读后续写-捡手机 课件-2024届高考英语一轮复习

读后续写——捡手机Oneafternoonafterschool,Maryandherbrother,Keith,wereeatingatacafeneartheirhome.Thatafternoon,theyhadtosharetheirtablewithanotherperson.Thatpersonwasayoungladyinhertwenties.Aftereating,shewenttotherestroom.Withoutrealizing,shehadleftherhandphoneonthetable.Fiveminuteslater,shecameoutandwalkedoutofthecafewithoutlookingback.Marysawthehandphoneonthetable.ShequicklytoldKeith,“Keith,thegirlleftherhandphonebehind.”Keithlookedatthehandphone,Ittookhisbreathaway.Itwasoneofthelatestmodelsonthemarket.Keithhadalwayswantedahandphone.Buthisparentshadtoldhim,“Youdon’tneedone.Youcanalwaysusethehousephone.”Hestaredatitforsomeminutes.Thenhesaidslowly,pausingoneveryword,“Iwanttotakethehandphone.”Marycouldnotbelieveherears.Shemerelystaredatherbrother,“Youcan’t!Whatiftheownercomestolookforit?”Havingmadethedecision,Keithquicklygrabbedthehandphoneandputitinhisschoolbag.Then,hetookMary’shandandledheroutofthecafequickly.Oncebackhome,Keithlockedhishousedoorwithtremblinghands.Insidehisroom,hetookoutthebeauty.Oh,helikeditsomuch.Nowhehadhisownhandphone.Soon,hewaspolishingithappily.ButMarytoldhim,“Keith,youcannotkeepthehandphone.WhatwillyoutellFatheraboutthis?Hewillaskyouhowyougotthehandphone.”Keithsaidquickly,“Iwillsayafriendlentittome.”Marysaid,“Nowyouarelyingtoo.”Ohdear!WhenhadKeithturnedsodishonest?ThenMarysawahousephonenumberontheplasticcoverofthehandphone,“Thisisthegirl’sphonenumber.Whydon’twejustcallthisnumber?Wewilltalktoherandaskhertocomeandtakebackherhandphone.”Shewastryingtotalksomesenseintohim.【写作指导】前文概述：Mary和她的弟弟在餐馆就餐时，看到了一个被忘在餐桌上的手机，此时机主已经离开。她的弟弟一直想要一部手机，便不听Mary的劝说，将手机带回了家，并准备撒谎说是朋友借给他的。Mary看到了机主的联系电话，准备和机主联系。续写思路：根据续写第一段的首句

“Thatnight,Keithturnedoverinbedfromtimetotime”可确定第一段的写作思路—弟弟Keith为何难以入睡?他想到了什么?对拿走机主手机的事，是否感到愧疚？最后他是否做出了归还手机的决定？根据续写第二段的首句

“Marywasveryhappytohearthat”可确定第二段的写作思路—姐姐Mary为何高兴？他们联系上机主了吗？机主有何反应？他们是怎样归还手机的？通过这件事，他们有何感受？Thatnight,Keithturnedoverinbedfromtimetotime.Hehaddifficultysleeping,uncertainaboutwhatheshoulddo.Ofcourse,helikedthenewhandphone.However,hewasfeelingsorryfortheowner.Whenhethoughthowsadtheyoungladywouldbeatthelossofherhandphone,hewasfullofguiltandshame.Thenextmorning,afteralongandrestlessnight,hewasdeterminedtoreturnthehandphonetotheowner.Afterschool,hetoldMary,“Iamgoingtophonetheowner.”Marywasveryhappytohearthat.Backhome,theyphonedtheowner’shousephone.Agirlansweredthephone.Keithasked,“Areyoutheownerofthehandphone?I’mKeith.Ihaveyourhandphone.Canyoucomeandgetit?”Thegirlreplied“Yes”excitedly,expressinghergratituderepeatedly.Tenminuteslater,shewasatthesamecafetomeetKeith.Handingbackthehandphonetoherandseeinghersmilehappily,Keithrealizedthathonestywasindeedthebestpolicy.1.字数，每段最多空2行2.书写，大小适中，每行10-11个单词左右，高度占一半，单词尽量不要跨行3.人称，绝不能出现第1人称和第2人称，“我和姐姐去还手机”4.情绪ShewipedawayKeith'stearsonhischeeksandhuggedhim.Themorehethought,themorehefeltworried.worried-uneasy5.中式英语/时态Theeducationhehadaccepteddidn'tallowhekeepthishandphone.However,Mary'swordssuroundednearhisears.Thenhelostsleepy.付

失眠Hefailedtofallasleep.Hedidn'twanttobeathiefpeople.时people多余ShehuggedKeithtightedly.时tightedly-tightlyYoualwayswanttohaveahandphone.Now,youhave.师ThesewordsMarrysaidappearedinhisheartandmind.杜...toldhissisterhewillcalltheladyonnumbers.孙Thehandphonewasnotbelongtohim.马was改为didHeknewexactlythehandphonewasnotbelongingtohim.秦正确Heknewexactlythehandphonedidn'tbelongtohim.Ifinditsolongtime.袁Thegirlthankstothemalot.袁thanksb.forsth....whichmadebothofushappily.袁happily-happyIffatherknewthisthing,hewillbeveryangry.李knew,will中式英语/时态6.生搬硬套Atthesametime,theyhadcometoappreciatehonestywasofgreatsignificancforpersonalgrowthanddeveleopment.7.单词拼写Keithseemedalittleshame,hewalkedasidethehousephonesliently.冯shame-shamefulaside-intosliently-silentlyHestaredthisphoneandseemedalittlehesitantion.冯stareat,hesitantion-hesitationHedetermindedtosleep,buthecouldn'tsleep.周determine-determined

Hetriedtocolsedhiseyestosleepbutitnotdid.付colsed-closedKeith'sfaceturnedread.姚read-redInspiringbyyourwords,Ilearntmydeedwaswrony.

