高考英语书面表达讲解(示范课课件)

高考英语书面表达讲解(示范课课件)第一页，共31页。

Welcometomyclass!

高三2部杨晓玉第一页第二页，共31页。Howtomakeyour

writing

better?

让你的作文起来

“亮”第二页第三页，共31页。Whatisagoodpieceofwriting?

1.neatwriting书写2.content内容3.structure结构4.language语言GoodfirstimpressionWellorganizedandsmoothlydevelopedEverythingrequiredincludedNoChinglishNoGrammaticalmistakesUsegoodwordsandmoresentencepatterns第三页第四页，共31页。一，改变句子的开头方式二，句型转换A.合并为简单句把其中一句改为分词短语把其中一句改为介词短语B.合并为复合句三，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语、with复合结构等.

四，注意使用高级词汇代替一些单词，以增加文采。Task1:Makeyourlanguagebetter第四页第五页，共31页。一.改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首.2.Theboyisveryhungryandhehurriedhome.Hungry,theboyhurriedhome..Task1:Makeyourlanguagebetter1.Thevolleyballplayerspracticedveryhard

towin

thematch.

Towinthematch,thevolleyballplayerspracticedveryhard.第五页第六页，共31页。二.Transformationofsentencesinwriting(写作中的句型转换)A.合并为简单句1.把其中一句改为分词Hehadfinishedsupper.

Hewentouttohaveawalkthen.Havingfinished

supper,hewent

outtohaveawalk.2.把其中一句改为介词短语Hewasbroughtin.Hishandsweretiedbehindhisback.Hewasbroughtin

hishandstiedbehindhisback.with第六页第七页，共31页。

B.合并为复合句1.

TheChineseartistsweretoperformherethatnight.Thenewscheeredeveryoneofus.（同位从）Thenews

thattheChineseartistswereto

performherethatnight

cheered

everyoneofus.2.Inrecentyears,Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfast.Allthesemakepeople’slivesconvenient,pleasantandcolorful.（非限制定从）

,whichInrecentyears,Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfast

makespeople’slivesconvenient,pleasant…第七页第八页，共31页。三.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用以下句型：倒装句强调句主从复合句分词状语With复合结构...........感叹句第八页第九页，共31页。1.Thoughheiswealthy,heworkshard.Wealthyasheis,heworkshard.Inspiteof/Despitehiswealth,

heworkshard.2.Hedidn’tgetupuntil7o’clock.Itwasnotuntil7o’clockthathegotup.Notuntil7o’clockdidhegetup.3.Itisnicetohearfromyouagain.

Hownicetohearfromyouagain!

第九页第十页，共31页。2.Ihadagoodidea.

Agoodideaoccurredto/struck/cameto/hitme.Icameupwithagoodidea.注意使用词组、习语谚语、表强调的词来代替一些单词，以增加文采。

四.use“complicated/advancedwords”

1.I'llthankyouifyouthinkaboutmyapplication．I'llappreciateitifyoucantakemyapplicationintoconsideration.第十页第十一页，共31页。一，改变句子的开头方式二，句型转换A.合并为简单句把其中一句改为分词短语把其中一句改为介词短语B.合并为复合句三，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语、with复合结构等.

四，注意使用高级词汇代替一些单词，以增加文采。Task1:Makeyourlanguagebetter第十一页第十二页，共31页。Task2:Makeyourstructurebetter文章结构1.Inconclusion,weshouldtakeintoaccounttheproblem.(结论)2.I'magainstsmokingforthefollowingreasons.First,it'sharmfultoone’shealth.Second,

it'sawasteofmoneytobuycigarettes.

Lastbut

notleast,itcausesairpollution.（顺序）3.

Inadditiontothebeautifulscenery,touristscanenjoyavarietyofactivities.（递进）2.有效使用

，过渡自然，连贯通顺，使文章结构紧凑。1.通常使用

段式。三连接词第十二页第十三页，共31页。逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇时间顺序first，second，then，finally／atlast，immediately，suddenly，soon空间顺序here，there，Ononeside，Ontheotherside，infrontof，atthebackof，nextto对称关系Foronething，foranother，Ontheonehand，Ontheotherhand转折关系but，however，while，though，otherwise因果关系because，since，as，thanksto，asaresult(of)条件关系Aslongas，solongas，Onconditionthat，if,unless让步关系though，as，evenif／though，whether,who(what，when，where)-ever递进关系what'smore，besides，tomakemattersworse，what'sworse过渡性插入语Ithink，I'mafraid，youknow，asweallknow第十三页第十四页，共31页。A.

