专题09写作-2023年中考英语一模试题分项汇编(上海专用)(解析版)

09-2023年上海市初三英语一模真题专项训练之写作Writing（作文）（本大题共1题，共20分）2023虹口一模64.Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）下列是学校征集的模范学生的其中四条标准，你最认同哪一条？为什么？请举例说明。注意：1.文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。3.请选择一条填在横线上作为标题。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文BehonestAsweknow,honestyisveryimportant.Itisoneofpeople’sgoodqualities.PeopleneedhonestyandIhopeeveryoneishonestandtrusting.Lastterm,mybestfriendwantedtocopymyhomeworkbecauseheplayedcomputergamesuntilmidnightandhadnotimetodohishomework.ButIthoughtitwasagainsthonesty,soItoldhimnottocopymyhomeworkandIwouldhelphimnexttime.Honestyisquiteanimportantqualitytoaperson.SoIthinkasamodelstudent,hemustbehonest.【解析】【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：本文首先要选择其中一条标准，并通过举例说明，可适当增加细节，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题，表示诚实是很重要的，并讲述为什么诚实很重要；第二步，通过举例说明诚实的重要性；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①oneof……之一②playcomputergames玩电脑游戏[高分句型]①PeopleneedhonestyandIhopeeveryoneishonestandtrusting.（and连接的并列句）②Lastterm,mybestfriendwantedtocopymyhomeworkbecauseheplayedcomputergamesuntilmidnightandhadnotimetodohishomework.（because引导原因状语从句）2023普陀一模64.Readthebeginningofthestoryandwriteapassageofatleast60wordstocompleteit.（根据短文情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。字数不少于60词。）Frankandhiswifehadjustparkedthecararoundthecornerfromtheirhome.Frankgotacallfromoneofhisdaughters,“Thekitchennextdoorisonfire!”Frankthensawtheblacksmokecomingoutofthewindowsofhisneighbour’shome...以下问题仅供参考：（短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）HowdidFrankfeelafterhesawthesmoke?WhatdidFrankandhiswifedo?Whathappenedatlast?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Frankandhiswifehadjustparkedthecararoundthecornerfromtheirhome.Frankgotacallfromoneofhisdaughters,“Thekitchennextdoorisonfire!”Frankthensawtheblacksmokecomingoutofthewindowsofhisneighbour’shome.AssoonasFranksawthesmoke,heknewitwasnotgood.Ifthefirewasnotputoutintime,therewouldbealargerfire.Theygotoffquickly.Frank’swifecalledthepolice.Frankranandcalledforhelp.Atthesametime,hesoakedhimselfwithwaterandrushedintothehouse.Therewasonlyonechildintheroom.Hequicklypickedupthechild.Atthesametime,theneighborsalsousedbucketstocarrywatertoputoutthefire,andtheypromptlycontrolledthefire.Inamoment,thefiretruckcameandthefirewasputout.【解析】【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文续写；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：文章的中心主题已给出，顺着文章的主题续写时，要注意意思连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，根据开头的情节介绍弗兰克看到烟雾后的感受；第二步，介绍弗兰克和妻子做了什么；第三步，介绍最终结果。[亮点词汇]①Assoonas一……就……②gotoff下车③atthesametime同时④putout扑灭⑤inamoment一会儿[高分句型]AssoonasFranksawthesmoke,heknewitwasnotgood.（时间状语从句）2023杨浦一模80.LastFriday,Marywenttothenightmarket.Lookatthepicturesandwriteastoryinatleast80wordsonthetopicLuckyMary（上周五，Mary去了夜市。请根据图片提示，以《幸运的玛丽》为题，写一篇不少于80个单词的短文）写作提示及要求：①下列词汇你在写作的过程中可能会使用到：dartn.飞镖，teddybearn.玩具熊，gamestand游戏摊位。②关注图片传递的信息与图片之间的关联，适当增加对话或内心独白。③写作内容中不得出现真实姓名和校名。