建议信的开头和结尾课件 -2023-2024学年高中英语作文复习专项

unit1writing建议信开头和结尾第一段:问候＋自我介绍+写信背景信息（大题目材料）＋目的第二段：三点建议Tobeginwith,＋题目材料给的第1点.What’smore,＋题目材料给的第2点.Lastbutnotleast,＋题目材料给的第3点.第三段：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复Allinall,Ihopethatmysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.AndIamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.模板：DearXXX,

Howiseverythinggoing?I’mLiHua,yourfriendcomingfromChina.Iamsorry/glad/happytohearthat题目信息，Herearesomesuggestions/ideasforyou.

Tobeginwith,itisusefulforyoutodosth.(题目所给第1点建议)What’smore,you’dbetterdosth.(题目所给第2点建议).Lastbutnotleast,doingsthisagoodideaforyou.(题目所给第3点建议)

Allinall,Ihopethatmysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.AndIamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.

Yours,

LiHua第一段:问候＋自我介绍Howiseverythinggoing?I’mLiHua,yourfriendcomingfromChina.写信背景信息（大题目材料）＋目的1.Iamsorrytohearthatyouhavetroubleinstudying/makingfriends/joiningclubs/communicatingwithyourparents.I’mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestionsaboutit.听说你在学习/交朋友/加入俱乐部/和父母沟通方面有困难，我很难过。我写信就此给你一些建议。2.I'msorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublefittinginyournewschool.Suchproblemsarequitenormal.Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpful.很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。3I'mverygladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtofitinthenewschoollife.Hereareafewsuggestions.很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。4I'mverygladtohavereceivedyoure-mail.NowI'mwritingtogiveyousomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwellinhighschool.很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。第三部分：结尾：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复套语：1.Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.Remember:wherethereisawill,thereisaway(有志者事竟成).我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。2.Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.Remember:Themanwhohasmadeuphismindtowinwillneversay“impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”).我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。3.Ihopethatmysuggestionsarehelpfulforyouanyway.Iwouldbemorethanhappytoseeimprovement.无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。4.Isincerelyhopemyadvicewillbeofsomehelpforyou.IfthereismoreIcandotohelp,pleaseletmeknow.我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。5Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals(suggestions/tips)practical/useful/helpful.我希望你会发现这些提议（建议/提示）实用/有用/有帮助。6Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.如果您能考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激。假设你是校刊编辑李华，近期收到一封署名为MissAnxiety的求助信。在信中该同学表示由于考试临近，压力剧增。请用英文给该同学回信，内容要点如下：

1.表示安慰；2.提出建议；3.表达祝愿。

参考范文：DearMissAnxiety,

I’mLiHua,aneditorfromourschool.I’msorrytoknowthatyouareexperiencingatoughperiodoftimenow.Asamatteroffact,itisnotunusualforustofacegreatpressureattimes,sothereisnoneedtoworrytoomuch.Iamwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions.

Ihopemyadvicementionedabovewillbeofgreatbenefittoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑李华，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信，内容包括：

1.表示理解并给予安慰；2.提出建议并说明理由。DearWorried,I’mLiHua,aneditorof“HEART-TO_HEART”.I’msorrytoknowthatyou’rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Thetruthisthateveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobewrong,soyoudon’thavetoworrysomuch.Theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtemper.Herearethreeusefultips(Someusefultipsarelistedasfollows.)---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Ihopeyou’llsoonfeelcalmerandcarryonasnormal.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

假如你是李华，你的朋友James来信说，随着高考的临近，学习和心理压力日益加大，正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请你用英文给他写一封回信。内容要点如下：1.表示理解并给予安慰2.提出建议并说明理由。DearJames,Howiseverythinggoing?I’mLiHua,yourfriendcomingfromChina.Iamawfullysorrythatyouaresostressedthatithasaffectedyourstudyandlife.However,thesituationcan'tbeunchangeableifyoutakethefollowingsuggestions.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Pleasetakemysuggestionsintoaccount.I’mconvincedeverythingwillbebetterandmayyousucceedthissummer.1.假如你是李华，最近收到了你的美国朋友Jenny的来信。她在信中说，由于刚进入高中，不知道如何去结交新朋友，因而情绪低落。请根据以下内容给她回信。

1．表示问候和慰问。2．提出以下建议：(1)放学后邀请同学一起参加活动；(2)你的同学遇到麻烦时，去帮助他们；(3)你遇到困难时向同学求助。DearJenny，Howiseverythinggoing?I’mLiHua,yourfriendcomingfromChina.I’mreallysorrytohearthatyouhavetroublemakingfriendswithothersafterenteringseniorhighschool.I'dliketooffersomepersonaladvicetoyou.-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Ibelieveyouwillmakemanynewfriendsandhaveahappyschoollifethere.Bestwishes!2.你的美国好友Tom即将升入大学，他想选择学习历史，但是又对计算机很感兴趣。请你给他写一份邮件，对他提出建议。【佳作欣赏】DearTom,

Howiseverythinggoing?I’mLiHua,yourfriendcomingfromChina.Havingknownthatyouhavesometroublewiththecourseelection,Iammorethangladtoofferyousomepersonalsuggestionsaccordingtomyownexperience.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Thanksfortrustingme.Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyoumakeawisedecision.【实战演练】假如你是李华，你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难，请根据下面提示给她写一封建议信。1.要交朋友首先要做一个朋友；2.要和朋友同甘共苦；患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友；3.友谊需要时间和投入(effort)。参考范文DearSuRu，Howiseverythinggoing?I’mLiHua,yourfriendcomingfromChina.Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However，thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.___________________