2023学年完整公开课版中考写作

中考专题WritingiangjunJinghaiQiHui学习目标：1学会作文审题，根据写作要求构建文章结构。（重点）2能够根据要求列出关键词，学会连词成句,组句成篇。（难点，考点）3培养孩子找到更有生命意义的事。（情感目标）Dailytranslation随着我们的长大，我们喜欢各种各样的课后活动。Aswegrow,welieallindsofafter-schoolactivities2我们应该参加更多有意义的活动。Weshoudtaeoremeaningfulactivities3在过去，我常常踢足球。我认为那非常有趣。Inthepast,IusedtoplaysoccerIthoughtitwasinteresting4现在，我想成为一名志愿者去帮助需要帮助的人。Now,IwanttobeavolunteertohelpthepeopleinneedWarm-upWhatindsofafter-schoolactivitiesdoyouoftendoWhyesIt’shealthyIt’srelaingIt’sinterestingIt’secitingesIt’secitingWatch,watch,watchTVIt’sinterestingListen,listen,listentomusicIt’srelaingRun,run,runafterschoolIt’shealthyHeleaningful…Let’schant

实战演练：随着年龄的增长，我们的课外活动领域会扩大，关注点也会增多。你们学校的EnglishNewsletter正在以MyAfter-schoolActivities为题举行征文活动，请根据下列表格提示的内容用英语写一篇征文。活动关注点以前1．看电视2.……自己现在1.和家长交流2.做志愿者3.……家庭，……

我们在成长，我们应该……要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3）词数：80词左右4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。我们的写作步骤：第一步:审清题意，定“基调”第二步:列出写作提纲第三步：抓住要点，列关键词第四步：扩词，连词成句第五步：集句成段，组段成篇,善用连接词第六步：修改文章，抄写规范、卷面整洁第一步:审清题意，定“基调”认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、时态、结构、字数、提示要点和补充信息具体做法：用红色笔勾画并标注展随着年龄的增长，我们的课外活动领域会扩大，关注点也会增多。你们学校的EnglishNewsletter正在以MyAfter-schoolActivities为题举行征文活动，请根据下列表格提示的内容用英语写一篇征文。要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3）词数：80词左右4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。主题人称体裁结构时态字数已知信息未知信息对象一般现在时、一般过去时我们在成长，我们应该……家庭，……现在1和家长交流2做志愿者3……自己以前1．看电视2……关注点活动第二步：列出写作提纲（Outline）。具体做法：根据段落整理写作要点不要遗漏要点！Introduction概括，点明主题，引起下文凤头我的开头：

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Conclusion（豹尾）inthepastnowWriteanoutline1看电视2……和家长交流做志愿者------Youropinions------2------抓要点列关键词，定句Listsomeeywordsaboutafter-schoolactivitiesintheeeywordsaboutafter-schoolactivitiesnoweeywordsaboutopinionsPhrases:________________________________________________________________________

第三步：抓住要点，列关键词Nowchatwithparents,worasavolunteerIntheesMeaningful,maeourworldbetterMaesentenceswiththeeywordsaboutaesentenceswiththeeywordsaboutaesentenceswiththeeywordsaboutyouropinionsSentences:________________________________________________________________________________第四步：扩词，连词成句IoftenwatchedTVandsesIchatwithmyparentsAlsoIworasavolunteertohelppeopleinneedWeshoulddomoremeaningfulafter-schoolactivitiestoimaeourworldbetter

Einutes第五步：集句成段，组段成篇,善用连接词连接词表并列and,also,too,aswell,aswellas,both…and…,notonly…butalso…,either…or…,neither…nor,inaddition(另外),besides(而且),What’smore(而且),表对比but,however,yet,although,though,while,表条件if,unless表原因because,becauseof,for,since,as,

表结果so,therefore,asaresult,so…that,such…that表说明like,suchas,forexample

表强调surely,certainly,ofcourse,

表顺序first(ly),second(ly),…firstofall,then,next,afterwards,finally表总结inaword,inall,inmyopinion(以我之见)表目的inorderto,sothat

第六步：修改文章，抄写规范、卷面整洁范文展示MyAfter-schoolActivitiesAswegrow,bothourafter-schoolactivitiesandwhatwecareaboutarebecomingmoreandmoreIntheesAllIcaredaboutwasmyselfinsteadofanyoneelseHowever,withthetimegoing,IrealieIshouldnotonlythinaboutmyselfbutalsocareaboutothersNow,IoftenchatwithmydosomehouseworinmyseBesidesIworasavolunteertoheloreore,IattimesmaeyclassmatestomaeentWearegrowingWeshoulddomoremeaningfulafter-schoolactivitiestoimaeourworldbetter连词的运用Afterschool,weshouldtaeanactiveoreafter-schoolactivitestomaeourlifecolorful,meaningfulandhappyOurworldwillbeabetterplaceLet’staeactionatonce!Lettheworldfulloflove!TenderlyholdingyourfaceTowiy