姚Inspiring-Inspiredwrony-wrongIwasproundofyou.苏pround-proudThegirlcametothierhome....苏thier-theirKeithexpressedhisguityandsaidsorrytothegirlwitharealheart.周guity-guiltyreal-sincereTheyoungladyisverygreatfulandcometotakebackherphone.沈greatful-grateful8.词性Iwillbackittoyouatthecafe.冯，李，马Marysaidangryagain.angry-angrily

IfIdon'tgivethephonebacktothegirl,whatwillhappened?”Keithsaidtohimself.

happened-happenAsenseofgulitywasfullofhisheart.付TheladyexpressedhergratefultoKeith.何

grateful-gratitudeThinkingthis,asenseofguiltysweptoverhim.张guilty-guilt非谓语错Afloodofnervousandscarecreepsuponhim.

张nervous-nervousness/uneasyHeopenedhiseyeswithnervous.袁

nervous-nervousness正确Hewasfullofguiltandshame.Afloodof

nervousandscarecreepsuponhim.nervous-nervousnessTheymustfeeldisappoint/fearforhim.disappoint-disappointedfear-scared/worried/fightenedEvenhewilllosehisfriends.will-wouldThereweretwopeoplearguinginhismind.Apersonthought...Theotherthought...正确Hewasoverwhelmedbyamixtureofguiltandexcitement.9.重复“shouldIsenditback?”heaskedhimself.Soon,henodded,“Imustsenditback.”10.无关紧要的信息Keithputoutthephone.Sotheypromisedtheycalltheplasticcoverofthehandphonetomorrow.Thensittingonthechairsinthecafe,MayandKeithwaitedfortheladywithoutknowingwhatwouldhappen.11.简单错误Hehuggedhetightly.司he-himstayhonesty

honesty-honestSeeingthehandphone,theexcitedlooksandsmileonKeith'sfacewasfadedaway.侯

was删除Keithlookedthehandphonealongtime.杨

alongtime前加forHewashestitateanddon'tknowwhattodo.杨hesitate-hesitantIt'sright?

马Isitright?/AmIright?Keithrealizethevaluableofhonesty.马valuable-valueUndoubtly,...

马UndoubtedlyAfterminutes,theladycameandexpressedherthankforthem.马thank-thanksfor-toHetookadeterminationtogiveitback....李下定决心做某事Thankyouforyoupickupmyphone.Hestoodupwalkedwithgreatanxious.王anxious-anxietyHewasafraidofbeingfindhewaslying.赵find-foundedHebluckuphiscouragetofindMary.赵bluck-pluck12.词选错Themomentheimagedthesencethathisfatherfoundhimstealingthehandphone,hewasfrightenedasif...高，苏imaged-imaginedsence-scenceNextmorning,KeithsaidhisideatoMarry.杜said-toldHesaidtoMaryabouttheideayesterday.“WhenIlostmyhandphone,Icouldn'tfeelgood.”张when-if13.人物的心理活动和感情不符合常识，不够自然捡了个手机，纠结了半天，哭着找姐姐，很愧疚。把手机还给失主，失主说：“我原谅你了，不会因为你最初没有把手机还给我而生气。”Iknowyouarelowspirits,becauseyouareagoodboy.何Everyoneshouldkeepahonestheart.侯Afterthephonebelongedtothegirl,shetooksomefreshfruitandcashforthem.杜Theladysaidit'snothingaslongashelearntfromhismistakewithherwarmvoice.MaryandKeithmakeanapologytothelady.Marynumberedthephoneandthenavoiceofnervoussounded,“Didyoupickedupmyphoneatacafeyesterday?”Mary'sheartsankandshetookadeepbreathtoreact.anhonestboyapeople,people表“民族”好的表达：SobeautifulthehandphoneisthatKeithdidn'twanttogiveitbacktotheyounglady.——郭雅婷Fromtheexperience,Keithhascometoappreciatethesignificanceofhonestyandselflessness.——郭雅婷Hewouldbeblamed...——郭雅婷Keithwasstuckinadelimma.——郭雅婷Thenextmorning,thesunlightlightenedKeith'sroomandhisface.Hedecidedtogiveback...——周安然Awaveofsadnesssweptoverhim.——赵子龙Shesaidwithagentlevoice;“Iknowyouareahonestboy,youwon'tmakemedown.”赵晨宇a-anmake-let1.Fromthisexperience,Keithlearnedthathonestyissecondtonone.

——杨悦2.A