高一英语短文改错专练(一)

高一英语短文改错（一）DearElli, I’maseniorstudent.IlikemakefriendswithpeoplebutIdomybesttogetonwelleveryone.ButinlastweekIfoundthatoneofmyfriendswroteinherEnglishdiarythatshedislikedmeandthathedidn’twanttobemyfriendanymore.NowshehasstartedtomakefunofmebecauseofI’m fat.I’mkindtoher,butwhycan’tshebefriendofmine?Otherproblemisaboutmyweight.ShouldIdolessexerciseorusepills?Anddoyouknow anyotherway?Pleasegivemesomeadvices.Yours, Mary（二）DearSir,IamnowacollegestudentatPekingUniversity.I’mquiteinterestedinthepositionofferingbyyourwebsiteforpart-timeEnglishreporters.IthinkI’mfitthejob.Asastudent,I’vereadalotandhavemanyknowledgeindifferentfield.I’mfondofEnglishanddowellinbothspeakingandwriting.Besides,I’measilytogetalongwithandIenjoyworkingtogetherwithanother. Aboveall,Ionceworkasareporterformycollegebroadcaststation.SoI’msureIcandothejobwellifIwillgetthechanceworkforawebsite.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply. （三）Haveyoueverheardfromthesaying:AllworkandnoplaymakeJackadullboy?Whatthismeansisthatifyou studyallthetimesyouwillbeeaboringperson.Youmustgooutandhavingfunwithyourfriends,otherwise youwilllosehim.Noonewantstobefriendswiththepersonwhothatonlyworksandstudies.Perhapsyouhaveaconfidenceproblem.Pleasetryrememberthattheworkyoudoisforyourselfratherthanforanyoneelse.Youdonothavetopeteyourclassmates.Noonecanbehappierinstudyingsevendayandsevennightsaweek.（四）DearTracy，AlthoughI'm16yearsold，butmyfatherstilltreatsmeasacarelesschildren.Hedoesn’tvaluemyopinions.Heisverystrictwithmeandoftenpunishesmeaboutleavingthingslyingaroundinthehousewhilehedidthisalltime.Ithinkhefailstosetanexamplemetofollow.Butheoftensays：“DoingasIsay，notasIdo.”Evenworse，hepointsoutmypastmistakestoguests，makingmefeelhurting.Ilovemyfather,butIcan’tbearwhathedoes.Ihavebeentriedmanytimestotalkwithhebutheneverlistens.Please,helpme. （五）EverymorningStevewenttoworkbytrain.Ashehasalongtrip,healwaysbuysnewspaper.Ithelpsmakethetimepassingmorequickly.OneTuesdaymorning,heturnedoverthesportspage.Hewantedtoseethereportaboutanimportantfootballmatchthenightbefore.Thereportwassointerestingthatheforgottogetoffathisstation.Hedidnotknowitunlesshesawthesea.Hegotonatthenextstation,andhadtowaitalongtimeforatraintogoback.Itwasnodoubtthathearrivedlateattheoffice.HisbosswasangrywhenSievetoldtohimwhyhewaslate.“Workisveryimportantthanfootball!”,heshouted.（六）Whenmyfatherboughtmeaputerasabirthdaygiftformeinlastyear,Ifeltveryexcited.Asweallknow,putersaregettingmoreandmoreusefullynow.Muchinformationcanbestoredinthem.Wecanalsolearnthathaslatelyhappenedintheworldontheinternet.Inpast,peoplehadtodolotsofworkwhichwasverydangerous.Now,but,puterscandoitinstead.Whenanexamising,Ioftendidsomeexercisesonmyputer.Thenitwillcorrectitandtellmetherightanswers.Inthiswayitisveryconvenientformetopreparetheexamthanbefore.Theputerhasbeemyrealfriend. （七）In10thAprilthisyear,asLiMingwasleavinghishomeinthemorning,hegotintothelifttogetherawoman.Whentheliftgottothefourfloor,itstoppedandamiddle-agedmanenter.Oncethemangotin,hesnatchedthewoman’s handbag.HepulledbothLiMingandthewomanoutofthelift.LiMingrandownstairs.Whenhereachedfortheground floor,hesawthemanwalkedout.Hetoldthecaretakeratonceandtheybothfollowedthieftoarestaurantnearbywhichtheymettwopolicemen.LiMingtoldthemallaboutthecaseandthethiefhasfinallycaught. （八）OnedaylastweekIwentawalkinthecountry.Inthemorningtheweatherwaswellandthesunwasshining;theskywasblueandtherewerenocould.Soonacoolwindstartedblownandblackcloudswerecoveredthesunandthenitstartedtorain.Therewerenohousesinsight,butIgotverywet. Afterahourorso,Imanagedtocatchabuswhichtookmehome.ButwhenIarrivedIhasshivering andIknewIhadcaughtabadcold.Imusthavetakenmycoat.Ihadnothingtodobuttostayathomeandwaitforadoctor.