公开课如何写建议信

公开课如何写建议信第1页，课件共18页，创作于2023年2月Onceuponatimetherewasaboywhofondofreading.However,hewasverypoortobuyanybooks.Thatwasthereasonthathehadtoborrowbooksfromarichmanwhoownedalotofbooks.Theboyknewclearlythathehastofinishreadingthebookshehadborrowedthemandreturnthemtotheownerassoonaspossible.第2页，课件共18页，创作于2023年2月Arichman,whowasreadytolendanyofhisbooktotheboy,readfewofhisownbooks.Withtimegoingon,theboyreadalotsbutfinallybecameafamouswriterinhistime.Thoughtherichmanhadsomanybooks,heremainedamanwithlittleknowledgebecauseofheseldomreadhisbooks.

第3页，课件共18页，创作于2023年2月

Recently,ourclasshavehadaheateddiscussionaboutwhethertheBeijingZooshouldbemovedoutofthecity.第4页，课件共18页，创作于2023年2月

Someofmyclassmatesareinfavorofthemove.Theysaylargecrowdsoftouriststothezoowillresultintrafficjams.Theyalsosaythatoncemoved,animalswillhavemorespaceandbetterlivingconditionsinthesuburbs.第5页，课件共18页，创作于2023年2月

However,otherstudentsareagainsttheidea,sayingthattheBeijingZoo,built

in1906,hasahistoryof100years,andiswell–knownathomeandabroad.Soitshouldremainwhereitis.What’smore,ifwemovethezoo,someanimalsmaydie.Tomoveornot,thisisabigdecisionwhichhastobemadebypeopleinBeijing.Yourstruly,LiHua第6页，课件共18页，创作于2023年2月howtowritealetterofadvicewriting第7页，课件共18页，创作于2023年2月

DearMr.Wang,Knowingthatourlibraryisgoingtobuybooks,I’dliketogivesomeadvice.Whatweneedmostarepopularsciencebooks.Theyhelpusunderstandsciencesubjectsbetterandarouseourcuriosityaboutscientificdiscoveries.Inadditiontoreadingforknowledge,wereadforfunandinspiration.ThatiswhyIrecommendanothercategoryofbooks:literarybooks.Theynotonlyofferusjoyandexcitement,butalsoencourageustothinkcritically.I’llbegladifyoucanconsidermyrecommendation.Yourssincerely,LiYue建议信Ending

expressyourhopeBeginning

stateyourpurposeBody

giveadvice&reasons第8页，课件共18页，创作于2023年2月1.I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon…2.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning…3.Knowingthat…,I’dliketogivesomesuggestions.A.stateyourpurposesentencepatternsB.giveyouradvice1.It’shelpful/importantto…2.Itwouldbeagoodideato…3.Iwouldliketosuggestthat…C.expressyourhope1.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyadviceintoconsideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful.3.I'msureifyoutakemyadvice,youwill…第9页，课件共18页，创作于2023年2月表达愿望：5、我相信如果你接受我的建议，你会变得更加苗条和保持健康。Theuseofsentencepatterns表明意图：1.你给Jane回信就如何减肥提建议。提出建议：2、健康饮食3、多锻炼4、喝足够多的水Knowingthatyouhavetroubleinlosingweight,I’dliketogivesomesuggestions.Itisimportanttohaveahealthydiet.Itishelpfultodomoreexercise.Itwouldbeagoodideatodrinkenoughwater.Iamsureifyoutakemyadvice,youwillbecomeslimmerandstayhealthy.

假设你叫李华，你的好朋友Jane最近发现自己在发胖，很苦恼。她写信请你给她就如何减肥提建议。请你根据下面的内容给简写一封信，词数100左右。

1、健康饮食2、多锻炼3、喝足够多的水第10页，课件共18页，创作于2023年2月Itishelpfultodomoreexercise.Itwouldbeagoodideatodrinkenoughwater.Itisimportanttohaveahealthydiet.DearJane,Knowingthatyouhavetroubleinlosingweight,I’dliketogivesomesuggestions.First,itisimportanttohaveahealthydiet.Inaddition,it

wouldbeagoodideatodrinkenoughwater.Besides,itishelpfultodomoreexercise.Iamsureifyoutakemyadvice,youwillbecomeslimmerandstayhealthy.Inordertoloseweight,youcaneatmorevegetablesandfruits.Themoreexerciseyoutake,themorefatyouwillburnoff,andyouwillbethinner.Becausewatercansupportourbodyandactivities,andhelpusloseweight.第11页，课件共18页，创作于2023年2月Dear

Jane,Knowingthatyouhavetroubleinlosingweight,I’dliketogivesomesuggestions.

First,

itisimportanttohaveahealthydiet.

Inordertoloseweight,youcaneatmorevegetablesandfruits.

Besides,italsohelpsifyoutakemoreexercise.Themoreexerciseyoutake,themorefatyouwillburnoff,andyouwillbethinner.In

addition,itshouldbeagoodideatodrinkenoughwater,becausewatercansupportourbodyandactivities,andhelpusloseweight.

I'msureifyoutakemyadvice,youwillbecomeslimmerandstayhealthy.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua第12页，课件共18页，创作于2023年2月

假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。

1.参加中文学习班；

2.看中文书刊、电视；

3.学唱中文歌曲；

4.交中国朋友。第13页，课件共18页，创作于2023年2月引出话题，表明写作意图1.参加中文学习班；2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲； 4.交中国朋友。提出建议：总结，表达愿望连接词(多个建议+多个理由)Outline第14页，课件共18页，创作于2023年2月评分标准1、是否覆盖所有内容要点2、是否恰当使用语法结构3、是否运用多样句式和丰富的词汇4、是否使用连接词5、全文结构是否完整合理第15页，课件共18页，创作于2023年2月DearPeter,

I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.

Hereareafewsuggestions.

First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou'llbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.

Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,i