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：LuckyMaryLastFriday,Marywenttothenightmarket.Whileshewaswalkingaimlessly,shesawagamestandplayingdarts.Theprizewasateddybear.Marylikedthisteddybearverymuch.Shespenttenyuanplayingwithdarts.Playingthisgamewasnottoodifficultforher.Intheend,allthreeofherdartswerehit.Thegamestandownerwassurprised.Marywontheteddybear.Shewenthomewiththeteddybearhappily.Howluckyshewas!【解析】【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇图画作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：考生要根据三幅图片中传递的信息介绍玛利的经历。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍玛利去玩飞镖游戏的过程；第二步，感慨玛利很幸运。[亮点词汇]①verymuch非常②spendmoneydoingsth.花钱做某事[高分句型]①Whileshewaswalkingaimlessly,shesawagamestandplayingdarts.（while引导的时间状语从句）②Playingthisgamewasnottoodifficultforher.（动名词作主语）③Howluckyshewas!（感叹句）2023松江一模64.Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）你校网站新增了一个专栏“夸夸我的小伙伴”，希望学生能够发现身边的正能量并将其广泛传播。学校目前正在发动学生参与投稿。假设你是李华，请给网站投稿，夸夸你的小伙伴张文。注意：1.文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：ZhangWenismyfriend.Sheisafriendlyandoutgoinggirl.Shestudiesveryhardandalwaysgetsgoodgrades.Sheisunderstanding,sosheisreadytohelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.Shealwaystakespartinallkindsofactivitiesonweekends.Sometimes,sheteachespeoplehowtosortgarbageinthecommunityandhelpscleanupparksandstreets.ShealsofoundedaDIYstudioatschool.Here,sheteachesherclassmatestomakeoldclothesintohandbags.IthinkZhangWenissuchanexcellentgirlthatweshouldlearnfromher.【解析】【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据题干可知，要介绍一位自己的小伙伴，注意语言表达准确，语法使用正确。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍朋友张文的性格特征、优秀品质；第二步，介绍张文经常参加各种各样的活动，如垃圾分类、清扫公园及街道、旧衣回收改造等；第三步，表示要向她学习。[亮点词汇]①getgoodgrades取得好成绩②bereadytodosth.准备好做某事③beintrouble处于困境之中④takespartin参加[高分句型]①Sheisunderstanding,sosheisreadytohelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.（when引导时间状语从句）②IthinkZhangWenissuchanexcellentgirlthatweshouldlearnfromher.（such...that引导结果状语从句）2023宝山一模64.Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothesituationgiven.（请根据所给情境，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格，信件格式已给）近日，你校举办了“我为母校建言献策”的征集活动，请毕业年级的学生为学校未来发展提出自己宝贵的建议。假如你是李华，请你给教导处王老师写一份信。内容包括：1.请结合实际情况，在学校课程设计（coursedesign）、校园环境（schoolenvironment）、午餐质量（qualityoflunch）、作业负担（burdenofhomework）、校园活动（schoolactivities）中选择1-2个方面，谈谈你的真实感受；2.针对你认为有待提高的地方，提出合理建议并简要说明理由；3.表达你对母校的感激，献上你对母校未来发展的美好祝福。（注意：1.文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇内容不得分。）Thefollowingisforreferenceonly.（以下内容仅供参考）☺I’dliketosuggest…☺…needstobeimproved☺Ihope…________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Ourcampusisverybeautiful,andIamveryhappytostudyhereeveryday.Ihavedeepmemorieshere.ButIthinktherearesomeareasthatneedimprovement.Firstofall,canwesolicittheopinionsofourstudentsforlunch?Theschoolrestaurantcanmakesomelunchesthatstudentsreallyenjoy.Secondly,Isuggestthatourschoolactivitiesshouldbemorediversified.Forexample,wecanholdsomebasketballgames,dancecompetitions,andsoon.Ihopeourschoolcangetbetterandbetter.