定语从句在写作中的应用课件高考专题复习

定语从句在写作中的应用上周六我看了一场演唱会。这场演唱会很精彩。LastSaturdayIwatchedaconcert.Theconcertwaswonderful.LastSaturdayIwatchedaconcert,whichwaswonderful/marvelous.HowtoUsetheAttributiveClauseinyourWriting写作中的定语从句

Part1.高考满分作文中的定语从句欣赏：1.（2013年全国高考新课标I）I’veaskedmyuncletobringyoutheChinesepaintingyou’veaskedforbefore.你知道，我的叔叔李明要去你居住的城市参加一个会议。Youknow,myuncleLiMingisgoingtothecitywhereyoulivetoattendaninternationalmeeting.___________________________我让叔叔带去你想要的那幅中国画。2.（2013年广东高考）那些做普通简单工作的人也在推动着社会的发展。Thosewhodosimpleandordinaryjobsarealsopromotingthedevelopmentofthesociety.正如我们都知道的那样，扫大街是最为困难的工作之一。Asweallknow,cleaningstreetsisoneofthehardestwork._______________________________当今，父母为他们的独生子女做所有的事情，这使得这些独生子女非常依赖于父母。Nowadaysparentshavedoneeverythingfortheirsinglechildren,whichmakesthechildrenrelyontheirparentsbadly._________________________________Asailorwhohasexperiencednostormwillneverbecomeanexcellentsailor.____________________3.（2013年福建高考）没经历过暴风雨的水手永远不会成为一名优秀的水手。Part2.写作中定语从句的主要作用：1.增加词数LastSaturdayIwatchedaconcert.Theconcertwaswonderful.LastSaturdayIwatchedaconcertwhichwaswonderful.Peoplecanenjoythemoonwhileeatingmooncakes,whicharethespecialfoodforthisfestival.2.可连接两个包含同一事物的句子，避免单词重复和句式单一3.补充细节，以丰富文章内容Thisismyuncle,adoctor.Thisismyuncle,whoisadoctor.Part3.如何写出定语从句:1.题干中出现两句涉及同一事物的简单句Solution:1>找出这两个简单句中都出现了的同一个事物2>将其中一个简单句改成从句,去修饰另外一个句子中那个相同的事物（注意关系词的选用）Forexample:我们班是一个大家庭。这个大家庭包括42个女孩和28个男孩。Ourclassisabigfamily.Thefamilyconsistsof42girlsand28boys.Ourclassisabigfamily,whichconsistsof42girlsand28boys.______________________Practice:我最好的朋友是Mr.Cai。他的外号叫屌丝。MybestfriendisMr.Cai.Hisnicknameis“loser”MybestfriendisMr.Cai,whosenicknameis“loser”.我不喜欢他的外号。原因是它深深地伤害了他。Idon’tlikehisnickname.Thereasonisthatitdeeplyhurtshim.ThereasonwhyIdon’tlikehisnicknameisthatitdeeplyhurtshim._______________________________他居住在开封。在这人们可以游览很多美丽的景点。HelivesinKaifeng.Peoplecanvisitlotsofscenicspotshere.HelivesinKaifeng,wherepeoplecanvisitlotsofscenicspots.(注意此处不再有here)我们过去常常一起上美术课。我不会忘记那段日子。Weusedtoattendpaintinglecturestogether.Iwillneverforgetthedays.Iwillneverforgetthedayswhenweusedtoattendpaintinglecturestogether.______________________________________________2.题干中只有一个孤立的简单句Forexample:Kaifengisafamoushistoriccity.Kaifengisafamoushistoriccity,which

hasalonghistoryofmorethan2700yearsandlargenumbersofhistoricspots,suchastheIronPagoda,LongtingParkandsoforth.Solution:找到这个简单句中的中心词，用定语从句将其丰富开封是一个历史名城。有多久的历史？因何出名？Practice:即将到来的端午节是中国的传统节日。TheupcomingDragonBoatFestivalisaChinesetraditionalfestival.节日的目的TheupcomingDragonBoatFestivalisaChinesetraditionalfestival,whichiscelebratedtohonorournationalhero,QuYuan.Mr.Cai是一个热心肠的人。Mr.Caiisawarm-heartedman.具体化Mr.Caiisawarm-heartedman,whoalwayslendsahelpinghandtoothers.(2013年高考山东卷)描述你的假期打算（包括兼职、旅游、志愿者等）Iwouldliketodoapart-timejob,whichwillhelpmeearnmoneyandaccumulateworkingexperience.Practice:用定语从句增添做这些事情的原因Travelingisoneofmychoices,whichwillenrichmylifeandbroadenmyhorizon.Iwouldliketodovoluntarywork,whichwillmakeagreatcontributiontothesociety.1.目前，英语在高考中是一个备受争议的学科。对此，不同的人持有不同的观点。Currently,EnglishisacontroversialsubjectintheCollegeEntranceExamination,aboutwhichdifferentpeopleholddifferentviews.Translation:2.我没有及时回信的原因是我一直在准备期末考试。ThereasonwhyIfailedtowritebackintimeisthatIhadbeenpreparingforthefinalexam.controversialfailtodowritebackprepareforFillintheblanks:去年暑假，我去乡村做志愿者。在那我看到了辛勤工作的农民和他们快乐的生活，给我留下了深刻的印象。Lastsummervacation,Ididvoluntaryworkinthecountryside_____Isawhard-workingpeasantsandtheirhappylife_____madeadeepimpressiononme.正如上面所提到的，定语从句用处很大。_____,theAttributiveClauseisofgreatuse.wherethatAsismentionedaboveAsisknowntoall=Asweallknow众所周知Asisoftenthecase就跟经常的情况一样Asisreported正如所报道的那样（As引导非限制性定语从句，可放在主句前中后，“正如”）Ourclassisabigfamily,whichconsistsof40girlsand25boys.MybestfriendisMr.Cai,whosenicknameis“loser”.ThereasonwhyIdon’tlikehisnicknameisthatitdeeplyhurtshim.HelivesinKaifeng,wherepeoplecanvisitlotsofscenicspots.Iwillneverforgetthe