雅思课件综合Lesson1写作简介评分流程题型

Lesson1Lesson2Lesson3Lesson4范文分析---Lesson5范文分析---Lesson6Lesson7Lesson8brief

A类G类分Task1 ≥150

Task2 ≥250 TASKTASKInmanycountries,theproportionofolderpeopleissteadilyincreasing.Doesthistrendhavemorepositiveornegativeeffectsonthesociety?WhatisyourteachingCambridgeIELTS vocabularyCET-6 33 Task2TaskCoherenceandLexical ticalRangeandAccuracy

Task1fullyaddressesallpartsofthetask1所Task(Band2presentsafullydevelopedpositioninanswertothequestionwithrelevant,fullyextendedandwellsupportedideas2CoherenceandTask(Band1usescohesioninsuchawaythatitattractsnoattention2skillfullymanagesLexicalTask(Band1,usesawiderangeofvocabularywithverynaturalandsophisticatedcontroloflexicalfeatures;2,rareminorerrorsoccuronlyas‘slips’ ticalrangeand1,usesawiderange ofstructureswithfullflexibilityandaccuracy;Task(Band

2,rareminorerrorsoccuronlyas‘slips’

Band5---BandTaskBandBand CoherenceandBandBand LexicalBandBand ticalrangeandBandBand Todaythehighsalesofpopularconsumergoodsreflectthepowerofadvertisingandnottherealneedsofthesocietyinwhichtheyaresold.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree? 审 1:ad.:buy→byone’sown:likecollecting:写 作写作

C4T1，Para.However,booksalwaysarenotattractiveforchildrenoryoungster.Itisbecausebooksarequiteboring.Alotofwordsandlesspicturesandsound,wedon’thavetoreadalotofwordsinsidethebooks,compare evisionhaspicturesandsound,wedon’thavetoreadalotofwordsin evision.But evisionprogrammeorfilm,bringabadimagetous.Thensomechildrenoryoungerswillimitatetheirbehavior.Somefilmalsobringawrongmessagetous,Forexample,theyarealwayssmokinginfi .Itseemsthatsmokingisgoodandsmart.ItcausedmanyyoungersimitatethemExaminer’s Someideasarelinkedappropria y,butthereisalotofrepetitionacrosssentences.errorsinrandThewriterusesalimitedrangeoflanguagequiterepetitivelyandthereareonlysimplesentences.However,theseareoftenquiteaccurate,althoughthereerrorsinrandtherelevant3次：books;alotofwords;youngster2次：imitate;picturesandsoundchildrenandyoungster与 例：Malesandfemalesaredifferentinmanyways.Somejobscanbedonebymenbutotherjobsarejustsuitableforwomen.Doyouagreeordisagree?DiscussbothviewsandgiveyourDotheadvantagesoutweighitsTowhatextentdoyouagreeor Towhatextentdothedisadvantagesoutweightheadvantages?Inmanycountriesschoolshavesevereproblemswithstudentsbehavior.Whatdoyouthinkarethecausesofthis?Whatsolutionscanyousuggest?Comparetheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofthreeofthefollowingasmediaforcommunicatinginformation.Statewhichyouconsidertobethemosteffective. Atpresent,sciencehasbeendevelo atahighspeed.Butpeoplestillhaveahighopinionof s.Whatcanthearts lusoflifethatsciencecannot?转化成以agreeordisagree或discuss为结Atpresent,sciencehasbeenatahighspeed.Butpeoplestillhaveahighopinionof s.Whatcanthearts lusoflifethatsciencecannot?Atpresent,sciencehasbeendevelo ahighspeed.Butpeoplestillhaveahighopinionof s.Thearts lusmanyaspectsoflifethatsciencecannot.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?Someteachersarguethatstudentslearnmoreeffectivelywhentheystudyingroupswhileothersbelieveitisbetterforthemtostudyalone.Whatisyouropinion?(080830)Researchindicatesthatthecharacteristicswearebornwithhavemuchmoreinfluenceonour alityanddevelopmentthananyexperienceswemayhaveinourlife.Whichdoyouconsidertobethemajorinfluence?(C5T4)Insomecountriesyoungpeopleareencouragedtoworkortravelforayearbetweenfinishinghighschoolandstartinguniversitystudies.Discusstheadvantagesforyoungpeoplewhodecidedtodothis.(C5T1)Manyyoungpeopletodayleaveschoolwithanegativeattitudetowardslearning.Whydoyouthinkthisishappening?Whatcanbedonetoencourageapositiveattitudetolearninginyoung（一）Task2类 Inmanycountrieschildrenareengagedinsomekindofpaidwork.Somepeopleregardthisascomple ywrong,whileothersconsideritasvaluableworkexperience,importantforlearningandtakingresponsibility.Whatareyouropiniononthis? Nowadayssendingchildrentoboardingschoolis ingincreasinglypopular.Whatarethereasons?Doyouthinkitisapositivedevelopment?(090725)特点：；only；ban/例：AirtravelonlybenefitstherichpeopleButthemajorityofpeopledonotbenefitfromit.TowhatextentdoyouSomepeoplethinkmotorizedflightwasthegreatestinventioninthe20thcenturyandithasthebiggestimpactonourlives.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

