（吉林专版）中考英语复习方案第一篇教材考点梳理话题写作（九）情感表达课件

话题写作(九)

情感表达第一篇教材考点梳理【话题点睛】话题来源于学生日常生活中对某件事情的感受及经历,常见的情感类表达有爱、快乐、微笑、幸福、痛苦和烦恼等。在我们成长的道路上,朋友是不可或缺的那道风景。在相知相伴的岁月里,留下了多少美好的故事和难忘的回忆!某英语报社以“AStoryBetweenMyFriendandMe”为题开展征文活动,请你按要求用英语写一篇文章参赛。[要点提示](1)Themostimportantthingaboutfriendship;(2)Theexperiencethatyouhad;(3)Yourfeelings.典例分析【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是与朋友交往经历,共有3个要点:(1)陈述朋友之间最重要的是什么;(2)叙述与朋友相处的经历;(3)表达对其的感受。2.确定时态:一般现在时和一般过去时。3.确定人称:第一人称。【写作架构】【基础写作】Ⅰ.写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。)1.就我个人而言,朋友应该互相关心。(asfaras)

,friendsshouldcareforeachother.

2.在一个雨天,我突然摔倒然后受伤严重。(hurtoneselfbadly)Onarainyday,Isuddenly

and

.

3.一听到这个,我就不再担心了。(not…anymore)Onhearingthis,I

.

AsfarasI'mconcernedfelldown hurtmyselfbadlydidn'tfeelworriedanymore4.从那天开始,他每天教我。(from…on)

,hetaughtmeeveryday.

5.在明明的帮助下,我没有落在其他学生之后。(withone'shelp)Ididn‘t

theotherstudents

.

Fromthatdayonfallbehind withMingming'shelpⅡ.句子升格(按括号中的要求改写句子。)1.Heknewaboutthat.Hesaidhecouldhelpmewithmystudy.(改为含时间状语从句的句子)

2.IamthankfulforallMingmingdidforme.Iwillcareforhimasmuchaspossible.(改为并列句)

Whenheknewaboutthat,hecouldhelpmewithmystudy.IamthankfulforallMingmingdidforme,andIwillcareforhimasmuchaspossible.3.Truefriendswillalwaysbefriendswhateverhappens.(用nomatter引导的让步状语从句改写句子)

Nomatterwhathappens,truefriendswillalwaysbefriends.【连句成文】AStoryBetweenMyFriendandMe

Nooneintheworldcanenjoyahappylifewithoutfriends.Butwhatisthemostimportantaboutfriendship?AsfarasI'mconcerned,friendsshouldcareforeachother.

Thereisalwayssomethingunforgettableinmylife,especiallythestorybetweenmyfriendandme.Onarainyday,Isuddenlyfelldownandhurtmyselfbadly.Myleftlegwasbroken.SoIhadtostayinhospitalforaboutonemonthandIwasworriedaboutmystudy.ThenmyfriendMingmingcametoseeme.Whenheknewaboutthat,hesaidhecouldhelpmewithmystudy.Onhearingthis,Ididn'tfeelworriedanymore.Fromthatdayon,hetaughtmeeveryday.Iwassomoved.Ididn'tfallbehindtheotherstudentswithMingming'shelp.

IamthankfulforallMingmingdidforme,andIwillcareforhimasmuchaspossible.Nomatterwhathappens,truefriendswillalwaysbefriends.【情感表达】1.I'dliketothankyouforgivingmeunselfishloveandhelp.2.Althoughyouwereverystrictwithme,Iunderstoodwhatyousaidintheend.3.I'msothankfultoyouforyourkindhelp.4.Ifeelboring/exciting/happy…5.I'dliketoshowmythankstoyouforyourdevotiontometheseyears.6.Ibelieveifwedoso,wecanhaveahappylife.拓展积累【期许结论】1.Theearlierkidslearntobeindependent,thebetteritisfortheirfuture.2.Whensomethingunpleasanthappens,pleasethinkitfromanotherdirection.Alwaysrememberthatweshouldn'tonlythinkaboutourselvesinlife.3.Ifwecangetalongwellwithothers,wewillenjoyourselveseverydayandsucceedindoinganything.4.Asasayinggoes,“Justasbittermedicinecuressickness,soadvicebenefitsconduct.”A

[2019·自贡]初中三年的学习生活让人难忘。毕业之际,你校将举行以“感恩”为主题的英文演讲比赛,请你根据以下提示,写一篇英文演讲稿。[要点提示](1)感谢父母,教我如何生活;(2)感谢老师,教我许多知识;(3)感谢同学,给我美好回忆;实战演练[写作要求](1)词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数);(2)可适当增减词汇,使语句流畅、完整;(3)文中不能透露个人真实信息。Goodmorning,everyone.I'mgladtobeheretospeakinfrontofyou.HereI'dliketothankeveryoneofyou.

That'sall.Thankyou.One

possible

version:Goodmorning,everyone.I'mgladtobeheretospeakinfrontofyou.HereI'dliketothankeveryoneofyou.

Firstly,wearesupposedtoexpressourheartfeltgratitudetoourparents.Theyhavebeenlookingafterussincewewereborn.Theygiveuseverythingwhenweneedthemandteachushowtolivewellandhealthily.Secondly,weshouldsay“thankyou”toourteachers.Theymakeusintelligentandwisewithrichknowledge.Besides,theyleadustolearnmethodsofsolvingproblems.Weshouldthankthemfordevotingtheirwholelifetouswithhelpandlove.Althoughtheywereverystrictwithus,weallknowtheyloveus.Thirdly,weshouldalsothankourclassmatesandfriends.Theyaretheoneswhoarealwaysbehindusandreadytofacedifficultieswithus.Thankstothem,wewillhavelotsofniceandunforgettablememoriesoffriendshipforever.That'sall.Thankyou.[注意](1)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;(2)词数在80-100之间,已给出的文字不计入总词数。Tocelebratethe70thbirthdayofourmotherland(祖国),