（九）Ivisitedmyauntinthecountrysidenearthecityinlastweek.Iwassurprisedtoseethatgreatchangeshadbeentakenplaceinthecountryside.Takemyaunt’sfamilyforexample.Wesupplyprecioustreesandflowerstothestoresinthecityandhaveovertenworkersworkingforthemselves.Theirfamily’sinereachedasmuch100,000yuanlastyear.Noronlydidtheyhaveahouse,acarandputers,theycanalsoaffordatripabroadeveryyear.Whenaskingwhatelsetheyneededmost,theysaidthattheywantedtolearnafewEnglishsothattheycoulddobusinesswithforeignersdirectly.Totheirdelighted,mycousincanusethathehaslearnedfromuniversitytohelpthemwithoverseastrade. （十）Thankyouforyoure-mail!Youaskedmeaboutmyfriendsandhowweliketodo.Well,IguessIdowhatmostpeopletodo.Ilikereadingbooks,watchingfilmsandlistentomusic.Myfavoritesportisvolley-ball.Mostofmyfriendplayvolleyballtogetherwithme.Mybestfriendistwoyearselderthanme.Shegoestoadifferentschool,butwealwaysgettogetherafterschooltotalkandhavefuns.Wesometimesdohomeworktogether.Whataboutyourself?Tellmesomethingaboutyourself,yourfriendsandwhatyouliketodo.IhadalsoliketoknowsomethingaboutChina.WehavereadChinainschoolandIamveryinterestinginlearningmoreaboutit.Pleasee-mailmesoon! Lisa（十一）HereisaphotowhichI’vekeptformanyyears.Look,thechildinitisme.DoyouthinkitthatIwasverylovely?Yes.Yousee,Iwasmakingface.Therewasahatonmyheadwhiletherewerenoshoesonmyfoot.IaskedmymotherhowoldIwasthem.MothersaidthatIwasthreeyearsoldinthattime.Canyouseethehouseallmakingofwood?Thehousewhichwasnewthen,butitisveryoldnow.Iwasborninthisoldhouseandlivedhereforeighteenyears.Ilikelivinghere,becausethereweremanyfriendlyneighborswegetalongverygoodwitheachother,butit’sagreatpitythatWewillmoveawaysoon.Totellatruth,Ireallycan’tbeartopartfromthem.（十二）Goodmorning,everyone.YesterdayIreceivedaletterfromaelderlygentleman.Hetoldmetheotherdayhesawthatsomestudentinourschooluniformcrowdedontoabuswithoutwaitingtheirturns.Onthebustheyrefusetooffertheirseatsforoldpeople.Whatwasworse,theyevensaiddirtywordstoeachother.Iamverymuchsorryforthis.Today’syoutharetomorrow’soldpeople.RespecttheoldandcaringfortheyoungisafinetraditionofourChinese.Everyoneofushavetheresponsibilitytokeepitup.Ihopethatyoucanlearnsomethingthisincidentandyouwillhavegoodmannerswhetheryouareinsideoroutsidetheschool.Thankyou.（十三）HenryRoycedidnotlikehiscar,thatranbadlyandoftenbrokeup.Sohedecidedtomakebettercarhimself,butin1904heproducedhisfirstnewmodel.CharlesRolls,acarmaker,wasveryinterestinginRoyce’scar,andsoonRollsandRoycegointobusinesstogether.OneoftheirfirstmodelwastheSilverGhost.In1907,aSilverGhostbroketheworld’srecordbydrive14,371mileswithoutbreakingdownonce.Afterthedrive,itwascostjustover￡2toputthecarbackintoperfectcondition.ThisisnotsurprisingthattheSilverGhostwasregarded“thebestcarintheworld”.（十四）Howmuchtimesdoyouspendwithyourparents?Whendidyoulasttellthemwhatisonyourmind?Youparentsareyourdearestpeopleintheworldwhenyouareyoung.Andtheyalwayscareofyoudeep.Buteventhoughmanychildrenstilllovetheirmumanddad,familiesmaybeemoreclose asyougetolder.Theendoftheyearisatimeforfamiliestogettogether.Haveyoueverthoughtwhatyoucanshowyourparentsthatyoulovethem?Findchanceanddosomethingforthemortohaveasinceretalkwith them.Ifyoucandothis,yourparentswillbeveryhappy. 十五）“Practicemakesperfect”wasanoldsaying.Ittellsusthatitdoesnotanymatterifweareslowatdoingsomething.Aslongaswekeepontryingandpractice,we’lldoagoodjobintheend.ThesayingisespecialusefulinEnglishstudy.Sinceastudentispooratspeaking,heshouldgraspeverychancetoopenmouthandspeakEnglish.HisoralEnglishmaybeexcellentonedayduetohishardworks.Notonlyis thesayingusefulinEnglishstudy,itisalsohelpfulinourdaylife.Toanextent,itisnoshortcutindoingeverythingsincekeytosuccessliesin“Practicemakesperfect”. （十六）AtaFridaynight,apooryoungartiststoodatthegateofthesubwaystationandplayedhisviolinwithlargepieceofpaperontheground．