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因果关系说到因果,because和so可是我们的老朋友了,再来认识几个适合书面的正式用语吧:①

asaresult:作为结果的是,因此Heissohandsome,andhisbrainisfullofcreativity.

Asaresult,manygirlsfallinlovewithhim.他很帅且很有创造力。因此,很多女孩爱上了他。②

consequently:结果是,因此Ourproductionequipmenthasbeengreatlyupgraded.

Consequently,weshouldhavenoproblemreachingourgoalsthisyear.我们的生产设备已经大大升级。因此,我们应该能够达成今年的目标。③

hence:因此,所以,由此暗示接下来的内容是理所当然且重要的。后一般不接逗号。Wesuspecttheyaretryingtohidesomething,

hence

theneedforanindependentinquiry.我们怀疑他们企图隐瞒什么事,因此有必要进行独立调查。④

owingto:因为;由于注意owingto中to是介词,其后要接名词或动名词。Owingto

staffshortages,therewasnorestaurantcaronthetrain.由于人手短缺,这趟火车上没有餐车。总结①

inconclusion:总而言之;最后In

conclusion,walkingisacheap,safe,enjoyableandreadilyavailableformofexercise.总而言之,散步是一种廉价、安全、愉快的锻炼方式,而且随时随地都可以进行。②

onthewhole:总的看来,总体而言Onthewhole,peoplemisstheopportunitytoenjoyleisure总的来说,人们渴望享受闲暇的时光。③

inshort:简言之;总之Trytennis,badmintonorwindsurfing.

Inshort,anythingchallenging试试网球、羽毛球或帆板运动吧。总之,只要是有挑战性的。④

insummary:总之;概括起来Insummary,thiswasadisappointingperformance.总的来说,这场演出令人失望。阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Aschildren,mybrothersandIconstantlyannoyedourmother.Whenwecombinedforces,wehadthepowertomakethatsweet,lovingwomangomad.Oneday,Iarrivedhomefromschoolfeelingoverheated,exhausted,andangrywithmybrothersforbeingkickedoutofthecarandwalkinghomealone.Takingafewstepsinside,Idroppedmybooksandrealizedthehousewasalittletooquiet.Lookingaround,myangerturnedtoweariness,andsuddenlyIfeltafiercestreamofwaterglideacrossmyshirt.BeforeIrealizedwhathappened,anotherblastedmedirectlyintheface.IdovebehindthecouchasIheardmybrothersyell,“Waterfight!”Runningtotheothersideoftheroomwheremyownwatergunwashiddenbeneathaloosefloorboard,loadedandreadytogo,Igrabbeditandcongratulatedmyselfonbeingpreparedinadvance.Instantly,myangerwithmybrothersdisappeared,andIeagerlyjoinedinthewaterspraying.Wedidn’tstopuntilwewerenearlywetalloverandoutofwater.Callingatruce,wedecidedtoteamupandtakeonalarger,moredangerousenemy.Whiletakingturnsreloadingourweaponry,wehatchedourplan.Ourmotherwasoutsidewateringthegarden,totallyunawareofthedangerapproachingherfrombehind.Wesilentlycountedtothreeandbeganshoweringherwithwater.Sheturnedaroundandstoodstillaswefinishedthelastofoursupply.Onlywhenshethoughtourgunswereemptydidshedaretospeakaword.However,whenshebegantolectureus,awater‘bullet’shotfrommygun,smacking(猛击)herrighteye,andshelosthertemper.Werantothelivingroomwithourmotherclosebehindandbarelyreachedthedoorintimetoshutherout.Shebeganpoundingonitandshoutingatustoletherin,butwehadnoideathatthiswasallanact.Sheactuallyhadherownplan.注意:所续写短文的词数应为150词左右;Paragraph1:Shedecidedtohatchherownplan.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Whenweleftthedooropenfortoolong,shetookaction._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【分析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者和兄弟们与妈妈打水仗的故事。【详解】1.段落续写:①由第一段首句内容“她决定自己制定计划。”可知,第一段可描写妈妈的计划是什么以及如何行动的。②由第二段首句内容“当我们把门开得太久时,她采取了行动。”可知,第二段可描写2.续写线索:妈妈制定计划——作者他们朝妈妈喷水——妈妈采取行动——作者他们屈服——打扫战场3.词汇激活行为类制定:hatchherownplan/makeplan穿过:flowthrough/across嘲笑:laughat/tease情绪类愤怒:angry/mad平静:calmlypeacefully【点睛】[高分句型1]

Ourconfidencegrewaswesuccessfullysprayedher.(运用了as引导时间状语从句)[高分句型2]

Whenyouattackothers,youshouldbepreparedtowithstandstrongerattack.(运用了when引导时间状语从句)【答案】Paragraph1:Shedecidedtohatchherownplan.

Shepretendedtogobacktowaterthegarden.Werefilledourgunsanddecidedtokeepthetrickgoing.Wewouldtaketurnsslightlyopeningthedoor,sprayingher,andthenquicklyshuttingandre-lockingit.Everytime,shewouldplaytheangrymotherrole,butinsideshewascalmlywaitingforanopening.Ourconfidencegrewaswesuccessfullysprayedher.Wewouldleavethedooropenforlongerperiodseachtime,laughingather.Paragraph2:Whenweleftthedooropenfortoolong,shetookaction.

