年各省市短文改错高考真题

专题十五2016～2012年市高考A卷Passage (201610处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词210处，多者(11处起)MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIlive.Thoughnotverybig，buttheRestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.SomePeopleevenhadtowaitoutside.Myunclelsmethatthekeytohissuccessishonest.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesorhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreams ingrichintheshortperiodoftime.Instead，hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrowsteady.Myuncleistheownerofarestaurantcloseto

Ilive.Thoughnotbig，buttheRestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersmealtimes.Somepeopleeven

towaitoutside.Myunclelsmethatthekeyhissuccessishonest.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetables

qualityoil

usedforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsof/aingrichina

shortperiodoftime.Instead，hehopesthat

business steady [考查宾语从句的连词用法。由句子结构可知，介词to之后为宾语从句。从句谓语是不及物动词live。故用where引导。]去掉 [考查从属连词与并列连词。从属连词though不可与并列连词连用。had→have honest→honesty 考查固定短语的用法。beusedfor“用来做”，为固定短在dreams之后加上of或about [考查短语动词。固定短语dreamof/about(ng)sth.的意思是“梦想做某事”。] [考查代词的用法。inashortperiodoftime为固定词组，意思是“短 [考查冠词的用法。短文介绍了myuncle餐馆的事情，故将our改为his。] [考查副词的用法。修饰谓语动词用副词。Passage (201610处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词210处，多者(11处起)Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtododuringtheholiday.Wecanchosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.Ifwestayathome,itiscomfortablebutthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleaboutworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadenyourviewandgainknowledgeswecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggestwecangotocesofinterestnearby.Ithoughtthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcostmany,yetwecanstilllearnalot.Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowdoduringtheholiday.Wecan

betweenstayingathomeand

awestayathome,itiscomfortable

thereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butincase,wewilllearnlittle

world.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecan

viewandgain

wecannotgetfrombooks.Somesuggestwe can/或

go cesofinterestnearby.I

thatitisaidea.Itdoesnotcostmany，yetwecanstilllearna 表达whattodo，如果用how结构为howtodosth.] [考查动词形式。根据语法知识可知，情态动词can后要用动 [between...and...结构，根据前面的stayingathome可知，此处也要用动名词形式，与前面保持一致。] world前加 [考查定冠词的用法。此处特指我们所生活的。 [we可知，此处要用our，表示“我们能够开阔我们的视野”。] [考查不可数名词的用法。knowledge为不可数名去掉can或can→should [考查虚拟语气。suggest表示“建议”，后面的宾语从句要用shoulddo形式，should可以省略，故答案有两种改法。] [考查代词的用法。这样不会花很多钱。costmuch花费很多。此处也可理解为muchmoney的省略。]Passage (201610处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词注意：1.10处，多者(11处起)Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothebestandworseyearsinmylife.Atthefirst，IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.However，myparentsdidn’tseemtothinksuch.Theyalwayslmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime，Ieverfeltmyparentscouldn’tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbelyfromthem.IshowedthemIwasindependentbywearstrangeclothes.NowIamleavinghometocollege.Atlast，Iwillbeonmyown，butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturntowheneverneedhelp.Theteenageyearalsothebestandworse

from13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theyyearsinmylife.Atthefirst，IthoughtIknewandcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.However，myparentsdidn’tseemtosuch.Theyalways

mewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime，Ieverfelt parentscouldn’tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbe lyfromthem.IthemIwasindependentbywearstrangeclothes.NowIamleavinghomecollege.Atlast，Iwillbeonmyown，butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturn

needI【语篇导读】本文主要讲述了青少与父母之间的关系。 [此处指13～19岁的，故用复数。] [与前面的best并列，此处应用。]去掉 [atfirst固定短语。 [根据句意，此处指“”。 [so指已经提到的事。 [此处应用过去时态。ly→[此处应用形容词作表语。] [固定搭配leavefor去……。whenever后加 [whenever引导状语从句，从句缺少主语I。Passage 10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词210处，多者(11处起)WhenIwasachild，Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity，butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunay，onthedevelopmentofindustrialization，theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghas eaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairsweinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso，we’lllivetoregretit.WhenIwasachild，Ihopedtoliveinthecity.I

