大学英语四级考试写作必备模板课件

大学英语四级考试写作必备模板大学英语四级考试写作必备模板大学英语四级考试写作必备模板内容提要四级写作应达到的水平四级作文评分标准作文条理性及相关句式写作模板大学英语四级考试写作必备模板大学英语四级考试写作必备模板大学1内容提要四级写作应达到的水平四级作文评分标准作文条理性及相关句式写作模板内容提要四级写作应达到的水平2写作一般要求我能填写常见表格如注册表、申请表、问卷调查表等。我能写给或回复他人祝贺卡、生日卡、邀请信、便条、短信、通知等。我能写出简单的指示语、个人广告、社团海报、个人简历等。我能简要地描述个人经历、发生的事件、读过的故事、观看的影片、喜怒哀乐等情感，写出或回答个人或公司的信函、电子邮件、传真等。我能就一定话题或提纲在30分钟内写出不少于120词的短文，内容基本完整、中心思想明确、用词恰当、语意连贯。我能在一般写作或应用文写作中恰当使用相应的写作技能。写作一般要求3评分标准2％：不切题。条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎。5％：基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。8％：基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11％：切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14％：切题。表达思想清楚、文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分。字数不足以应酌情扣分：（1）如题目中给出主题句、起始句、结束句，均不得计入所写字数。（2）只写一段者：0~4％；只写两段者：0~9％。（指规定三段的作文）评分标准2％：不切题。条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎。4条理性作文是主观性题，要想得高分我们必须把评卷老师考虑进去。评卷老师的时间很短（每份卷子的作文只有一两分钟就要阅完），用firstofall,second,to

begin

with,after

that,

next,

moreimportant,at

last等短语，可以使阅卷老师一眼就看出你作文的条理性。条理性作文是主观性题，要想得高分我们必须把评卷老师考虑进去。5增加条理性的常用句式表层次,递进:Furthermore,…What’s

more,…Also…Next,…Besides,…Moreover,…In

addition

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to…Thus,……isdue

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this

account,…Since/as…As

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result,

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summary,

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a

word,

…In

conclusion,

…In

short,

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A，B．．．There

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the

fact

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one

can

deny

the

fact

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This

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phenomenon

that

many

people

are

interested

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take

…

as

an

example,…One

example

is…

Another

example

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example,…增加条理性的常用句式表举例：11增加条理性的常用句式其他：AsfarasIknow据我所知Asfaras...isconcerned就……而论Asthesayinggoes俗话说Ithasbeenprovedthat...已经证明Itisestimatedthat...据估计Itisbelievedthat...人们相信Itisconsideredthat...大家认为Itishopedthat...人们希望Thereforeweshouldrealizethat...因此我们应当明白增加条理性的常用句式其他：12Aboveall最重要的是Afterall毕竟Finally,wehopethat...最后，我们希望Itmaybeconfirmedthat...可以肯定Therefore,wehavethereasontobelievethat因此，我们有理由相信Aboveall最重要的是13常用闪光高分词认为，主张argue/claim/believe/maintain/holdthat…考虑take…intoconsideration;consider;ponder;thinkover;reflecton/upon下结论，断定cometotheconclusion;arriveattheconclusion;drawtheconclusion;conclude;judge获得，赢得，取得

acquire,obtain,attain,reap,gain,procure常用闪光高分词认为，主张14支持，赞成

approveof,infavorof,uphold,standbyone’sside,agreewith提倡advocate,recommend反对，抵制

oppose,objectto,beagainst,resist重大的，有决定性的

profound,significant,eventful,vital,crucial,critical,decisive运用，使用

optimize,makefull/bestuseof,employ,utilize,apply支持，赞成15当前，目前

nowadays,atpresent,currently,presently表达，说

voice,convey,express,deliver,communicate适应

beadaptedto,beaccustomedto,beadjustedto阻碍，阻止

hinder,curb,hamper,restrain,prevent,wardoff,avoid当前，目前16好处，优点advantage,merit,benefit坏处，缺点

disadvantage,defect,flaw,drawback,deficiency参加

participatein,takepartin,attend,goinfor,engagein集中精力于，专心于

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attemptto,makeeffortsto,endeavorto,manageto进步，成就，成绩

advancement,achievement,accomplishment,feat,fulfillment除……外

apartfrom,inadditionto,alongwith开展，实施，做

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lay/placeemphasison,attachemphasisto,stresson,highlight优秀的

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achieve,accomplish,fulfill,complete把……看作，当作

