2023学年完整公开课版写作复习

writealetter

(savetheearth)

ChenJingyunWujinMiddleSchoolTeachingprocedurewritealetterread,speakandlistengroupwork:alettertogiveadvice(2)lead-inpresent:alettertogiveadvice(1)AddYourTextmakeanoutlineOldwordsandexpressionsalienUFOIsn’tthatamazing?Martin500yearsoldWhatdidthealiensee50yearsago?Lookatourearth!It’spolluted!Whatdoesthealienseenow?Wethrowtrasheverywhere.Whatdoesthealienseenow?Wecuttoomanytrees.Whatdoesthealienseenow?Thepollutedwatermakesthefishandanimalsdie.Whatdoesthealienseenow?Factoriespourwastewaterintorivers.Whatdoesthealienseenow?Aletterfromthealien.Pleasefindoutthemistakes.Dearearthmen（地球人）

Howareyou?I'mwritingtotalkaboutwhatIworryabout.Theseyears①ourlifeisbecomingbetterandbetter,but②our

earthisbecoming③badderandbadder.It’sverybadfor④ourlife.First,youhavemoreandmorefactoriesandcars,theyproduce(产生)wastegas.Secondly,youcutdowntoomanytrees.There⑤aresomuchsand

（沙）onearth.Thirdly,Ioftenseefactories⑥topour

wasteintoriversorlakes.Waterintheriverisquitedirty.Youhaven’tenoughcleanwatertodrinkincities.Inaword,youarein⑦dangerous.It’sverynecessaryandimportant⑧savetheearth.Ithinkifeveryone⑨willtryhisbesttodosomething,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful,andyourlifewillbebetterandbetter.

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CheecktheanswersDearearthmen:Howareyou?I'mwritingtotalkaboutwhatIworryabout.Theseyears①yourlifeisbecomingbetterandbetter,but②yourearthisbecoming③worseandworse.It’sverybadfor④yourlife.First,youhavemoreandmorefactoriesandcars,theyproduce(giveoff)waste

gas.Secondly,Youcutdowntoomanytrees..There⑤is

somuchsandontheearth.Thirdly,Ioftenseefactories⑥pourwasteintoriversorlake.Waterintheriverisquitedirty.Youhaven’tenoughcleanwatertodrinkincities.Inaword,youarein⑦danger.It’sverynecessaryandimportant⑧tosavetheearth.Ithinkifeveryone⑨trieshisbesttodosomething,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful,andyourlifewillbebetterandbetter.

⑩Yours

Martin

Aletterfromthealien.PleasepayattentiontothekeywordsDearearthmen

Howareyou?I'mwritingtotalkaboutwhatIworryabout.Theseyearsyourlifeisbecomingbetterandbetter,but

yourearthisbecomingworseandworse.It’sverybadforyourlife.

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andcars,theyproduce(giveoff)waste

gas.Secondly,Youcutdowntoomanytrees..Thereissomuchsandontheearth.Thirdly,Ioftenseefactoriespourwasteintoriversorlake.Waterintheriverisquitedirty.Youhaven'tenoughcleanwatertodrinkincities.

Inaword，youareindanger.It'sverynecessaryandimportanttosavetheearth.Ithinkifeveryonetrieshisbesttodosomething,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful,andyourlifewillbebetterandbetter.

YoursMartinTheoutlineofaletterbeginningmainpartoutlineending

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planttreesturnofftheshowersavewatertakeyourownbagswhenshopping

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Stopridingincars.plantmoretreeseveryyear.Canyouthinkofotherideas?eg.Havelow-carbonlife.Don'tchangemobilephonestoooften.Don'tuseplasticbags.Protecttheendangerdanimals..Whatshouldwedotosavetheearth(protecttheenvironment)?

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it’simportanttoIhopethatEnjoythemusicwhilewritingHowbeautifulGroupwork:theadvicetoallthepeopleDearLadiesandGentlemen:Howisitgoing?I'mwritingtosayabouthowtosavetheearth.Thereissomuchpollutionthattheearthisbecomingaterribleplacetolive.Whatshouldwedowiththeproblem?

First,Wecancollectwastepaperorotherwastethings.Next,Weshouldplantmoretreesandweshouldstopthosefactoriesfrompouringwastewaterintorivers,lakesandfields.Then,Weshouldn’tleaverubbisheverywhereandSpitinpublicplaces.Wemustn’tpicktheflowersorsteponthegrassinpublic.Turnoffthelightwhenyouleavetheroom.Turnofftheshowerwhenyouwashyourhair.Inaword,It’sourdutytokeepourneighborhoodcleanandtidy.Let’sdoourbesttochangeourhometoabiggarden.Yours