Iwouldbethere.NowIamlivinginacity，butImissmyhome

countryside.Thereairisclean

themountainsare on

thedevelopmentindustrialization，theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenthatglobalwarminghas eaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairsbreatheinisgettingdirtierand

rareanimalsaredyingout.We

waystoprotect

environment.Ifwefailtodoso，we’lllivetothink→thought[考查动词的时态。根据前面一句可知，这是发生在小时候countryside前加the[考查冠词的用法。inthecountryside(在乡村)为固定短or→and[考查并列词的用法。那儿的空气洁净，群山葱绿。由句意可知两on→with[考查介词的用法。withthedevelopmentof...为一固定短语，意思去掉been[考查语态的用法。众多研究表明，全球变暖已经成为一个十分严重的问题。由句意可知，studiesshow之间为主动关系，故要用 [考查形容词的用法。修饰名词problem应当用形容词。 [考查不可数名词的用法。air作“空气”讲时为不可数名词。] [考查代词的用法。animals为可数名词复数，故用many。] 知your与上下文相悖，结合句意应当改为our/the才能使句意通顺。]Passage (2015·新课标10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词210处，多者(11处起)Oneday，littleTonywenttoashopcenterwithhisparent.Itwasverycrowded.Tonysawatoyonashopwindow.Helikeditsoverymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.Afterlooksatthetoyforsometime，heturnedaroundandfoundwherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandbeguntocry.Awomansawhimcryingandlinghimtowaitoutsideashop.Fiveminuteslater，Tonysawparents.Momsaid，“Hownicetoseeyouagain！DadandIwereterribleworried.”Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappenagain.Oneday，littleTonywenttoa centerwithhisparent.Itwascrowded.Tonysawatoy

ashopwindow.Helikeditsoverymuchthathewalkedintotheshop.After

atthetoyforsometime，heturnedaroundfound that或

hisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredand

towomansawhimcryingand

himtowaitoutside

shop.Fivelater，Tony

parents.Momsaid，“Hownicetoseeyouagain！Dadand

worried.”Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappen [考查名词复数。由第五句中的“hisparentsweremissing.”可 [考查介词的用法。玩具是摆放在商店的橱窗里面的，故用介词in。去掉very[考查固定句型的用法。由语境可知，非常喜欢这个玩具，于是快速走进商店。so...that为固定句型，意思是如此以至于……”，故去掉very。] [考查省略的用法。After之后省去了主语he，he与look之间为逻辑上的主谓关系，故应当用现在分词。去掉where或where→that[考查宾语从句连接词的用法。动词found之后为宾语从句，从句为系表结构，意思完整，故将where去掉或改为没有词义且不作成分的that。] [考查并列谓语的用法。由句子结构可知，begin与was并列，因此，要用一般过去时。ling→told[考查并列谓语的用法。有一位妇女看到他哭泣就去商店外面等。由句意可知，lsaw构成并列谓语。故改用told。]a→the[考查冠词的用法。表示谈话双方共知的名词前要用定冠词。saw后加his[考查物主代词的用法。根据句意及英语表达习惯，应当在parents前加上与主语相一致的物主代词。]terrible→terribly[考查副词的用法。形容词worried之前要用副词来修Passage (2014·新课标10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词210处，多者(11处起)Nearlyfiveyearsbefore，andwiththehelpbyourfather，mysisterandIntedsomecherrytomatoes(圣女果)inourbackgarden.Sincethen—foralltheseyear—wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoself－seedwheretheyplease.Asresult，thentsaregrowingsomewhere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize，butjuicyandtaste.Therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomatontstogrowinthesameceyearafteryear，butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblems.Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost!Nearlyfiveyearsbefore，andwiththehelp

ourfather，mysisterand ntedsomecherrytomatoes(圣女果)inourbackgarden.Sincethen—forall

had

havebeenallowingtomatoestoself－seedwherethey ntsaregrowingsomewhere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize，butjuicytaste.Thereareso

thatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Although ，allow ntstogrowinthe ceyearafter ，but或

weneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblems.Wearegrowingtomatoesatno [ago常与一般过去时连用；before常与完成时连用，这里谓语是nted，用的是过去式，故用ago。] [withthehelpof...在……的帮助下。] [由前面allthese可知应用year的复数形式。] [根据时间状语“sincethen”可知，主句应为现在完成时，所以把had变为have。]as后加a [asaresult为固定搭配，译为“结果”。] [因为落在哪里就在哪里生根发芽，所以这种植物长得到处都是。everywhere到处；somewhere某处。] [are后面应用形容词，and连接形容词juicy和tasty。] [根据谓语are可知后面应用修饰可数名词的many，而修饰不可数名词。去掉but或改为yet [although引导让步状语从句，不可与but连用，但可以与yet连用。] [tomatoes为名词应用形容词修饰，所以把副词Passage (2014·新课标10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词210处，多者(11处起)Mydreamschoolstartsat8：30a．m.andendsat3：30p．m.Theyarethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Wedidn’tneedtodoso.Therefore，wehavemoretimewithafter－schoolactivities.Forexample，wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandysportsforonehoureveryday.Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroombuildings.Wecanlieonthegrassforarest，orsatbythelakelisteningmusic.Theteachersherearekindandhelpfully.Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.Mydreamschoolstartsat8：30a．m.andendsat3：30p．

arelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Wedidn'tneedtodoso.Therefore，wehavemoretimewithexample，wecandoreadingforoneandahalf

after－schoolactivities.ForandysportsforoneeveryMydreamschool

likeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsoftheflowerstreesaroundtheclassroombuildings.Wecanlieonthegrassforarest，or

bylake

music.Theteachersherearekind

helpfully.Theyarenotourteachersbutalsoour [考查固定句型。Therebe句型，表示“有”。故把TheyThere。 [考查动词时态。此处叙述每天要做的事情。应该用一般现在时，故把didn’t改为don’t。] [是不可数名词，故用much修饰。 [考查介词词义辨析。此处句意是“为课外活动留出时 [考查名词单复数。oneandahalfhours为一个半小时。] [考查主谓一致。school为单数名词，故谓语用looks。去掉 [Therebe句型中的名词是泛指概念，故去掉the。 [can，故用动listening后面加to [考查固定短语。listento“听……”。] [此处and连接并列的两个形容词kind和helpful。]Passage8 (2013·新课标Ⅰ)10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词210处，多者(11处起)Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.Hewastall，withbroadshoulderandbeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.Hehadadeepvoice，whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown，hewasstrongandpowerful.Inafact，heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoyordowithme.However，hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.Sheusedto

meonherkneessingoldsongs.Iwasonlyfourwhenshe

away.SheisjustadistantformeIremembermygrandfathervery .Hewastall，withbroadshoulder

andabeardthatturnedfromblack

grayovertheyears.Hehaddeepvoice，which

apartfromothersinoursmalltown，

hestrongandpowerful.In fact，heevenscaredmyclassmatesaway

cameovertoyordowithme.However，hewasthegentlestman

Passage 10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词210处，多者(11处起)ThebookI’mreadingoftalksaboutafternoonteainBritain.Itissaidtohavestartedintheearly1800’s.Haveteainthelateafternoonprovidesabridgebetweenlunchanddinner，thatmightnotbeserveduntil8o’clockatnight.Thiscustom esanothermealofday.Interesting，ithadaconnectionbytheBritishporcelain(瓷器)industry.Teainwastraditionallydrankfromcupswithouthandles.WhenteagotpopularinBritain，therewasacryingneedforgoodcupwithhandlestosuitBritishhabits.Thismadeforthegrowintheporcelainindustry.ThebookI’mreadingoftalksaboutafternoonteainBritain.Itissaidtostartedintheearly1800’s.

teainthelateafternoonprovidesabetweenlunchand that

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becameanothermealof

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theBritishporcelain(瓷器)industry.Tea wastraditionallyfromcupswithouthandles.WhenteagotpopularinBritain，therewasacryingforgood

withhandlestosuitBritishhabits.Thismadeforthe

inporcelainPassage (2016

B卷10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词210处，多者(11处起)ItisMother’sDaytoday.Thoughit’sawesternfestival,it’spopularinnow.Momhasafull－timejob，soshehastodomostofthehouseworks.Sheisagreatmother.BothDadorInnedtodosomethingonMother’sDay.Wegetupearlyinthemorning.Dadcleanedthehouse，andthenwentonshop.Whenhecameback，Ifoundabunchofflowersinherhand.IaskedMomtostayinthesittingroomandIcookedinkitchen.ThedisheswhatIcookedwereMom’sfavoritest.Atdinner，wesaidtoher，“HappyMother’sDay！”MomwasgratefulandItisMother’sDaytoday.Thoughit’sawesternfestival,it’spopularinnow.Momhasafull－time soshehastodomostofthehouseworks.Sheisgreatmother.BothDador nnedtodosomethingonMother’sDay.Weupearlyinthemorning.Dadcleanedthehouse，andthenwentonshophecameback，Ifoundabunchofflowersin

hand.IaskedMomtostayin sittingroomandIcooked

kitchen.The

which/that/whatIcookedMom’sfavoritest.Atdinner，wesaidtoher，“HappyMother’sDay！”Momwasgratefulandmoving. [housework是不可数名词。]or [both...and是固定搭配。 去掉 [goshop去买东西。 [去购物，从句主语是he，因此物主代词形式用his。kitchen前加the [上文虽未提及kitchen，但听话者一定知其所指，因此，kitchen前加定冠词。]what→which/that或去掉what 用关系代词that/which，也可省略。] [favorite为无等级形容词。] [moving多用来修饰事物，moved用来指人。]Passage2 10注意：1.10处，多者(11处起)WhenIwasaveryyoungchildren，myfathercreatedaregularpracticeIrememberwellyearslate.Everytimehearrivedhomeatendoftheday，we’dgreetheratthedoor.Hewouldaskwhowewasandpretendnottoknowingus.Thenheandmymotherwouldhavehadadrinkwhilesheprepareddinnerandtheywouldtalkabouthisdayandhers.Whiletheychat，myfatherwouldliftmysisterandmeuptositinthetopofthefridge.Itwasbothexcitedandfrighteningtobeupthere!MysisterandIthoughthewassocoolforputtingusWhenIwasaveryyoungchildren，myfathercreatedaregularpractice rememberwell