Withthewaterpipeinhand,sheswiftlyflewthroughthedoorandsprayedusandtheentirelivingroom.Underthestrongwater,mybrothersandIweretooshockedtomoveandhadtogivein.Mymothersaidcalmly,“Whenyouattackothers,youshouldbepreparedtowithstandstrongerattack.Now,thegameisover.It’stimeforyoutocleanupthebattlefield.”1写好中心句,统领全段(a)将论据以概括的方式放入中心句e.g.Entertainmentoutsideplaysabeneficialroleinstressreliefandimprovementonsocialskills.(概括后的论据以斜粗体表示)(b)仅作一般价值判断(好/有利/坏/有害等),具体论据后续在主体段中展开

e.g.Ontheotherhand,spendingmorequalitytimewithfamiliesdoesmorebenefittoyoungsters.2“内修”句子间的语义联系论据如何围绕中心句清晰有逻辑地展开,换言之,怎样写出有语义联系的句子?构造语义联系两部曲:思考论据+拓展论据Somepeoplethinkyoungpeopleshouldspendmoreoftheirtimeathomewiththeirfamiliesandspendlesstimeentertainingoutside.Othersdisagree.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.a.思考论据的方法:“抽象—具体”即将题目中的抽象行为“陪伴家人(spendtimewithfamilies)”具体化:为“与家人一起聊天(communicatewithfamilies)”和“与家人一起做家务”的具体行为。b.拓展论据的方法:(1)“思考某一具体行为导致的结果或影响”在该例题的描述“陪伴家人”的主体段中,即思考与家人一起聊天和与家人一起做家务对年轻人的结果(好处)有哪些,示例如下:【论据:Firstofall,theincreasingtimeoncommunicationwithfamilymemberscouldhelpimproverelationshipbetweenfamilymembersandmakethemclosertoeachother.Suchisofgreathelpincreatinghappyandharmoniousfamilyatmosphereandbringingemotionalcomfortstoeveryoneinfamily.】论据1的语义联系:与家人多沟通交流(行为)→家庭关系改善家人间变得亲近→家庭氛围和谐每个家庭成员获得情感慰藉(结果);【论据2:Inaddition,youngpeoplecouldmakeuseofthetimeathometolearnbasiclivingskillssuchascookinganddoingdomesticchoresfromelderfamilymemberswhohavesufficientexperienceonthat.Equippedwithnecessarylivingskills,youngpeoplearemorelikelytobeindependentandbeabletotakecareofthemselvesandotherfamilymembers.】论据2的语义联系:与家人一起做家务,向家人学习必要生活技巧(行为)→年轻人学会必要生活技巧→年轻人更好独立生活并照顾好自己(结果)(2)“思考某一行为发生的原因或背景”在该例题的描述“外出个人娱乐”的主体段中,即思考年轻人外出娱乐行为的原因或背景,Youngpeoplearefacingfiercecompetitionatworkingplacesandundermuchpressure.Entertainmentcouldbeaneffectivewayforthemtoreleaseworkingpressureandenjoyrelaxingmomentswhenhangingoutwithfriends.论据的语义联系:年轻人在工作中面临激烈竞争处于压力之下(背景/原因)→和朋友一起出去享受放松时刻(行为)3“外练”逻辑关系信号词逻辑关系词可不止于“连接词”,“代词”、“同义替换”和“主题词的反复”用对了也能达到很好的上下文串联润滑效果:

a.适当使用连接词或连接短语atthistime,first,second,atlast,next,previously,simultaneously,eventually,

lastbutnotleast,tobeginwith,tostartwith,toendwith,finally,since,then,fistofall,afterwards,followingthis,precedingthis,priortothisetc.因果关系because,becauseofthis,since,as,for,owingto,dueto,forthereasonthat,inviewof,forsuchareason,asaresultof,therefore,consequently,asaresult,thus,hence,so,sothat,inconsequence,asaconsequence,accordingly,inevitably,undertheseconditionsetc.

转折关系but,evenso,however,though,eventhough,independentof,recklessof,despitethat,inspiteofthat,regardlessof,while,yet,unlessetc.并列关系and,also,too,aswellas,both…and,foronething…foranother,meanwhile,atthesametimeetc.递进关系furthermore,moreover,further,inthisway,still,notonly…butalso,not…but,inaddition(to),additionally,muchmoreinteresting,morespecifically,besides,moreover,what’smore,tomakethingsbetter(worse)etc.类比关系similarly,inlikemanner,likewise,similarlyimportant,inthesamewayetc.对比关系yet,still,notwithstanding,rather,unlike,(as)opposedto,in/bycontrast,whereas,instarkcomparisonwithetc.举例关系forexample,forinstance,inthiscase,namely,suchas,like,onecaseinpointis,asanillustration,take…asexample,agood/typicalexamplewouldbe,accordingtoetc.强调关系infact,especially,particularly,whatisparticular,nottomention,undoubtedly,withoutadoubt,inanyevent,obviously,definitelyetc.条件关系if,providedthat,ifitisthecase,ifpossible,ifso,ifnecessary,ifanythi

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