读后续写人与动物类-女王的三个问题+讲义 高考英语一轮复习+

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Onceuponatime,

inasmallvillageinTurkey,

therelivedamotherandherson.ThesonwasknownbyallasBaldBoybecauseeventhoughhewasstillquiteyounghehadnohaironhisheadatall.从前，在土耳其的一个小村庄里，住着一对母子。这个儿子被大家称为光头男孩，因为尽管他还很小，但头上一根头发也没有。BaldBoyandhismotherwereverypoorindeedandsoeachdayBaldBoywouldtakeuphisbasketandwentoutintothewoodsinsearchoffood.光头男孩和他的母亲确实很穷，所以光头男孩每天都会拿起篮子到树林里寻找食物。Oneday,

ashewassearchingtheforestfloorformushrooms,

BaldBoywassurethathecouldhearayounggirlcrying.Whenhelookeduphenoticedalittlesquirrel(松鼠）sittingonthebranchofthetreeabovehishead.Thesquirrelwascryinginconsolably(无法安慰的）andsoBaldBoytookthelittlecreatureinhisarms.Hecomfortedherandtoldherthateverythingwasgoingtobeokay.一天，当光头男孩在森林里搜寻蘑菇时，他确信自己能听到一个年轻女孩的哭声。他抬头一看，发现了一只小松鼠(松鼠）坐在他头顶的树枝上。松鼠悲痛欲绝地哭着(无法安慰的）于是光头男孩把这个小家伙抱在怀里。他安慰她，告诉她一切都会好起来的。Whenatlastthesquirrelstoppedcrying,thetwofriendsgottotalkingandtheBaldBoyexplainedhowhelivedwithhismotherandhowtheywereverypoor.当松鼠终于停止哭泣时，两个朋友开始交谈，秃头男孩解释了他是如何与母亲生活在一起的，以及他们是如何非常贫穷的。"Ineedtocomeintothisforesteachdayinsearchoffoodbecausewehavenomoney,"hetoldthesquirrel.“我每天都要到这片森林里找食物，因为我们没有钱，”他告诉松鼠。Itwasthenthatthelittlesquirrelsaid,"YouhavebeenverykindtometodaysoIamgoingtohelpyouinreturn."就在这时，小松鼠说：“你今天对我很好，所以我会帮助你作为回报。”ThenthelittlesquirreljumpedoutofBaldBoy'shandsandsaid,"Followme."Theyoungboyfollowedthesquirrelthroughtheforestformanyhoursuntiltheyreachedacliffedge(悬崖边）

thatcouldseethegreenvalleybelow."然后小松鼠从秃头男孩的手中跳了出来，说：“跟我来。”小男孩跟着松鼠穿过森林好几个小时，直到他们到达悬崖边(悬崖边）可以看到下面的绿色山谷。“Youmustclimbdownthiscliff,"saidthesquirrel."WhenyoureachthebottomyouwillfindtheForestQueen.“你必须爬下悬崖，”松鼠说，“当你到达底部时，你会发现森林女王。”。Shewillaskyouthreequestionsandyoumustanswerthemallcorrectlytoreceivetheprize."她会问你三个问题，你必须全部答对才能获奖。“注意：1.

所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.

续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph1:ThesquirrelclimbedupontoBaldBoy'sshoulderandwhispered...___________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:"Ifyoudonotanswercorrectly,"shesaidinhercoldvoice,"then...__________________________________________________________________________【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。文章主要讲述生活在一个小村庄里的秃头男孩和他的母亲相依为命，并且很贫穷。一天，这个秃头男孩遇到一个哭的伤心的小松鼠并安慰它，小松鼠受到感动决定帮助男孩的故事。【详解】续写第一段开头为：松鼠爬上秃头男孩的肩膀，小声说……后面应该写小松鼠怎么帮助秃头男孩去获取奖励，男孩怎样到达悬崖底部见到森林女王的过程。续写第二段开头为：“如果你答错了，”她用冰冷的声音说，“那么……后面应该写秃头男孩回答上森林女王的问题，最终获得奖励，回到家中和他妈妈分享喜悦。【点睛】文章主题部分选用的是一般过去时，续写部分也用一般过去时，通篇时态把握准确；词语运用恰当并且高级，显示出较高的英语能力；文章中还使用大量的复合句，为文章增加色彩和高级感，如BaldBoymadehimselfarope,thenclimbeddownthecliffedgeandmadehiswaytowherethesquirrelhadtoldhimtheForestQueenlived.TheForestQueencouldnotdenythatallthreeanswerswerecorrectandsosheunwillinglyhandedBaldBoyalargebagofgoldthatwashisprize.

这里的宾语从句和定语从句相结合使用，显示高级的英语水平，精准掌握了从句使用的要领；续写部分构思巧妙，衔接自然，思路清晰自然，表达完整，为一篇优秀的作品。【参考答案】Paragraph1:ThesquirrelclimbedupontoBaldBoy'sshoulderandwhisperedtheanswerstothethreequestionsinhisear.Thenshejumpeddownandranbackintotheforest.BaldBoymadehimselfarope,thenclimbeddownthecliffedgeandmadehiswaytowherethesquirrelhadtoldhimtheForestQueenlived.Whenshesawhimapproaching,theQueenstoppedBaldBoyanddemandedthatheanswerthreequestions.Paragraph2:"Ifyoudonotanswercorrectly,"shesaidinhercoldvoice,"thenyouwillloseyourhead.""Howmanycherriesaregrowingonthistree?""Whereisthemiddleoftheearth?""Whichistheheavierofthesetwoapples?"Confidently,BaldBoyspokeouttheanswersthesquirrelhadalreadytoldhim.TheForestQueencouldnotdenythatallthreeanswerswerecorrectandsosheunwillinglyhandedBaldBoyalargebagofgoldthatwashisprize.Hethankedthesquirrelinhisheartandhappilyreturnedhometohismotherwiththegold.默写版：Paragraph1:ThesquirrelclimbedupontoBaldBoy'sshoulderand___________________________________在他耳边低声说出三个问题的答案.Thenshejumpeddownandranbackintotheforest._______________________________________光头男孩给自己做了根绳子,thenclimbeddownthecliffedgeand__________________________________走到松鼠告诉他森林女王住的地方。Whenshe_________________________________看到他走近,theQueenstoppedBaldBoyanddemandedthatheanswerthreequestions.Paragraph2:"Ifyoudonotanswercorrectly,"shesaidinhercoldvoice,"thenyouwillloseyourhead.""Howmanycherriesaregrowingonthistree?""Whereisthemiddleoftheearth?""Whichistheheavierofthesetwoapples?"_____________________________________光头男孩自信地说出了松鼠已经告诉他的答案。TheForestQueencouldnotdenythatallthreeanswerswerecorrectand_______________________________________于是她不情愿地递给光头男孩一大袋金子，那是他的奖品.Hethankedthesquirrelinhisheartandhappilyreturnedhometohismotherwiththegold.下水文：Paragraph1:ThesquirrelclimbedupontoBaldBoy'sshoulderandwhisperedtheanswerstothethreequestionsinhisear.Thensheimmediatelyjumpeddownandquicklyranbacktotheforest.Thebaldboymadearopeforhimself,thenclimbeddownthecliffandcametothesquirrel'sside,tellinghimwheretheForestQueenlived.Whenshesawhimapproaching,thequeenstoppedthebaldboyandaskedhimtoanswerherthreequestions.