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cherish,treasure,attachimportanceto完全的，彻底的

sheer,utter,thorough解释

accountfor,illustrate,clarify起作用

playarole/partin,perform,function,serve证实，证明

testify,confirm,verify,turnout事实上

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pointout,indicate,demonstrate,reflect,manifest缩短，减少

shorten,cutdown减少，削弱

reduce,decrease,diminish,lessen方法，手段

method,approach,means,measure,mode提高

improve,increase,enhance,raise,elevate显示，表明21建立

build,setup,putup,found,establish,construct遭受

sufferfrom,besubjectedto,encounter在我看来，就我而言

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solve,resolve,settle,dealwith,copewith,manage,workon必要的，不可缺少的

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解决问题型

写作模板对立观点型/辩论型25对立观点型/辩论型A．一个校园或社会现象/问题B．有人认为X

是好事，赞成X，

为什么？有人认为X

是坏事，

反对X，为什么？C．我的看法。

对立观点型/辩论型26对立观点型/辩论型

Nowadays,

moreandmorepeoplebecomeconcernedaboutthe

social/economic/environmental

…problem/phenomenonthat出现的现象或问题.

(X

has

increasingly

become

a

common

concern

of

the

public./Withthedevelopmentofsociety,moreandmoreXhavecomeintobeing.)说明这种现象的情况或举例子.Thereisahotdebategoingonarguingwhethertheyaregoodforthepublicornot(,especiallyforcollegestudents).Eachcoinhastwosides.Asforsuchaquestion,differentpeopleholddifferentopinions.Some

believethat支持X

的第一个原因。(Ontheonehand,…)They

also

argue

that

支持X

的另一个原因。However,

thereisanoppositevoice,whichclaimthat反对X

的第一个理由.

(Ontheotherhand,…)They

firmly

point

out

that

反对X

的第二个理由.AsfarasI’mconcerned,Iholdthebeliefthat

the

advantages

of

X

overweigh

the

disadvantages,because说明原因.Isuggestweshould建议.对立观点型/辩论型Nowadays27对立观点型/辩论型e.g.2008.6.真题Directions:

For

this

part,

you

are

allowed

thirty

minutes

to

write

a

composition

on

the

topic

Recreational

activities.

You

should

write

at

least

120

words

and

you

should

base

your

composition

on

the

outline

(given

in

Chinese)

below:1.

娱乐活动多种多样2.

娱乐活动可以使人们受益，也可能有危害性3.

作为大学生我们的看法对立观点型/辩论型e.g.2008.6.真题28对立观点型/辩论型范文：

With

the

dramatic

development

of

society

and

theimprovementofpeople’s

living

standard,

moreandmore

recreational

activities

arecoming

into

being.

Some

peoplemay

go

to

KTV

with

their

friends

on

weekends

to

get

relaxed

after

fivedays

intense

work.

Meanwhile,

others

might

choose

to

surf

the

internet

to

kill

time

and

appreciate

vast

resources

on

the

internet.Everything

has

two

sides

just

like

a

coin,

and

entertainment

is

no

exception.

Differentpeopleholddifferentopinionsonrecreationalactivities.On

the

one

hand,

amusement

activities

can

enrich

people’s

livesandbroaden

people’s

horizons.

On

the

other

hand,

somepeoplemaywastetheirtime

if

they

fail

to

approach

recreation

properly.

As

far

as

college

students

are

concerned,

Iholdthebeliefthat

the

advantages

of

recreationalactivitiesoverweigh

the

disadvantages,becausewe

can

take

advantage

of

the

benefits

torelaxourselvesandlearnmanythingsoutofschool.

Weshouldalwayskeepthefollowingwordsinmind:

it

is

essential

to

be

self-disciplined

and

stayawayfromthenegative

influencesfromrecreationalactivities.对立观点型/辩论型范文：29对立观点型/辩论型2009.6.真题Freeadmissiontomuseums1.越来越多的博物馆免费开放的目的是什么?2.也会带来一些问题3.你的看法对立观点型/辩论型2009.6.真题302006年12月英语四级作文1、许多人喜欢在除夕夜观看春节晚会；2、但有些人提出取消春节晚会；3、我的看法

2006年12月英语四级作文31说明原因型

A.出现的现象B.一些人这样做的原因；另一些人这样做的原因；还有一部分人这样做的原因C.我的看法/这种现象造成的结果说明原因型A.出现的现象32说明原因型Nowadays,

moreandmorepeoplebecomeconcernedaboutthe

social/economic/environmental

…problem/phenomenonthat出现的现象或问题.