内因例：Itisfairsuccessfulprofessionalsearnagreatdealofmoneythanpeopleinotherprofessions.（C6T2）

Somepeopletourismbringsmoreproblemsthanbenefits.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?sedentary aerobic oily junk excessiveintakeofthe /heartdisease/coronaryheartbalanced Scientistshavefounditisnothealthyforpeopletoeatjunkfood.Somepeoplethinkitisgoodtoeducatepeopletoeatlessjunkfood.Othersarguethateducationwillnotwork.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.•问commita

breakviolatedisobeythe offencescriminalactsillegal criminaloffender plice repeat revertto 罪criminal 向bebroughtto traumatize

bepronetosocial go peer strengthenthefamilytiesWhatarethecausesofjuveniledelinquencyandwhatareyoursolutions? population 人soaringindustrialsustainable recycle renewablenon- useup raise/elevatethepublicawarenessoftakeharshactions stopwearing double-sided exploreclean raisethefuel Developmentintechnologycausesenvironmentalproblems.Somepeoplebelievethesolutiontotheseproblemsisthateveryoneacceptsasimplerwayoflifewhileotherssaythattechnologycansolvetheseproblems.Discussbothviewandgiveyourownopinion.第一段：24第二段：第一段：24第二段：46第三段：46第四段：24最多50 Conclusion例1Somepeopleprefertospendtheirlivesngthesamethingsandavoidingchanges.Others,however,thinkthatchangeisalwaysagoodthing.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion. 例1’Inmodernsocietyeveryoneintheworldwantstoownacar,aTVandafridge.Doyouthinkthedisadvantagesofsucheconomicdevelopmentoutweightheadvantages? Somepeoplethinktheernment,insteadoftheprivate,shouldberesponsibleforthescientificresearch.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree? Nowadaysweareproducingmoreandmorerubbish.Whydoyouthinkthisishappening?Whatcan ernmentdotohelpreducetheamountofrubbish

