2024届高三英语二轮复习读后续写练习（不惧别人的目光带动更多的人加入到捡垃圾的行列）

高考英语读后续写语篇练习不惧别人的目光，带动更多的人加入到捡垃圾的行列1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文WhenIwaselevenyearsold,ImovedtoTampa,Florida.Myparentstraveledforaliving,soAuntEmilytookcareofmewhiletheywereaway.Onerainymorning,therewasanoldladywhowasdressedinabrightorangecoatcarryingarubbishbagandastick.“What’sthatoldladydoing?”IaskedEmily,pointingoutofthewindowtothestreetinfrontofthehouse.Hearingmyquestion,Emilyanswered,“She’spickinguprubbisharoundhereforfun.”“Oh,”Ianswered.“Interesting...Whywouldsomeonethinkpickinguprubbishisfun?”Foralongtime,Ioftensawthatoldlady—rainorshine—onmywaytoschool.Inthebeginning,Ithoughtshewascrazytopickuprubbish.However,IfinallysmiledandwavedathereachtimeIsawher.Later,whenImovedtocollege,I’dseerubbishinthegrassandfeelreallyangryaboutit.I’dthink,“Whyisn’tanyonepickinguprubbish?Peoplearesounconcerned!”Butshortlyafterthat,Isaidtomyself,“WhydoIthinkpickinguprubbishissomeoneelse’sduty?”AndIcouldn’twalkpasttrashwithoutfeelingguilty(内疚的).4续写原文Sowhilewalkinginthecollege,IbeganpickinguprubbishandmadesurethecampuswasinbettershapethanIpreviouslyfoundit.Mybehaviorinfluencedsomestudents.Theystartedtohelpmeout.Likeme,theyalsopickeduprubbishwhenevertheynoticedit.Andourcollegebecamemorebeautiful.Seeingthat,Ibegantothink,“IfIcanpickuprubbishoutsidethecollege—inotherplacesofthetown,itmaymakeabigdifferencetothetown.”Butpickinguprubbishinfrontofmanypeopleoutsidethecollegeneedscourage.Itcouldbeembarrassing.Butitwastherightthingtodo.Idecidedtotryit.5段首句Para1：SoonedayIcalledupallmycourageandcollectedrubbishonanearbystreet.

Para2：Ithoughtifmorestudentstookpartinthevoluntaryactivity,thingswouldbemuchbetter.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8本文以捡垃圾为线索展开，讲述了作者在少年时经常见到一位捡垃圾的老妇人，所以开始疑惑老人为什么经常捡垃圾，姑姑的一句“她捡垃圾是为了好玩”让作者对捡垃圾这件事情有了最初的认识。但是到了大学以后作者发现很多人对于草丛里的垃圾是视而不见时又有了新的困惑和担心。作者想捡，却又怕被嘲笑，但最终战胜了胆小的自己，勇敢地捡起了垃圾，而作者的行为也带动了更多的人来捡垃圾。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：SoonedayIcalledupallmycourageandcollectedrubbishonanearbystreet.由第一段首句内容“所以有一天，我鼓起勇气，在附近的街道上收集垃圾。”可知，第一段可描写陌生人看到作者捡垃圾的反应，作者在此过程中的感悟和作者决定鼓励更多的学生在镇上这样做。10续写思路分析Para2：Ithoughtifmorestudentstookpartinthevoluntaryactivity,thingswouldbemuchbetter.由第二段首句内容“我想如果有更多的学生参加志愿活动，情况会好得多。”可知，第二段可描写作者怎样带领着其他人捡垃圾以及由此所带来的改变。11续写思路分析续写线索我捡垃圾——别人的不解——之后他人赞扬和感谢——带动别人捡垃圾——带来积极影响——感悟12续写素材可用词汇：行为类①捡垃圾：pickuprubbish/collectgarbage/trash②意识到：realize/beaware③决定做某事：decidetodosth./determinetodosth./makeupone’smindtodosth.情绪类①表扬：praise/speakhighlyof②感谢某人：thanksb./expressone’sgratitude13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1].SomepeoplewatchedmewithastrangelookthatseemedtosayIwascrazy.(运用了that引导的定语从句和省略that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2].TheinterestingthingwasthatIwasactingjustlikeher!(运用了that引导的表语从句)14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现SoonedayIcalledupallmycourageandcollectedrubbishonanearbystreet.SomepeoplewatchedmewithastrangelookthatseemedtosayIwascrazy.Andsuddenly,Irememberedthatoldlady,whooftenpickeduprubbishyearsago.TheinterestingthingwasthatIwasactingjustlikeher!Asstrangeasitmightseem（倒装句）,pickinguprubbishiskindoffunforme!Gradually,manypeoplerealizedIwasvolunteeringtohelpmakeourtownclean.Theypraisedmeandthankedme.ThenIdecidedtoencouragemorestudentstodothisinthetown.16范文呈现Ithoughtifmorestudentstookpartinthevoluntaryactivity,thingswouldbemuchbetter.Weboughteachstudentabrightorangecoatwithwordsonit:Let’smakeourtowncleaner!Andwetooktimetonotonlypickuprubbishbutalsosortthroughitandrecycleit.Somethingamazinghappened—thestrangersaroundushelpedusouttoo!Ithoughttomyself,“Theoldladymadeallthishappen;shemadeabigdifferenceinmylife.”17范文译文我想如果有更多的学生参加志愿活动，情况会好得多。我们给每个学生买了一件亮橙色的外套，上面写着：让我们的城市更干净！我们不仅花时间捡垃圾，还把垃圾分类回收。令人惊讶的是，我们周围的陌生人也帮助了我们！我心想：“这一切都是老太太促成的；她给我的生活带来了巨大的改变。”18范文译文所以有一天，我鼓起勇气，在附近的街道上收集垃圾。有些人用一种奇怪的眼神看着我，似乎在说我疯了。突