读后续写微技能：通用句式课件-高考英语读后续写专题复习

微技能细节描写词汇句式起承转合连接词通用句式高级句式学习框架授课老师:句式学练闭环学句式，背句式平时写作用句式用句式替换范文表达，替换同类好词好句有备而来，考场胸有成竹重复使用句式，活用句式，烂熟于心Howtopolishasentence化平凡为惊喜微技能（通用句式）句式微技能Havingdone,...wasdoing/wasabouttodo...when...分解动作，构建动作链一......就......Muchtoone’ssurprise/amazement,...Whatsurprisedsb.wasthat...sb.feltagreatsenseof+情绪名词

+wellingupinsb’sheartandsurgingthroughsb.倒装句无灵主语形容词做伴随状语

句式微技能with结构“某人想到”虚拟语气时间线索词其它连接词高频副词对话结尾（首尾呼应，名言，情感升华）

句型01：Havingdone,...她走了很长时间后，她发现自己迷路了”。三次失败后，他不想再试一次。Aftershewalkedforquitealongtime，shefoundherselflost.Afterhefailedthreetimes，hedidn'twanttotryagain.Havingwalkedforalongtime,shefoundherselflost.Havingfailedthreetimes,使用场景：一个动作做完，接着做下一个动作。句型02：wasdoing/wasabouttodo...when...我正在散步，突然一只狼出现在面前。Iwaswalkinginthestreetwhenawolfappear.使用场景：两个动作同时/几乎同时发生。句型03：分解动作，构建动作链将整个动作分解为细微精准动作，分解成3个最佳。Thelittleboysaidsorrytohismother.Thelittleboyloweredhisheadandmumbledanapologytohismother.Shewenttocatchthebutterfly.Shecreptalongthepath,bentoverswiftlyandcuppedherhandsaroundthebutterflygently.使用场景：写感动的场合最好用。Speechless,shesmiled,

gatheredhersonintoherarmsandkissedhim.Iwalkedovertomyfather,reachedoutmyhandsandhuggedhim.温馨。句型04：“一......就......”我一看见他,就知道他就是那个曾经帮我搬过箱子的警察。Theinstant/momentIsawhim,Iknewhewasthepolicemanwhohadhelpedmecarrythebox.我刚走进房间就听见了巨大的声音。HardlyhadIenteredtheroomwhenIheardloudnoise.

NosoonerhadIentered...Upon+V.ing,

句型05：Muchtoone’ssurprise/amazement,...句式仿写：让她开心/难过/紧张/害怕/感动的是，句型06：What+情绪动词+sb.wasthat...让我惊讶的是Tom居然获得了英语演讲比赛的第一名。

What

surprised

mewas

thatTomwonthefirstprizeintheEnglishSpeechContest.词汇积累：

高兴：delight,please,excite,cheer,amuse,satisfy生气：annoy,upset惊讶：surprise,astonish,shock,amaze害怕：frighten,scare,terrify失望：depress,disappoint,discourage,bore忧虑：worry,concern其它：puzzle,confuse,interest,relax,touch,move,embarrass,impress句型07：sb.feltagreatsenseof+情绪名词+wellingupinsb’sheartandsurgingthroughsb.Jane感到一股强烈的恐惧，在她心中升腾，奔涌。Janefeltagreatsenseofhorrorwellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher.Janefeltagreatsenseofjealousy

wellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher.wellup:涌出；surge:汹涌表示强烈的情绪。Seeinghishusbandchattingwithabeautifulgirl,Janefeltagreatsenseofjealousywellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher.句型08：倒装句描述人物的情绪和行为之间的关系。顺承。so...that...Soweakwasshethatshecouldn’tevenutterasingleword.反向。as(尽管）Weakasshewas,shetriedtoexplainclearlytohimwhathadhappened.Onthevergeofdespairasshewas,shetriedto...struggledtofightbacktears.

直到......才......

Notuntilthen(hearrivedattheplace)didherealize...

直到那时他才明白，重要的不是谁对谁错，而是互相包容。句型09：无灵主语无灵主语：用无生命的事物做主语来展开句子。无灵主语句=无灵主语+有灵动词Hisnameslippedmymind.Awaveofnervousnesswashedoverhim.主语是情感状态词如fear，excitement，对应动词为seize,choke,flood,creep等。如：Excitementseizedher.主语是时间地点词，动词为witness,see,boast等。如：Thefollowingyearsawthedeathofhismother.主语是身体部位词face,，动词为lightup,wellup,flash等。如：HerfacelitupwhenIgaveherapresent.Tearswellupinhiseyeswhen...所见所想引发的动作。如：Thesightofthescenefilledmewithhorror.句型10：形容词做伴随状语Surprisedandmoved,themotherstoodrootedtotheground,andthenbowedlowtous,weepingtearsofjoy.Excitedbutcalm,Shecouldn’twaittoinformBernardofthegoodidea.句式11：with结构withone’shelp/withthehelpofwith的复合结构（主要是分词结构） Winteriscoming./Itistimetowearwarmclothes.

例句：东西都买齐了，他们朝学校走。 Withallthethingsbought,theyheadedforschool.3.with+情感名词Withprideandjoy,sheexplainedtheideaof...名词有：satisfaction,anger,fear,delight,pleasure,...变体：Withhiseyesfullof+情感名词OnseeingTom,Janeimmediatelyhuggedherhusband,withhiseyesfullofpleasure句型12：某人想到......Itsuddenlyoccurredtosbthat从句=Ithitsbthat从句=Itstruckmethat从句=Itdawnedonsbthat从句句型13：虚拟语气最优用法：用于对话“Icouldn’thavesurvivedwithoutyourhelp.”“IfonlyIhadfollowedyoursuggestion.”14：时间线索词ImmediatelyInaflashSoonafterwardsLateron,beforelong

GraduallyDayswentby,EarlyinthemorningItwasgettingdark,Eventually,Afterwhatseemedacentury,beforetheyknewitallofasuddenFromthenonHowever,unexpectedly,What’smore,15：其它连接词16：高频副词cheerfullyexcitedlyfiercely(动物“凶狠地”)17：对话对话描写的原则反应人物心理或性格，推动故事情节服务，不写废话；口语化，避开生僻字。对话不要太多，一个来回即可。尽可能结合动作和心理描写，明确对谁说，有画面感。对话标签的位置Shesaid,“Iwouldliketogowithyou,butIhaven’tfinishedmyhomework.”“Iwouldliketogowithyou,butIhaven’tfinishedmyhomework.”Shesaid.“Iwouldliketogowithyou,”shesaid,“butIhaven’tfinishedmyhomework.”如果主语是名词，则可以倒装。而代词不可以倒装，saidshe是错误的。让“对话”高级起来加语气.

“Iwouldloveto,”saidEmily

inapleasanttone.形容语气的词：pleasant/determined/surprised/impatient/curious/firm/sad...2.加嗓音“Ididn’tmeanto,”shemurmured

inalowvoice.

形容嗓音的词：high/low/sweet/loud/soft/weak/determined...3.加情感“I...I..don’tthinkI’mrightforthepart.”Ireplied

withembarrassment.18：如何结尾自然结尾。故事讲完即结局。万能感叹句+事件给自己在认识或者行动上的启发