2023年Z20联盟高三第一次联考读后续写讲义 高考英语作文专项复习

Z20名校联盟2024届高三第一次联考AFour-leggedGuardianAngelSnowhadjustmeltedoffthegroundthatAprildayatourhouseinReginaBeach,Saskatchewan.Ihadjustcleanedupthepoolinpreparationforsellingthehouse.Theyearbefore,Ihadlostmyjobwiththeprovincialgovernment,andnowourfinancialsituationwasgrim.Indespair,Ihadfinallyputthehomeonthemarket,andarealestateagentwasduetoshowuplaterthatday.Evenworse,IwouldhavetogiveupmybelovedGreatDane

（大丹犬）,Brigitte,becauseIcouldnolongeraffordthecostoffeedingit.ThethoughtoflosingthedogandourbeautifulhomewasalmostmorethanIcouldbear.

Deepindespair,Isattypingupresumesandcoverletters.OutofthecornerofmyeyeIcouldseemythirteen-month-oldson,Forrest,ashelayonthecarpet,playingnearourbig,gentlenanny-dog,Brigitte.ItseemedasifBrigittewasalwaysmeanttobeinthisfamilyandsheturnedouttobeaperfectcompanion.

BrigittecametoourhouseonChristmasevewhenthedoorbellrangandIwassuresomeofmyChristmaspackageshadarrived.Irantothedoorandswungitopen,butnoonewasthere.Isensedsomethingandlookeddown,onlytofindabeautifulGreatDanesittingthere,lookingupatmewithbig,intelligenteyes.Therewasnowaythatshecouldhaverungthedoorbellbyherself,wasthere?Perhaps,someonehadfoundthepuppysomewhereandleftherthere,andthenrangthedoorbellandranaway.TheyaccuratelyguessedIwouldwelcomeanadditionalfamilymemberandtakecareofher.

Thinkingofthese,Icouldn'thelpheavingasighandwentstraightbacktowork.However,Ihadn'ttypedmorethantwosentenceswhenBrigittebeganbarkingfuriouslyandrunningbackandforthtotheslidingglassdooroverlookingourpool.

Iracedtoseewhatwashappeningandnoticedthattheslidingdoorwasslightlyopen.Suddenly,IrealizedForrestwasnowheretobeseen.Inpanic,Iopenedthedoorandranoutside.注意：1.

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ThereIwassurprisedtoseeBrigitte,whowasterrifiedofwater,diveintothepool,