or一边倒主体段：句+支持句的构成=+方原因 例：

Solar 大。Insomecountriesyoungpeopleareencouragedtoworkortravelforayearbetweenfinishinghighschoolandstartinguniversitystudies.Discusstheadvantagesanddisadvantageforyoungpeoplewhodecidedtodothis. Para.Thereasonsforthistrendmayinvolvetherecognitionthatayoungadultisratherrestrictedintermsofgeneralknowledgeandexperienceoftheworld.Para.However,therearecertainlydangersintakingtimeoffatthatimportantage. first,second,third,ononehand,ontheotherhandadditionally,furthermorehowever,conversely,interestingly例：Todaythehighsalesofpopularconsumergoodsreflectthepowerofadvertisingandnottherealneedsofthesocietyinwhichtheyaresold.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?ParaAlso,onthe evisionscreen,aproductmaylookgorgeousandgoodquality.…ParaOntheotherhand,therearevariousaspectsagainstthesearguments.…ParaInaddition,peopletrytoallocatetheirbudgets.…InsomecountriesyoungpeopleareencouragedtoworkortravelforayearbetweenfinishinghighschoolandstartinguniversitystudiesDiscusstheadvantagesforyoungpeoplewhodecidedtodothis.ParaThereasonsforthistrendmayinvolvetherecognitionthatayoungadultisratherrestrictedintermsofgeneralknowledgeandexperienceoftheParaHowever,therearecertainlydangersintakingtimeoffatthatimportantage.Somepeoplebelievethatthereshouldbefixedpunishmentsforeachtypeofcrime.Others,however,arguethatthecircumstancesofanindividualcrime,andthemotivationforcommittingit,shouldalwaysbetakenintoaccountwhendecidingonthepunishment.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.(C7T2)exemplificationquotationexnation解释causeandeffectcomparisonandcontrastconcessionandrefutationAspecificfact, ,orthingthatisusedtoex inorsupportageneralideaforforlike/including;etc.Take…forexamplesuch suchItisafactAparticularexampleis…Acaseinpointis…例：Inmanycountrieschildrenareengagedinsomekindofpaidwork.Somepeopleregardthisascomple wrong,whileothersconsideritasvaluableworkexperience,importantforlearningandtakingresponsibility.WhatareyouropiniononthekindofthekindofAnimportantconsiderationisfor支持句1：Young ngarduousandfortasksonafactoryproduction lesslikelytobe‘learning’thanolderchildrenhelinanoldpeople’shome.支持句2TherearehealthandsafetyissuestobeconsideredaswellItisanunfortunatefactthatmanyemployersmayprefertousetheservicesofchildrensimplytosavemoneybypayingthemlessthanadultsandtisthistypeofexploitationthatshouldbeEnvironmentalproblemscannotbesolvedbyoneorafewcountries.Instead,theyshouldbesolvedwithinternationaleffort.TowhatextentdoyouagreeorglobaltheGulftheGulfofMexicoOil原油泄漏：oil臭氧空洞：thelossofozone核辐射：nuclearTopicAgrowingnumberofenvironmentalarenolongerconfinedtoacertainregionorForexample,oilspillscanpolluteinternationalwatersandthelossofozonelayermayleadtothemeltingoficecapsandglaciers,whichinturn,mayraisesealevelsworldwide.法 2研究/的结果或数多themajorityof；mostamountofnumber少theminorityof；afew超过少于半数morelessthan大约aboutVoiceofAmericaTheEconomistYaleUniversity FrankfurtUniversity AcademyofSocialSciencesItisreportedthatBysomeestimates,Accordingtoanconductedby…,TheAccordingtoanconductedby…,

conductedbyitcanbeForanotherwearingfashionableandexpensiveclothesisaconvenientwaytoboostself-confidence,especiallyfortheyoungwithsalaries.+引入数据Accordingtoarecentsurvey,conductedbyFrankfurtUniversity,themajorityofwhite-collarfemalesspendmorethanhalfoftheiresonthecosmetics,trendyaccessoriesorclothes.ItThatistoInotherToputitanotherBythatI习和锻炼身体方面的时间却少得，换句话Childrenarespendingtoomuchtimeoncomputersandtoolittletimeonstudyandphysicalexercises.Thatistosay,computershavenegativeinfluenceonchildrentoday.Childrenarespendingtoomuchtimeoncomputersandtoolesstimeonstudyandphysicalexercises,whichmeanscomputershavenegativeinfluenceonchildrentoday.Childrenarespendingtoomuchtimeoncomputersandtoolesstimeonstudyandphysicalexercises(whichmeanscomputershavenegativeinfluenceonchildrentoday).Happinessisconsideredveryimportantinlife.Whyisitdifficulttodefine?WhatfactorsareimportantinachievingIthinkanabilitytokeep sinlifeismoreessentialfactorinachievinghappiness.BythatImeananabilitytohaveaclearsenseofwhatisimportantinourlives(thewelfareofourfamilies,thequalityofourrelationships,makingotherpeoplehappy,etc.)andwhatisnot(aproblematwork,gettingannoyedabouttrivialthings,Because/As/since/owingtothefactbecauseofduetoowingtothankstoonaccountof---介词beconnected/associatedbelinkedrelatedtiedto---介词4…isthemajorcontributingfactor.Therefore/Thus/Asaresult/leadto/giveriseto/contributeto/result y/ y/TragicallyInmanycountriesschoolshavesevereproblemswithstudentbehavior.Whatdoyouthinkarethecausesofthis?Whatsolutionscanyousuggest?(C4T4)Inmanycountries,thebirthrateisdecreasingsothatfamiliesaresmallerwithfewerchildren.Thesechildrenareoftenspoilt,notintermsofloveandattentionbecauseworkingparentsdonothavethetimeforthis,butinmorematerialways.Theyareallowedtohavewhatevertheywant,regardlessofprice,andtobehaveasThisthey thattheThisgrowupwithoutconsiderationforothersandwithoutanyunderstandingofwheretheirstandardoflivingcomesfrom.

