读后续写个人成长类Aoneyearlongtrip讲义高考英语作文复习专项

重庆市第八中学2024届高考适应性月考卷(二)英语读后续写题目:阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Hermouth

openinbothwonderandhorror,Miastaresatthebushcricketthathaslanded

infrontofheronthepicnictable.Thegirliscampingwithherparentsnear

FishRiverCanyoninNamibia,in

southwestAfrica.DuringthefirstfewmonthsofayearlongtripthroughAfrica,

AsiaandtheMiddleEast,Miaisseeingtheworldwithherparents.Itisa

family'sjourneytoseetheworldbeforeit'stoolatethough.米娅惊讶又恐怖地张大嘴巴，凝视着落在她面前野餐桌上的丛林蟋蟀。这个女孩和她的父母在非洲西南部纳米比亚的菲什河峡谷附近露营。在为期一年的非洲、亚洲和中东之旅的头几个月，Mia和她的父母一起看世界。这是一个家庭的旅程，去看看世界，但为时已晚。Farfrom

theirhomeinQuebec,thefamilies’experiences,brimmingwithcolour,shape,

touchandsmell,areespeciallyimportanttothem.Becauseunlesssciencemakes

abreakthroughsoon,thelittledaughterMiawillbeeblind,likelyin

adulthood.Shehasbeendiagnosedwithadiseasethathasnoeffective

treatmentasitgraduallyrobsherofsight.远离魁北克的家，这些家庭的经历，充满了色彩、形状、触觉和气味，对他们来说尤其重要。因为除非科学很快取得突破，否则小女儿米娅很可能在成年后失明。她被诊断出患有一种没有有效治疗方法的疾病，因为这种疾病逐渐使她失明。ForMia's

parents,momEdithanddadSebastien,thediagnosecameafterafouryear

searchforthereasontheirdaughtercouldn'tseeatnight.ThenMia,banged

intofurniturethathermomanddad

couldmakeoutoncetheireyesadjustedtothedark.对于Mia的父母，母亲Edith和父亲Sebastien来说，诊断是在四年来寻找女儿晚上看不见的原因后做出的。然后米娅撞上了家具，她的父母一旦眼睛适应黑暗就能辨认出来。In2013,when

Miawasthree,thefamilybeganafrustratingseriesofvisitstodoctors,none

ofwhomhadananswerforherlackofnightvision.In2015,asalastresort,

apediatricophthalmologist(儿童眼科医生)enrolledthefamilyinaresearch

projectinwhichtheirentiregenewasmappedout.RP,thenameofthedisease

whichhauntedthe

poorgirl,affectedthetissueatthebackoftheeyethat

interpretedimagesinbothblackandwhite,andcolour.Asthedisease

progresses,thecellsinthemiddle,usedforseeingincolourandforeveryday

activitieslikereadingandwriting,dieoff,too.Theparentswerecalledinto

thedoctor'soffice,wherethespecialistgaveittothemstraight:“Sofar,no

cure.”2013年，米娅三岁时，一家人开始了一系列令人沮丧的就诊，但没有一个医生能回答她夜视能力不足的问题。2015年，作为最后的手段，一位儿科眼科医生(儿童眼科医生)让这个家庭参与了一个研究项目，在这个项目中，他们的整个基因都被绘制出来了。RP，这个困扰着这个可怜女孩的疾病的名字，影响了眼睛后部的组织，这些组织可以解释黑白和彩色图像。随着疾病的发展，中间用于观察颜色和日常活动（如阅读和写作）的细胞也会死亡。父母被叫到医生办公室，医生直截了当地告诉他们：“到目前为止，还没有治愈的方法。”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Miawaiting

athome,thebadlystrickenparentsstumbledback.

Andsothe

ideaofayearlongtripwasborn.文本分析：故事大意：主人公Mia在很小的时候确诊了一场大病—她会随着年岁的增长而慢慢失去视力，直到完全失明。而Mia的父母在无数次听到医生说“治不了”之后，打算带女儿出去看看外面的世界，让女儿能够在失明之前最后用双眼捕捉到这个世界的美丽色彩。主旨大意：Mia最后是会通过这样子的旅途领悟出人生新的哲理：生活的色彩可能会在某一个瞬间消失，瞬间荡为黑暗，但曾经某一刻在心中闪耀过的色彩，能够一直让她走完接下来的一生。

所以这样子绕回来，虽然这篇续写的整体基调是很“悲剧”的，但最后反映出来的主旨仍然是指向“正面”和“积极”的，因此这篇文章在主旨层面上仍然算是一篇很不错的模拟题。范文:Miawaitingathome,thebadlystrickenparentsstumbledback.Awashwithemotion,Edithscootedintothebathroom,criedgasping,heavingsobs.Severalminuteslater,shesplashedcoldwateronherfacetoposeherself.Sebastienwaitingoutside,eyesdrooped,breathedoutseveralwordshoarsely:“Weshallletthekidknow.”Duringdinner,Edithmanagedasmileandbrokethenews,"Sweetie,youmaygoblindinadulthood.”Thecoupleheldtheirbreath."Oh,that'snotfun,"Miasaid.“ButI'llfindthesolution.”Laterthatweek,thecouplewatchedtheyoungsoul,unprompted,tofeelherwayaroundthehousewitheyesclosedtoseewhatitwasliketonavigatewithoutsight,upthestairsanddown,throughthekitchenandlivingroom,memorizingshapeswithherfingertips.Seeingit,thecouplemadeadecision.Andsotheideaofayearlongtripwasborn.Afteranelaboratepreparation,thewholefamilysetout.ImprintingmemoriesbyhorsebackridingacrossthebrightgreensteppesofMongolia,kayakingontheazureseaoffCambodia,campingunderthesoaringbrickredpeaksofNamibiaandhotairballooningoverthebrown,lunarlikelandscapeinTurkey,EdithandSebastienlettheworldunveilitself.Eachday,EdithandSebastienwatchedtheirkidchange,physicallyandemotionally.Miagrewtallerand,onthecuspofadolescence,neededmoreindependence.Besides,shebecamemoreconfidentandoutgoing,unafraidtoengagewithstrangers.Thefamilyitselfgrewmoretightknitandprotectiveofeachother,whichhelpedwhentheyfacedsituationsthatweredifficulttoexplain.下水文：Miawaitingathome,thebadlystrickenparentsstumbledback.Edithranintothebathroomexcitedly,cryingheavilyandsobbing.Afewminuteslater,shepouredcoldwateronherfacetocalmherselfdown.Sebastienwaitedoutside,hiseyeslowered,andhehoarselyutteredafewwords:"We'llletthechildrenknow."Atdinner,Edithreluctantlysmiledandrevealedthenews:"Dear,youmaybeeblindasanadult."Thecoupleheldtheirbreath.Oh,it'snotfun,"Miasaid.ButIwillfindasolution.Laterthatweek,thecouplespontaneouslywatchedastheyoungsoulcloseditseyesandgropedaroundthehousetoseewhatitfeltliketonavigatewithoutseeing.Theywentupanddownthestairs,walkedthroughthekitchenandlivingroom,andrememberedtheshapewiththeirfingertips.Seeingthisscene,thecouplemadeadecision.Andsotheideaofayearlongtripwasborn.Aftercarefulpreparation,thewholefamilysetoff.EdithandSebastianrodeacrossthebrightgreenprairieofMon