【解析】【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍自己对校园满意之处；第二步，提出自己的建议。[亮点词汇]①firstofall首先②forexample例如③getbetterandbetter变得越来越好[高分句型]①ButIthinktherearesomeareasthatneedimprovement.（that引导定语从句）2023静安一模69.Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Iamveryactivein________classes”（请以“我在________课上十分活跃”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）在你的日常学习中，你总会对某一门学科情有独钟，在它的课堂上参与学习活动尤其活跃。请你明确一门学科，并填写在空格内；陈述你活跃的理由（要求所列原因不少于两个），简单介绍你的收获。（注意：不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文IamveryactiveinEnglishclassesIamLily,Iama14-year-oldgirlinGrade9.IloveEnglish,soIamalwaysactiveinEnglishclass.IfellinlovewithEnglishwhenIwasalittlegirl.Atthattime,myEnglishteacherwasaverybeautifulgirl.ShealwaysspokefluentEnglishwithasmileonherface.ShewassoattractivethatIwasdeeplyinfluencedbyher.Fromthenon,IhavealwayslistenedtoEnglishclassesverycarefully.What’smore,IthinkEnglishisveryusefulbecauseIwanttogoabroadwhenIfinishhighschool.IwilllearnallofmysubjectsinEnglish,soIdecidetolearnEnglishwell.Allinall,IamalwaysactiveinEnglishclasses,andIalsohopemyEnglishwillbebetterandbetter.【解析】【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：首先根据自己情况，把题目补充完整再进行写作。[写作步骤]第一步，第一段指出自己最活跃的课堂是什么课堂，起到开篇点题并引入下文的作用；第二步，写出自己喜欢这个科目的原因，至少两条；第三步，最后进行简单的总结及对未来的期待。[亮点词汇]①fallinlovewith...爱上了……②beinfluencedby被……影响③decidetodosth决定做某事④attractive有吸引力的[高分句型]①ShewassoattractivethatIwasdeeplyinfluencedbyher.（用so...that...引导结果状语从句）②ShealwaysspokefluentEnglishwithasmileonherface.（with...介词短语作伴随状语）2023崇明一模64.Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“ThingsIharvestedin2022”（以“2022年的收获”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）在刚过去的2022年中，你一定在很多方面收获颇多，请结合具体事例，谈谈你的收获有哪些，你是怎样取得的。（注意：短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分）。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ThingsIharvestedin20222020isadifferentyear.BecauseofCOVID-19,wehadtostayathomeandstudiesonline.Atfirst,Ididn’tusetohavelessonsonline.BecauseIcouldn’tcommunicatewithteachersandstudentsfacetoface.Also,Icouldn’thandinmyhomeworkontime.Mymothernoticedmychangesandtalkedtomepatiently.IrealizedImustchangemyself.Imadeastudyplanandlistenedtoteacherscarefully.Afterclass,Ireviewedthenotes.Gradually,Igotusedtohavinglessonsonline.Fromthis,Iunderstandnomatterwhathappens,weshouldfacethesituationinsteadofcomplaining.Whenweareintrouble,wecantalktoourparentsorteachers.【解析】【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍2022年发生的一件深刻的事情；第二步，介绍自己的收获和感悟。[亮点词汇]①becauseof因为②usedtodosth过去常常做某事③communicatewith与……沟通④ontime按时⑤beintrouble处于困境中[高分句型]①Igotusedtohavinglessonsonline.（动名词作宾语）②Iunderstandnomatterwhathappens,weshouldfacethesituationinsteadofcomplaining.（nomatterwhat引导让步状语从句）2023奉贤一模64.Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）TheMagicPowerof______生活中总有一些不经意的小举动，在我们/他们失落、失望的时候，带给我们/他们出乎意料的力量和感动，一抹浅浅的微笑、一个暖暖的拥抱、一封短短的邮件……请分享一个你经历过的带有神奇魔力的举动。注意：1）写作中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2）照抄阅读语篇不得分。