Finally,thedoctorsaidForrestwasallrightandcouldbereleasedfromhospital.[解读]带有标题的读后续写，高考中共出现过两次:2017年11月浙江卷“AVacationwithMyMother”和2021年新全国卷“AMother’sDaySurprise”。一般而言，标题就是文章主旨所在。所以，如果你恰巧在考场上碰到了带有标题的读后续写，那你写偏的概率又降低很多学生只需在结尾处去出现标题字眼即可。如:AsweembarkedonthisnewchapterIknewthatnomatterwhatchallengeslayahead,Brigittewouldbebyourside,ourfour-leggedguardiarangel1.√snow,melt,April:这些要素一方面决定着续写段落中的客观环境描写必定是和冷相关的另一方面，当我看到“melt”这个单词时，我首先想到的是2022年1月浙江卷高考关于“学霸队友”的续写段落中,“Icouldfeelhisicyshellgraduallymeltingaway”，这种抽象的写法在这里也适用。如:MyicyheartfromunemploymentandthecruelfactofhavingsaidgoodbyetomysweethomemeltedeverytimeIcaughtsightofForrestandhislittlebuddynestlingagainsteachother,nappingsoundlyonthecarpet.√pool:续写第一段落情节发生的核心场地/inpreparationforsellingthehouse/wasduetoshowuplaterthatday:要做而未做的事情√lostmyjob/financialsituationwasgrim:背景信息，grm意为“令人沮丧的”，相当于depressing√arealestateagent:新人物，续写文本中会用到，可以写“我和房产中介约定了新的见面时间，但这一次，我决定带上Brigitte”√mybelovedGreatDane(大丹犬),Brigitte:新人物，注意beloved这个词，意为“深爱的,亲爱的”。“我”很爱这只狗，但是客观情况逼迫“我”不得不放弃她，也许文章中的这次意外是上天注定的，提醒“我”不要放弃任何愿意为你和你的家人拼命的生灵。√resumeandcoverletters:这两个都是找工作时的必需品，resume-简历(选修四第五单元单词)，coverletters-求职信(附属于简历的信函，通常用于向雇主介绍自己并解释为什么适合某个特定的工作岗位。/thirteen-month-oldson,Forrest:“我”儿子，年龄小，自己太忙，监管不到位，掉到泳池里面，暗示之后把Brigitte留在身边，也是给自己找了一个贴心的小保姆√onthecarpet:物品信息，新的人物都可以在后文中复现√big,gentlenanny-dog,Brigitte:nanny-dog-保姆狗，一类被认为非常适合与儿童共处的狗狗品种/Brigittewasalwaysmeanttobeinthisfamily/aperfectcompanion:family,companion都属于和主旨结尾密切相关的要素，你能读出来吗?再次强调，一切都是上天安排好的，Brigitt注定是我们一辈子的家人，永远陪伴在我们的身边，暗示最后“我”是不会丢掉Brigite不管的。/Christmaseve,Christmaspackages:Brigitte就是我收到的最好的圣诞礼物。ShewasthebestChristmasgiftIcouldhaveeveraskedfor!√beautiful,big,intelligenteyes:Brigitte能够及时发现Forrest掉到水池中，并跳下去救援聪明的狗狗谁不爱?√Therewasnowaythatshecouldhaverungthedoorbellbyherself:也许冥冥之中我们就是Brigitte亲手选的家人呢?这么一想，好好哭，怎么能因为钱的问题放弃家人呢?Thethoughiofherchoosingusasherbelovedfamilyamongallthosehouseholdsleftmefilledwithguiltandregretforeventhinkingaboutlettinggoofhim/welcomeanadditionalfamilymemberandtakecareofher:当初是“我”收留了Brigitte，进了家门，就是一家人，照顾她是我的责任。IwhisperedinherearandpromisedIwouldtakecareofherforevernomatterwhatthefuturemightholdforus.√heaveasigh:叹/barkfuriouslyandrunbackandforth:愤怒地状叫，跑来跑去√slidingglassdoor:滑动玻璃门√overlook:v俯视，说明“我”当时在二楼情节续写：Paragraphl:ThereIwassurprisedtoseeBrigitte,whowasterrifiedofwater,diveintothepool注意:D提示句中的“There”应该是玻璃门外，所以“我”需要冲到楼下才能协助救援2第一段结尾处一定是Forrest被送往医院接受检查Paragraph2:Finally.thedoctorsaidForrestwasallrightandcouldbereleasedfromhospital注意:提示句对“我”的影响最大，所以第一个情节要先写“我”的心理2本文在结尾主旨处有很多可以呼应的点，但是最重要的还是呼应标题情节设计(不唯一)Paragraphl:ThereIwassurprisedtoseeBrigitte,whowasterrifiedofwater,diveintothepoolI:来到泳池边(心理)Brigitte:展开救援(动作，神态)Forrest:挣扎哭喊(动作，神态)I:帮助救援(心理，动作)衔接:成功救出Forrest，我拨打急救电话，Forrest被送到医院，接受检查和治疗Paragraph2:Finally,thedoctorsaidForrestwasallrightandcouldbereleasedfromhospital.I:欣慰感激，带Forrest回家(心理)Brigitte:热情迎接(动作，神态)I:与房产中介约定见面时间，决定搬家，并带上Brigitte结尾:D(虽然但是法)虽然未来充满了不确定性和挑战，但是有Brigitte-“四脚守护天使”在“我身边，我便充满了力量和希望。WhilethefuturemaybeuncertainandfilledwithchallengeshavingBrigitte,ourfour-leggedguardianangel,byoursidegivesusthecouragetofacewhatevercomesourway.@(拉长时间线法)不久，我们找到了一间小的公寓住了下来。有Brigitte在身边，我可以安心准备找工作。她就像一个天使，守护着Forrest，守护着我们这个家，给我们原本灰暗的未来带来一线希望。Withherunwaveringloveanddevotion,wefoundanewplacetocallhome.asmallerapartmentwherewecouldstartafresh.BrigittecontinuestowatchoverForrestandourlittlefamily,bringingarayofhopetowhatwasonceableakfuture.Inherpresence.wefindsolaceandthebeliefthatwecanovercomeanyobstacle.Onepossibleversion:

ThereIwassurprisedtoseeBrigitte,whowasterrifiedofwater,diveintothepool.Then

tomyhorror,I

caughtsightof

Forrest'syellowsleeper.Brigitte

wasbravelydoingherbesttokeephimafloat

byholdingontohissleeperwithhermouth.Atthesametime,shewas

desperately

tryingtoswimto

theshallowend.

OnlythendidIrealizethat

Forresthadsomehowopenedthedoor,

wanderedout

andfallenintothepool.

Inasplitsecond,Idovein,liftedmypreciousbabyoutandcarriedhiminside.

Handsshaking,Icalled911andwe

wererushedtothehospitalim