(X

has

increasingly

become

a

common

concern

of

the

public.)说明这种现象的情况或举例子.However，asforthereasonswhypeople…,differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Somepeople…inorderto….Somepeoplewantto…sothat….Andtheothershavethepurposeof…AsfarasIamconcerned,effectivemeasuresshouldbetakento….SoIsuggest给出建议./Thisphenomenonwillleadto…造成什么结果.Anotherresultis…说明原因型Nowadays,

mo33说明原因型e.g.2007.12.真题WhatElectivesToChoose1.各学校开了各种各样的选修课2.学生选课有不同的原因3.就我而言说明原因型e.g.2007.12.真题34说明原因型WiththereformofChinesehighereducation,moreandmorecollegesanduniversitiesputanemphasisonnurturingstudents’practicalabilities.Asaresult,avarietyofelectivecoursesareavailableforcollegestudentsofallmajors.Certainly,asforstudents’reasonstochoosetheirownelectives,differentstudentshavedifferentopinions.Somestudentschoosetheelectivesinordertodeveloppracticalskills,whicharetheessentialpartofcollegeeducation,andtherefore,coursesoncomputerscience,marketing,andfinancearehighlypreferred.Ontheotherhand,othersmaythinkthatliberaleducationandelectivesconcerningliterature,history,andphilosophyarethemostwelcomed.AsfarasI’mconcerned,universityisnotaplaceforsurvivalskills,butapalaceofknowledgeandcriticalreasoning.Althoughmymajorischemistry,theelectivesIattendmostfrequentlyareEnglishliterature,anIntroductiontoClassicMusic,andDifferentSchoolsofWesternPainting.Theyreallybroadenmyhorizon.说明原因型Withthere35说明原因型2010.6.真题DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpelling1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写2.出现这种情况的原因3.这种现象导致的结果说明原因型2010.6.真题36解决问题型

A.出现了什么现象，造成了问题一、二、三B.解决的途径一、二、三C.我的途径解决问题型A.出现了什么现象，造成了问题一、二、三37解决问题型Nowadays,

X

has

increasingly

become

a

common

concern

of

the

public,anditmightleadtosomeproblems.Oneobviousproblemisthat问题1.问题2isanotherproblem.Theworstresultmaybe问题3.However,theproblemscanbedealtwithinmanydifferentways.

Themostcommonwayis途径1.

Anotherwayis途径2.

Thereisstillthethirdchoicethat途径3.

Asforme,Iwouldliketo……,because……Therefore,Ichooseto……解决问题型Nowadays,

X

h382008年12月英语四级作文

LimitingtheUseofDisposalBags

1.一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用

2.造成的问题

3.限制使用塑的意义2008年12月英语四级作文392009年6月英语四级作文

Freeadmissiontomuseums越来越多的博物馆免费开放的目的是什么?也会带来一些问题你的看法2009年6月英语四级作文40解决问题型e.g.2000.1.真题HowIFinanceMyCollegeEducation?Direction:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHowIFinanceMyCollegeEducation?Youshouldwriteatleast100words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:1.

上大学的费用可以通过多种途径解决2.

哪种途径适合我(说明理由)解决问题型e.g.2000.1.真题41解决问题型Everyyear,thousandsofyoungmenenteruniversitiesandcolleges.Ithasbeenaproblemforsomestudentsandtheirfamiliestofinancetheircollegeeducation.Infact,theproblemcanbedealtwithinmanyways.Themostcommonwayistogetallthemoneyfromtheparents.Iftheirparentscan’taffordthefees,studentscanapplyforaloanfromthebank.Thereisstillanotherway.Studentscanfinancetheireducationbydoingsomepart-timejobsintheirsparetime.Asforme,myparentscanpaythegreaterpartofthefeesforme.So,Iwon’thaveaheavyfinancialburden,andIcanfocusonmystudy.Iwouldliketopaytherestofthemoneybydoingapart-timejob,becausealthoughmyparentsareabletopayallthetuition,Istillwanttoknowmoreaboutsocietythroughmyownworkingexperience.

Therefore,Ichoosethiswaytofinancemycollegeeducation.解决问题型Everyyear,t42图表式作文

A.说明图标内容和显示的变化B．说明原因一二三C．预测发展趋势/有什么困难问题，怎么解决图表式作文A.说明图标内容和显示的变化43图表式作文

第一句先说明主题是什么。Readingthischart,wecanfindthat/It

is

obvious

in

the

graph/table

that

the

rate/number/amount

of

Y

has

gone

up/grown/fallen/dropped

considerably

in

recent

years

(as

X

varies).