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：TheMagicPowerofEncouragementEveryonehasamagicmomentinourlives.Lifeislikeajourneywithmanyfantasticstops.Therearesomanyinterestingthingsandwonderfulpeopleinmylife.Ihadaveryunforgettablemoment.Lastsummerholiday,Iwantedtolearntoswim.Iwenttotheswimmingpoolwithmyfather.Hetaughtmehowtoswim.Atfirst,Iwasafraidofdivinginthewater.AndIfeltuncomfortableinthewater.Butmyfatheralwaysencouragedme.Hesaidhewouldprotectme.WhenIbegantoswim,butIcouldn’tswimforwardatall,whichmademeupset.Thenmyfathertoldmehowtomoveandhowtostretchoutmyarmsandlegs.Slowly,Icouldmovealittle.Ittookmetwohourstolearntoswim.Ifeltsoproudatthatmoment.【解析】【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文，为记叙文；②时态：主要是一般过去时；③提示：须先补全题目，注意大写，并表达与题目相关的一次经历；经历部分强调“鼓励”的神奇魔力；全文会有出现一般现在时与一般过去时。[写作步骤]第一步，简单表达生活中会出现许多有趣精彩的人和事；第二步，具体描述自己一次难忘经历，即：在学习游泳过程中父亲如何鼓励自己；第三步，简单表达自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①beafraidofdoing害怕做某事②can’tswimforwardatall根本不能向前游③tellmehowto...告诉我如何……[高分句型]①WhenIbegantoswim,butIcouldn’tswimforwardatall,whichmademeupset.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）②Ittookmetwohourstolearntoswim.（it固定句型，it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正主语）2023嘉定一模64.Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）假如你是李华，学校要组织学生参加“生活技能体验”和“博物馆探索”的项目活动，每位学生可以报名参加一个项目。你会报名参加哪个项目？请写一封邮件给班主任张老师，告诉他你的决定，并说明理由。Trainingoflivingskills•lastweekofJune•stayonafarmforaweek•livewithteammembersandlocalpeople•cookmealsbyyourself,feedanimals...Explorationofmuseums•firstSaturdayeverymonthfromMarchtoJune•visitdifferentmuseumsinthecity•guidedbyprofessionalresearchers•explorehistory,science,..（注意：邮件中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。照抄语篇不得分）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

DearMr.Zhang,

Thanksforofferingsuchmeaningfulactivities.IprefertrainingoflivingskillsinthelastweekofJunebecauseallthelivingskillsIwillgetduringtheprocesswillbeofgreatvaluetomylaterlife.I’msoexcitedthatIcanstayonafarmforaweek.There,Iwillbeabletolivewithteammembersandlocalpeoplewhowillhelpmelearnmoreabouttheircustomsandlifestyles.Moreover,whatmakesmeinterestedisthatIcancookbymyselfandalsotakepartinactivitiesonthefarmsuchasfeedinganimalsandpickingfruit.IhopeIwillenjoymyselfonthefarm.Ibelieveitmustbeanunforgettableexperience.Yours,

LiHua

【解析】【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为邮件；②时态：一般现在时态和一般将来时；③提示：项目内容已给出，考生注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出重点，注意邮件格式。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山，表明自己要参加“生活技能体验”；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体说明项目内容和选择的原因；第三步，书写结语。表达“希望自己玩得开心”的愿望，并肯定本次活动的意义。[亮点词汇]①thanksfordoing感谢做……②beofgreatvalue非常有价值[高分句型]①IprefertrainingoflivingskillsinthelastweekofJunebecauseallthelivingskillsIwillgetduringtheprocesswillbeofgreatvaluetomylaterlife.（原因状语从句和定语从句）②Ibelieveitmustbeanunforgettableexperience.（宾语从句）2023闵行一模64.Writealetterofatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation（根据以下情境写一封不少于60个词的信，标点符号不占格。信的开头和署名已给，不计入总字数。）“汉语桥“中文能力大赛的成功举办说明越来越多的外国学生对中华优秀文化很感兴趣。假设你是李华，你的外国网友Peter对中华文化很感兴趣，想了解并学习。