2024届高考英语二轮写作复习第二讲：书面表达提升素材

第二讲：书面表达提升英语书面表达的本质：把话说清楚！！！！！！！！大家的问题：1、想不出内容2、好不容易想出来内容，句子造不出来3、好不容易造出句子，结果错误百出4、好不容易句子造对，结果非常低幼5、好不容易句子升级，结果非常生硬6、好不容易把句子造自然，前后没衔接7、好不容易前后有了衔接，结果整篇文章没结构…..最难的两件事：1、想出简单/好写的内容！2、造出简单/正确的句子！【两遍翻译法】Step1：把你看到的英语，逐句翻译成汉语。【阅读】Step2：把你翻出的汉语，逐句翻译回英语。【写作】Step3：用你写出的英语，和原文逐词比较。【语法】Ienteredthehotelmanager'sofficeandsatdown.Ihadjustlost$50andIfeltveryupset.'Ileftthemoneyinmyroom,'Isaid,'andit'snottherenow.'Themanagerwassympathetic,buthecoulddonothing.'Everyone'slosingmoneythesedays,'hesaid.Ienteredthehotelmanager’sofficeandsatdown.Ihadjustlost$50,andIfeltveryupset.“Ileftthemoneyinmyroom,anditwasn’ttherenow.”Thismanagerwassympathetic,buthecoulddonothing.”Everyone’slosingmoneythesedays.”hesaid.Ienteredthehotelmanager'soffice.Ihadjustlost50dollarsandfeltveryupset.“Ileftthemoneyinmyroom”Isaid,“andit'snottherenow.”Themanagerwassympathetic,buthecoulddonothing."Everyoneislosingmoneythesedays"hesaid.我进入酒店经理的办公室坐下来。我刚丢了50美元，感觉很upset。我把钱留在我的房间里，然后现在它不在了。这个经理是sympathetic，但是他什么都做不了。“这几天每个人都丢钱”他说。Ienteredthehotelmanager’soffice.Ihadjustlost$50andIfeltveryupset.“Ileftthemoneyinmyroom,anditisnottherenow.”Themanagerwassympathetic,buthecoulddonothing.“Everyoneislosingmoneythesedays”,hesaid.（昨天）我看了场电影，它特别精彩。然后，我买了个彩票，并且赢了20块钱，这件事儿让我高兴。Yesterday,Iwatchedamovie,whichwaswonderful.Then,Iboughtalotteryandwon20yuan,whichmademehappy.1、要有主语2、要有连词3、要用代词4、用词要精确Ienteredthehotelmanager’sroomandsatdown.Ihadjustlost50dollarsandIfeltupsetnow.Ileftmymoneyinmyroom,anditisnotherenow.Themanagerwassympathetic,buthecoulddonothing.“Everyoneislosingmoneythesedays.”Hestarted(tocomplain)(aboutthiswickedworld)butwasinterrupted(byaknock)(atthedoor).Agirlcameinandputanenvelopeonhisdesk.Itcontained$50.'Ifoundthisoutsidethisgentleman'sroom,'shesaid.'Well,'Isaidtothemanager,'thereisstillsomehonestyinthisworld!'他开始去抱怨关于这个wicked的世界，但是被在门上的一个敲击interrupt。一个女孩儿进来然后放一个envelope在他的桌子上。它contain50美元。“我发现这个在这个绅士的屋子外面，”她说。“好吧，”我说对着这个经理，“在这个世界上，仍然有一些诚实honesty。”Hestartedtocomplainaboutthewickedworld,butwasinterruptedbyaknockatthedoor.Agirlcameinandputanenvelopeonhisdesk,whichcontained$50.‘Ifoundthisoutsidethisgentleman’sroom’.shesaid‘well,’Isaidtothemanager,‘thereisstillsomehonestyintheworld.’Hestartedtocomplainaboutthiswickedworld,butwasinterruptedbyaknockatthedoor.Itcontained$50.’Ifoundthisoutsidethisgentleman’sroom,’shesaid.’Well,’Isaidtothemanager,’there’sstillsomehonestyinthisworld.’Hestartedtocomplainaboutthiswickedworldbutwasinterruptedbyaknockatthedoor.Agirlcameinandputanenvelopeonhisdesk.Itcontained50dollars.‘Ifoundthisoutsidethisgentleman’sroom,’shesaid.‘Well’,Isaidtothemanager,‘thereisstillsomehonestyintheworld.’ Peoplearenotsohonestastheyoncewere.Thetemptationtostealisgreaterthaneverbefore--especiallyinlargeshops.Adetectiverecentlywatchedawell-dressedwomanwhoalwayswentintoalargestoreonMondaymornings.人们不如此诚实了，像他们曾经。这种去steal的temptation是更大的比everbefore–特别在大商店里。一个detective最近盯上了一个well-dressed女人，她总是去进入一个大商场在星期一。OneMonday,therewerefewerpeopleintheshopthanusualwhenthewomancamein,soitwaseasierforthedetectivetowatchher.Thewomanfirstboughtafewsmallarticles.Afteralittletime,shechoseoneofthemostexpensivedressesintheshopandhandedittoanassistantwhowrappeditupforherasquicklyaspossible.一个星期一，那儿有更少的人在这商店比平时，当这个女人进入的时候。所以，侦探更容易盯着她（这件事儿是更容易的，什么事儿呢？对侦探来说，去盯着她）。这个女人先买了一些小articles.在一点儿时间之后，她选择了最昂贵的衣服中的一件在这个商店里，然后递它给一个店员，她wrap它up为她，尽可能地快。OneMonday,therewerefewerpeopleintheshopthanusualwhenthiswomancamein.So,itwaseasierforthedetectivetowatchher.Thewomanfirstboughtafewsmallarticles.Afteralittletime,shechoseoneofthemostexpensivedressesintheshopandhandedittoanassistant,whowrappeditupforherassoonaspossibleThenthewomansimplytooktheparcelandwalkedoutoftheshopwithoutpaying.Whenshewasarrested,thedetectivefoundoutthattheshopassistantwasherdaughter.Thegirl'gave'hermotherafreedressonceaweek!然后这个女人仅仅拿着这个parcel然后走出这个商店没有付钱。当她被arrest的时候，这个detective发现这个店员是她的女儿。这个女孩儿“给”她妈妈一件免费的衣服每周一次。Thenthewomansimplytooktheparcelandwalkedoutoftheshopwithoutpaying.Whenshewasarrested,thedetectivefoundoutthattheshopassistantwasherdaughter.ThegirlgavehermotherafreedressonceaweekThenthewomansimplytooktheparcelandwalkedoutoftheshopwithoutpaying.Whenshewasarrested，thedetectivefoundtheshopassistantwasherdaughter.Thegirl“gave”hermotherafreedressonceaweek.Thenthewomansimpletookthisparcelandwalkedoutoftheshopwithoutpaying.Whenshewasarrested,thedetectivefoundtheshopassistantwasherdaughter.Thegirl‘gave’hermomafreedressonceaweek.OneMonday,therewerefewerpeopleintheshopthanusualwhenthewomancamein,soitwaseasierforthedetectivetowatchher.Thewomanfirstboughtafewsmallarticles.Afteralittletime,shechoseoneofthemostexpensivedressesintheshopandhandeditt