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开放作文浅析漫画理解作文审图立意三步骤一审细节（抓要点）二审角度（找可能性）三审优选立意（拓展主题句）漫画理解InyourEnglishclass,theteachershowsthispictureofalittleboylookingintoamirror,andaskstheclasstodiscussit.Yourclassmateshavedifferentunderstandings.Lookatthepicturecarefullyandtelltheclasshowyouunderstandthepicture.AbouttheearthVersion1(立意：人类对自然负重应承担责任)Version2(立意：保护地球)Version3(立意：人类与自然应和谐相处)Version4(立意：人应量力而行)AboyAmaninthemirror一审细节（抓要点）WhydifferentAbrokenmirrorLethisimaginationfly.Areflectingthereal-selfofyoumirrorAdreamingboyAmagicmirror二审角度（找可能性）Tomyunderstanding,thisisnotasimplemirrorbutamagiconeintheboy’smindandimagination.Obviously,hewishestobeastrongmanliketheoneinthemirror.三审优选立意（拓展主题句）漫画理解—结构Theboyinthepictureislookingintoamirror,butwhatheseesisnothisrealimageorappearance.Inthemirror,thereisabigmanmuchstrongerandtallerthanthelittleboy.

Tomyunderstanding,thisisnotasimplemirrorbutamagiconeintheboy’smindandimagination.Obviously,hewishestobeastrongmanliketheoneinthemirror.Theboydreamstobeamanfullofpowertoworkandhelpotherpeople.Perhapsitishisfatherwhosetssuchagoodexampleforhim.Ibelievethattheboywillrealizehisdreamonedaythroughhisefforts,andsowillweifbearingadreaminourmind.Pracice:

InyourEnglishclass,youareaskedtodescribethefollowingpictureandexplaintoyourclassmateshowyouunderstandit.Ascanbeseeninthepicture,atreeisbrokenbythestrongwind,whilethegrassstillstaysasitis.Weakandsmallasthegrassis,itcanstandthestrongwind.（突出对比）Whatthepicturewanttoconveyisthatinnerstrengthismuchmoreimportantthanphysicalstrength.（点明主题）Thetreelooksverystrong,butitiseasilydefeatedbythewind.Weakasgrassmayseem,itisactuallystronginmind.（完全贴图阐述，以便自圆其说）

Itisthesamewithhumanbeings.Peopleofthiskind,justlikethegrassinthepicture,canadaptedeasilytochangingsituationsandachievemore.Theyarereadytofacechallengesandnevergiveupintimeofdifficulties.（结合实际）Soweshouldsparenoefforttostretchourabilitiesmentallyandphysicallytothefullest.Onnoaccountcanwesucceedwithoutastrongmind.（对策）Pracice:

IfyourEnglishclass,youareaskedtodescribethefollowingpictureandexplaintoyourclassmateshowyouunderstandit.Inthepicture,wecanseeacircleofbricksstandingnexttoeachother.Thefirstbrickontherightisfallingdown,causingthefallingofthenextone.Intheend,thewholecirclewillberuined. Thepictureconveysamessagethatthesuccessofaprojectdependsoneachindividualstep.Wheneachindividualstepisgivenfullattention,itisquitelikelythatthewholeprojectwillbeasuccess.Inthesameway,amistakeinonestepmayleadtoacompletefailureofthewholeproject,asisshowninthepicture.Soeachindividualstepcanmakethedifferencebetweensuccessandfailure.Weshouldtrytomakeeachstepsuccessful.五一作业：人与地球Version1(立意：人类对自然负重应承担责任)Fromthepicturewecanseethatamanistryingtolifttheglobebutitissoheavythatthemanissweating,kneesbentduetotheweight.Tome,thepictureistryingtoremindusjusthowheavywehavemadeourearth.Wecrowdourearthwithgiganticbuildings,skyscrapers,carsandwaste.Allthishasmadeourlovelyearthheavy,uglyandunhealthy.Inordertoputastoptothisdangeroustrend,weshouldlettheearthcatchitsbreath.Leavenatureasitis.Thelightbreezeofwindisthemostwonderfulthingintheworldandthevoiceofbirdssinginginforestsisthemostbeautifulsoundontheplanet.（122words）五一作业：人与地球Version2(立意：保护地球)Fromthepicture,wecanseeamanholdingtheearthinhishandswithgreatdifficulty.Itseemsthattheearthisgoingtodropontotheground.Ithinkthepictureconveysthemessagethattheearthwillgetoutofcontrolifwedon’ttakeactiontoprotectit.Itisknownthatenvironmentalprotectionisveryimportantbecausemanisdamagingtheearthseriously.Besides,it’sdifficultforonepersontoholduptheearth.Inotherwords,ifeveryonecanmakeacontributiontoprotectingtheearth,wewillkeepitasafeplaceforourselves.Sincetheearthisasfragileasaglassball,weshouldtreasureitandprotectit.（118words）五一作业：人与地球Version3(立意：人类与自然应和谐相处)Inthepictureamanisholdingahugeglobewhichissoheavythathebendshiskneeandsweats,lookingexhausted.Thissceneimpliestherelationbetweenmankindandtheearth.Thefactthattheskinnymancanhardlyhandletheenormousearthinhisarmssuggeststhathumancannottakechargeoftheearthwhileinreality,wearestilltrying.Cuttingdownforest,huntinganimals,etc.–weactasifwewerethemasterofthisplanet,yetweshouldbeawarethatwecouldn’tcontroleverythingasthepictureindicates.Theearthiswaytoobigandweshouldn’tbesogreedy.Therefore,itishightimewetreatedtheearthasafriendandnottakeeverythingforgranted.（126words）五一作业：人与地球Version4(立意：人应量力而行)Asisshowninthepicture,athinmanissparingnoeffortstoliftthebigglobe.However,greatach