请从以下中华文化的六种表现中，选择你最喜欢的一种推荐给他，并说明理由。中华武术（Chinesemartialarts）京剧（PekingOpera）中华书法（Chinesecalligraphy）中文歌曲（Chinesesongs）中华美食（Chinesefood）中华剪纸（Chinesepaper-cutting）（注意：1.信中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearPeter,IknowyouareinterestedinChineseculture.Nowletmeintroduceoneofthemostimportantculture—Chinesepaper-cutting.Ithasahistoryofmorethan5,000years.Itiseasilymade.Youonlyneedsomepaperandapairofscissors.Youcanchangethepaperintosomedifferentshapes,suchasanimals,flowersandsoon.WhenSpringFestivalcomes,youcanseepeoplestickthemonthewindowsandwalls.Itisasymbolofgoodluck.YoucanlearnhowtomakeChinesepaper-cuttingbywatchingvideos.Wealsohaveothertraditionalculture.Ifyouwanttolearnmore,pleasetellme.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Peter【解析】【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍剪纸是中国传统文化之一；第二步，介绍剪纸的相关情况，包括它的历史，制作以及代表的意义。[亮点词汇]①morethan多于②changeinto把……变成……③asymbolof……的象征[高分句型]①Nowletmeintroduceoneofthemostimportantculture—Chinesepaper-cutting（“oneofthe+形容词最高级”的结构）②WhenSpringFestivalcomes,youcanseepeoplestickthemonthewindowsandwalls.（when引导的时间状语从句）2023浦东一模64.Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation。（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）D篇阅读中，作者Tessa从松树身上受到了启发。在中国文化中松树还可寓意“坚毅”和“正直”的品质。请选择其中的一个品质，结合自己或他人的经历，谈谈你对该品质的理解。（strong-willedadj.坚毅的uprightadj.正直的）（注意：1、短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2、照抄阅读语篇不得分。）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【64题详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：一般现在时为主，描写经历时用一般过去式；③提示：注意结合自己或他人经历，适当增加细节，突出重点。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题。用“有志者，事竟成”引出坚毅的品质；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。用个人经历谈对坚毅品质的理解；第三步，总结全文。总结理解，提出感悟“天助自助者”。[亮点词汇]①wherethereisawill,thereisaway有志者，事竟成②makesthpossible让某事成为可能③inshort简言之[高分句型]①Awell-knownproverbgoesthatwherethereisawill,thereisaway,whichmeansthatonecanfindawaytosuccessaslongasheorshehasastrongwill.（定语从句）②Inshort,astrongwillisessentialifwewanttomakeachievementsinourstudiesorwork,orindeedinanyotheraspectofourlives.（if条件状语从句）2023徐汇一模80.Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）。假设你是Joe，你校校报正在通过邮件评选最受欢迎的一个栏目（section）。备选栏目如下：·Schoolsports·Wordgamesandcrosswordpuzzles·Schoolclubs·BookorFilmreviews·Poemsbystudents请给校报写封邮件，谈谈你的选择，并简要说明理由。注意：1.信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearEditor,I’mgladtohearthatyouareselectingthemostpopularsection.Fromthepointofmyview,myfavoriteoneistheSchoolsports.Thereareseveralreasonswhichcanaccountformyopinionasbelow.Firstofall,everyteenagerhashisownsportsidol.Inthiscolumn,wecangetthelatestsportsinformationintime.Secondly,inthiscolumn,wecanoftengetsomesportssuggestions,whichwillhelpstudentstoarrangesportsreasonablyduringschool.Yours,Joe【解析】【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：要求根据题目要求谈谈你喜欢的栏目及原因。不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。[写作步骤]第一步，首先介绍校报正在通过邮件评选最受欢迎的一个栏目的消息；第二步，谈谈你最喜欢哪个栏目；第三步，谈谈你选择这个栏目的理由。