中职高考英语写作训练教学课件

中职高考英语写作训练11、不为五斗米折腰。12、芳菊开林耀，青松冠岩列。怀此贞秀姿，卓为霜下杰。13、归去来兮，田蜀将芜胡不归。14、酒能祛百虑，菊为制颓龄。15、春蚕收长丝，秋熟靡王税。中职高考英语写作训练中职高考英语写作训练11、不为五斗米折腰。12、芳菊开林耀，青松冠岩列。怀此贞秀姿，卓为霜下杰。13、归去来兮，田蜀将芜胡不归。14、酒能祛百虑，菊为制颓龄。15、春蚕收长丝，秋熟靡王税。中职英语高考写作训练陆道夫主讲2012年3月1.Sensorimotorstage:0-2years~Beginstomakeuseofimitation,memory,andthought;~Beginstorecognizethatobjects,donotceasetoexistwhentheyarehidden~Movesfromreflexactionstogoal-directedactivity2.Preoperationalstage:2-7years

~Graduallanguagedevelopmentandabilitytothinkinsymbolicform;~Abletothinkoperationsthroughlogicallyinonedirection;~Hasdifficultyseeinganotherperson'spointofview.3.Concreteoperationalstage:7-11years

~Abletosolveconcrete,hands-onproblemsinlogicalfashion;~Understandslawsofconservationandabletoclassifyandseriate;~Understandsreversibility.4.FormalOperationalstage:11-15years~Abletosolveabstractproblemsinlogicalfashion;~Thinkingbecomesmorescientific;~Developsconcernsaboutsocialissues,identity.句子理解1(a)Hearrivedat2:30andwastoldtowaitintheVIPlounge.(b)Hearrivedat2:30.HehadbeentoldtowaitintheVIPlounge.译文：(a)句：他两点半到达，有人让他在贵宾休息室等候；(b)他两点半到达，在到达以前就有人对他说，在贵宾休息室等候。差别何在？句子理解2Everycompanytriestohaveateamofwizardsdevelopingmachinesthatuseacomputerdrivenlasertodowonders.译文1：每个公司都试图掌握一群发明机器的奇才，他们利用电子计算机发出激光来创造奇迹。译文2：奇才发明机器，机器利用电子计算机激发激光，再由这种激光创造奇迹。句子理解3Thecarcametoadeadstop.译文1：汽车停住了。译文2：汽车停下了。译文3：汽车不动了。译文4：汽车死了。译文5：汽车嘠的一声刹住了。哪个好？为什么？作文得分要点1.格式2.人称3.要点4.时态5.字数6.语法7.书写

1、中式英语2、句式单一，平铺直叙3、词汇掌握不牢，拼写错误4、书写不规范，大小写、标点符号CommonmistakesIthinkweshouldthinkmoregoodthinks.darenotraisetheirheadsbeforetheotherstudents.keepanormalheart(口)keepanormalstateofmindkeepaneasymindtakeiteasy中式英语例析Facedwithfailure,someofthemfeeldepressedallthetime.What’sworse,theythrowdoubtupontheirownabilityandnolongerworkhardattheirstudies.句式单一，平铺直叙书写不规范词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）

1.覆盖所有要点2.语法结构和词汇不单一3.注意语句间的连接成分和连贯性，全文结构紧凑4.语言得体规范要点全连接词如何算是一篇好文章？语言地道规范改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词做状语等。Theboyisveryhungryandhehurriedhome.Hungry,theboyhurriedhome.Theboy,hungry,hurriedhome.巧用句型转换把其中一句改为分词短语

Hehadfinishedsupper.Hewentouttohaveawalkthen.Havingfinished

supper,hewentouttohaveawalk.A.合并为简单句2.把其中一句改为介词短语Hewasbroughtin.Hishandsweretiedbehindhisback.Hewasbroughtin

withhishandstiedbehindhisback.B.合并为复合句TheChineseartistsweretoperformherethatnight.Thenewscheeredeveryoneofus.Thenews

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Beijing,people’slivesarebecomingmoreandmoreconvenient,pleasantandcolorful.Nowadays,Beijingisdevelopingfastpeople’slivesaregettingmoreconvenient,pleasantandcolorful.C.把复合句改为简单句Shewasanxioustofindajobaftershefinishedherstudies.Havingfinished

herstudies,shewasanxioustofindajob.1.把从句改为分词短语C.把复合句改为简单句2.把从句改为介词短语Iinsistedthatheshouldgo.Iinsistedonhimgoing.三.灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语Thoughheiswealthy,heworkshard.Wealthyasheis,heworkshard.Inspiteof/Despitehiswealth,heworkshard.Hedidn’tgetupuntil7o’clock.Itwasnotuntil7o’clockthathegotup.Notuntil7o’clockdidhegetup.Assoonaswearrivedatthevillage,wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagers.Onarriving

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