读后续写竞赛故事类+辩论赛场友谊第一比赛第二 高三英语一轮复习

高考英语读后续写语篇练习竞赛故事——辩论赛场，友谊第一比赛第二1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Ihadalwayspridedmyselfonmysharptongueandbrilliantresponsewhetherinclassdebatesorcasualarguments.Thus,whenIwasselectedtorepresenttheschoolinthenationaldebateseries,Iwasnaturallyextremelyconfidentofmyself.Allthemembersinmyteamweregoodspeakers.Wehadanexperiencedteacherwhotraineduswell.ButIwasundoubtedlythemostoutstandingspeaker.IneachoftheroundsthatIdebatedin,allthejudgesselectedmeasthebestone.Thismeantthatmyconfidencewasthehighestbythetimewefoundourselveswithoneweektotrainbeforethefinals.IhadeveryreasontobelievethatIwouldbevotedthebestspeakerforthedebateseries.Ibegantobeself-importantaboutthewholebusinessandstartedbehavingthatwaywithmyteam-mates.IwouldlaughatEton’spoordebatingstyle.IwouldcomplainofVivian’sslowresponse.Isawmyselfasthenaturaldebaterwhowouldbedisappointedbytheirbadperformance.4续写原文Asthefinalsdrewnear,Ibecamemoreandmoredissatisfiedwithmyteam.Ibeganmissingpractices.Myteacherwasworried.Myteammateswerepanicked.However,theyhadnochoicebuttorelyonmetowinthefinals.Eveniftheywouldlovetoremovemefromtheteamtheycouldnotbecausetherewasnoreplacementgoodenough.Thedayofthefinalsfinallycame.IwasveryexcitedthatIwasabletofinallyshowoffmydebatingskills.Everyonewasexpectingmyperformance.TheyknewthatIwaspraisedtobetheonemostlikelytowinthebestspeakerforthedebateseries.5段首句Para1：ButtherealitywasnotsomethingthatIhadeverimagined.Para2：Suddenly,acomfortinghandfrombehindheldmine.6Part2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者为自己辩论方面的才能感到自豪，在准备参加全国辩论系列节目时，作者的信心达到了空前的高度，开始缺席训练，这使作者和队友产生了隔阂，决赛到来时，作者很兴奋，因为他可以展示自己的辩论技巧了。9续写思路分析Para1：ButtherealitywasnotsomethingthatIhadeverimagined.由第一段首句内容“但现实是我从未想象过的。”可知，第一段可描写作者在决赛时的表现令人失望。10续写思路分析Para2：Suddenly,acomfortinghandfrombehindheldmine.由第二段首句内容“突然，一只安慰的手从后面抓住了我。”可知，第二段可描写作者在队友的鼓励下幡然醒悟。11续写思路分析续写线索表现不佳——队友鼓励——反省——完成演讲12续写素材可用词汇：行为类①不能：failtodo/beunabletodo②支持：support/beback③振作：pulloneselftogether/shakeoneselftogether④鼓掌：applaud/clapone’shands情绪类①紧张的：nervous/tense②害怕的：afraid/fearful13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1]Duetolackoftraining,Ifailedtogetthekeypointofmyspeech,forwhichIwasn’twellprepared.(由“介词+which”引导的定语从句）[高分句型2]Atthistime,IrealizedthemistakesIhadmadebefore.(由关系代词that引导的定语从句，省略了关系代词that）14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现ButtherealitywasnotsomethingthatIhadeverimagined.Duetolackoftraining,Ifailedtogetthekeypointofmyspeech,forwhichIwasn’twellprepared.Ididn’tknowwhattosayandmymindjustwentblank.IwassonervousthatIjuststoodthere.Ifeltallthepeoplepresentwerelookingatmewithstrangeeyes.Iwasveryembarrassedandshedbigbigsweat.16范文呈现Suddenly,acomfortinghandfrombehindheldmine.Itcamefromoneofmyteammates.Hewhisperedtome,“Don’tbenervousanddon’tbeafraid.Allofusareheretosupportyouandcheeryouup.I’mheretohelpyou.”Atthistime,IrealizedthemistakesIhadmadebefore.Ishouldn’tbetooconfidentinmyself.Ishouldhavehumblytrainedmorewithmyteammates.Atthemoment,Iwasforgivenbymyteammates.Ipulledmyselftogether,quicklystraightenedoutmyideasandfinishedmyspeech.IsawallmyteammatesapplaudformeandIwasmovedtotears.17范文译文但现实并不是我所想象的。由于缺乏训练，我没有抓住演讲的要点，对此我没有做好充分的准备。我不知道该说什么，脑子一片空白。我太紧张了，就站在那里。我觉得在场的所有人都用奇怪的眼光看着我。我很尴尬，流了一身大汗。18范文译文突然，一只安慰我的手从后面伸了过来。它来自我的一个队友。他轻声对我说：“不要紧张，不要害怕。我们所有人都在这里支持你，让你振作起来。我在这里帮助你。”这时，我意识到