WhileWhereasIncomparisonInsharpstarkcontrastComparedwith名词，+OnonehandAttheotherendofthescale, conversely,onthecontrary,incontrast,inspiteofthis,unlikeShouldyoungadultsbeindependentfromtheirparentsassoonaspossible?…Ifyoungadultsareexposedwithoutproperprotectionfromtheirparentstoallthetemptationsofthesociety,theyaremorelikelytofallintoalifeofcrimethanpeopleofthesameagewhostilllivewiththeirparents.conversely,forthosewhostillstaywiththeirfamilies,theymightbeinformedofcorrectwayswhentheyarein althoughwhileadmittedlyItistruethat...Itisthecasethat...infact however; 例：Manypeoplebelievethatwomenmakebetterparentsthanmenandthatthisiswhytheyhavegreaterroleinraisingchildreninmostsocieties.Othersclaimthatmenarejustasgoodaswomenatparenting.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.Girlsalsoappearlessaggressivethanboys.Inadulthood,itismen,notwomen,whoprovetobetheaggressorsincrimeandinwar.Obviously,inraisingchildren,amorepatient,gentlemannerispreferabletoamoreaggressiveone.Althoughtherearecertainlygentlemenandaggressivewomen,byandlarge,femalesarelesslikelytoresorttoinattemptingtosolve例：Successfulsportspeoplecanearnagreatdealmoremoneythanpeopleinmanyotherfields.Somepeoplethinkthisisfullyjustifiedwhileothersthinkitisunfair.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyouropinion.Manypeoplefindtheirrewardsunfair.However,sportssalariesarenotdeterminedbyconsideringthecontributiontosocietyamakes,orthelevelofresponsibilityheorsheholds.Instead,theyreflectthepublicpopularityofsportingeneralandthelevelofpublicsupportthatsuccessfulstarscangenerate.Sothenotionof“fairness”isnottheissue.Manypeoplefindtheirrewardsunfair,whencomparingthesesupersalarieswiththoseoftopsurgeonsorresearchscientists,orevenleadingpoliticianswhohavetheresponsibilityof erningthecountry.However,sportssalariesarenotdeterminedbyconsideringthecontributiontosocietyamakes,orthelevelofresponsibilityheorsheholds.Instead,theyreflectthepublicpopularityofsportingeneralandthelevelofpublicsupportthatsuccessfulstarscangenerate.Sothenotionof“fairness”isnottheissue.Somepeoplethinkpostgraduateenrollmentshouldbeenlargedtoeasetheproblemofstudents’employment.Somepeoplethinkpostgraduateenrollmentshouldbeenlargedtoeasetheproblemofstudents’employment.ButIthisonlyanexpedienttoputofftheproblemratherthanresolveit.Accordingtoarelevantsurvey,conductedbyYaleUniversity,itclearlyidentifiesthat,comparingwithfiveyearsago,theemploymentratesofpostgraduatesarenotsopositive.Unfortuna y,itseemsthatmoreandmorepostgraduatescannotfindtheiridealwork,either.(一 （3） evisionhashadasignificantinfluenceonthecultureofmanysocieties.Towhatextentdoyou evisionhaspositivelyaffectedculturalIthasbeenaroundfortyyearssince wasfirstintroducedintoBritishhouseholdsandpeopletodaystillhavemixedviewsonwhetherithasapositiveoranegativeinfluenceonsociety.Environmentalproblemscannotbesolvedbyoneorafewcountries.Instead,theyshouldbesolvedwithinternationaleffort.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?Environmentalchallenges,rangingfromthesmogincitiestotoxicgroundwatertotheAntarcticozonehole,havebeenpresentedto例：Somepeoplebelievethatchildren’sleisureactivitiesmustbeeducational,otherwisetheyareacompletewasteoftime.Doyouagreeordisagree?Today,educationhas eapriorityformanyparentsseekingtosecureagoodfuturefortheirchildreninthisrapidlychangingworld.Somepeoplethinkcitizensshouldbetotallyresponsiblefortheirownhealthcosts.Othersthinkitisbettertohaveahealthcaresystemwhichprovideshealthservicesforall.