later.Everytimehearrivedhomeat

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andpretendnot

us.Thenheandmymotherwouldhavehadadrinkwhileshedinnerandtheywouldtalkabouthisdayandhers.Whiletheychat，mywouldliftmysisterandmeuptositinthetopofthefridge.ItwasbothandfrighteningtobeupMysisterandIthoughthewassocoolforputtingus [achildren [late是形容词“迟的”，或副词“迟地”，但是“一段时间后面应该接later”，表示“……时间以后”。故late改成later。]at后面加 [attheendof为固定搭配。 [根据上文可知我们每天在门口迎接。用him指代myfather，作greet的宾语。故her改成him。] [这句话的主语是we，谓语用复数，而且这篇文章是作者回忆小时候的事情，用一般过去时。故was改成were。] [pretend后面接不定式作宾语，这里是否定式pretendnottodo。故knowing改成know。]去掉 [woulddo表示“过去常常做”。 [根据主句内容myfatherwouldliftmysister可知while引导的时间状语从句用一般过去时。故chat改成chatted。] [onthetopof...为固定搭配，意为“在……顶部”。故in改成on。] [这句话的主语是形式主语it，真正的主语是tobeupthere，主语是物的时候，表语应该用现在分词形式的形容词。故excited改成Passage (20151010处，多者(11处起)Hi,It’sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywantsharewithyousomeoftheproblemsIhavebeenexperiencing.AsIlyoulasttime,Imadethreenewfriendhere.Wehangouttogetherduringlunchandafterschool.We’vebeenspendingalotoftimesinginkaraokebars.It’sbeenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsmemany.AndIstartedtoseethisastime－wastingactivity!Infact，Idon’tliketogoanymore,soI’mafraidI’lllosetheirfriendship.HowdoyouthinkIshoulddo?Ifyouareme，wouldyoutalktoPleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeHi,It’sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandI

withyousomeoftheproblemsIhavebeenAs As

youlasttime,Imadethreenew

here.Wehangoutduringlunchandafterschool.We’vebeenspendingalotoftime

inmuch.AndIstartedtobars.It’sbeenthreeSaturdaysnowandmuch.AndIstartedtothisasatime－wastingactivity!Infact，Idon’tliketogoanymore,

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doyouthinkIshoulddo?Ifyou

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want后加to[考查动词want的用法，want后用不定式作状语，故加上to。l→told[考查时态。根据时间状语lasttime可知，此句需用一般过去时，故把l改成told。句意：正如我上次告诉你的那样。]friend→friends[考查名词的复数。名词friend为可数名词，其前有three修饰，需要用复数形式，故把friend改成friends。句意：我在这儿交了三个新朋sing→singing[考查动名词作宾语。本句考查句型spend...(in)ngsth构，故把sing改成singing。 [考查代词。根据句意，指的是花费很多钱，故用muchmany。句意：那真的花费很多。 去他们的友谊，两个分句之间有转折关系，故把so改成but。] [考查疑问词的选择。本句中do之后缺少宾语，故用what。 不符，故把are改成were。句意：如果你是我，……。] [考查代词。根据上文可知，作者交了三个朋友，故用them。句去掉with [考查动词。动词help为及物动词，其后接宾语时无需加介词，故去掉with。句意：请帮帮我，给我一些建议。]Passage 作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增 210处，多者(11处起)Mysoccercoachretiredinlastweek.Iwantedtodoanythingspecialforhimathisretirementparty.Mymummakesthebetterbiscuitsintheworld，soIdecidetoaskherforhelp.Mumtaughtmesomebasicstepofbaking.Iinsistedonngmostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereallywell.MyonlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloorafterIwaspackingthemup.Ataparty，mycoach，withabiscuitinhismouth，askedsurprisinglywhomadethemandjoked，“Imighthavetoretireagainnextyearjustgetsomemoreofthesebiscuits.”Myfavoritepictureatthepartyisofmycoachandmeenjoythebiscuitswithhappylaughter!Mysoccercoach inlastweek.Iwantedtodo

specialforathisretirementparty.Mymummakesthebetterbiscuitsintheworld，soItoaskherforhelp.Mumtaughtmesomebasic

ofbaking.Iinsistedonmostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereallywell.MyonlywasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloor

Iwaspackingthema

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