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读后续写复习：品德故事

品德故事类读后续写常见思路：一、陷入道德困境的紧张，焦虑，犹豫，忧愁1.

Sb.

isconfrontedwith

atoughissue.

某人面临着一个棘手的问题。2.

Sb.lookedupset,anxiousanddistressed某人看上去心烦意乱、焦虑不安、痛苦不堪3.

Sb.

scratcheshis/herhead

astohowtosolvesth.

某人对如何解决某事摸不着头脑。4.

Sb.is

onpinsandneedles/

Sb

hasantsinthepants某人如坐针毡/坐立不安5.

Confrontedwith

thetoughnuts,sb.is

atalossforwords面对棘手的问题，某人无话可说6.

Cuppinghisfaceinhands,sb.

sankintodeepthought.

双手捧着脸，某人陷入了沉思。7.

Sb.wasinlowspirits

due

to

thelossof...

某人由于失去……而情绪低落。8.

Walking/Wandering/Pacingbackandforth,sb.was

ponderingover

whattodonext.来回走/徘徊/踱步着，某人正在沉思下一步该做什么。二、主人公做出的思想斗争正确观点与错误观点的交锋1.

Shewantedto

takepossessionof

itbutsomethingdidn'tfeelrightaboutit.2.

Itflashedthrough/across/inhermindthat

theownerwouldbesoanxiousatthelossof..3.

Herheartwasbeating/poundingfastandherhands/palmswere

trembling/sweating...4.

Tornbetween...and...,shehadarestlessnight,

tossingandturningonbed（辗转反侧）.5.

Sheistornbetweenthedesiretoshowherremarkabletalentandtheanxietyofbeingteasedbyherpeers.

一方面，她渴望展示自己非凡的才能，另一方面，她又担心被同龄人取笑。6.

She

wasoverwhelmedwith

mixedfeelingsandcouldnotconcentrateon...7.

Sb.

istrapped/caught/tornbetweenAandB8.

Sb.isstanding

atacrossroads

betweenAandB

某人正站在一个十字路口9.

Itseemstwolittlemenwerefightinginhishead.Onewas...Theotherwas10.

Itseemstwothoughtswerehavingatugofwar（拉锯战）.Onewas...Theotherwas...正义战胜邪恶1.

Afterstrugglingagainsthisselfishideaforalongtime,hedecidedto

dotherightthingandgiveitback.

在与自私的想法斗争了很长一段时间后，他决定做正确的事，把东西还回去。2.

Ultimately,

itwas

good

that

triumphed/defeatedevilinthisconflict.

最终，在这场冲突中，是正义战胜了邪恶。3.

Finally,sb'sconscience

triumphedover

his/herevilthought.

某人的良心战胜了他/她的邪恶思想4.

Eventually,honesty/integrity/fairnesswonover.

最终，诚实/正直/公平赢得了胜利。5.

A'swordsrang/echoed/soundedbyB'sear,remindingBoftheimportanceof…(honesty/integrity/aclearconscience)

A的话在B耳边回响，提醒B(诚实/正直/问心无愧)的重要性。三、做出正确抉择后(心态+升华)1.

Asurgeofpridewelledupinhermind

forsheknewhadmadearightchoice.2.

Handingback...andseeingtheowner'sradiantsmile,sherealizedthathonestywasindeedthebestvirtue/policy.

退还……看到店主灿烂的笑容，她意识到诚实确实是最好的美德/政策。3.

Withtheloadfinallytakenoff

hermind,shegrinnedwithrelief,awaveofpridefloodingoverher.

她终于放下了心头的负担，轻松地笑了，一阵幸福的喜悦涌上心头。4.

Shereturnedhome

withalightenedheart,enjoyingthesweettasteofbeinghome.

她心情轻松地回到家，享受着回家的甜蜜。5.

It's

alifelessoninscribed/imprinted/carvedinsb'smind

thathonestyisthebestpolicy.

诚实为上策，这是铭刻在某人心中的人生教训。6.

It'saninvaluablelessonIkepttillthisdaythatweshouldalways

sayaresolutenoto

dishonesty.