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourown例：IthasbeenbelievedthatpeoplewhoreadforpleasurehavedevelopedbetterimaginationandlanguageskillsthanpeoplewhoprefertowatchTV.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?Peoplewithgoodlanguageskillsorvividimaginationarevaluableandusuallyappreciatedinsociety,sothequestionofhowtocultivatethoseskillsisanimportantone.Somepeoplethinkthehighsalesofproductsreflectthepowerofadvertisinginsteadoftheconsumers’demand.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?例：Nowadayscheapairtravelisincreasinglypopularintheworld.TowhatextentdoyouthinkitsadvantagesoutweighitsTherewasatimewhenairtravelwasonlyforthewealthypeopleandoutofreachofthemajorityofcitizens.Butnowlow-costflightsareavailableinmanycountries.AdvertisementsyamajorroleonTVinmarketeconomies.Despitethebenefitsofsuchinformation,manypeoplecriticizetheroleofTVadvertising.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?UnliketheInternet,wherewecanoftendisableadvertisingwindows,wecannotscreenTVadvertisementsoutofourlives.while/whereas；but;Althoughsomepeoplethinkthat…（yet）otherpeoplehold例：Asthenumberofcarsmoremoneyhastobespentonroadsystems.Somepeoplethinkthe ernmentshouldpayforthis.Others,however,thinkthattheusersshouldpayforthecost.Whatisyouropinion?Althoughsomepeopleclaimthattheernmentshouldpayfortheexpense,otherpeopleholdthattheusersshouldaffordthecost…Successfulsportspeoplecanearnagreatdealmoremoneythanpeopleinmanyotherfields.Somepeoplethinkthisisfullyjustifiedwhileothersthinkitisunfair.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyouropinion.Sport,lillythemostfieldaroundtheworldnow,isattractingincreasingattentionofus.Gonearethedayswhensportswerejustakindofentertainment,whichwasbarelyprofitableenoughtolevelotheroccupations.NowitislingadifferentWhilemoneyusedtobedominatedbypowerfulpoliticiansgenerally,nowsportprofessionalsaretakingtheircetograbmoneymuchmoretoconclude/tosumup/ininsummary/tosummarize/in例1Somepeoplebelievethatimprovingpublichealthshouldincreasethenumberofsportsfacilities;othersbelievethatithaslittleeffectsandneedothermeasurestoimproveit.DiscussandgiveyourInawordpublichealthshouldbeimprovedinanypossibleway,andreasonableinvestmentinsportfacilitiesisonewaytoso,butwemustnotforgettoalsoofferalternativewaysforpeopletoimprove2：Somepeoplethinktolowerthecrimeratecriminalsshouldbegivenlongertermsinprison.Towhatextentdoyouagreeor主体段2：长期可能产生的不良Somyconclusionisthatacertaindegreeofrestrictionofcriminalsdomisanefficientmethodtochangethem.Buttomakesurethattheycanbechangedinapositiveway,alongertimeinprisonisnotnecessarilytherightwayanditisrarelytheonlyway. Inrecentyears,increasingnumberofcaraccidentshazardmanypeople’slives.Thetopicofwhetherstricterpunishmentsistheonlywaytopreventaccidentshastriggeredheateddiscussion.NotionsonthisissuevaryInrecentyears,increasingnumberofcaraccidentshazardmanypeople’slives.Thetopicofwhetherstricterpunishmentsistheonlywaytopreventaccidentshastriggeredheateddiscussion.NotionsonthisissuevaryAccordingtotheadvocates,stricterpunishmentisthemosteffectivewaytoreducecaraccidents.Tobeginwith,stricterpunishmentdetersrecklessdrivingbehavior,likedrunkdrivingandspeeding.Driversmustlearntoabidebythelawsandregulationsotherwisetheywillsufferfromgreatloss.Furthermore,severelypunished,driversmaylearnalessonandtheyarelesslikelytorepeatthesamebehaviorontheroad.Lastbutnotleast,psychologicallyhurtandphysicallyinjured,victimsofcaraccidentsdeservethefinancialcompensationfromAccordingtotheadvocates,stricterpunishmentisthemosteffectivewaytoreducecaraccidents.Tobeginwith,stricterpunishmentdetersrecklessdrivingbehavior,likedrunkdrivingandspeeding.Driversmustlearntoabidebythelawsandregulationsotherwisetheywillsufferfromgreatloss.Furthermore,severelypunished,driversmaylearnalessonandtheyarelesslikelytorepeatthesamebehaviorontheroad.Lastbutnotleast,psychologicallyhurtandphysicallyinjured,victimsofcaraccidentsdeservethefinancialcompensationfromdrivers.Accordingtotheadvocates,stricterpunishmentisthemosteffectivewaytoreducecaraccidents.Tobeginwith,stricterpunishmentdetersrecklessdrivingbehavior,likedrunkdrivingandspeeding.Driversmustlearntoabidebythelawsandregulationsotherwisetheywillsufferfromgreatloss.Furthermore,severelypunished,driversmaylearnalessonandtheyarelesslikelytorepeatthesamebehaviorontheroad.Lastbutnotleast,psychologicallyhurtandphysicallyinjured,victimsofcaraccidentsdeservethefinancialcompensationfromAccordingtotheadvocates,stricterpunishmentisthemosteffectivewaytoreducecaraccidents.Tobeginwith,stricterpunishmentdetersrecklessdrivingbehavior,likedrunkdrivingandspeeding.Driversmustlearntoabidebythelawsandregulationsotherwisetheywillsufferfromgreatloss.Furthermore,severelypunished,driversmaylearnalessonandtheyarelesslikelytorepeatthesamebehaviorontheroad.Lastbutnotleast,psychologicallyhurtandphysicallyinjured,victimsofcaraccidentsdeservethefinancialcompensationfromHowever,opponentsarestronglyagainststricterpunishment.Firstly,competentshouldsetupstricterrequirementsfordriver’slicenses.Morelecturesandcoursesshouldbeprovidedtowould-bedrivers.Secondly,facilitiesshouldbeimprovedinordertoreduceroadhazards.Forinstance,electronicnoticeboardshouldbesetuptodriversofthedangerahead.Finally,ifdriversaresentencedtojailforalongertime,morepowerandmoneyisneededtomanagethem.Thatistosay,ti i However,opponentsarestronglyagainststricterpunishment.Firstly,competentshouldsetupstricterrequirementsfordriver’slicenses.Morelecturesandcoursesshouldbeprovidedtowould-bedrivers.Secondly,facilitiesshouldbeimprovedinordertoreduceroadhazards.Forinstance,electronicnoticeboardshouldbesetuptodriversofthedangerahead.Finally,ifdriversaresentencedtojailforalongertime,morepowerandmoneyisneededtomanagethem.Thatistosay,ti i However,opponentsarestronglyagainststricterpunishment.Firstly,competentshouldsetupstricterrequirementsfordriver’slicenses.Morelecturesandcoursesshouldbeprovidedtowould-bedrivers.Secondly,facilitiesshouldbeimprovedinordertoreduceroadhazards.Forinstance,electronicnoticeboardshouldbesetuptodriversofthedangerahead.Finally,ifdriversaresentencedtojailforalongertime,morepowerandmoneyisneededtomanagethem.Thatistosay,ti i allyspeaking,stricterisbynomeansthebestsolutiontocaraccidents.Morescientificmeasuresshouldbeadoptedsoastoreducecaraccidentsontheroad.allyspeaking,stricterisbynomeansthebestsolutiontocaraccidents.Morescientificmeasuresshouldbeadoptedsoastoreducecaraccidentsontheroad.例1：Successfulsportsprofessionalscanearnagreatdealmoremoneythanpeopleinotherimportantprofessions.Somepeoplethinkthisisfullyjustifiedwhileothersthinkitisunfair.