Beforelong,hewassurroundingwithpeople,whowereallattractedbythewordonthatpaper.Itsaid,“lastnight,agentlemanputanimportantthingintomyhatbymistaken.Pleaseetoclaimitsoon.”Seeingthis,peoplewonderedwhyitcouldbe.Afterabouthalfanhour,amancameandbroughtbackhislotterywhichwonaprizeof＄500,000.Latesomeoneaskedtheviolinist:“Whydon’tyoutakethelotteryticketforyourself?”Hesaid,“WhileIdon’thavemuchmoney,Ilivehappily.However,Ilosehonesty,Iwon’tbehappyforever.”(十七)AfewmonthsafterreturningtheUSfromGermany,ItookpartinacollegecourseinFrench.SinceIhavelearnedtospeakGermangoodinGermany,Ithoughtthatitmightbeinterestedtobeginstudyinganotherlanguage.Atthefirstclass,theteacheraskedusdoapronunciationexercise,inwhichhewouldsayonewordortwoinFrench,andeachstudentwoulddotheirbesttocopy.Whenhegottome,hekepthavingmetosaymorewords,andIfinallyaskedhimwhy."Ifinditgreatfuns.It'sthefirsttimeI'veheardanAmericanspeakFrenchwithaGermanaccent."heexplainedit.(十八)OnedayIhappentofindachattingroomonmy,therepeoplewerechattinginEnglish.Itriedtochatwithsomeofthem.Tomysurprised.IfoundtheoralEnglishofsomejuniorstudentswerebetterthanme.Iaskedthemforadviceandtheytoldmetopractisemoreon.ButeverydayafterthatIwouldspendonehourpractisemyoralEnglishon.DaybydayIlearnedfrommanyusefulwordsandexpressions.Withtimewentby,IfoundthatIcouldevenmunicatesomecollegestudentsfreely. （十九）WhiletraveledtoParisonabus,Ibecameverysick.Awell-dressingmanonthebushelpedmegreat.Hetookmeoffthebus,foundoutwherethedoctor’soffice.andtookmetotherehimself.Thenextday,hecametovisitme.Ididn’tspeakFrenchwell,soIcan’ttalkwithhimverymuch.However,evenifwecouldn’ttalk,butwecouldmunicate.Imunicatedmyselfthankstohisgreatkindness,andhemunicatedhisconcernformyhealthy.ThroughthisexperienceIhavelearnedthatmunicationcantakeplacewithoutmuchactuallanguageatall.（二十）TheInternetisplayingaimportantpartinourdailylife.Onthenet,wecanlearnaboutnewsbothhomeandabroadandsomeotherinformationsaswell．Wecanalsomakephonecalls,sendmessagesbye-mail，gotonetschools，learnforeignlanguagesbyourselves．Beside，wecanenjoymusic，watchsportsmatches，andplaythechessorcards．Thenetevenhelpusdoshopping，makeachatwithothersandmakefriendswiththem.Inword，theInternethasmadeourlifemoreeasier． （二十一）DuringtheweekendItraveledbyairthefirsttimeinmylife.Igenerallytravelbytrainandbus.Itisbothcheaperandsafe.Butthiswasashortjourney.InthebeginningIdidnotfeelveryhappily,butthisfeelingdidnotlastlonger.Thejourneywasveryexciting.Iwassoonhighupintheskyamongthecloud.Theviewsofmountains,fieldsandriverswereinterested.Ienjoyedmyshortandfortablejourneyverymuch.Thisexperiencehaveshownthattravelinginairisactuallythesafestwayofmakejourneys. （二十二）Iwenttoseethefilmaftersupper.Onmywaytothecinema.ImetanEnglishwoman,whomhadlostherway.Igaveupthechanceseethefilmandtookhertoherhotel.Whilegothere,Itoldheraboutgreatchangesthathadbeentakenplacehereinthepastfewyearsandshehadtoldmesomethingabouthercountry.AlthoughImissedthefilm,butIstillfeltveryhappy,forIhadnotonlyhelpedheroutoftroublebutpracticedmyspeakingEnglish.IfIhadnotworkedhardonEnglish,Iwouldnothavebeenabletohelphim. (二十三)Oneday,Iwascookinginthekitchenasthetelephonerings.Iwenttoansweritimmediately.Shewasmyclosefriend,Lisa.Whenweweretalkingonaphone,thefirealarmsounded.Iranbacktothekitchen.Theroomfullofsmokeandthebeefwasbadlyburnt.Iquicklyturnedoffthegas,openingallthewindows,andthenwentoutofthehouse.Inmysurprise,twofireengineswereoutsidemyhouse.Iamratherworried.Itoldaboutthefirementhatitwasmycarelesscookingwhichcausedtheheavysmoke.(二十四)IreceivedyourletterwasdatedAprill6thedaybefore