这是一个宝贵的教训，我一直保留到今天，我们应该永远对不诚实说坚决不。微技能之动作描写

一、动作+情绪：五官神态①

独立主格：身体部位+固定动词非谓语，sbdosth,(with+情绪名词/声线)Tearswellinguphiseyes,hethankedthepolicewithatremblingvoice.②

定语从句：主句，whose+五官/情绪/神态描写...Motherhuggedthetwinstightly,whosefaceswereglowingwithexcitement.二、动作+分解：动作链①

Ving，主句

|

②

主句，Ving

|

③

Havingdonesth,

主句Consideringthethreatofthebear,westayedfarawayfromit.

考虑到熊的威胁，我们离它远远的。④

Ved(情绪形容词),

主句,Ving

（前加情绪）Relievedandoverjoyed,weyelledatthehelicopter,tryingtocatchitsattention.

我们如释重负，喜出望外，对着直升机大喊，试图引起它的注意。⑤

Todosth,

主句（前加目的）Todistractthebear,wethrewapieceofbreadfaraway.

为了分散熊的注意力，我们把一片面包扔到很远的地方。⑥

V1,V2,andV3

（分解动作）

(可换成：Vding,sbdosth,Ving)Werosefromtheseat,walkedoutofthehall,andleftthecinema.三、动作+时间状语从句：场景转换①

主宾分离（加动作/加地点）：Sbdosth>

改成：Whensth...,sbdosthWhileMarywasthinking,shecaughtsightofanitemonthetable.Shewalkedtowardsitandfoundanote.②

加五感：Sbdosth>

改成：Whensbsaw/thought/heard...,sbdidsth③

加情绪

：情绪/无灵主语句子+as/themoment/whensbdosth品德故事类续写典例解析01阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Oneafternoonafterschool,Maryandherbrother,Keith,wereeatingatacafeneartheirhome.Thatafternoon,theyhadtosharetheirtablewithanotherperson.Thatpersonwasayoungladyinhertwenties.Aftereating,shewenttotherestroom.Withoutrealizing,shehadleftherhandphoneonthetable.Fiveminuteslater,shecameoutandwalkedoutofthecafewithoutlookingback.Marysawthehandphoneonthetable.

ShequicklytoldKeith,“Keith,thegirlleftbehindherhandphone.”Keithlookedatthehandphone.Ittookhisbreathaway.Itwasoneofthelatestmodelsonthemarket.Keithhadalwayswantedahandphone.Buthisparentshadtoldhim,“Youdon’tneedone.Youcanalwaysusethehousephone.”Hestaredatitforsomeminutes.Thenhesaidslowly,pausingoneveryword,“Iwanttotakethehandphone.”Marycouldnotbelieveherears.Shemerelystaredatherbrother.“Youcan’t!Whatiftheownerestolookforit?”Havingmadethedecision,Keithquicklygrabbedthehandphoneandputitinhisschoolbag.Then,hetookMary’shandandledheroutofthecafequickly.Oncebackhome,Keithlockedhishousedoorwithtremblinghands.Insidehisroom,hetook

outthepieceofbeauty.Oh,helikeditsomuch.Nowhehadhisownhandphone.Soon,hewaspolishingithappily.ButMarytoldhim,“Keith,youcannotkeepthehandphone.WhatwillyoutellFatheraboutthis?Hewillaskyouhowyougotthehandphone.”Keithsaidquickly,“Iwillsayafriendlentittome.”Marysaid,“Nowyouarelyingtoo.”Ohdear!WhenhadKeithturnedsodishonest?ThenMarysawahousephonenumberontheplasticcoverofthehandphone.“Thisisthegirl’sphonenumber.Whydon’twejustcallthisnumber?Wewilltalktoherandaskhertoeandtakebackherhandphone.”Shewastryingtotalksomesenseintohim.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thatnight,Keithturnedoverinbedfromtimetotime.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Marywasveryhappytohearthat.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thatnight,Keithturnedoverinbedfromtimetotime.

Hehaddifficultysleeping,uncertainaboutwhatheshoulddo.Ofcourse,helikedthenewhandphone.However,hewasfeelingsorryfortheowner.Whenhethoughthowsadtheyoun