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourown Para1:Para2：运动员高收入Para3：运动员高收入公平Asaresultofconstantmediaattention,sportsprofessionalsinmycountryhaveestarsandcelebrities,andthoseatthetoparepaidhugesalaries.Justlikemoviestars,theyliveextravagantlifestyleswithhugehousesandcars.ParaManypeoplefindtheirrewardsunfair,especiallywhencomparingthesesupersalarieswiththoseoftopsurgeonsorresearchscientists,orevenleadingpoliticianswhohavetheresponsibilityof thecountry.However,sportssalariesarenotdeterminedbyconsideringthecontributiontosociety makes,orthelevelofresponsibilityheorsheholds.Instead,theyreflectthepublicpopularityofsportingeneralandthelevelofpublicsupportthatsuccessfulstarscangenerate.Sothenotionof“fairness”isnottheissue.ParaThosewhofeelthatsportsstars’salariesarejustifiedmightarguethatthenumberofprofessionalswithrealtalentareveryfew,andthemoneyisarecognitionoftheskillsanddedicationaneedstobesuccessful.Competitionisconstantandayeristestedeverytimetheyperformintheirrelativelyshortcareer.Thepressurefromthemediaisintenseandthereislittleprivacyoutofthespotlight.SoallofthesefactorsmayjustifythehugeParaally,Ithinkthattheamountofmoneysuchsportsstarsmakeismorejustifiedthanthehugeearningsofmoviestars,butatthesametime,itindicatesthatoursocietycesmorevalueonsportthanonmoreessentialprofessionsandachievements.例2：Researchindicatesthatthecharacteristicswearebornwithhavemuchmoreinfluenceonour anddevelopmentthananyexperienceswemayhaveinourlife.Whichdoyouconsidertobethemajorinfluence?Para1:Todaythewayweconsiderhumanpsychologyandmentaldevelopmentisheavilyinfluencedbythegeneticsciences.Wenowunderstandtheimportanceofinheritedcharacteristicsmorethaneverbefore.Yetwearestillunabletodecidewhetheranindividual’s alityanddevelopmentaremoreinfluencedbygeneticfactors(nature)orbytheenvironment(nurture).howResearch,relatingtoidenticaltwins,how characteristicscanbeforanindividual’slife.Butwhetherthesecharacteristicsareabletodevelopwithinthealityofanindividualsurelydependsonwhetherthecircumstancesallowsuchadevelopment.Itseemsthattheycanboostorover-rideotherinfluences,andthereseemstobeplentyofresearchfindingstoconfirmthis.Myownviewisthatthereisnooneinfluenceina’slife.Instead,thetraitsweinheritfromourparentsandthesituationsandexperiencesthatweencounterinlifeareconstantlyincting.Itistheinctionofthetwothatshapesa anddictateshowthat alitydevelops.Ifthiswerenottrue,thenwewouldbeabletopredictthebehaviorandcharacterofafromthemomenttheywereborn.Inconclusion,Idonotthinkthateithernatureornurtureisthemajorinfluenceona,butthatbothhavepowerfuleffects.Howthesefactorsinctisstillunknowntodayandtheyremainlargelyunpredictableina’slife.短句为主：andbut BandBand

Band

Manypeopledonotobeythetrafficrulesproperly.Thisworsensthealreadygravesituation.许多人，包括和骑自行车的人，不能严格遵守交Manypeople，includingdriversandcyclists,donotabidebythetrafficrulesproperly,especiallyatbusyintersections,whichworsensanalreadygravesituation,undoubtedly.Theyarelikemoviestars，livingextravagantlifestyleswithhugehousesandcars.Justlikemoviestars,theyliveextravagantlifestyleswithhugehousesandcars.Interestingly,theyliveextravagantlifestyleswithhugehousesandcars，justlikemoviestars.Itisinterestingthattheyliveextravagantlifestyleswithhugehousesandcars，justlikemoviestars.Itis＋被强调的部分＋that（who）＋ItisbecauseofthebeautyofChenwenthatstudentsareabsent-mindedinthe