[亮点词汇]①Fromthepointofmyview在我看来②Firstofall首先③helpsbtodosth帮助某人做某事[高分句型]①I’mgladtohearthatyouareselectingthemostpopularsection.（宾语从句）②Thereareseveralreasonswhichcanaccountformyopinionasbelow.（定语从句）2023长宁一模64.Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Mysuggestionsforthenewschoolmates”（请根据下面的提示，以“给新同学的建议”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）度过了几年的初中学习生活，你终将面临毕业，而马上又会有新的同学即将进入你上过的初中。请根据你的亲身体验写封短信给这些新同学，给他们提一些学习生活方面的建议，如：学习方法、参与活动、业余生活、师生关系、课后作业等等。短信的开头2句已提供。（注意：文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其他标志性的具体信息，否则不予评分。）MysuggestionsforthenewschoolmatesDearfellowschoolmates,Welcometoourschool.AsI’mleavinghereforaseniorhighschool,I’dliketowriteafewlinesofsuggestionsforyou…________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文Dearfellowschoolmates,Welcometoourschool.AsI’mleavinghereforaseniorhighschool,I’dliketowriteafewlinesofsuggestionsforyou.Inyourschoollife,youshouldpreparewellforeachlesson.Inclass,youmustlistentotheteachercarefully.Andyoushouldalwaysbefriendlytoyourclassmatesandteachers.Besides,it’simportantforyoutodoyourhomeworkonyourown.Inyourdailylife,yououghttokeepahealthydiet.Also,it’snecessaryforyoutoexercisealot.Youcantakeactivepartinallkindsofactivities.Andyoushouldlearntomakegooduseofyourtime.Ihopeyouwillhaveawonderfulschoollife.Yours,LiHua【解析】【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍对新同学各方面的建议；第二步，结尾总结。[亮点词汇]①befriendlyto对……友好②allkindsof各种各样的③preparewellfor准备好[高分句型]Also,it’snecessaryforyoutoexercisealot.（It固定句型）2023金山一模64.Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Thesuccessinmyeyes”（以“我眼里的成功”为题，写一篇至少60个单词的短文。标点符号不占格）在你的生活中，你总是不断在成长，不断收获着属于自己的成功。成功可以是令人瞩目的，也可以是籍籍无名的；有的成功可以改变世界，有的成功可以只是自己的一个小进步、小改变，……请你说说你眼里的成功是怎样的，并结合自身生活上或者学习上的经历进行说明。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ThesuccessinmyeyesSuccessisagoalthateveryonewantstoachieve,butnoteveryonecansucceed.OnceIparticipatedina100-meterraceatasportsmeeting.AlthoughIpracticedhard,Istillhaven’tachievedgoodresults.AlthoughIfailed,Iexperiencedthejoyofexercise.Sofailureisthemotherofsuccess,whichmeansthatinordertosucceed,peopleneedtomakeeveryeffort.Ifwewanttodoanythingwithouteffort,weshouldtryourbesttodoit.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.【解析】【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：本文需要能够根据提示并且围绕主题，清楚连贯地表达自己的想法，注意语法、词汇和句型的使用。[写作步骤]第一步，先总写自己对于成功的看法；第二步，通过描写自己的经历来证明自己的观点；第三步，总结失败是成功之母，想要成功就要努力。[亮点词汇]①joyofexercise运动的乐趣②inorderto为了③once曾经[高分句型]①AlthoughIfailed,Iexperiencedthejoyofexercise.（although引导的让步状语从句）②Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.（引用谚语来总结自己的观点）2023青浦一模64.Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Maketherightmove”（请以“明智之举”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）在学习与生活中，我们会遇到需要做出选择的关键时刻，只有经过慎重考虑，才能采取正确的行动。请以“Maketherightmove（明智之举）”为题，结合你的经历或见闻，谈谈你的感受。注意：●文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。●照抄试卷中内容不得分。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MaketherightmoveWhenthepandemichit,Ibravelychosetovolunteer,whichIthinkwastherightmoveImade.Igaveoutfacialmaskstothoseinneedinm