2023学年完整公开课版ContinuationWriting

ContinuationWritingFogSherylA“challenging”journeytoalovelyschool读后续写题型解读读后续写是高考英语新题型，于2016年10月开始在浙江高考试卷中使用。读后续写是一篇记叙文被截去后半部分，让考生在读懂前文的基础上续写截去的部分。读后续写一般采用记叙文体裁，因为记叙文更贴近学生生活实际，更具有趣味性和较大的想象空间，连贯性更强，语言难度适中。读后续写题型说明提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。

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Writeforhighscores-WritingTipsTiaethedescriptionvivid生动Usemorespecificwordstoreplace“say”shout,scream,yell,cry;whisise,admit;as,wonder,doubt,answer,reply…Writeforhighscores-WritingTipsTiaethedescriptionvividMaeyour“say”morespecificfirmly/ecitedly/seriously/joingly/sincerelyingreatsurprise/alowvoice/asoftvoicewithdelight/ecitement/pride/respect/satisfaction/patience/certaintyMaeyour“say”morespecificPolly低声问道：“你为什么要拿着一根棍子呢？”男士开玩笑地回答：“这样让我看起来像个绅士啊！”anansweredjoingly:“Itmaesmeagentleman”Writeforhighscores-WritingTipsTiaethedescriptionvividTrytoepressPolly’sfeelingsegShecouldhearherheartbeatingwithfearAdj:happy,glad,delighted,thrilledN:happiness,joy,pleasure,delight,thrillbeoverwhelmedwithjoy,wearasmileonherface,jumud,beontopoftheworldHereyestwinle/dancewithpleasure/delightTrytoepressPolly’sfeelings

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