初中生英语写作能力培养

初中学生

英语写作能力的培养

施志红

2008.507年写作无现成的范文可套ThingsIhatetodo

MostofthetimeIdothingswhichIenjoy.However,therearestillthingsthatIhatetodo.…三、了解评分标准

07作文分标准７＋７＋２(内容＋语言＋组织结构)

组织结构分

1.

内容充实，不写废话；上下文连贯、用语规范、表达准确、无或少见语法错误；词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，可给2分.

组织结构分2.

一般情况下，内容和语言在13分以上者(含)，

方可得到1~2分组织结构分.

组织结构分3.

内容和语言在12分以下者，如文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表达，可酌情考虑给1分组织结构分.

组织结构分

4.

通篇句型、句式单一，词汇贫乏者，即使无语法错误，一般亦不予给组织结构分。

07作文分析举例

Ihatetokeeppetsandtelllies.ThethingthatIhatedoingmostissmoking.Asweallknow,smokingisnotonlybadforourselvesbutalsoharmfultoothers.Whenevermyfathersmokes,Ifeelrathersick.Besides,itisawasteofmoneytosmoke,Ithink.What’smore,smokingpollutestheair.SoIhatesmokingmost.（A挡）

07作文分析举例

Suchasthehousework.AlthoughIsometimeshelpmymothertodosomehousework,Ireallyhateit.Idon’tlikewashdishes.Ithinkitisuncomfortablethatyoumustputyourhandsintothecoldwaterandthenwashthedirtydishes.Idon’tlikecleanmyroomaswell.Somyroomisalwaysveryuntidy.MymothertoldmethatIwasverylazy.Idon’tthinkso.ButIreallyhatedoinghousework.（B挡）(5+6+0)

07作文分析举例

SuchasdoingmuchhomeworkandwatchingTV.Everyday,wemustdoalothomeworkanditmustspendalongtimetofinishit.Whenwefinishedit.Itwasalready11o’clockintheevening.SoIhatedoingmuchhomework.IlovedwatchingTVwhenIwasachild.IalwayswatchingTVforalongtime.Soitmakesmyeyesbad.That’swhyIhatewatchingTVnow.

(C档)

(5+5+0)四、培养写作能力

1.指出常见问题

句型单一

东拉西扯

时态错误

用词不当

2.提醒注意事项

围绕中心

意思连贯

学会审题

注意文体

研究考试

3.避免指导缺失光给一个题目没有任何铺垫不考虑学生的学习基础和生活实际

4.全面多方指导狠抓听说训练

重视基础落实

介绍写作技巧

丰富训练方法

落实作文批改

小结一、明确教学目标二、把握变化走向

三、了解评分标准四、培养写作能力

1.

指出常见问题2.

明确写作要求3.

避免指导缺失4.

全面多方指导Thanksforlistening!1-1Mymotherisateacher.Sheis…Sheis…Sheis…Sheis…Ilikeherverymuch.Thisisourschool.Thereis…Thereis…Thereare…Thereare…Ilikeitverymuch.

1-2Mymotherisfortyyearsold,butshelooksyoung.Sheisadoctorandherhospitalisnotfarawayfromourhome,soshegoestoworkbybike.Sheworkshardandisalwayskindtoherpatients.Athomeshedoesalotofhouseworkandoftenhelpsmewithmylessons.IthinkmymotheristhebestmotherintheworldandIloveherverymuch.（73词）1-3

OurschoolislocatedinthecentreofShanghaiItwasbuiltin1950.Nowthereareabout200teachersand2000studentsinourschool.Wehavealanguagelab,acomputerroomandabiglibraryinourschool.Wearegoingtobuildanewclassroombuildingnextyear.Ourschoolwillbecomebiggerandmorebeautifulinthefuture.（63词）

2-1LastweekIgotanAinthetest.I’mveryhappyaboutitandI‘lltrymybesttolearnEnglishbetterandbetter.IknowitisveryimportanttolearnEnglishwell.IbegantolearnEnglishwhenIwaseightyearsold.However,withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates,I’vemadegreatprogress.ButsometimesIfounditsodifficultthatInearlygaveitup.