At

the

point

of

X1,

Y

reaches

its

peak

value

of

…(多少).

What

is

the

reason

for

this

change?

Mainly

there

are

…

(多少)reasons

behind

the

situation

reflected

in

the

graph/table.

First

of

all,

…playanimportantrolein…(第一个原因).

Also,…leadsto…(第二个原因).

Besides,

…enables…to…(第三个原因).

From

the

above

discussions,

we

have

enough

reason

to

predict

what

will

happen

in

the

near

future.

The

trend

described

in

the

graph/table

will

continue

for

quite

a

long

time

(if

necessary

measures

are

not

taken括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势)./Therearesomeproblems/difficultiesin……Forexample,……Soweshould……图表式作文第一句先说明主题是什么。44图表式作文

2002.6真题Directions:ForthispartyouareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicStudentUseofComputers.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandbase

yourcompositionontheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.上图(图略)所示为1990年、1995年、2002年某校大学生事业计算机的情况,请描述其变化

2.请说明发生这些变化的原因（可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以说明）

3.你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题图表式作文2002.6真题45图表式作文

Studentstendtousecomputersmoreandmorenowadays.

Readingthischart,wecanfindthattheaveragenumberofhoursastudentspendsonthecomputerperweekhasincreasedsharply.In1990,ithaslessthan2hours;andin1995,itincreasedtoalmost4hours,andin2000,thenumbersoaredto20hours.Obviouslycomputersarebecomingmoreandmorepopular.Mainlytherearethreereasonsforthis.Firstofall,computersplayanimportantroleinmanyaspectsoflife.Also,fastdevelopmentoftheInternetleadstogreaterdemandsforusingcomputers.WecaneasilycontactwithfriendsinremoteplacesthroughtheInternet.Besides,thepriceofcomputersaregettinglowerandlower,whichenablesmorestudentstoaffordthem.However,therearesomeproblems.Forexample,somestudentsspendtoomuchtimeinplayingcomputergamesandforgettostudy.Soweshouldbalancethetimebetweenusingcomputersandstudying.Anyhow,wewillbenefitalotfromcomputersaslongasweusethemproperly.图表式作文Studentste46论证句式表示原因表示好处表示坏处表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能表示措施表示变化论证句式表示原因47表示原因There

are

three

reasons

for…．The

reasons

for

…

are

as

follows．The

reason

for

…

is

that．．．表示原因Therearethreereasonsf48表示好处It

has

the

following

advantages．It

does

us

a

lot

of

good．It

benefits

us

quite

a

lot．It

is

beneficial

to

us．Ithasapositiveeffect.表示好处Ithasthefollowingadva49表示坏处It

has

more

disadvantages

than

advantages．It

does

us

much

harm．It

is

harmfulto

us．Ithassomenegativeeffects.

表示坏处Ithasmoredisadvantages50表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能It

is

important（necessary，difficult，convenient，possible）for

sb．to

do

sth．We

think

it

important（necessary，difficult，convenient，possible）to

do

sth．It

plays

an

important

role

in

our

life．表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能Itisimporta51表示措施We

should

take

some

effective

measures．We

should

try

our

best

to

overcome（conquer）the

difficulties．We

should

do

our

utmost

in

doing

sth．We

should

solve

the

problems

that

we

are

confrontedwith．表示措施Weshouldtakesomeeffec52表示变化Some

changes

have

taken

place

in

the

past

five

years．A

great

change

will

certainly

appearin

the

world’s

communications．The

computer

has

brought

about

many

changes

in

education．表示变化Somechangeshavetakenp532009年6月英语四级作文Freeadmissiontomuseums1.越来越多的博物馆免费开放的目的是什么?2.也会带来一些问题3.你的看法2009年6月英语四级作文54FreeAdmissiontoMuseums(满分版)

Nowadays,anincreasingnumberofmuseumsareadmission-freetovisitorshomeandabroad.Thehiddenreasonbehindthisisnothardtoanalyzeasthere’sagrowingawarenessoftheauthoritiesregardingtheurgencyofpopularizationofculture,knowledgeandhistorywitheveryaveragepersoninoursociety.Onlywithfreeaccesstothislive‘database’,canmostpeoplefullyenjoywhatmuseumscouldofferthem.

However,freeadmissiontomuseumsmightleadtosomesocialproblemsaswell.Themostobviousproblemisthatitmightgivemuseumsaveryheavyeconomicburdenwhichdirectlyimpedesthesustainabledevelopmentoftheseorganizations.Asaresult,ourgovernmenthastoworkoutoth