseveralstudentsengageindishonestbehaviorduringtheexam,suchasexchanginganswersandusingelectronicdevices.Inmyopinion,thesecheatingbehaviorhasthepotentialtoimpacttheoverallfairnessoftheexam.Therefore,Ikindlyrequestthatyoulookintothismatterandreconsiderthescoresalreadygiven.Thankyouforyourattentiontothismatter.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.(91)Yours,LiHua下水文DearJohn,How’severythinggoing?I’mLiHua,oneofyourstudents.Ihatetobuthavetotellyousomethingserioussomeofyourstudentscheatedintheexamination.Whentheexaminationwasgoingon,theytookoutthenotestheyhadpreviouslytakenintotheclassroomandcopiedsomethingontotheanswersheets.Ididn’treportitimmediatelysinceIdidn’twanttobelabeledasaninformer.ButIdon’twishthemtogounpunishedbecausethisshamefulconductleadstounfairnessoftheexamandaffectsthelearningatmosphere.Iwonderifyoucanreexaminethemaftergivingthemawarning.Yourearlyreplyishighlyexpected.(108)Yours,LiHua范文DearJohn,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.I'mLiHua,oneofyourstudents,andIamwritingtoreportanincidentofcheatingthatIwitnessedduringthefinalexam.Regrettably,Inoticedseveralstudentsengageindishonestbehaviorduringtheexam,suchasexchanginganswersandusingelectronicdevices.Inmyopinion,thesecheatingbehaviorhasthepotentialtoimpacttheoverallfairnessoftheexam.Therefore,Ikindlyrequestthatyoulookintothismatterandreconsiderthescoresalreadygiven.Thankyouforyourattentiontothismatter.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.(96w)Yours,LiHua下水文：119DearJohn,I’mLiHua,astudentofyourclass.I’mwritingtoreportthecheatingcaseintheendoftermexamination.Eithernotwellpreparedfortheexamornotwantingtolettheirparentsdown,someclassmatestooktheexamdishonestly,somecopyinganswersfromotherswhiletheteacherwasnotlookingandsomereferringtotheelectronicdevicesforhelp.Theseagainsttherulebehaviorsareachallengeagainstthefairnessofexamsandablowtootherstudents’

constantefforts.Ifnottreated/addressed,itwillencouragefurthermisconduct.So,Istronglyrequestthatinvestigationshouldbecarriedoutandthescoresshouldbereconsideredifthecheatingisconfirmed.Thanksforyourtimeandattention.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua范文：97DearJohn,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.I'mLi

Hua,oneofyourstudents,andIamwritingtoreportanincidentofcheatingthatIwitnessedduringthefinalexam.Regrettably,Inoticedseveralstudentsengageindishonestbehaviorduringtheexam,

suchasexchanginganswersandusingelectronicdevices.Inmyopinion,thesecheatingbehaviorhasthepotentialtoimpacttheoverallfairnessoftheexam.Therefore,Ikindlyrequestthatyoulookintothismatterandreconsiderthescoresalreadygiven.Thankyouforyourattentiontothismatter.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua安慰信试题呈现：假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim因为在上周的汉字听写比赛中成绩不理想而心情沮丧，请你用英语给他写一封信表示安慰，要点如下：1.表达安慰;2.提供帮助;3.给予鼓励。参考词汇：汉字听写比赛

ChineseCharacterDictationpetition注意：1.

写作词数应为80左右；2.

请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。下水文：124DearJim,Sadtolearnthatyouarefrustrated/downheartedatyourfailuretodoagoodjobinlastweek’sChineseCharacterDictationpetition,IcanwellrelatetohowyoufeelandwouldliketosharesomeofmyideasaboutlearningChinesecharacters.LearningChinesecharacterscanbeatoughchallengeforforeignerslikeyouanditdoestakemoretimeanddevotion.SomeknowledgeofthestrokescancontributetoyourrememberingChinesecharactersandwhattheymean.Also,oftenwatchorlistentoChineseprogrammes,whichplaysanequallyimportantpartinyourlearning.Ofcourse,Iwillbealwaysthereforyouwheneverneeded.Ibelievewithyoureffortsinvestedandpracticalapproachesadopted,youwillsoonmakedesiredprogress.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua参考范文：110DearJim,Sorrytohearthatyoudidn’tperformwellintheChineseCharacterDictationpetition.I'mheretoofferfortandencouragementduringthischallengingtime.Firstly,asaforeigner,you'vealreadytriedyourbest,andit'spletelynormaltofeeldisappointed.Frommyperspective,itseemsliketheremightbeaneedformorepreparations.Perhapsdedicatingmoretimetopracticeandreviewingtoughcharacterscouldmakeasignifican