Second,twentyyearsago,teenagerslistenedtomusicwithtaperecorders.Differently,todayweusemp3,mp4andevenmp5whichareeasytotake.B.

Anotherchangeisincommunication.Insteadofwritingletters,teenagersnowadayspreferwritinge-mailsorcallingtokeepintouchwithfriends.C.

First,teenagersoftwentyyearsagolearnfromLeiFengandZhangHaidi,whilenowweconsiderBillGatesand…asourrolemodels.

D.

Whatgreatchangestheyare!E.

Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinteenagers’lifeduringthepasttwentyyears.

rightorder:___________________________ECABD第十四页第十五页，共31页。Example:国外某网站举办新的一轮网上讲座活动，正面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。内容包括:自我介绍写信目的话题：我们应该感恩（thankful).推荐理由预祝活动成功注意：1.词数100左右;2.邮件格式已为你给出；3.邮件出不能出现本人信息；4.在答题卡上作答。第十五页第十六页，共31页。

MynameisLiHua.IamastudentandIstudyinXinHuaMiddleSchool.Ioftenvisityourweb,andfromitIknowyouarefindingthemesfromstudentsallovertheworld.Now,IwritethisletterbecauseIwanttorecommandatheme.Weshouldbethankfulisagoodtopic.Ourfatherandmotherthrowthickandthinraiseus,weshouldbethankfultothem.Ourteachersteachushowtostudy,leadingalotofknowledgeintoourhead.weshouldthanktothem.asaChinese,weshouldbethankful,becausewherethereisthankful,there’rehopestomaketheworldbetter,andwithathankfulheart,wecanrealizehowbeautifullifeis.Ireallyhopeyoucanchoosemytheme.Iwishtheactivitywillhaveansuccessfulend.Aslookingfortopicsrecommendtopictopicthroughthickandthinthankfulness

分16第十六页第十七页，共31页。1.MynameisLiHua.IamastudentandIstudyinXinHuaMiddleSchool.2.Ioftenvisityourweb,andfromitIknowyouarelookingfortopicsfromstudentsallovertheworld.IamLihua,astudentfromXinHuaMiddleschool.Makethesentencesbetter!

Ioftenvisityourwebsite,whereIgotthenewsthatyou’relookingfortopicsfromstudentsallovertheworld.（同位语）（定从+同位从）第十七页第十八页，共31页。1.Weshouldbethankfulisagoodtopic.2.Ourfatherandmotherthroughthickandthinraiseus,weshouldbethankfultothem.3.

Ireallyhopeyoucanchoosemytopic.4.Iwishtheactivitywillhaveasuccessfulend..5.Withathankfulheart,wecanrealizehowbeautifullifeis.6.Now,IwritethisletterbecauseIwanttorecommendtopic.Haveatrytomakethesentencesbetter!第十八页第十九页，共31页。ourshowtime第十九页第二十页，共31页。Now,Let’scheckwhetherour

writinghasbeenbetter?

我们的文章亮起来了么？第二十页第二十一页，共31页。

I’mLihua,astudentfromXinHuaMiddleSchool.Ioftenvisityourwebsite,whereIgotthewonderfulnewsthatyou’relookingfortopicsfromstudentsallovertheworld.Here,I’mwritingtorecommendone.Inmyopinion,thatweshouldbethankfulisagoodidea.Firstly,itisourparentswhobroughtusupthroughthickandthin,soweshouldthankthem.Besides,weshouldthankourteachers,forwecouldn’tbewhowearenowwithouttheirhardwork.What’smore,thankfulnessisalsoourtraditionalChinesevirtue.Wherethereisthankfulness,therearehopestomaketheworldbetter.Onlywithathankfulheart,canwefullyrealizehowbeautifullifeis.

I’dappreciateitifmytopicwillbechosen.Wishtheactivityagreatsuccess.24-25分第二十一页第二十二页，共31页。TipsinyourdailyEnglishlearning:1.Collectgoodwords/phrases/sentences;2.Readmore;3.Practicemakesperfect;4.Beconfidentanytime.第二十二页第二十三页，共31页。HomeworkHaveatry!

每年12月你们学校都要举行为期一个月的体育节，在今年体育节来临之际，请给学校体育节组委写一封信，表达你对体育节的看法和建议。主要内容如下：1推荐至少两项活动；2说明开展这些活动的理由；3谈谈你对体育节的看法；注意：1词数不少于120个2可适当发挥适当想象，增加细节，以便行文连贯。第二十三页第二十四页，共31页。writingsteps写作六部曲step1topicexploring审题step2