高三摸底考试作文讲评

高三摸底考试作文讲评第一节情景作文（满分20分）教师节前夕，你班决定给李老师送一份礼物，大家提出两条建议：

(1)送影集(album)，里面有每个同学的照片；

(2)送磁带，录有每个同学对老师的祝福。请以"AnAlbumoraTape"为题，用英语写一篇短文。首先简述以上两条建议，然后表明你同意其中哪一条．并说明理由。要求：1、短文须写在答题卡的指定区域；2、短文词数不少于60（不含已写好的部分）；3、内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯；4、书写须清晰、工整。A1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.覆盖所有内容要点。3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。AnalbumoraTape

TheTeachers’sDayiscoming.OurclassdecidetogiveMr.Liabeautifulgift.However,differentpeopleholddifferentideas.Somestudentsthinkthatweshouldgiveanalbumwhichhasthephotosofeveryoneofus.Othershaveanotheropiniononit.Theyadvicewegiveatapewitheveryone’sbestwishes.AsfarasI’mconcerned,IagreetogiveanalbumtoMr.Li.Therearethreereasonsforit.Firstly,Mr.Licanrememberwhatwearelike.Secondly,wecanwritedownourbestwishesonthebackofthephotos.ThelastoneisthatwecanmessageMr.Liourtrueloveandourdeepthanks.(Onepossibleversion)

Teachers’DayisdrawingnearandwedecidetogiveagifttoMrLiwhohastaughtusforthreeyears.Twosuggestionshavebeenprovidedbyourclassmates.Oneisthatwemaygivehimanalbumwithphotosofallthestudentsinourclass.Theothersuggestionisthatatapeinwhichourbestwishesarerecordedshouldbegiventohim.

Inmyopinion,wehadbetterbuyaalbumforMrLi.First,analbumiseasiertobekeptthanatape.Atapemaybeeasilydestroyedafewyearslateranddoesnotwork.Second,Ithink,thephotosinthealbumcaneasilyremindMrLiofhislovelystudentsandthegooddayswhenhegottogetherwithus.Third,voicemaybechangedalotaftermanyyearsastousyoungstudents,whilefacesdonothavesuchgreatchanges.Inaword,IsuggestwetakephotosintimeandpresenttheminthealbumtoMrLi.第二节开放作文（满分15分）请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。InyourEnglishclass,youareaskedtodescribethispictureofawoodenbarrelandexplaintoyourclassmateshowyouunderstandit.(Onepossibleversion)

Aswecanseefromthepicture,thereisawoodenbarrelconstructedwithanumberofboardsofdifferentlengths.Somewaterisleakingoutfromtheedgeoftheshortestboard.Thedrawingrepresentsawell–knownterm,calledthewoodenbarreleffect.Thetotalamountofwaterisdeterminedbytheshortestboard,ratherthanthelongestone..Wecanseesomepracticalapplicationsofthiseffectinourdailylife.Teamworkisoneoftheexamples.Nomatterhowwellasinglecapablepersonperforms,withoutcooperation,communicationorhelpfromoneanother,itisalwaystheleastcapablememberwhoholdsback