2-2

IbegantolearnEnglishwhenIwaseightyearsold.IknowitisveryimportanttolearnEnglishwell.ButsometimesIfounditsodifficultthatInearlygaveitup.However,withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates,I’vemadegreatprogress.LastweekIgotanAinthetest.I’mveryhappyaboutitandI‘lltrymybesttolearnEnglishbetterandbetter.

3-1

MrWangusedtosmokealot.Hefeelillandgotoseethedoctor.Thedoctortoldhimsmokingisbadforhishealth.MrWangisgoingtotakethedoctor’sadvice.Hedecidedtogiveupsmoking.Hiswifeanddaughterwereveryhappy.

4-1

Dogsaremen’sbestfriends.Dogscanhelpblindmen.Theycantakethemeverywhere.Theyareveryclever.Theycanalsohelpthepolicementocatchrobbers.Theycanhelppeopletobuynewspapers.Somedogscancalculate.Dogsareourbestfriends.Weshouldprotectthem.Weshouldtakecareofthem.Don’thurtourbestfriends!

4-2

Dogsaremen’sbestfriends.Theyalwaysgiveusalotofhelp.Inancienttime,theyhelpedmenhuntanimalsandkepttheircavessafe.Now,dogshelppolicementocatchrobbersandfindlostpeople.What’smore,somedogscanevenhelpblindmen.Theyshowthemthewayanddoalotofthingsforthem.Wecallthiskindofdogsguidedogs,andtheyareblindmen’seyes!Inaword,dogsarenotonlyourpets,butalsoourbestfriends!

5-1

Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“Growingpainsandgains”.Thepicturesbelowareforyourreferenceonly.(以“成长的烦恼与欢乐”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。以下图片仅供参考。)（05中考）5-2112.Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“IHaveaDream”.(以“我有一个梦想”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）Sentencepatternsforreference（以下句型仅供参考）Mydreamistobe…/todo…/togo…Ienjoy/like/prefer…Tomakemydreamcometrue,I…Ifmydreamcomestrue,…（06中考）5-3Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“ThingsIHatetoDo”.

(以“我不喜欢……”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。段文开头已给，所给部分不计入字数。)Usethefollowingpointsasaguide.(短文须包含下列要点)Whatarethethingsthatyouhatetodo?Whatdoyouhatedoingmost?Why?(Giveatleasttworeasons.)

ThingsIHatetoDoMostofthetimeIdothingswhichIenjoy.However,therearestillthingsthatIhatetodo.…（07中考）6-1

短文对话信件

日记

7-1写人物写事件写物件写场所夹叙夹议7-203年：TobealovelyShanghainese

（做可爱的上海人）04年：Leavingschool（毕业时分）05年：Growingpainsandgains

（成长的烦恼与快乐）06年：Ihaveadream（我有一个梦想）07年：ThingsIhatetodo

(我不喜欢……)8-1培养良好书写习惯单词形义常抓不懈介绍基本句子成分

理清五种基本句型Whowillwin?主语+不及物动词主语+及物动词+宾语主语+联系动词+表语主语+及物动词+双宾语主语+及物动词+复合宾语WestudyEnglish.Thegirllookspretty.Mumgivesmeapresent.Heaskedustogothere.8-2

简单句的五种基本句型9-1

学会使用过渡词或连接词鼓励使用状语从句、宾语从句

恰当使用英语习语、谚语9-2表示并列

and,or,also,too,aswell表示转折

but,however,yet,while,though,otherwise表示递进

what’smore,besides,inaddition表示让步

though,although,evenif,whether,nowthat,whatever,whenever表示因果

because,becauseof,since,asaresultof,thanksto9-3表示条件

if,unless表示对称

foronething…fortheotherthing,ononehand….ontheotherhand表示解释

thatis,thatistosay,inanotherword,inotherwords表示举例

forexample,suchas,like表示强调

Aboveall,indeed,really,especially,9-4表示空间

here,there,ononeside,…ontheotherside,