特训巧训主观题｜主观题增分第15练

特训巧训主观题｜主观题增分第15练练中自评——在强化训练中发展自己一、语法填空(2023·资阳模拟)Moreandmorechildrenaresufferingfromeco-anxiety,whichis__1__problemthatcausespeopletoworryalotaboutthefutureofEarthandthelifeonit.Theyworryaboutclimatechange,__2__(pollute)andthelossofbiodiversity.Thishasurgededucationexperts__3__(call)formoreteachinginschoolsaboutclimatechange,wildlifeandtheenvironment.Sonecessaryisknowledgeofthemnowadays__4___expertsbelieveitshouldbetaughttoallyeargroups.TheTeachtheFuturecampaignfindsthatonlyoneinfourschoolchildren__5__(feel)theyknowenoughabouttheclimatecrisis.Itsaysthisisleadingtomanychildren__6__(struggle)witheco-anxietyandworryingabouttheplanet.Aconservationorganization,EarthRangers,__7__(take)actiontoaddresstheproblemofeco-anxietysinceitnoticedthat.Itsays,eco-anxietydoeshaveabigeffect__8__childreninmanyways.Thisincludesfeelingsoffearandhopelessness.Itis__9__(importance)toresearchandunderstandthewaysinwhichwecanhelpchildrendealwiththesefeelings__10__(effective).Inthemeanwhile,schoolsshouldcreateconservationactivitiesandhelpchildrenteachtheirparentshowtoprotectnature.锁定最难的那一个——一个都不能错第7题的提示词为动词。分析句子结构可知，题空处需填谓语动词，再结合句中的时间状语sinceitnoticedthat可知，本句的谓语需用现在完成时态。如果考生忽视了本句中的时间状语或者不清楚与该时间状语连用的具体时态，就有可能填错。微点：思考时态题时，一定要先找时间状语，如果没有具体的时间状语，则需要考虑上下文的时态。二、短文改错I'mheretocallonallofussavefood.Inourcampus,studentsareoftenseenwastingfood.Theyeitherordertoomuchtoeatupandthrowawaythefoodbecauseofitdoesn'ttastegood.Theymayforgetthefamouslineofapoem,“Everygrainontheplatecomefromhardwork”oractuallydon'tgetitsrealmeaning.Sohowshouldwedotostopthis?Ontheonehand,weshouldordersomuchaswecaneatandnotbetooparticularlyaboutfood.Ontheotherhand,iftheycannotfinishallthefoodweorder,takingtherestaway.Savingfoodiseverybody'sresponsible.Let'sstartrightaway！查找最隐蔽的那一个——一个都不能少对于并列连词错误，单从表面上看很难看出，还需要从句子的逻辑关系上去思考。请找出文中的并列连词错误。三、书面表达eq\a\vs4\al(体裁：介绍性说明文)假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动的情况。请给他回信，内容包括：1．学校的体育场馆；2.主要的运动项目；3.你喜欢的项目。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________评中赋能——在细节打磨中完善自己推荐最美的那一篇—一分都不能丢eq\a\vs4\al(与其理论说教不如现身说法)悟范文·背范文/在诵读中提升DearPeter，Icouldn'tbehappiertohearfromyou.①Asforthephysicalexerciseinourschool,it'smyhonourtoshareitwithyou.Ourschoolhasbuiltanewstadiumrecently,whichislocatedbehindthelibrary②.Ithasadvancedfacilities.Besides,itisbigenoughtoholdalltheteachersandstudentsinourschool.Wecanuseittoorganizesportseventssuchasplayingbasketballandtabletennis.Whenitcomestomyfavouritesport,Iguessitisrunning,asrunningcanmakemehealthy③.I'mlookingforwardtoyourarrivalandjoiningmeinexperiencingitinthenearfuture.Yours，LiHua学结构·学语言/在仿效中增分(一)学结构布局之妙本文写作目的明确，思路清晰，要点齐全。文章第一段开门见山地点明主题；第二段根据题目要求介绍了要回复的三个要点，且层次分明，简明扼要；第三段书信结尾表达了自己的盛情邀请。(二)学语言表达之美本文中高级词汇和句型的使用能够让读者眼前一亮，也充分体现了作者较强的语言运用能力。1．高级词汇：asfor,share...with...,advanced,suchas,whenitcomesto...等。2．高级句型：“否定词＋比较级”结构(如①句)；which引导的定语从句(如②句)；原因状语从句(如③句)。客串阅卷老师评一番—一题两用把分添eq\a\vs4\al(同一篇习作的改错与升格)DearPeter，Iammorethandelightedtohearyou.[Inyourlastletter,youaskedmeaboutthephysicalexerciseinourschool.①][Ithinkthefollowinginformationmayhelpyouknowmoreaboutit.②][Tobeginwith,anewstadiumhasbeenbuilt,andithasbecomethenewlandmarkinourschool.③][Moreover,withthestadiumsetup,manykindsofsportseventsareabletobeheld,ofwhichtabletennis,footballaswellasrunningcompetitionsisverypopular.④]Asforme,I'minterestinginbasketballsinceithasbeengivingmestrengthtofacethechallengesinmylife.Allinall,Isincerelyinviteyoutocometoourschoolandseeforyourself.Yours，LiHua(一)3个错误要避免1．介词遗漏：第一句中hear→hear_from2．主谓一致错误：第五句中isverypopular→are_very_popular3．形容词形式错误：第六句中interesting→interested(二)3个词汇抓住眼(将文中加黑词汇升级)1．knowmoreabout→have_a_better_understanding_of2．manykindsof→a_wide_range_of3．areverypopular→enjoy_great_popularity(三)3个句式点亮篇1．用并列连词合并①②句In_your_last_letter,_you_asked_me_about_the_physical_exercise_in_our_school_and_I_think_the_following_information_may_help_you_have_a_better_understanding_of_it.2．用定语从句改写③句To_begin_with,_a_new_stadium_has_been_built,_which_has_become_the_new_landmark_in_our_school.3．用独立主格结构改写④句Moreover,_the_stadium_set_up,_a_wide_range_of_sports_events_are_able_to_be_held,_of_which_table_tennis,_football_as_well_as_running_competitions_enjoy_great_popularity.语法填空答案：语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。越来越多的孩子被生态焦虑所困扰，他们对气候变化、污染及生物多样性的丧失等问题感到担心。1．a考查冠词。此处表示泛指，且空后名词“problem”的发音以辅音音素开头。故填a。2．pollution考查名词。空处应为名词，与“climatechange”和“thelossofbiodiversity”并列作“worryabout”的宾语。故填pollution。3．tocall考查非谓语动词。固定搭配urgesb.todosth.“敦促某人做某事”。故填tocall。4．that考查连词。分析句子结构可知，本句运用了so...that...句型。故填that。5．feels考查时态及主谓一致。分析句子成分可知，空处应为从句的谓语动词。照应主句谓语动词“finds”的时态，从句也